"The Thing in The Backrooms" Creepypasta

[@thatexoguy6721]

Hello everyone, I'm the author. I just wanted to drop in and say thank you! To everyone who is tuning in to listen, and to CreepsMcPasta for narrating! I hope you guys will enjoy this one 😄

[@LungEater]

so does he message you and ask if he can use your story in his videos or does he just take it and assume you're okay with it? and do you get any of the money made from this video?

[@thatexoguy6721]

@@LungEater Thanks for the concern, it's very sweet and reassuring to see that people are looking out for us authors :D And yes, Creeps did ask, so no worries. I'm a new-ish author on nosleep but we did work together once before, and I hope we'll keep it up in the future.

[@xxscribbledragonxx9744]

Great writing dude! One of the only recent creepypastas so actually spook me a bit! Keep it up man ^-^

[@jonfarr2831]

This is an amazing story, friend. I hope to listen to more of your stories.

[@Attrazzione]

But why didn’t he charge at work? Tbh I wouldn’t have thought about taking it with me neither 😂

[@shiron1076]

I feel like the backrooms are exact copies of every rooms in the world thats why they vary in size and dimensions but they are like an empty version of the rooms.. like bodies without souls

[@Mansi218]

Great theory

[@Crazy-nj8sn]

That's kind of what the story was about they went over that

[@jaredcook9424]

So is it possible to say that when we experience ghosts, it's really people navigating the backrooms?

[@ethankrns5018]

I’ve wanted a creepy pasta about this for ages

[@GhostlyDash]

*creepypasta

[@nonbinarymess]

SAME

[@unravelmysoul1598]

@@GhostlyDash ok

[@JustSomeGuywithEpicGrasses]

You wanted one read by him, right? This one's been around for quite some time.

[@ethankrns5018]

@@JustSomeGuywithEpicGrasses yh obviously but I could never find a good long one

[@JimmmyRaynor]

the last time I was this early, Jeff the Killer was still a popular creepy pasta icon

[@kingoffury.]

Smile dog

[@GhostlyDash]

*creepypasta

[@ruju1806]

@@GhostlyDash it's ok calm down its not a grammar test

[@tessa8895]

Yeah, me too, I’m kinda freaked out that I’m watching a creepsmcpasta video in 2021, but I saw a Tik Tok about the back rooms and had to research 😭😭

[@lukaswilliams5851]

Where can i find Jeff the serial killer storys.

[@JohnnytheYouKnowWhat]

The backrooms has always captivated me. I live for these stories.

[@thunderousavenger7437]

Yes.

[@callumboyle1206]

Yes

[@yeboi5478]

Yes.

[@iwakura3011]

Yes.

[@grantharmon9752]

Yes

[@JJake993]

"How many doors did you open today? How about the last week or month?" Me who hasn't moved since march 2020: *sweats*

[@mercyadong1295]

Lmfaooo😭😭

[@neofortunate]

So you're always in the dark? Does that mean that you are the... creature?

[@virgin1792]

You didn't go to the bathroom?

[@carter3028]

@@virgin1792 what do you think the bathroom corner is for? 🤔

[@autumnbrinkley8016]

oof Lol

[@QuirkWork_V13]

If you think about it, human buildings are the Backrooms for the various bugs who accidently come in.

[@anexistingperson8540]

They would be able to escape though

[@sara-zv5pb]

LMAO WAIT-

[@artistevivien]

I read this as “humans are the backrooms” and felt terror for a brief second

[@killah6697]

I-

[@EastImp]

Not really

[@abbeysquidd]

The moral of the story: *Always pay attention to the damn rooms you're going into*

[@CaibelTheStrategist]

True i saw a guy enter the females bathroom and then walk back out as if nothing happened XD.

[@jeanettejenkins7606]

@@CaibelTheStrategist why would you react and bring attention to yourself? It was an honest mistake and shouldn't have been made a big deal over.

[@alexno5026]

@@CaibelTheStrategist lol

[@veiihdioh]

@@CaibelTheStrategist Tf do you mean tweet? o-o

[@reeceshugrue6167]

"All we had to do was follow the damn rooms CJ"

[@cailuvmacca]

FINALLLLLY! The backrooms are such an interesting concept to me. So glad for a long creppypasta diving into it! 😍

[@mariaavalos6121]

DUDE SAME THERE SO UNDERRATED

[@bl1tz533]

Mmm creppy pasta very spoopy

[@cousinjake7986]

I was tryimg to listen to this on my bus ride home, but I missed 2 stops cause I got too into this excellent narration.... Thanks Creeps

[@killah6697]

Story says he never got off that bus and it never stops driving DUN DUN DUNNN!!!

[@Shanjaq]

@@killah6697 Revenant Bus

[@Smile_j7p36]

I have literally been hyper fixating on the backrooms for like 2 weeks this has perfect timing :DDD

[@pounces7577]

omg same hi

[@jackdurden466]

I can’t argue, I do love triple D’s. But I haven’t ever hyper fixated on much else. I’m sorry, you just tee’d it up too well to be ignored! 😂 I’m just a 13 year old in a grown mans skin.

[@NovaNova-wc9bb]

@@jackdurden466 what

[@dafork2]

@@jackdurden466 bro are you okay, did you have a stroke?

[@jacobmckinzie65]

Try the game on steam. It's called the backrooms

[@TheDarknesEternal]

Wow, I feel so included in this one! As someone named Brandon who is about to turn 25 with dirty blonde hair and blue eyes. Guess I shouldn't go through any doors.

[@ionno7498]

@@cakepeace3395 hes gone now

[@christianmccauley7340]

@@cakepeace3395 he dead

[@marcuslehter6817]

He gone

[@GalaxyTheLynx]

_Brandon are you still with us_

[@Commandobreezy]

Wtf I’m 25 named Brandon have blue eyes (dark hair) I’m scared

[@TheForgottenNarrator]

I love these. I listen to them when I walk or go exploring in the woods.

[@calamitysangel2057]

My horse stays on a property where bodies have been found and people went missing. I listen to these when I ride and feed to distract my ears from whatever roams the trees. Give it such more mysterious feeling!

[@remc0s]

@@calamitysangel2057 Crystal Lake?

[@Willimann]

@@calamitysangel2057 you my sir, want to go to the backrooms.

[@shadxw_hunter]

balls of fucking titanium

[@MsMtheory]

I literally just stumbled upon this whole backrooms thing yesterday lol I love your videos and I'm super excited for this one! thank you.

[@grimsgraveyard3598]

After Vanessa's death seems to be a tame way to say that she got caught and ripped apart and eaten by some monster.

[@andrewjennings7306]

Yea no shit

[@sea-fieldpony.4556]

Thanks for the spoiler

[@Willimann]

@@sea-fieldpony.4556 lmao

[@marioreyes7971]

That and getting out of the backrooms, I'm pretty sure once you're stuck in there's no way out only going to other levels

[@anathemat-002]

I like stories like this- they always feel like an old folk tale that's creepy, but actually has a real world purpose. In old Russian folklore for instance, there's a woodland creature named the Selkie, which is a bit like a siren for lakes and streams and ponds and such, that will lure people in and then drown and eat them. It wasn't just scary, it was told to children so that they wouldn't go near water and risk drowning, but more importantly just getting wet in the middle of a Russian winter. Doing so would guarantee you got sick or froze to death before you got home. This story practically feels like a nod towards paying attention for the things that can happen in your house. Maybe if you look, you notice a strangely unconscious pet, nodding towards a carbon monoxide leak that will kill you, or maybe you've been broken into and some things are moved, and someone is lying in wait for you to attack you. Old stories, even the whole "don't eat pork" from the bible (there was no way to cure pork to make it safe to eat like other meats) had more purpose than just to scare people. They were subtleties that kept people safe if they followed them.

[@grinningdeathA7x]

Selkies r Scottish

[@anathemat-002]

@@grinningdeathA7x Selkie is a translation for the proper Russian word for the creature I'm talking about. They're also called Rusalka but selkie came to mind first. Plus, the word Selkie is used for much of the Slavic region because I've also found it used in Norse and Irish folklore, which is pretty neat.

[@GhoulishThing]

Coming back to this channel about 2 years later. I cannot describe how funny I found it that as soon as he spoke, my body relaxed and was hit with massive amounts of nostalgia.

[@Hayden-qj1lo]

Backrooms creepypastas are severely underdeveloped, however this is the gem in the coal mine we’ve been looking for

[@selinalee1077]

“The thing in the back rooms” Ah, yes. That would be Jeff the sandwich thief. He also likes to steal sweet tea. Legend has it you will never get your lunch back and if you ever dared try you’d hear an un-earthly scream and he will chase you

[@Skedarking85]

This was good. I got really into this one, I hadn't even realized it had been 45 minutes. I love the stories that really sink you into it, you really feel like you're part of the journey. That's the magic of good writing plus good narration. Thanks Creeps.

[@pandalyn2267]

Dude, this entire story got me through an hour in traffic in Atlanta. Just got home. Thank you ❤

[@Superwneg64]

I never expected a creepy pasta about the backrooms on this channel at all. I was so hyped when I saw this video on my recommendations.

[@Just_A_Fella]

What a banger of a story jesus.

[@enclosedgranddad1715]

Finally, a Backrooms creepypasta I've never listened to before! I don't think the concept of the Backrooms has reached its full potential yet.

[@rheanonjasmyne]

Makes me glad I always keep my eyes straight ahead as I'm going through a door, I've already fallen once and fractured my right shoulder in 4 places, that doesn't feel good. Of course my eyes were looking down at that time.

[@CarolGoff98]

I was literally just learning about the backrooms today omg the timing !!

[@hisammy3969]

Back room stories creep me out so much but you know I’m gonna listen anyways 👁👄👁

[@kathryntolle7822]

Another weekend, another fun filled day full of tales from Creeps ❤️ thank you, for being my favorite KZbinr

[@sugarbytes9014]

I draw cute art / twitch emote commissions while listening to these videos :3... I can't do it without them o-o

[@xxscribbledragonxx9744]

i draw with these in the background too, its impossible without tbh

[@Hierophant_Bean]

omg i love the backrooms stories

[@Hierophant_Bean]

thank you so much

[@arandomcowjustchilling4237]

@@Hierophant_Bean bean water splashhhhh!!!!!

[@jamesfizer8356]

I’ve been listening to all these stories for the past 2 months. Never disappointed. @creepypasta I’m so happy when i listen. Respect to the addiction.

[@pennypay1]

I enjoyed this one. The backrooms lore has become so saturated with video game-type levels, hundreds of entity species, 'proven' no-clip guides, and that stupid-a** almond water. So I appreciate any minimalistic take on the situation of being stuck in the backrooms. The original essence (isolation, monotony, loneliness, unknown predator) is what fascinates me most and is well described in this story. And there's a good gradual buildup of dread and fear.

[@morter4596]

I had a dream last night with this exact layout. The only difference was instead of a monster, there was a coffee machine in every single room 🤣

[@shitneyb5562]

So you dreamed of paradise

[@mountainghosteverett]

theres an scp of a 'coffee' machine with a keyboard that dispenses any kind of liquid! someone once put cup of joe and it proceeded to dispense a guy named joe's blood :D

[@OOFMAN64Real]

WAIT.....

[@sc1ss0r1ng]

Ah, so basically my mother's favorite dream ever hahahahaha.

[@insecuresimpinc.4475]

I love listening to these vids while drawing

[@FoxeralArt]

For real lmao that’s exactly what I do

[@sashathedemiroomni4146]

I like listening to these while I write

[@mijoepa]

Same. What do you draw?

[@insecuresimpinc.4475]

@@mijoepa I have a lot of characters that I like to practice different poses with What about you?

[@mijoepa]

@@insecuresimpinc.4475 Sometimes I’ll draw characters, but I mostly like to draw landscapes, similar to the ones Bob Ross painted :)

[@sunkenship9552]

Finally a creepypasta that doesn’t reveal the monster 3 minutes into the story. I’ve been giving up on finding good ones cause they all ruin it but this one is good.

[@UnlimitedRadioButNoSoap]

Did anyone else think of corpse party when he spoke about the unusable windows? "It'll hear the doors" It's Baldi lmao

[@useroffline9999]

“always pay attention to the room you’re entering” Me: *sweats in ADHD and dissociation*

[@mountainghosteverett]

*maladaptive daydreaming panic*

[@mariaavalos6121]

This topic is so underrated ...

[@SaphInfection]

Ooooh I remember reading this aloud on a nosleep forum as practice because I want to narrate creepypastas as a hobby :)

[@lindseyfishel3909]

Gets ready to go to sleep, my brain suddenly decides it needs to start playing your voice. Okay, let's see...first video

[@mehlilith]

Where did he take shits. That question has been bugging me the whole time.

[@stevepalpatine2828]

Wherever.

[@coonus1]

Came to watch again. Really enjoy this one.

[@FelixWheatfield]

The addition of the lights brightening and dimming with the time of day was a cool touch.

[@danadoozer9990]

I loved this story, and I love the concept of the backrooms! It just goes to show that a story doesn't have to be gory or gruesome to be totally creepy!

[@Sherry-vx7vh]

There should be a creepy pasta series on netflix😊 I'd love this one to be the first episode!

[@Onlylizaa]

I know it’s like a year later but it is one for kids I forgot what it’s called but it has a episode like a backrooms place

[@shadydragon22]

Weird.. usually creepypastas about the more popular urban legends and stuff are badly written but this w=one had compelling characters and felt realistic enough.. need more.

[@Bump3rFish]

I always like the music you pick. They always draw me in, and keep me in the moment. =)

[@mrMR-zu6xg]

A part two of him some how going back would be cool

[@Umber_Ella]

Awesome story! Thank you for reading it

[@denalozecon9074]

Story; The Daily Grind (Story is mentioned briefly in another story called Soulforged Dungeoneer, so author of second story is a fan. I stopped reading when mcs fought security guy; author took a break for months after that.) Anyway The Daily Grind is like Backrooms+ generic endless offices+ reality modified by unknown weirdness...living staplers that hunt in packs are the weak ones.

[@ArachisNPO]

SPOILER! Oh, so he got saved by the SCP foundation! It makes sense, and I love it! If the backrooms and the SCP foundation would be real, of course they would investigate it. It might even be one of their top priority.

[@Onlylizaa]

That’s dumb

[@gaelsandoval7932]

Author this story is so GOOD that It actually got be scared me for a couple of days. P.S I was scared to walk in the dark and I would actually be transported to the "BACKROOMS"

[@katelynthewhitewerewolf6376]

*Jeff and his husky puppy Smile get snatched by a Stilt Walker in the backroom in an old house in the woods screaming in fear*

[@ErenJeagerBomb]

*AND NOW I KNOW WHY*

[@stevepalpatine2828]

But who was phone?

[@tabitha.shipley]

I can literally feel the terror the narrator is telling. You have the perfect horror story creepypasta voice. I was literally imagining what was happening while listening to this. My imagination and your voice are a good combo lol.

[@thedarklrd6714]

"How many doors have you opened in your life?" How many breads have you eaten?

[@KamilSupinski41]

It’s funny how we both have profile pics from the same game.

[@hooligan5081]

I've been waiting for so long for you to do a Backrooms story :)

[@realfalanuhlaalu]

Really liked this one. The Backrooms just fascinate me so much ever since that story about the Amazon Locker that doesn't actually exist.

[@John_Stana]

God, ohhh god. Another surviver. I went into the vortex too..... and I saw it oh did I see it. I almost died. Until............ lol this is really the best story I’ve ever heard 👏👏👏👏

[@brandonspeed]

Amazing story but that description of the guy named Brandon startled me since it's the same features I have 😂

[@training4chocolate]

Left me feeling uneasy. Great story!

[@eyesack538]

I just got into the backrooms fandom and I’m so happy my fav KZbinr is making a vid about it

[@tylerwatson5524]

As a FedEx driver, I’ve opened a lot of doors.

[@kellyreilly6106]

That was the best story yet I actually am worried to live alone

[@LuisaD93]

That’s was truly horrifying! More so than any of the fully engaged , enraged,stalking and fetid Cryptid atrocities chasing and hunting one down ! Well done ! Thanks 😊

[@Hijazi2]

FINALLY another backrooms story!! Long too!

[@michaelnelson1127]

For some reason, the name “The Backrooms” makes me think of Homeward Bound: “‘Where’s Chance?’ ‘They took him to the back room. I think something awful has happened to him!’”

[@VirusX728]

Out of all the backrooms creepypasta I listened to so far, this has to be the best one yet!!!

[@GabiteEditz]

Hey hey hey! I speedrun the backrooms. got some tips Tip 1: see a entity slowly walk away Tip 2: what am i gonna say, don't try it i didn't get out in my recent run.

[@massnovvaa3138]

Pleaseee narrate more backrooms stories! This is so nice to listen to

[@oddeyes9413]

I've had dreams of the backrooms, but I didn't know about them until a few months ago. Honestly, that scares me.

[@valkaerie8715]

Who says they were dreams?

[@hudsontille8630]

Perhaps you were waking

[@clarekent4110]

oh my god, i’ve had so many nightmares about this concept!

[@twilightfan00117]

So have I. I think it's a pretty common type of nightmare. That's why the backrooms are so creepy, because there's this sense of familiarity + it plays into the fear or being stuck and hunted by something.

[@possessable]

y'know i never thought i'd be listening to a backrooms creepypasta with backrooms ambience in the background while drawing but this is actually pretty sweet

[@Indyawillis85]

That was a great story. I was legit on the edge of my seat.

[@excitablepack7076]

“Oh Magic Conch Shell, what must we do to get out of the backrooms?”

[@Breeskeed]

Lord of the flies SpongeBob edition

[@randlerichardson5826]

Great video I’ll start here at 18:58 tomorrow evening got a early start in the morning

[@perry4799]

This was a good story. Exactly the kind of horror I like.

[@3mmy341]

I love listening to your videos while drawing. I like to draw creatures based off the videos.

[@Nesitel]

Oh my god. You are the best narrator ever. I can really imagine it all and being there 😰😰😭😭

[@damien1065]

So much better than a skinwalker story

[@Overly_Hydrated]

I’m done listening to skinwalker stories. We need other scp’s

[@arrowz4318]

short titles and plot twists is what ive been begging for

[@damien1065]

@@arrowz4318 short stories can be fantastic

[@damien1065]

@@Overly_Hydrated It’s to the point where if I saw a skinwalker while camping I’d probably roll back over and go back asleep lol

[@jackdurden466]

Whoa, hey, we all have our vices. These have been ignored too long, the main characters of the Pastas should be more balanced. But they seem to come in waves. And overexposure doesn’t do any good.

[@taminoll]

I've almost experienced something like this twice. It wasn't me being glitched, and it wasn't in an abandoned place. It was a very popular anchor store in a mall with a basement/photo studio. Also, the "3rd" floor. The elevator up was a trip on its own. This was in 2014. I'm glad I didn't explore further.

[@francewallmortaries4914]

It’s all fun and games until its you walking the halls of the back rooms,I’m Francewall mortaries.

[@bedsidekhair3667]

Now this was one hell of a creepypasta story that I ever heard. Real spooky

[@prymezz5375]

I’m from West Virginia, just as the person in the story is!

[@Jaden-Ring]

Me too

[@AlwaysSomethingHorrible]

That intro made me think that, if this job exists, door qa testers have more experience with the backrooms than most lmao.

[@johnn58]

I just discovered all of these 'creepy' channels on KZbin. I am enjoying the stories so much. They remind me of scary old-time radio shows. I would much rather listen to a good story than watch a film. Thank you for the entertainment.

[@jonasa7296]

Do you want a playlist of good Creepypasta? Been listen to them for like 3 years now

[@johnn58]

@@jonasa7296 Thank you - I had no idea there were channels like this. Most of the stories I have heard are really very good and the production quality (the sound effects, background music etc) tends to be equally high.I am impressed and had no idea that there are so many other fans of scary 'radio dramas'.

[@CheqLights]

Oh my god, the beginning made me realise.... with the whole pandemic thing going on, I probably only opened about the same maybe five or six doors during the last months. That's a weird feeling.

[@shivanyug6400]

This is legend! Loved it.

[@ComanderComander]

Really cool creepypasta! Best i have heard for a while. More backrooms stories please

[@dumpster9048]

Awe yeah a backrooms creepypasta!! Imma save this for later.

[@ooboomooretiredchannel435]

A home alone joke?

[@nonamenovember5530]

This story should have a movie, it's so god damn good!

[@jackdurden466]

These backroom stories really interest me, the concept is like the Matrix. Enter one, come out in a completely different continent. Very cool premise. But Why is everyone 25? That’s about the worst time of your life to vanish. And Dear God I pray I’ll never find myself in those backrooms.

[@TvConfusionn]

25 is my favorite number

[@brandonhaner739]

My name is brandon, I'm 25 years old with dirty blonde hair. Blue eyes. Freaked me out hearing him basically describe me in there.

[@Kroggnagch]

This is so hopelessly depressing... absolute destitution must be the final emotion you'd feel in this place, and likely feel for a lot longer than anyone would want to too.

[@yeetbaljeeet5435]

Theres a game called the backrooms on dreams vr where you just walk around and stuff happens, if you ever want some background gameplay or something like that let me know!

[@JeffreySmith84]

The concept of "backrooms" reminds me of the dread I'd feel as a kid when I played a video game like Castle Wolfenstein and there were no bad guys

[@МаркоСавић-у9в]

Gmod also

[@SolidRaiden2655]

Minecraft also

[@Smirkingrin]

this one was truly special, it was so good! had me on the edge of my seat the whole time!

[@leepmeep4913]

I knew this one would happen one day

[@maritespeleo9886]

Partygoer be like : come in level fun this level is pretty safe and happy

[@jonasa7296]

This is why I don’t use doors, haven’t used one in 38 months

[@saturnspawn]

Ah yes I am in time for the *posted one minute ago* gang.