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The things you do for love
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[@nathanielmoreau604]

good video dude i appreaciate that you talk like a normal person and not a media personality

[@donnieak]

Thank you very much

[@theotherlucas]

good video :) a few points though is to remove the intro (like another commentor suggested) because even though it doesn't seem like much, an intro can KILL viewer retention. secondly I suggest working on a script or improving your current writing method to remove a lot of your unnecessary pauses and the times you repeat yourself. no hate though i enjoyed the video just trying to give some criticism to help you improve :)

[@donnieak]

Thank you very much, I’m always open to feedback it’s the only way to learn and yeah the intro will be gone.I really do need to improve my writing and structure of the videos thank you for your time

[@theotherlucas]

@@donnieak no problem, hope your channel is successful :D

[@sillysoursol]

why do you not have more subs whaa

[@donnieak]

All in due time whaaaaaaa

[@beolikespoo]

You are funny 👍

[@donnieak]

Thank you

[@whywjhyy]

drop the intro

[@donnieak]

I plan on,thanks for the feedback