This was obviously written by someone without military experience. So Hollywood I couldn't finish it
@MichaelSchisler-jx3uc7 ай бұрын
I liked the story and the read wasn't bad actually it was quite good❤😂🎉😢😮😅😊C.S.A.BABY
@grantgunz7 ай бұрын
3000 quatloo's the humans cannot be contained!
@varnix5107 ай бұрын
I like it
@oneyebat78397 ай бұрын
The story was great but too short. lol
@iffracem7 ай бұрын
@0:49 "the Odyssey lacked weapons" but at @9:00 Odyssey fires torpedoes I am confused, please explain?
@rickpee7 ай бұрын
I like the story
@blueeyeswhitedragon98397 ай бұрын
It was a great story...as if written by one of the scifi greats of the 1950's, using old fashioned tactics from the 1800's. The story ignored the speeds of space craft, the distance of space battles and the relativistic realities of battles in outer space. It reminded me of stories that I read in scifi soft cover magazines... the saving of beautiful girls from the clutches of ugly monsters, and Buck Rogers- like stiff dialogue. A little bit juvenile, eh?
@me57687 ай бұрын
I liked the story
@jbodden69777 ай бұрын
this was pretty good until 23: where it spiraled down the drain with reiterations of repetitions of hackneyed phrases and lacking any furtherance of the story line, filler as it were.
@ewinder7 ай бұрын
Reads like a mismash of Star Wars and Star Trek stories...
@oneyebat78397 ай бұрын
Great, Great story, but birth mother? Really?
@TheRaptor19677 ай бұрын
Sorry, to melodramatic for my taste. Also the written narration was often out of phase. Could not finish it.