The Day I Got Expelled (Finished Animatic)

[@supergamerfacility8992]

I love the idea that musical is just Percy and his friends talking about their adventures to the new campers (which would also account for why some small details are different; it's been years since it actually happened). Great video!

[@austingil9716]

What was different I've haven't read pj in a while

[@astoria4ever]

@@austingil9716 well small things like percy was paying attention in class, nancy was yeeting a pb sandwich at grover in the bus, he didnt get to keep the pen until much later, ms dodds called him up because he pushed nancy into the water by the fountain using his powers, ms dodds didnt talk to him as far as i know, just tried to kill him, he got expelled for calling his teacher an old sot, percy overheard grover and chiron talking about kindly ones, and he actually left with everyone else, but he just couldnt come back

[@artsii-ghost]

@@astoria4ever that was my question as well! Thank you for answering, I was kinda confused

[@finleyforevermore]

Percy telling his story to younger campers is such a good framing device! This is such an amazing animatic!!

[@fiirebug]

Thank you!!! It actually took me a long time to come up with tehehe

[@finleyforevermore]

@@fiirebug You're welcome!! And I can understand! a lot of the time, trying to work out onstage fourth wall breaks in an animation medium is difficult.

[@cm1510]

THE PEN DISAPPEARING BACK INTO HIS POCKET WAS GENIUS! That was SO clever. Also, Mrs. O'Leary was adorable.

[@Yekaterina_draws]

2:58 Grover: Dude I'm your *only* friend that line killed me 😂

[@KileyPastel]

Sameeee I just burst out laughing

[@dorkaeszterbecsjanszki]

The pen, man! THE PEN!! It disappeared as Percy walked away!! That is SUCH a cool detail!😃😎

[@DaZi19]

omg I love this so much! That opening was perfect, I love the idea that the prologue is Percy telling his story to future campers. I love the chorus being people who just randomly pop out of various things is so funny lmao. I haven't watched the show but I hope that's what they do on stage, or if they don't then they should. And your designs for Pery, Grover, Chiron and Mrs Dodds are amazing! Can't wait for your next one

[@janadelfino1470]

❤

[@alakazamlover4908]

"aw dude....im your *only* friend" Hearing Grover say that is both funny and sad

[@YHsmiley]

THE BALLPEN FLEW BACK TO HIS PANTS THAT IS AN AMAZING DETAIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[@kakak.4852]

"dude i'm your only friend" Hopefully disney doesn't mess up, still nothing is more entertaining in all of PJ adaptations then this

[@j_fenrir]

I LOVE that you gave Grover goat eyes ❤

[@emissary8071]

Oh my goodness I love the designs and Grover! His pupils and the ears!!

[@feluriandelights4156]

really good! I especially loved your opening scene at the camp fire with Ms. O'Leary, it really added the perfect personal touch to make it stand out from other animatics of this song :)

[@dynosaurrrr]

😍 amazingggg i love all the detail put into this, like "kronos sucks" and mrs o'leary, the story being told around the campfire, and the part where percy killed mrs dodds was awesome 👏 nice work 5:28 aaaa just noticed the pen! it just gets better

[@Shsy7573]

IKR. I was watching the scene like “if that pen doesn’t vanish and return to his pocket I’m gonna lose it.” AND IT DID! Honestly the pen is my favourite part. It’s such a small detail but I love it

[@freddieheise4402]

lol i love how at 2:24 the person in front snapped a pic of the gods yknow

[@evieb-h4b]

OHHH THIS IS SO GOOD I love the idea of him telling his story around the campfire that’s so cute

[@seineevee]

This is great! It’s very simplistic but the designs are cute and it’s easy to tell which characters are which.

[@DinoandGalaxy]

4:25 Percy looks like a character from riddle school but I am absolutely loving it

[@crystaltefari7946]

MRS O’LEARYYYYY *sobs* I love this so much! Top tier animatic!

[@khalilfrederick2253]

This was crazy spectacular. I loved how expressive everyone was and I can't wait to see your next project.

[@pennysan_27]

Found this video during online classes 3 years ago when I had just read percy jackson, my best friends and I used to watch percy jackson animatics like these. I often come back to watch this because it reminds me of the good times I spent with my friends. Thank you for helping me create wonderful memories, the nostalgia is unreal :)

[@StarsAreKind]

YOU DID IT!!! OH MY GOSH AMAZING!!! YOU PHENOMENAL HUMAN!

[@fiirebug]

I DID!! THANK UU

[@James-ub9zs]

The dislike is from good ol grandpa thunder thighs who was mad at Percy for being alive

[@jeremyrigdon7875]

Omg omg omg I'm nvr gonna get over this animatic.. it's hella simplistic but honestly I think I prefer it that way bc u managed to convey strong emotions, creative scenes, amazing humor(like srsly amazing), a couple references, awesome movements(like when Percy slides around the corner and Mrs Dodds does the same and u used the noise she makes as her struggling), AND EVEN THE SMALL BATTLE HE HAS WITH MRS DODDS!!! Also not to mention how dope-looking the detention room was drawn, how Percy starts with his little campfire story,r Brunner taking the pen and fidgeting with it as he tells him it's not the place for him and how he immediately changes when Percy takes it wrong, the small nod to the naked statue they look at which also they made fun of in the book(lmao and the person who took a picture, I found that hilarious), how Percy leans back and crosses his arms when he's like "you SAW it!", Percy how he stands up ready to fight Nancy and grover is jus like "chill" and sits him back down, how Percy has a locker in this and then him running through the hall as ppl look at him knowing he's expelled! How he JUMPS out the doors to get to the bus, AND HOW IT ENDS WITH HIM LEAVING ON THE BUS, omg I can't, it gives me chills and I'm def rewatching 100 times over.. I jus can't, this is incredible and pls do more or become a storyboard artist cuz you're clearly an absolute pro.. I'm a hard person to please but sir or ma'am.. you've outdone yourself and I look forward to seeing your other works 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

[@abigailburnham1662]

When he jumps through the doors at the end?? You kept up that animating stamina like crazy also the scene where the girl is exiting the bus at the museum was soooo well drawn

[@donyx0604]

Therapist: Lego chiron cant hurt you Lego chiron:

[@Sadie-rd9pk]

Idk when but when Percy was reading the greek on the painting it said "Kronos Sucks" love that

[@carrionysus5893]

absolutely wonderful, and good use of a framing device

[@Mollieslay]

This is way too perfect I love it so much. The beginning was so cute and I love the way you draw Percy

[@jeremyrigdon7875]

The single dislike was Mrs. Dodds

[@angelarock1798]

Wait! If shes called Mrs. O'Leary who's Mr. O'Leary. *long gasps*🐶💍

[@oddelf7988]

**claps furiously** AMAZING!! ✨

[@toaster_turtle8292]

THIS IS SO GOOD WTFFFFFFF!!!!! I love how percy is so expressive and the designs are so cute!! and its SIX MINUTES LONG HOLY SHIT????? incredible

[@malkyyy3418]

This is by far my favorite animatic of this song😫

[@emilymarsch4982]

i may have commented on one other youtube video the entire time i’ve been on this site but i just had to let you know that this video made me smile SO MUCH. i love this musical so much and i absolutely adore the way you’ve interpreted this song and animated it. thank you for making this

[@abigailburnham1662]

THIS WAS INSAAAAAAAAne I have loved pjo for years and this is my favorite animatic ever 🤧🤧🤧🤧 thank you so much

[@Fandomerr]

YESSSSS HE’S JUST TELLING THE STORY OMG❤❤❤

[@Isoldeinks]

I came here after the Marinette video and omg I love all these percy Jackson animatics so MUCH Also the expressions in this animatic are so goofy and thank you for blessing my eyes 🙏

[@esthykechan]

the sword turning back into a pen 👌

[@personalinfodump2155]

Absolutely adorable!!!

[@spilledgenderfluid35]

This is so underrated

[@sunnyjelly333]

omg!??!!?!?! the endign was super creativr imo with the ensemble!!! so cool

[@harkpow]

WOOWOWOWOOW THIS IS THE BEST PJO ANIMATIC IVE SEEN SO FAR THIS MAKES ME EXTREMELY HAPPY!!!

[@huibin9]

THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING

[@LeaLala63]

DAMN!! I adore this so much!!! Every PJO animatic feeds my s o u l

[@mylamewman2329]

Don't you mean Dam

[@joeydoesstuff2142]

YOU MEAN DAM RIGHT????

[@Daughter_Of_Demeter]

"awww, Dude I'm your only friend" "PERCY JACKSON!" LMAO

[@laribabs]

This was amazing!!!

[@poseidons_child.]

That one kid taking the picture of the statue 😂

[@jaimebeeep9586]

This is amazing! I don't know how to put into words how happy I was watching it :)

[@Obst111]

I LOVE THIS

[@stellaemontoya1459]

I love this animatc too much

[@kaidusdream2659]

You have such a wonderful, cinematic vision for this song

[@baybee2721]

Absolutely👏fucking👏fantastic

[@nyssarose9629]

This is amazing I came from Instagram your art is always breathtaking 🥰

[@SalsaRat]

This this is awesome !

[@JustanormalOof-em4eh]

Wow, the determination you must have had to have to make this is incredible. Kudos to you

[@ladooo_]

it's amazing! :DD

[@zia2550]

I love it aaaaa

[@mayblumshaikh]

THIS IS SO EPICCCC!

[@narwhalz6918]

ADORE THIS!!

[@juliett1205]

THIS IS AMAZING

[@sno3b4ll]

Loved it!

[@lcst-at-5ea859]

The actual best day I got expelled animatic

[@Hana_H]

Grover’s pupils!!!🤩🤩🤩

[@CrazyLady06]

I love it❤

[@terrrence6258]

THIS IS SO COOL

[@this_is_me542]

nice

[@nellime4599]

I LUV IT

[@EnterZelda2007]

It is very dedicated for a sub

[@FORAMERICAA]

Awww Mrs, O’Leary

[@seniawalton861]

MRS. O'LEARY!!!!

[@naoaguentomais602]

Ta muito lindo namoral

[@wholesome2399]

Omg so good

[@rockie_roll2978]

Yay I got to be the 500th liker. Keep up the good work!

[@natelhyve]

AAAAAAAAAAAAA BIG DOGGO ALREADY HAVE MY LIKES. TAKE EVERYTHING. C U T E

[@smallgoblin2594]

YO