SUPER quick apologies friends. I meant to put the full script in the description, but I'll put it in this pinned comment. Hope you enjoy the read! - archive.org/details/bioshock-movie-by-john-logan ALSO, FEEL FREE TO JOIN OUR DISCORD SERVER! I'D LOVE TO HAVE YOU HERE! - discord.gg/B3XDNyAkCA
@insectostrich44076 ай бұрын
Honestly, I think it’s good idea to have Jack and Atlas interact in person. Not only would this make it less jarring when they have to mostly communicate through a radio, but it will make Atlas’s betrayal feel more personal too. Plus, I think it’s a great idea to show Jack actually form bonds with the Little Sisters. That could offer us something the game couldn’t give. However, yeah, this script really doesn’t work.
@LlykVini5 ай бұрын
I read the whole thing and it sucks. Andrew Ryan is not a good person, why would Jack want to fulfill his father legacy? Or the bad ending with splicers checking out missiles in the navy ship? Not having Jack interact with a little sister and a big daddy until halfway through the script. Showing what a big daddy is inside the helmet. So much is wrong in this. Maybe the only good part is having Atlas show up in person so that viewers would want to trust him more than if it's only on radio
@insectostrich44075 ай бұрын
@@LlykVini My thoughts exactly. Also, sorry if this a bit… dumb, but I think Atlas turning into a sea creature with tentacles is actually an interesting idea. Because Adam comes from these special sea slugs, so harnessing all that Adam would probably mutate your body in an unpredictable way like that. What do you think?
@TravellerOfBoth7 ай бұрын
I've always felt that, if you're going to attempt a Bioshock movie, the least interesting thing you can do, is have Jack be the protagonist. The idea of an outsider coming across this city and having to fight his way through is perfect for a video game, but too much of the visceral thrill is lost in the translation to a movie. The story that for me is most intriguing in a movie context is the rise and fall of the city of Rapture. These great minds, the best of their generation, seeing their bold but ultimately misguided utopian dream turn into this hellscape. If you have Andrew Ryan (the quintessential mid 20th Century self-made American) as your protagonist, then you have this would be an interesting chance to make a modern day Citizen Kane type story, through the prism of a sci-fi/horror genre movie.
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
Right there with you.
@nunuarthas86807 ай бұрын
Having Jack as the protagonist also negate the depcition of ideologies in Bioshock. Andrew Ryan should be the focus of story because the twist also works in Ryan's prospective. No one cares about Jack!
@GhostRider-un9gm7 ай бұрын
you have to play burial at sea DLC then. Is very explicit that the city failed because they lost all empathy to even mantain normal relationships and a society. it was all for Adam, so healthcare for the ones for money only and orphans go into adam harvest jobs.
@PirateHenry6 ай бұрын
@@nunuarthas8680 No one cares about Jack unless they want to make a movie based on the first game, which by the video we all watched sounds like they do want that exactly.
@Benserboy5 ай бұрын
i literally cannot with "would you kindly shut the fuck up" like theres no way someone genuinely had to sit there and write that line
@nerdyworld9387 ай бұрын
This feels like how the first silent hill movie has been adapted. Faithful towards the beginning but not so much towards the end. Also they HAD ONE JOB WITH THE TWIST! It could’ve been at the end of the screenplay and Ryan leads Jack to the house with everything about his childhood and he learns it’s all a lie
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
I know right??? It seems that it just went batshit crazy near the end out of nowhere. Then again, late 2000's and early 2010's were an interesting time for video game adaptations for movies/scripts lol.
@nerdyworld9387 ай бұрын
@@TheBioshockHub yeah it just seems like video game to movie adaptions had two things happen back then: 1 the opening is extremely faithful to the game but towards the end the writing goes off the walls and the writers seemed to have given up 2 the movie has nothing to do with the source material. Nowadays video game to movie adaptations appeal to much to the fans and expect people to know the story, leaving average audiences in the dark(fnaf movie) there needs to be a balance and the only good adaptation that I think does this perfectly is the last of us.
@TrueMoo877 ай бұрын
I want the movie to follow Andrew Ryan’s perspective and the cities downfall
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
I'd love to see that.
@GhostRider-un9gm7 ай бұрын
you have to play burial at sea DLC then. Is very explicit that the city failed because they lost all empathy to even mantain normal relationships and a society. it was all for Adam, so healthcare for the ones for money only and orphans go into adam harvest jobs.
@Wilahelm27 ай бұрын
Well those are some...unique changes to the story. Not good but unique. Honestly any changing of mediums would require some changes but these feel very lazy. The only one I really can get behind is having Atlas be there fighting side by side with Jack rather then talk with him over the radio. Makes the character more involved and would make the betrayal hit harder. As for the back story of Rapture, rather then have characters do lots of exposition dumps I would keep the audio recordings but every time one plays it would trigger a flashback to the event. This would let us see the rise and fall of Rapture first hand rather then just hearing about it. Some scenes form the Bioshock: Rapture book could even be used.
@nicklemay80567 ай бұрын
Felt like the pacing in this is what really dropped the ball for me. Having Cohen randomly appear at the beginning, skipping over Eve and waiting until nearly half the script to get to Big Daddies/Little Sisters. Compared to the near perfected pacing of the bioshock intro, this is just like pulling teeth trying to watch it find its way to the point
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
Definitely seems like the events & character introductions were just pinballed into the story without fleshing out those events & characters. You're right, pacing was just super, super odd.
@nicklemay80567 ай бұрын
@@TheBioshockHub Yeah not to mention the fact that, while it was a script, we hardly even knew Atlas. In the game he's always present, but here he seems to only be around a tiny bit, not enough to build up rapport and certainly not enough to build up anything about him potentially being Fontaine. And same with Tenenbaum, who has even less presence
@Skybij4 ай бұрын
If only Coen brothers would get behind script, dialogs, and direcing. That would be an equal match for original material.
@justjordz37247 ай бұрын
Found your channel via captain eggcellent and I cannot be more thankful, as a massive bioshock fan your coverage and more of the bioshock content is awesome well done🎉🎉🎉
@ShadowKiller04517 ай бұрын
Well the movie’s script was… Interesting.
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
That's a bit of an understatement lol. A lot of wild and random events.
@ToastyDaEngi7 ай бұрын
I audibly said "what the fuck?!" multiple times throughout this reading. Some of this was incredibly dark, and I'm not too sure if it's really in good taste. Flower's death and that ending was just messed up, man.
@WA_Stokins7 ай бұрын
Co-writer here, Flower was the one good part about the script LMAO.
@skullnumb15327 ай бұрын
what is that on your channel dude 😭@@WA_Stokins
@GhostRider-un9gm7 ай бұрын
the script is really bad. They clearly didn't listen to Kevin levine and wanted to throw the thing to the toilet
@NavinToast7 ай бұрын
The power of video games as narrative is you can give more weight to actions of characters rather than leaning on dialogue. This script was mostly "Hey remeber that bit? Now let's go to the next bit, don't you want to see the things you know? WHY ARNT YOU CLAPPING!?"
@WA_Stokins7 ай бұрын
The "Winter blast - fire at your fingertips!" had me physically ascending.
@ActualAseelGamer7 ай бұрын
Your channel is going to do real good when the movie and new game drop, Erik. Nicely done boyo.
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
I hope you're right with that buddy, thank you.
@graduator147 ай бұрын
If Orson Welles was alive, I think he would've been a perfect Andrew Ryan.
@bradabar20127 ай бұрын
True, I couldn't agree any more!
@sud22327 ай бұрын
Wow im so glad this wasn't made. I feel it misses the whole point of BioShock and just tries to be dark and shocking.
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
I'm on that boat too. I hope that Francis Lawrence and Michael Green actually stay true to the series with this new movie.
@nerdyworld9387 ай бұрын
@@TheBioshockHub they’re adapting the first game’s story so it might be similar to this script but more faithful hopefully
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
@@nerdyworld938 Hopefully without all the wacky stuff at the ending lol
@mattwoodard25357 ай бұрын
Totally agree. They missed so much about what BioShock is. And that be one factor in Ken Levin killing it. sm
@captianbadtouch57677 ай бұрын
if i had to write a script for a bioshock movie, and had to have jack story id just stick closer to the original story. now if i had creative control for writing a script for the (first) bioshock movie id fallow the book and write about the rise and eventual fall of rapture. leaving the ending open ended with a scene of young jack being sent to the surface
@moknows78486 ай бұрын
Hope you’re doing good man. Haven’t seen any uploads in awhile
@thelethalcreator20773 ай бұрын
If that was the idea for the first movie that we never got, I'm glad that it didn't happen. Hopefully the Netflix one is better and closer to the games
@TheBioshockHub3 ай бұрын
I'm glad the initial script & idea were shut down.
@thelethalcreator20773 ай бұрын
@@TheBioshockHub Me too, there were a few good ideas, but most of it was like its own movie that was mostly Bioshock because it was called Bioshock
@Drew_21527 ай бұрын
Wouldn’t be the first time I’d hear someone shut down a villain’s monologue with shut the fuck up lmao. Yeah just about what everyone’s saying it’s definitely an interesting script with events happening in different orders and in different ways. I’d like to see a part 2 on the script.
@bradabar20127 ай бұрын
As somebody who's played Bioshock hundreds of times, (and I'm still not sick of it) it was nice to hear the twist at the end! Adam ruins everybody who tries it, so why wouldn't it ruin Jack too?
@worldsstrongestgamer40337 ай бұрын
Its so awesome we finally get to see the original movie script
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
I forgot to put the entirety of it in the video's description. There's a lot more to it in the pinned comment!
@worldsstrongestgamer40337 ай бұрын
@@TheBioshockHub sweet thanks for letting me know
@nuneke07 ай бұрын
Oh boy, oh boy...😀
@joaopedropelisson59257 ай бұрын
Sooo... This is the original Bioshock movie script? This is what we've been waiting for all these years? Not gonna lie... I'm thoroughly disappointed. All these years of mystery, of wondering what the forbidden script was like... For this? Not only it ruins the plot twists of the game, the one thing everyone remembers bioshock for, but it also undermines the games themes about freedom and choice as you said in the video.... I sincerely hope that the new bioshock movie by Netflix won't be anything like this.
@WA_Stokins7 ай бұрын
Hi-ho. Zedd here, Co-Writer of the script - I can confirm 100% that was my exact reaction to reading it initially. I was so dumbfounded, I immediately reread most of it just to make sure I wasn't hallucinating.
@joaopedropelisson59257 ай бұрын
@@WA_Stokins wait... Really? What happened? Why was the script written like this? I saw so much potential... But when the script threatens to actually get good it's immediately ruined by something that doesn't make sense... Like flowers' death for example.
@WA_Stokins7 ай бұрын
@@joaopedropelisson5925 I meant the script of the youtube video, LOL. I wish I knew, man, I wish I knew.
@joaopedropelisson59257 ай бұрын
@@WA_Stokins well, I'm only sorry you had to go through this bullshit to write the video...
@bradabar20127 ай бұрын
Adam is a helluva drug!
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
Lol, yeah... you could say that!
@idek30447 ай бұрын
LADIES AND GENTLEMEN THIS IS NOT A DRILL, I REPEAT THIS IS NOT A DRILL!
@kieranadamson32247 ай бұрын
We'd better get to see one though. Preferably being used to gore some splicers.
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
It's always super interesting to look back at old ideas and concepts, especially for the Bioshock movie. I just hope the new one turns out well lol.
@adammanneh46927 ай бұрын
Man i hope we actually get the BioShock film!
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
We definitely are getting one currently, as it's in the works. I just hope it turns out well.
@kieranadamson32247 ай бұрын
One thing i love about this already is that it confronts the true horror of Jack's me tal conditioning. It's likely that up to the point of the activation he was just living a face in the crowd life. But we jever real think about how that was for Jack especially after his activation. On yhe surface these memories seem serviceable. A young man with a bright future yet an unplaceable sense of anxiety which majes him run away to find himself. But the flaws in Suchong's conditioning becomes apparent with the fine details. Like the crying man in "his father's office". Potentially being a mental representation of either his activation or just simply tge code pgrase swimming around in his mind. If this goes through I really hope they go all out. Rapture and it's terrifying yet incredible secrets deserve that much.
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
I like that aspect as well. I just don't really like all the crazy stuff out of nowhere, like the ending. It seems so out of place knowing how Bioshock actually plays out.
@crazednoodle89597 ай бұрын
Nice. I hope this doesn’t get botched
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
This is the OG movie script :p
@graduator147 ай бұрын
I'm satisfied with the script, except for the end. Bioshock definitely needs to be a series though.
@ghoulschoolfan80s357 ай бұрын
This script sounded interesting for the most part. The one-liners sounded a bit silly. "Would you kindly shut the eff up" sounds like a Resident Evil Protagonist's one-liner. And hopefully the Netflix Bioshock movie will have a happier ending Supposedly Ken Levine cancelled this movie because of the script's darker ending, which makes sense since he originally wanted Bioshock to have just the one happy ending in order to make a statement about choice/free will in video games as well as moral ambiguity. But publisher 2K made him include the Evil Endings for some reason
@TheLuckOfTheClaws7 ай бұрын
actually, ken originally wanted the bad ending to be the only one. and then canonized the good ending later bc he changed his mind i guess. which was a good thing because the good ending is much better and makes way more sense thematically
@worldsstrongestgamer40337 ай бұрын
Honestly I can't believe I'm saying this but im glad that they never released the original bioshock movie
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
Agreed. It seems that some of the events in the script were super out there and had no relation to the game at all, mainly that ending.
@thelethalcreator20773 ай бұрын
Same, too many changes, and the ending was basically the evil ending of the game, but very, very fucked up
@TurtleTime211967 ай бұрын
There is some more gameplay of judas. I’d love to see a video on it!
@drewkelly-qv9fy7 ай бұрын
wow. We kinda dodged a bullet with this one, huh?
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
I honestly think so lol
@thelethalcreator20773 ай бұрын
We sure did
@nunuarthas86807 ай бұрын
It feels too much like a theme park ride where you met all the characters consecutively then send them off stage. Andrew Ryan should be more involved in the story. man, Bioshock's really hard to adapt right...
@darabennett43167 ай бұрын
Well, I got the feeling , from the writer's point of view.... that this script wasn't taken very seriously....... I'm rather glad it was axed, tbh.
@willmoore61667 ай бұрын
Let’s goooo
@willmoore61667 ай бұрын
Wait posted 1 minute ago?
@bradabar20127 ай бұрын
It would have been a great movie, gotta say!
@giraffeman27635 ай бұрын
After seeing what Netflix did to Resident Evil there's a 92% chance that they will do the same to Bioshock
@ValosiTiamata7 ай бұрын
The big problem with adaptations like this is that they render all existing canon moot. In thew case of Bioshock, you COULD theoretically use the excuse of the infinite lighthouses. However, this will be totally lost on the casual viewer and deemed boring to many of the more hardcore fans. This is why fan films (which you really should do some reviews of at some point) steer away from the main story and usually either give backstory for existing characters or delve into side stories. As with others, I firmly believe that the real story comes from what we know but haven't seen. They could easily give us a Rapture trilogy, covering the brief but powerful story of the ill-fated city. The first movie should start with the idea, founding, and construction of Rapture, along with the discovery of Adam and development of plasmids in the first two acts. Include the twins and give this half a mix of drama and retro sci-fi. Then switch to film noir for the second half. Introduce a detective, summoned to Rapture to investigate a series of mysterious murders, culminating in the reveal and showdown with Rapture's first splicer. The second movie could focus on the birth of first Little Sister and Big Daddy, as well as the growing splicer problem. Give this movie more of a Citizen Kane approach, with Ryan tightening his grip to try and maintain control over an increasingly unstable Rapture. We could see the stirrings of the civil war as both sides make their plans to remove the other, taking advantage of the fear caused from the ongoing unexplained murders, the true nature of which are being covered up by Ryan. The third movie is straight up horror with some inspiration from the original Poseidon Adventure/older Titanic movie. It shows us a glorious New Year's Eve, with people still unaware of the splicers, but soon devolves into total chaos, with previously unseen districts being breached by the ocean. It could follow a pair of lovers as they desperately try to survive and reach the surface as the civil war ramps up all around them. Each movie should have multiple perspectives so we get a full picture of events. Give us the two leaders, but also show us everyday life from a third perspective as well. The first movie could be a noir detective, hired to investigate the murders. The second movie adds in the good Doctor and shows how her ideology begins to change. The third movie, as mentioned before, would involve a pair of lovers trying to escape Rapture.
@LeamTaylor-cv4xz7 ай бұрын
Johnny Depp would be great as Andrew Ryan does anyone else agree
@SoraTheProducer7 ай бұрын
I want Cillian Murphy for Andrew Ryan or Frank Fontaine
@LeamTaylor-cv4xz7 ай бұрын
@@SoraTheProducer I'm kind of thinking it would be great as Frank Fontaine
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
@@LeamTaylor-cv4xz Honestly, I could see Cillian Murphy playing Atlas & Fontaine, with Johnny Depp playing Sander Cohen. I'm SUPER interested to see who Francis Lawrence casts in the new movie.
@LeamTaylor-cv4xz7 ай бұрын
@@TheBioshockHub I love your videos Eric in one of your next videos can you say my name in one of your videos and anything that's pops into your head
@jaytheartman6107 ай бұрын
Honestly with some rewrites I think this movie could've been one of the best video game movies
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
Depending on the direction it took, there's always that potential. I believe this was one of the original drafts for the script, so I imagine it would've been heavily modified.
@jaytheartman6107 ай бұрын
@@TheBioshockHub comparing it to the video game movies of the time like resident evil, max payne and far cry it would've been one of the better ones I think
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
@@jaytheartman610 Okay, that one's fair.
@kadenkingery7 ай бұрын
I hope it's good, because if it's not, I... I don't know what I'll do but it is going to be really sad.😢😢
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
New movie now with a new director & new writer! Just need to wait and see
@kadenkingery4 ай бұрын
I can't wait! 😁
@ryanbigguy7 ай бұрын
Wow this was awful, it feels like whoever wrote this just kind of read the wikipedia page, got rid of all the "boring" stuff and decided to give the dialog the ol' suicide squad treatment.
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
Definitely seems that way. From what I looked up on IMDB, John Logan hasn't done anything with video game media & the movies he's worked on haven't been too great. I just wonder where the research and inspiration for the script came from.
@kingofstrangeness70147 ай бұрын
thats..... yeesh
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
It's definitely something lol
@kingofstrangeness70147 ай бұрын
@TheBioshockHub I just hope the actual movie becomes better, but its Netflix and their track record isn't exactly looking good either 😭
@IRSmurfz927 ай бұрын
😎❤️
@connorhamm71367 ай бұрын
So the movie was canceled? 😢
@2gizmowin7 ай бұрын
D-d-did the person who wrote this even play bioshock?
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
Honestly, probably not lol. Here's John's IMDB page of everything he's written/worked on. www.imdb.com/name/nm0517589/?ref_=nv_sr_srsg_0_tt_1_nm_7_q_john%2520log
@vaakohayes85807 ай бұрын
Nah they already fucking up heavily
@fumoshi17 ай бұрын
acording that script they simplified everything and rushed all the story
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
Definitely seems like it. And there's just some random elements/events thrown in there for whatever reason
@fumoshi17 ай бұрын
@@TheBioshockHub the objectivist speech was replaced with "don't hear to it, it's just social engineering bs" lmao
@marioruiz15307 ай бұрын
Was this written by an AI? Cuss it sounds very weird.
@amirsamkhajenaini7 ай бұрын
would you kindly make the movie?
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
That one is on Netflix my friend. They're currently making it!
@GhostRider-un9gm7 ай бұрын
Really bad script. We are only getting Sander Cohen maybe, If they show the piano scene... There is no rapture ADS and commercials, Atmosphere, seduction that explains why people went there in the first place. Just a shallow merge of Bioshock 1 and 2 with the Evil ending. That was there just for commercial reasons, that's why Kevin levine removed the option to just shoot the little sisters... Is not what the story is about. If people wanted to know why Rapture failed they will not see it in this script. That is in bioshock infinite and the dlc. People worked 16hours a day, and no public healthcare, that was for "parasites", and orphans have to work of course, on drug harvesting and production. No basic empathy, just a civil war and allies for getting ADAM
@ElizabethGonzalez-eb3cs7 ай бұрын
The ending was bad lol but the rest was interesting.
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
The ending is super bizarre and out of nowhere lol.
@ElizabethGonzalez-eb3cs7 ай бұрын
@@TheBioshockHub Yes I like the original ending because it’s actually happy plus Jack is supposed to be modified so he shouldn’t be affected like the others splicers and go mad lol.
@stapuft7 ай бұрын
"...and everyone else watching..." So......'hello everyone, and everyone else watching.'....... are you one of those people that says 'atm machine'?
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
Sometimes when I haven't had enough sleep lol
@ProsperityManifested110007 ай бұрын
why does he randomly turn evil?!
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
Seems like maybe a twist ending or something? I have no idea other than that.
@TheLuckOfTheClaws7 ай бұрын
Oh, i've read the old script! it's quite literally some of the worst pacing i think i've ever seen. They were rushing things SO fast to cover all the needed material and yet added a bunch of random ocs who did fuck all. Why is ADAM just steroids. Why does it lean towards savior ending at first and then swerve randomly into 2000's level edginess in the end. WHY DOESNT FONTAINE EXIST. Rudy my fucking behated. Also this is such a nitpick but jack being dissatisfied with his surface life makes ZERO sense since it was tailored to keep him docile and be what he wanted? and i hate his characterization on the plane scene, that's not my boyo. I've always seen him as more of a gentle giant farm boy type. At least it's kind of an entertaining in how bonkers it is. Also cohen's sistine chapel with people is kinda neat.
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
I know right??? Reading over some of it just made me question the original writer's inspiration for some of the stuff within it... Really weird stuff lol.
@Kooma4Yew16007 ай бұрын
....yeah- glad it got cancelled
@ghostlightningboi56187 ай бұрын
🎉💉💗
@stapuft7 ай бұрын
You claim it's a review......but you don't actually review it..... You just read it..... BIG DIFFERENCE.
@TheBioshockHub7 ай бұрын
I meant to put overview before I scheduled it to upload. It's remedied now.
@Thetrue777luck7777 ай бұрын
All movies from games are bad, because some director will use "his vision of the story" instead been loyal to the game. Also this days movies are all is all woke garbage.