"The Line" | CreepyPasta Storytime

[@KingofHearts787]

Came for the story, stayed for the hold music.

[@jaimehunt7987]

'Gusten': actually Marcus can you put me back on hold? I think the music was helping Marcus: sure!!~ I died xD

[@tornartist]

That had me rollin'!

[@iyangraham7299]

The scream I scrumpt and cackle I cackled 😂😂

[@cmillerart]

I've never been genuinely uncomfortable listening to something before.... up until I learned the truth about what that guy did. Didn't feel so sympathetic then, dude deserved payback... but still that acting is some of the best I've heard. So unnerving!

[@l2j867]

A great story, always find myself coming back to it 🔥

[@OneCrimeTM]

@@l2j867 thank you both :)

[@HannahSaturnX]

That was superb. I really have to hand it to Caolan McClafferty. He conveyed being completely hysterical with panic and fear and pain so believably. Bravo.

[@schizenhower]

Thank you very much Jeanette!

[@nicksullivan3259]

I love the use of the audio moving from the left to right with the pacing

[@Janohiomom22]

Nick Sullivan the whole thing is amazing. It’s creepy, it’s mysterious, it’s creative and different than the typical stories. Wow. Just 😲 wow!!!

[@dankbonkripper7815]

'Tis very nice

[@reedbej4822]

I absolutely love the formatting of this video. Everything from the voice acting, the sound effects, the music, the visuals, and the writing are fantastic

[@DJLovedrummer21]

Oh boy, did this make my day! This has to be the craziest thing I've ever listened to. So good! You're the man

[@v4porbabe]

Jonas Kim ikr

[@dawnwayfinder]

Can't remember the last time a Creepypasta made me want to gag just from listening to it. This was incredibly well made.

[@Shadethewolfy]

I can~ For me, that creepypasta was Little Black Bugs. The downright *painstaking* description of the absolute SHITHOLE the brother lives in makes me react so violently that I almost throw up every time I try to sit down and give it a listen. I have a very vivid imagination, so sufficiently detailed descriptions can make me have rather visceral reactions like that.

[@g1stewart321]

The Tommy Taffy stories

[@kitty_screamz]

I love that Justin; excuse me, Gusten, went from victim to revenge killer.

[@celery8059]

IM SO SHOOK THIS WAS AMAZING, THE VOICE ACTING AND MUSIC AND EVEN IMAGERY AHHH I HOPE THERES MORE OF THIS BECAUSE IVE NEVER SEEN ANYTHING LIKE IT

[@LittleBallOfGiggles]

I HAVE A NEW VOICE CRUSH. This audiodrama was so amazing in terms of plot, execution, acting, everything.

[@lilgee88]

Hey it's Lily Madwhip. Love your voice acting in that series

[@LittleBallOfGiggles]

@@lilgee88 Thank you!!

[@tiffanybenefield1980]

Well This make me even more thankful that I NEVER bullied &/or harrassed anyone in school. My hats off to those that are/were bullied/harrassed.

[@Ninetailsmaster16]

The 911 operator was my favorite bit of this one. Love all the affects and theatrical production put into this project!

[@ecshady14]

*effects

[@Ninetailsmaster16]

@@ecshady14 officts, sorry!

[@CreepyGhostStories]

and here i thought this was going to be a cocaine creepypasta!

[@v4porbabe]

Creepy Ghost Stories lmao 😂

[@Disruptive_Engineering]

Creepy Ghost Stories this shit was seriously good. Even better than Mr creepypasta. I’m suprised your channel isn’t so much bigger than it is

[@CreepyGhostStories]

Yeah this was amazing. Thanks for the compliment too!

[@RandyLahey21991]

HAHA HAHA that fricken 911 operator

[@caseyisdrowning9040]

Cory Cook I like to think he had more to do with this than we know... He gives me weird vibes

[@lemonhscott7667]

His part was fab gotta say

[@krishaskin944]

I know this is three years old... But why can't current creppypasta's use this format. The visual aspect is fantastic, pushes it over the top. Bravo!!!

[@justinkunz8845]

The voice acting was phenominal, the twist in the beginnung of the story confused me until he mentioned the mc being a pledge. and from that point out it was phenomenal. I dont know what my fave part was how the video transitioned and matched the story, or how the voice acting and sound effects gave me chills.

[@NickWright]

Got shit, this guy is a PHENOMENAL voice actor!

[@ashleydenya4946]

This is insane! I’m so traumatized! But it’s brilliant. More stores like this please!

[@henrik971]

Right?👀🙊 it's so good👀 Like..... the FIRST time i heard this, i thought i had a nightmare👀

[@Kingdomheartsfan61]

this is like one of my favorite creepypastas. i keep coming back to this every year or so.

[@bl757]

So when's the full feature length film hitting theaters....

[@maniacmessiah2485]

This is some like watching a movie in your head and you don’t need all the details that regular creepy pastas give. This is like acting and telling a story while you imagine how the scenes play out.. Bravo man 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

[@SuperHero417]

This was the most disturbing and gruesome piece of art I’ve ever listened to. I’m in shook to even fathom the amount of hours this went into. Wonderfully made, this overall production is definitely going to give me nightmares tonight. Please don’t do that ever again

[@UNIversial666]

Don”t look up cupcakes then lol

[@Orochimaruswife1]

I'm not saying Andrew had it coming, but he had it coming, ~he had it coming, he only had himself to blame! If you'da been there, if you'da seen it, I know you would've the same!~

[@Shadethewolfy]

Ahh, Chicago. Never saw the musical, but I do know of the song you're referencing. It's a goodie.

[@jasonalbran376]

Honestly, everyone knows how horrible Fraternities amd Sororities are. Most of it is chalked up as rumors and gossip but these institutions are disgusting. Both are degenerate sesspools and should be shut down. What happened to Justin was horrible but he wanted to join. Some of that pain came from his decision to join what is essentially is a cult. He got his revenge... Honestly, I wondered why he didn't hunt Andrew down years ago....

[@cassandra1234ization]

These guys sound like professional voice actors. Have they been in any cartoons or dubbed anime? This really reminds me of that torture scene in Tokyo Ghoul.

[@fad3872]

Oh yeah. Unfortunately no one 's hair turns white in this

[@T0M_X]

It turns red ;)

[@Bli757]

holy crap for a little bit I thought this was sponsored by some upcoming blockbuster about a grindhouse horror fraternity movie and they got studio space and actors to play but DAMN, u all nailed it! this was amazing writing and acting bringing in new talent to the creepypasta community! i love it :O

[@wickedblooms5413]

Damn, that was impressive. Clap Clap Clap.

[@Neon.Almond]

Wicked Blooms CLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAP

[@xSaraxMxNeffx]

this is the most beautiful audio drama ever. thank you so much

[@finnjake2896]

This one’s crazy the audio is like 4K ultra hd! Love the story!!

[@phoenixl6877]

That hold music......LOL!!

[@Dream-qy9ir]

Phoenix L FACCXCCTTTTSSS like that shit go hard asl😭😭😭🔥

[@zalenwolfal3974]

Wow, I haven't been truly engulfed in one of these for a while. Voice, perfect. Music, great. Pictures and scenes, blended seemlessly. I really loved all of it.

[@patientlywatching7775]

Wow....this is superb!!! Editing and production value and voice acting and music and sound fx etc.... Lovin' it!!!

[@nickerhart6510]

It may sound kinda harsh but Andrew didn't get half of what he deserved.

[@unlimited-edge]

I like stories like this because it reminds me of the whole “murdering a murderer” dilemma. Like did Andrew truly deserve the torture he endured? Was Justin justified in taking such insane extreme measures?

[@OneCrimeTM]

That is exactly what we intended when creating this.

[@julibeans3269]

As much as I love you, I have a feeling the next title is gonna be: The zigzag.

[@masonacworth5695]

I thought it was going to be the circle

[@julibeans3269]

Mason Acworth oh shit good one.😂💀

[@mrjtfang2]

the inverted dodecahedron

[@alternativemoth2443]

Damn this voice acting is oscar worthy

[@monwoo10]

The voice acting in this is phenomenal! MrBlackpasta is has so much potential!

[@shadowtheking2892]

When he started singing along with the music I lost it! Classic material

[@shadowtheking2892]

Mr Black Pasta I'll be supporting the page

[@wolveraspeaks]

Welcome to the comment section, please hold....................

[@Mo_Speckleblitz]

DON'T YOU USE THAT KIND OF LANGUAGE WITH ME! 😹

[@KaliN521]

*Elevator music begins*

[@vinylsmp3]

Does anyone want snacks i got anything?🍒🍑🌯🌭🌮🥙🥘🍿🍲🍿🍲🍿🍚🍠🍠🍠🍜🍘🍱

[@radiantshay2146]

I feel like this is how a blind person "watches" a movie. Very well done I must say

[@ericshepherd8063]

I swear if cops were like they were in the beginning I would be pissed

[@lemonhscott7667]

Eric Shepherd they are in a lot of places, Russia for instance

[@cpi3267]

Just hear those 911 calls that get the operators fired

[@Shadethewolfy]

The foreshadowing damn. "Might as well put an ad in the papers under "murder"" XD

[@hastings9452]

This was fantastic. Everybody involved should be incredibly proud of themselves. Very well done.

[@TimothyDuran]

Glad to see this short film making its rounds!

[@MistressHorrors]

Why doesn't this have a million views?

[@dankbonkripper7815]

Mistress Horror because it was just uploaded

[@greatgallade]

Its not the best honestly...

[@pixelberserker6605]

Still only about 60k

[@pepinyostep3592]

I loved how the video was put together with the visuals and the sounds! Oh the sounds! Please do more videos like this im beggin you!!

[@IsaacRizard]

Well done, great job on the drama and twist and turn. This is gory enough and lasted for a night or two, imagine the kind of horror that the late Junko Furuta of Japan had to endure for torturous 44 days. Can't help but to recall that sadistic horror case after listening to this.

[@OneCrimeTM]

Thank you so much. Ill def look into that.

[@Tobo226]

Christ the voice acting is out of this world!!

[@alexwolf5119]

"Actually marcus put me back on hold, The music is helping me think."

[@johncrowley88]

Suuuuure!lol

[@jasonalbran376]

So.....Bruce from Family Guy was the 911 Dispatch. Marcus:..Mmmm! Long juicy bananas and melon balls! Justin: WTF!!! Marcus: Sir!! Don't ruin the best part of my day!!

[@blackknightswagful]

So disturbing...but I can't click away..

[@weavilemeinfep]

I adore the voice acting of both justin and andrew, but i just love this quote too much, “But its you i cannot resist, i feel like fucking Frankenstein.”

[@TAEbot]

MrBlackPasta is fucking dope asf... We need more!

[@zytherfrost]

Out of all the things you've put out over your long career. I would say this is one of your best works yet. Very dark and twisted with a poetic twist of justice at the end. Love you MCP keep em coming

[@zytherfrost]

Mr Black Pasta oh my bad it's an honor to hear your work honestly! I loved it, it grabbed me by the nuts and took me for a ride I was not expecting. Thank you for being an amazing author and producer

[@vashustampede]

this was so good like this blew me away, applause to everyone that worked on this because heck this was amazing

[@bittersweetCatnip]

BRUH. I'VE BEEN WANTING TO DO AN AUDIO STORY LIKE THIS FOR AGES! THIS IS SO GOOD! I FUCKING LOVE THIS FORMAT!

[@DarkDays1143]

Whoa... Now that was just amazing. I've never heard a Creepypasta like this, and I believe that many more should be made with this style of acting... It was just whoa... Last thing I expected... Really good work.

[@M3L0DY_dll]

10 points for chainsaw kill, 20 points for revenge and 5 points for making him eat his own finger. -5 for the pun 30/10

[@squishycoveswena]

Oo! I've not seen a video like this before! I really enjoyed it. You're all such talented voice actors :)

[@philzeo]

This is comedy gold, and I'm only halfway through. I love it so much! Is unique and has me practically in tears 😂

[@philzeo]

And suddenly a shift O.O this is v incredible. The quality is amazing. You earned yourself a new sub.

[@SevereNightmares]

Goodness, that was so delightfully insane and brutal. I love insane/vengeful characters who just go off the deep end like that. Oddly enough, sometimes I want to laugh along with them, though I never have, or wanted to, hurt anyone. Honestly, something's probably wrong with me, but, hell with it, this was really good. :)

[@jamiebell7220]

Dude this is fricking lit. Thanks man.

[@bill108a3]

Holy shit, well done! You've never done anything like this before and I love it.

[@Haannnaaaah]

This is amazing. Everything about it is perfect. I Love how it's narrated and the sound effects. Bravo

[@sorrenpeak4870]

Glad to see black pasta getting some recognition. His voice is beautiful.

[@vampirefinchgaming]

It’s been a long time since something made me feel this sort of glee and murder. This whole thing was American Psycho meets American Mary, which are two of my favorite movies. Bravo!

[@bshiritta19]

The fucking hold music for 911 had me dying 😂😂😙

[@slicksight8283]

AMAZING!! made me so uncomfortable I had to go to the comments for safety by far my favorite

[@jennifermommy9373]

Just...wow...this has to be one of the best stories I have heard from this channel. So much talent charisma!!!!!!

[@ThatJersey_Girl]

I love this!! The dude doing the torturing sounds just like Evan Peters to me 👀

[@larrenlistens]

That was absolutely great!!! I listened twice!! Thank you MPC for featuring this!!! MR BLACK PASTA - WELCOME WELCOME WELCOME! Can't wait to hear more from you!

[@sleepyfoxyYT]

Well that took a fucking turn

[@harrisonkelly5178]

Holy shit dude, one of the most well done creepy pastas I’ve heard. Great job

[@doomqwer]

damn revenge is so sweet and tastes of iron

[@thatonecanadianguy734]

doomqwer Sounds similar to the Taste of Despair

[@doomqwer]

Yup

[@Dunkster74]

Shit, from the production quality i thought this was some kind of native ad. Nice job guys, top notch.

[@laranobraid9656]

These stories that are acted out like this are the best you should do more of them. iv been a fan for a few years now. keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[@ShadowRazor2009]

This was very impressive Justin sure reminded me of Trevor from gta 5 alot .

[@Wicked_Ways09]

Holy shit I wasn't expecting something like this 10/10

[@jennifermommy9373]

That was so good. I'm saving that in a list and I'm gonna listen ro.that and share it so many rimes. That story was so well produced in every possible way. How have I not heard of Mr.Blackpasta until now?! Thanks MCP. This was a great upload.

[@michaelbizzarro624]

Listened to this on MrBlackPastas channel the day he released it on his channel. He's incredible.

[@knowwe]

That was intense. Grade A voice acting. Superb production. Fantastic job all round.

[@hellrider22393]

14:00 whoa, what a twist weren't they talking about zombies earlier?

[@kittenwizard4703]

Damn I see you put some effort into this great job 👍

[@bigchezzy8989]

KittenWizard 101 just thought I would say in case you didn't get it, this was not made by mrcreepypasta it was made by Mr black pasta which is quite a small channel which deserves more recognition

[@kittenwizard4703]

Todd talks ik but the voice acting is top notch lol

[@bigchezzy8989]

KittenWizard 101 oh OK lol

[@derricklindsey140]

Crazy about all the little hints it throws at you after you listen to it the first time

[@OneCrimeTM]

I'm sooo glad someone caught those! We worked hard on that. It was our first script!

[@justjo510]

Whoa! this was an insanely intense story Good job! 🙆🏽‍♀️ it needs to be a movie 👏🏽👏🏽

[@Karen-uo3db]

This was absolutely amazing! The voice actors, sound effects, and the story was awesome!

[@happycudgel2193]

To hear this while wearing noise reduction full headphones was a trip on the humorous, stereophonic, gory, and chainsaw meta side. EXCELLENT

[@Streifen1911]

this may be the greatest voice acting i’ve ever heard. WOW!

[@thatonecanadianguy734]

Great Idea! I like the use of sounds aswell as the comedy relief with regards to the operator. A lot was going on in this story , the zombie apocalypse , a bunch of hill billies seemed crazy keep it up guys

[@soyboydivision]

"I'll buy a fucking house, just get me out of this shit, man!" That made me giggle.

[@kconnor4568]

I don't comment on MCPs videos , I usually just give them a like and move on . But this one cannot go without a comment . This is THE MOST AMAZING AND F--KED UP VIDEO that I have ever seen / listened to ever . I honestly didn't know what to expect from this , but I definitely got much more than I bargained for . I have never heard of MrBlackPasta before but now that I know of him , I believe that I'm going to have to subscribe to his channel . Once again , excellent work and you are probably right about getting nightmares from it.

[@jonathanharris4871]

The assailant always expects the victim to get over things.

[@raulpasillas3140]

I've been listening to MrCreepyPasta for little over a year now, and I can say with 110% confidence that if he did more of these I would definetly tune in more!!!.

[@stepheniebales5145]

Raul Pasillas c

[@TracyLewisakaTraCee]

Raul Pasillas This is Mr. Black Pasta's work - MCP featured it for him. Links in the description.

[@raulpasillas3140]

Tra Cee oh dang!. Lol sorry I didn't know. Thanks for the information!. But still, I wouldn't mind of MCP did things like this. I'd be all over it. But I imagine it'd take longer to make the videos.

[@gremlin6208]

This is the most amazing upload of a story I’ve ever heard. This is honestly the best! The voices are so real, the sounds are so real! I love the story line.

[@Melanco001]

This is some next level creepypasta. Thank you sir!!!!!

[@clydefang2058]

This story is so fucking dark damn

[@jessnightingale2244]

This was frikken awesome, had me on the edge of my seat I really enjoy stories that make me feel like u watching a movie as I'm listening! Great job

[@atheistmom3591]

Wow. This is - hands down - one of the best audio dramas I’ve EVER heard. Please share more of your music and dust this one off for a future compilation or re-release. ❤

[@njnonips5261]

So there is a zombie apocalypse going on and these hillbilly killers are running around but ... And this guy

[@doomqwer]

damn the suspense is palpable

[@Tarazed609]

I L O V E this! I love the wisecracks, I love the quality, I love the voice acting... _Amazing_ work guys ! 👏 👏