“TEN LITTLE SCUMBAGS” | Creepypasta Storytime

[@TWGrim]

Aside from the slight mishap with the thumbnail (lol) this was an EXCELLENT reading of my story. In my opinion, MCP is one of the best voice actors in the KZbin narrating community. A good reading can elevate a mediocre story, but even a top-tier work cannot rise above a mediocre reading. You're a treasure, MCP. Stay well and keep hitting it out of the park, sir! 🎉💪

[@Posterofshithahah]

The way you write is so awesome to me. Everything you write has meaning and everything is in so great detail I can image the whole scene playing out as a movie. Absolutely incredible writing.

[@TWGrim]

​@@PosterofshithahahThank you, I appreciate that 🙏

[@jerrythecartoonist]

I enjoyed the hell out of this story! It's so well paced; it feels like it could've been a movie itself. I liked how real the characters felt, very flawed, but in a good way. You should write audio dramas, no cap. This was very cinematic.

[@TWGrim]

​@jerrythecartoonist Thank you. If you haven't already heard it, you might also like my story "Echoes," which explores the subject of PTSD, war, and intergenerational trauma. MCP did a great job on it!

[@jerrythecartoonist]

@@TWGrim I haven't heard it. I'll be sure to check it out!

[@katsarelas1947]

Yoooou might wanna brighten the “s” on the thumbnail 😅

[@ultimaweapon6]

Bro same

[@Ratking_Actual]

I came here only to say this, because of how dark the S is I read cumbags and was like wat

[@allorab7356]

And you have me who was thinking the last letter s not the first smh and when I saw it…finally I was like ohhhhh😮😮😮 and then 😂😂😂

[@sh0wtime1]

😂

[@TheErikjsm]

omg yes i only came here to say that lmao

[@nancyallen603]

I say leave the S just the way it is. And even tho you, Sir, are not aware, we have spent many many hours together in the last few years. I have truly enjoyed each and every story. Thank you so very much. As always..... I'll be listening and impatiently waiting for the next one. Be safe.....Be happy.

[@creepyangelhair]

Ohhhh stalkerrrr. Hahaha 😂😂😂 she said, "You may not know it, but we have spent many many hours together in the last few years." Like girl what?! 😂😂 I'm jk honestly same. ❤

[@KBdaFranchize-mk8gx]

I agree

[@tylerkehoe3901]

9U,X 58:00 BY 58:00 G hi u5k

[@kevinfox500]

Same here. A good fit for a distraction from my phantom pain, And itch. The reason I can't sleep for now.

[@lorijean1641]

Holyyyyy sh@t !! Seriously good story , I’m looking up everything else you’ve authored!! As always impeccably narrated as well!! Perfect collab!!

[@Bluesit32]

You know...I kinda get it. It wasn't about the money or anything. It was about achieving a dream. He had it right in front of him and it was taken away. A chance to hear his story, see his characters on screen and know that he made it happen. And if he got money out of it, he could buy an award for himself. Nothing as tacky as a golden statue, but just a reminded that sometimes, if only briefly, a dream can come true. Ten pages telling him what his dreams were worth. What's he got left?

[@alexandriav3956]

Holy effing moly!! That was such a good fucking story!! I was on the edge of my seat literally the entire time.

[@TheBaconStrip]

Ahh yes, more TW Grim. One of my absolute favorite authors in the business. I've never heard nor read one of his stories that I didn't like.

[@raymondmckinney1565]

This was one of the best longer stories I have heard in awhile great job Mr Creepy Pasta

[@heatherangel7703]

This would be a perfect movie!!! Any one else agree?!

[@MathewSteeleAtheology]

Samuel L. Jackson for the intruder.

[@mikeyputnam4299]

@@LSB44446was literally about to say that 😂😂

[@acechoice45]

yes

[@aaron15414]

Careful Icarus

[@chickknightgreenleaf820]

@@MathewSteeleAtheology Tarantino on the director chair, the guy suit these kind of story and his script have very good dialog

[@doctornagalli3321]

This story does something to a person. It divides them, at least for me it did. Because on one hand, when the antagonist explained his side, I totally get where he is coming from, since I am an aspiring musician working at a dead-end job, trying to write masterpieces. So I REALLY rooted for him when the lawyer, director, and others that knew him were killed. BUT when the actress and the rest were dropping the facts of how the entertainment world is cold and will capitalize on anyones hard work if it's within the confines of the law, and he just had to get over it and move forward to make something new, I understood those points, but I also felt like what they said was uncalled for. So I was hoping he'd end up sparing them UNTIL they just straight started calling him a loser. This is an amazing story, standing ovation to this author, and standing ovation to Mr Creepypasta for this amazing narration! (I also have a soft spot for "And Then There Were None". So I started making the connections well before it was referenced)

[@personman8734]

The Intruder’s motivations are really beautifully written. It’s clear that he never wanted money or success. He wanted the recognition that something he made could be great but he was denied that. He kills Carmine on the spot because after everything he still only sees this as a problem because of money. You look at it like that you really start to realize why their attempts to calm him down, only sent him over the edge because it only validates that none of them are at the top because they care about art. They’re at the top because they were ruthless, selfish and money grubbing. They only see art in the bounds of how successful it can make them. He only spares Carla because she’s a lot like he was before he was robbed. She’s working a job going nowhere, and just wants her chance on the big screen.

[@Uniquely-Unoriginal]

Awesomely narrated! Love the different voices and the emotion in your voice(s). T.W. Grim wrote a great story in this one; really enjoyed it!

[@daydrip]

You know I’m kind of on the antagonist side in this story 😂

[@lesliewolfe7643]

Me too. Glad I'm not the only one 🙂

[@akirra92]

He's the protagonist since the story is about him

[@akirra92]

Carla was protagonistic, but that's about it.

[@daydrip]

@@LSB44446 if any stories of the Hollywood parties have even a little merit to them. Then ya these people are quite the degens

[@JustSomeGuywithEpicGrasses]

Protagonist. Even if the main character is a baby eating monster evading a noble knight, the monster is the protagonist and the knight is the antagonist.

[@maggieorellana2]

This is the single best narration I’ve heard you do yet The story is incredible. Real feels absolutely possible put me in the room. I got pissed off for him. It’s just absolutely bat. Shit crazy cool thank you.

[@wayside9493]

Ya know- a large part of my pre teen and early teenage years were spent with this channel on in the background. Im 23 now and have swung back by to check on things and for the last week or so ive been binging. Its just as good as I remeber- hell even better, one hell of a narrator and im happy you're still around.

[@wolfetteplays8894]

sameeeee

[@p1car0_redbeard99]

I love how the police are killing and maiming some of the hostages themselves 🤣🤣👊👊

[@TiffanyStarrxxx]

They're use to that

[@Bluesit32]

No maim. Just killing.

[@p1car0_redbeard99]

@@TiffanyStarrxxx 🤣🤣

[@BreakingNVain]

I love it when they throw in some random realism in these stories

[@authorauthority7193]

Thats conspiracy theory, the police report says they were killed by the criminal

[@colesate6086]

It’s fitting that Carla escapes. The intruder wins in the end, in some twisted way. He got what he wanted. The lawyer who threatened him. Dead. The movie people that stole from him. Dead. Elizabeth, who failed to call out everyone else, despite knowing it was shitty? Dead. In the end, the only one who escaped was the only one who did nothing to him, to anybody. An outsider just like him who was dragged into a shitty situation by everyone else. But it can’t be said that she won. The trauma will haunt her forever. The nightmares. The memories. The guilt of being the only one left. The only one who didn’t die deserves it as a mercy

[@darthderek]

"Say my name." "You're Heisenberg." "You're goddamn right."

[@haroldp.sadwood1181]

46:27 Props for the delivery of that line. Absolutely made my day.

[@ThunderStruck15]

I love that concussive grenade sound effect 👍

[@realtalkwithj-man5195]

This was prob one of the best narrations I've heard from you and thats saying something. I couldn't help but be on the protagonist side I would have prob done the same thing . This would make an epic movie just make sure you give the writer credit for it lol .

[@MelniaShadow]

Love that 2 victims got kill by the rescuer lol

[@crazybieberchic]

Thats my favorite part too lol

[@chilledyeti116]

You know, this was one of the first stories that brought out a genuine guttural reaction from me. I’m not saying it’s bad, it was actually quite well written. What I’m talking about is that as the story unfolded, I just felt this growing sickening feeling in my stomach. Like even tho the character’s weren’t the most ‘innocent’ people, the story made it seem like there was no hope for anyone. A theoretical and actual slaughter. Ig it was the human aspect of the story. Like none of the actions could be blamed on a fantastical monster. The story was all about just pure human madness and depravity.

[@doctornagalli3321]

It's kinda like the 2019 Joker film. It makes you feel for a villain. To quote Jeremy Jahns in his review of that movie, "OH SHIT, I UNDERSTAND HIM! oh shit, i understand him."

[@aaron15414]

They had it coming

[@fredbarrows65]

Bro is only one person. I truly appreciate his talent

[@TheJasonx7]

Man I rooted for the intruder the whole time,damn good story shame he didn't get the last one really,but I mean I guess living with something like that everyday must be pure hell. Damn good story.

[@kevinfox500]

If it's anything like I feel, after getting to his house late, the day he died, I don't have to. Died from a negligent discharge, 4 days before Christmas, my senior year. A close friend shot him. Live with that, as has the other friend almost 31 years. Made peace with it, and stopped trying to drown my demons, 25 years ago. Still miss him dearly, as we were as close as brothers, the three of us. Still hurts like hell. Had a triple whammy that holiday season, mom's heart attack, Frank's passing, and an accident involving a drunk driver, that took my girl and her unborn child. Bright side though. Got another decade with mom, I survived and recovered, and o married my closest friend 17 years ago. Raised her daughter as my own, and tried my best to be a good husband and dad. And at least I know that I pretty much can't have a worse one, without the apocalypse coming.

[@victorhurwitz5559]

​@@kevinfox500 it's not easy coexisting with your demons but it's not impossible. You've just gotta keep going even on the bad days.

[@kevinfox500]

@@victorhurwitz5559 I know. Have to focus on the good memories. Not always easy, snd not a day goes by that I don't think of them. I try to focus on the last interaction with Frank. Him pulling me adide for an update pn mom, and how we made plans to see her that Saturday. She would have passed hom3off as her son. 10 hours later you know the rest. It was the loss of my girlfriend that almost did me in, but also saved me. Met a few of the recipients, as she was an organ donor. Knowing part of her lives on gave me a reason to keep going. After 5 years, neck deep on the bottle, I got sober. She and my wife were close. We all met at the same place, and had mutual friends. She and I go to her grave on her birthday, and then go to a placd she loved, and talk about her. Also dealing wifh the loss of a limb the last 2 years. Not easy, but I didn't let it break me. And I had an, incident?, in the ICU. A visitor early one moring. Blonde woman in her mid twenties, with a 5 yesr old blonde girl on her lap, in the visitor's chair by my bed. They looked over and snilled, the woman pointed to me, and whispered something to the girl, who then smiled and waved to me. Then they vanished. Night nurse also saw them, and last I checked the pain meds I was on don't cause a person to hallucinate. I see it as them saying, we're waiting, and will see you in time. Don't rush. Years for you are but a moment where we are. I've had a feeling of peace ever since.

[@victorhurwitz5559]

@@kevinfox500 eeeeeeeeee

[@victorhurwitz5559]

@@kevinfox500 self love and kindness helps you go a long way a very long way.

[@nodokaxnegi4ever]

Dude was true to his word, he allowed the only innocent one to survive. Tho, honestly, if I was the intruder in this exact scenario, I would've probably escorted her to a different room as to not traumatize her as much.

[@thehyenamakeupslayer3819]

My God imma bad person! 😢 ida shot her ass too 🥺🥺

[@deacondawg1416]

That was supremely most excellent.

[@iantaran2843]

All kinds of vindication listening to this one 🤣

[@punkyreggaeparty8786]

Fantastically told! Truly enjoyed this one. The sound effects were a welcome addition also. Thank you so much, MCP. Stay well.

[@Devious_din]

This was probably the best one I hurt this year. Well done and more stories like this please

[@kentworch]

Thank you MrCreepypasta for the awesome pasta. I definitely loved this one 🖤🖤🖤🖤

[@NossDDoss]

Out of all the stories you well narrated, this one sounds the best.

[@mattym4451]

The most realistic part is the zealot cops offing all the innocents, lol

[@lavasharkandboygirl9716]

One of the best stories you’ve covered in a while!!

[@alonzoc23]

Amazing Story!!!

[@Uniquely-Unoriginal]

As promised and because I really want to hear it in full, time to immediately re-watch/listen!

[@Milo-frog-boi]

Thanks to your amazing narrations, I found out I one day want to become a narrator too. I've listened to your narrations for years now, and they still make me as happy as the day I found your channel. So, thank you and please never stop being the best rolemodel ever

[@allanm3797]

Awesome story!! Great plot and delivery!

[@rmtheg234]

One of the best stories I gave ever heard, bravo!

[@Killacodycollects]

Sooooo dope I cannot wait for October thanks for always making such awesome content!

[@mrlume9475]

Fantastic story and narration from start to end.

[@rashadhoward3903]

This one was deep Nothin supernatural just a man with nothing to lose and nothing to gain… That is truly terrifying

[@steviegiammarino4150]

Another great story excellently narrated!

[@SkruTheSquad]

Holy shit now I got sick, that was quite different! Great job brother! Great job.

[@jamesthornton3570]

Freakin Awesome !!!

[@afrostypolarbear2540]

Solid tale. And the reading. Killed it man

[@leekendall7155]

Holy Crap! That was freaking epic! Cheers Mrc Lee

[@roninblack3324]

New to your channel. You do a hell of a job with your narration. Keep up the good work

[@NeoClassicalnewb]

Is it bad that this video was cathartic for me because my exs name was Elizabeth and she goes by liz? Lol was a great listen!

[@thehyenamakeupslayer3819]

She should have gotten it the worst.. her mouth showed she was a nasty piece of work..

[@robbabcock_]

What a great tale!

[@cyndytower1263]

Excellent.!!!!!!!! No other word for this composition. It stupendous, really captivating incredibly well written and we'll read. I can't say enough good things about this piece of writing. Thank you for 1,1/5 hrs of spine chilling on the edge of your seat story. I've read a lot of books, from Shakespeare to Walden, to Issac Asminov, Heierdahl, King , all the Classics and few have been as entertaining raw and realistic. To the Author Thank You so very much. To our wonderful narrator Bless you for once again delivering the punches exactly on point. Good Work. God Bless

[@sh0wtime1]

another masterpiece

[@podoke]

so well written and so well performed:0 wowowow

[@MT-xu7dh]

This was an excellent story.

[@Grand-Blanc]

1:15:53 the counterstrike flashbang bounces... this is why MCP #1

[@ObsidianFallen]

The thumbnail caught me off guard the s is almost invisible will low brightness

[@Coolrobb]

Wow!! Hey, hands down the most riveting, the most intriguing story from any of the four Creepies combined. The irony and satire Mr. CreepyPasta provides are thrilling and hilarious at the same time and will hold you spellbound from beginning to end. Enjoy.

[@DeanDraxon8752]

Honestly, I was so pissed when Jeremy said he understood how the gunman felt. Like, if you know what it’s like, you think you wouldn’t do it to other people.

[@ZAZADIABLO]

Petition for the next part of Bonesaw Vics cryptozoological garden🙋🏽‍♂️

[@Roma-rusk]

Here here

[@raymondmckinney1565]

That would be great

[@rescuehamster1734]

Agreed.

[@tuckerstoneburner151]

Agreed!

[@DaniBoy92]

WELL THAT'S HOLLYWOOD FOR YOU..... SAD BUT TRUE STORY & IT'S ONLY ONE CIRCUMSTANCE, WHILE THERE ARE SO MUCH DARKER ONES

[@shenronsamma4650]

this story had me sucked in from the start loved it!

[@lisasummer701]

It’s been years since I’ve seen your videos… I missed it so much

[@alexanderslemp4855]

Damnit that was intense.

[@judy6150]

You're an amazing and unique narrator. ❤️

[@flavoracid]

sheeeeeit, this one was great

[@InvasionAnimation]

Epic Story!

[@Midway_CV-41]

Man reminds me of the Rikers from Tom Clancy's the Division in how ruthless this guy is. I love it

[@droid2645]

OMG. THE BEST I'VE EVER HEARD. BRAVO. I WAS ROOTING FOR THEY GUY!!😊

[@kimberlypierce3986]

That was the BEST Creepy Pasta Ive heard. I love listening to cp but this one ....... The narration was absolutely great. 👏👏👏 Thank you listening from Othello Wa 4:22 am Sept. 17 2023 BRAVO

[@jerrycooperman7309]

I agree its a good one, but Heads up, never abbreviate something when the abbreviation would be cp

[@SrVerataro]

Now that's a title for ya

[@liahlong8823]

I v much read the title wrong MCP lol. But am excited regardless!

[@Peter75C]

The S should be a bit more visible, eh? 😂

[@tjlambaes]

I’ve seen that darkness. It is cold. It’s lonely. And sometimes it’s hard to come back to the light.

[@victorhurwitz5559]

Agreed.

[@GodOfChicken]

YES! I finally found you again. Love your voice

[@carolduvall111]

Wow holy shit!!!!! This was so awesome i enjoyed that story immensely. 😊

[@KBdaFranchize-mk8gx]

Damn this story hit me hard

[@eviegracehopkinson6864]

I need a shower now but, ty.. ❤😮😢😊.. good as usual..

[@hotstepwastaken]

Finally. a decent story.

[@aspen-rose]

THE VOICE ACTING

[@jerichohill487]

Great story

[@tisme2888]

Awesomeness!!!! 😊

[@idolhandz3946]

Nicely done!

[@lanehaas6530]

Anyone else envision the intruder as Trevor Phillips from GTA V?😂

[@DiscipleOfHeavyMeta1]

Fantastic pasta. Way better than any lame ghost/demon story out there.

[@beeninjenek8851]

1h20m oooh nice, been waiting for the longer ones

[@nakishamanning8336]

I get it. I used to love reading Agatha Christie.

[@paulross225]

One day, I'd like to see you in a film. You're a natural character actor!

[@jimmymoore165]

This has to be one of the greatest I have ever heard from you and I love the majority of all your stories and I agree with the guy you really should have that sexy handsome face of yours on the big screen or do you know doing one of your parts that you are a natural actor truly I love this love is love this please do some more him it is great love you creepypasta mrcreepypasta😊🎉😂

[@amyplunkett6208]

YOU ARE AWESOME! I CAN'T SLEEP WITHOUT YOU ❤❤❤❤

[@BriGuyIL1980]

This would make a decent movie.

[@itsschmokey3846]

This was badass.

[@hartwellj100]

Mr Creepypasta is back!

[@thedevilofmetal5335]

This was a great story. I think I’m gonna make a movie about this XD

[@sgaisar]

Holy shit what a story!!! I love it, and i love the ending

[@nik-khealcrosby581]

Love the video, bro, you killed it. Awesome.👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 who thumbs up 1:20:44

[@t.a.hargrove1212]

TW grim is great. He needs to finish a few of his loose stories though….

[@janeh1431]

Wow😮 very intense.

[@CLCinflorida]

Please hit the Like 👍👍👍 if you are enjoying the Stream ❤

[@heathermoulds73]

Oh and the warehouse; Welcome to Amazon where my late husband sadly worked in desperation! Thankfully got something better after 2 months ( although “ better “ wouldn’t be difficult 😡🤬)

[@CLCinflorida]

Artist are known to be temperamental 😉👍👍👍

[@kimberlypierce3986]

That was so good...,i had to comment again🇺🇸

[@sabernightrose3691]

I'm high, I be walking around re enacting the bad guy cause I'm like I feel you man, I feel you but on the other hand I can feel the terror the others went through

[@mojofier1909]

thank you for upload! also gosh darn dem vignetting ... the 'S' is not so clear... which makes it funnier and relevant to the plot too huahuhaua