Untitled Rewrite Fansong 1.5 (incomplete) (if you couldn't tell the 1.5 indicated it was incomplete)

[@ChristopherTheGamerOfficial]

Is that Miku in the back? I don’t know much about vocaloid, but I think I hear her in the background.

[@morefluid_thanwater]

You're half right! It's not Miku, it's Eleanor Forte since I use Synth V. I'm surprised anyone would catch on, since they have similar voices so kudos

[@ChristopherTheGamerOfficial]

⁠​⁠@@morefluid_thanwaterClose enough, right?? I really like this version, will it be finished? It goes really hard

[@morefluid_thanwater]

not this one im afraid, but I'm cooking up another one so!!! stay tuned

[@ChristopherTheGamerOfficial]

@@morefluid_thanwaterI’m definitely staying tuned, I can’t wait to see what you have in store

[@Jukeboz]

Everytime I hear him say "Curse yourself" it sounds like hes telling me to keep myself safe

[@Volcano22207]

I like the acknowledgment that almost all the overdone creepy pasta scenarios could be avoided by just not playing the obviously cursed game

[@Da_piggy_noob]

Fr tho

[@lauraikoko]

like 99.9% of videogame creepypasta protags are dumbasses

[@gumballwatterson6786]

but how could you know that it is cursed before playing it

[@Volcano22207]

@@gumballwatterson6786 you could just, stop playing in most cases Or not play the blood covered cd rom you got from behind an Applebees

[@gumballwatterson6786]

@@Volcano22207 I think that you sometimes just can't because I think almost any creepypasta character can paralyze you like say something really loud, or do a jumpscare, and not every cursed game is received from dead people willing to destroy it at all cost, but some creepypasta struggle with that actually

[@ughwhy-f9v]

Tbh, I like the unnatural note, it's haunting, leaving a sense of discomfort behind, just as intended. Keep up the great work!

[@TxniJxnes]

I just realized that the way Rewrite is drawn in the bf is a nice design for a “Hide and Seek” Type of sonic character.. Hol up.. lemme get my iPad imma go cook rq..

[@manofuranium]

this guy gets the lyrics so well

[@yourdemiseishere]

Yo thanks for uploading this on request, now more people can see it and i can save it properly in a site i usually use.

[@Da_piggy_noob]

I love the lyrics so much. Even the art looks cool. Keep up the work. :)

[@X-CLOWN-MAIN]

Wow, This one Shows the Detail of the REAL Rewrite, Speaking how He's not showing how big he can get is Insane, Its sad its Scrapped. . 希望你玩得开心！ (And I Drew one of these Phases before, Ive been lovin Rewrite.)

[@delusionss5]

love how rewrite has cat(?) eyes at the start

[@goisegaming]

How is this such a great beat.. ..I love this so much!

[@crappyrebster5169]

Well it may be unfinished and scrapped but i sure enjoy this still!

[@Hermannex]

Amazing work!, looking forward to hearing the complete version 👌🏽

[@yourdemiseishere]

I think it was scrapped.

[@Hermannex]

@@yourdemiseishere ooooh shoot, well it's awesome we can hear this much

[@morefluid_thanwater]

just to confirm, yeah I'm not finishing this song, I only finished this segment :(

[@yourlol_1164]

​@@morefluid_thanwater :¢

[@DRILLER19581]

@@morefluid_thanwater it would be good as a game over screen music tho

[@Omega_universe14]

This sounds so good! You're really good at this, keep it up bro

[@Randomlessguy]

We are escaping of the cycle with this one🗣️

[@Digital_Version_of_God]

I love the vibe of this song.

[@PuppetOne]

DAWG YOU DONT MISS

[@thecoolaydang8104]

i love this so much

[@channel_stuff]

bro the laughing in the bacround scared the heck out of me i thought it was in real life lol

[@Ender.90]

This song is like thriller gen at last part

[@morefluid_thanwater]

It is actually! I just copy pasted the melody from that last segment and wrote lyrics :3

[@sylwekggv]

incomplete yet still good

[@G871-d8g]

0:10 remove one of the headphones then ur goin to hear the sonic exe laugh

[@Scoobert75]

i didnt even hear it before i found this comment and clicked on the timestamp

[@Buhhhdy]

This also feels like my conscience is haunting and taunting those who bring me nothing but pain and sheer embarrassment

[@ericblackmon6597]

Just imagine rewrite as a rapper

[@droncbaliski]

i think it would be so cool if you and springless music made a rewrite fangame in the timeline of sonic 3d blast (edit: an animated series would be EPIC too) (just some ideas btw not trying to be demanding or anything) (sorry for calling it a fangame it would be official if you did it with springless music)

[@jahlayz3]

niiiiiice keep up the good work

[@ThePokechester]

God I need the full version

[@destroyergoku8691]

Hardest bars any sonic has dropped.

[@sydneydeas-theodat2439]

Pls continue this it has real potential

[@morefluid_thanwater]

Though I really appreciate this comment, I gotta let you know I don't intend to finish this at all. but i have two other rewrite songs if that's what you're interested in :)

[@jesusluisrangel1083]

REWRITE IS SPITTING

[@Wrdcr_TRNUT]

FINALLY ITS BACK

[@SonicMania_]

Might cover this if that’s alr

[@Shawn_The_Dev]

So i know this one is scrapped but do you plan to make another rewrite song

[@morefluid_thanwater]

yep! its almost finished, though not sure when I'll post it

[@Shawn_The_Dev]

@@morefluid_thanwater Alright thanks for the info

[@OmarPeja]

Yo I made the same drawing but made the wing bigger and his eyes were much more unsettling!

[@German_dude69]

REWRITE DOES NOT NEED AUTO TUNE

[@morefluid_thanwater]

no autotune here! I think what you're hearing is Eleanor Forte overlaid atop his vocals as support

[@heavenlylordNOS]

Can you please make a longer/similar song to untitled rewrite again?

[@Rewrite_lover-69420]

This kind of sounds like thriller gen's hard part but with lyrics

[@morefluid_thanwater]

You're not gonna believe this. But

[@Rewrite_lover-69420]

@@morefluid_thanwater but what 'fellow rewrite fan'

[@rickberry0661]

FINISH THIS WE NEED IT

[@Therealmonochrome4754]

bro tried drawing an sonic with an horn like ears with no consequences

[@zak_diamond1485]

sounds like a Jakeneutron song

[@ukrainegameplay6297]

nvm its too short

[@MintAddictWolfy]

wait is this like a continuation of the last one?

[@morefluid_thanwater]

nah i started a new one, did like half of it, scrapped it and this is the only decent segment so that's what I shared

[@MintAddictWolfy]

@@morefluid_thanwater ah okii

[@Fallen-d5z]

👍🏾

[@VLAD14kshorts]

🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

[@Wrdcr_TRNUT]

we need to hear rewrite sing the FUN song from spongebob

[@jaras8744]

will you ever finish this?

[@morefluid_thanwater]

This specific song? No. But I do have another song related to Rewrite out, if you're inclined to check that out :)

[@snailpiegod]

@@morefluid_thanwaterThis is the old part to the rap section isn’t it? He states “I’m on either side of you’re screen” which is what he’s doing on that part of the song.

[@nunezarts7]

What AI did you use for Rewrite? This sounds absolutely beautiful btw

[@Javin-qs7hx]

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