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Bright Guardian Akira

Bright Guardian Akira

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@klondyke2135
@klondyke2135 5 жыл бұрын
"Hollyleaf forgot the oven was on in the tunnels." *oh no*
@sarahkey9578
@sarahkey9578 5 жыл бұрын
She technically didn't know about that (maybe, idk)
@peidongchen8895
@peidongchen8895 5 жыл бұрын
😂😂🤣🤣🤣
@peckneckanimations
@peckneckanimations 5 жыл бұрын
Her pie was burning, she was gonna use a “follow the Warrior code “ potion in it and save everyone from an over used plot line idea.
@Miss_Prowlheart
@Miss_Prowlheart 5 жыл бұрын
Haha!
@Miss_Prowlheart
@Miss_Prowlheart 5 жыл бұрын
Lps Maddie jo that’s really funny oh starclan!
@Miss_Prowlheart
@Miss_Prowlheart 5 жыл бұрын
Petition to change the title to “Ashfur Gets Dumped by 3 Cats in Less Than 6 Minutes” Like to sign Ps gosh wow thanks for all the likes on this comment
@jbshelley71
@jbshelley71 5 жыл бұрын
Mhm
@Miss_Prowlheart
@Miss_Prowlheart 5 жыл бұрын
Hehe. I’ve never gotten so many likes tysm
@jbshelley71
@jbshelley71 5 жыл бұрын
Ilikecrunchy AnimalJam bc it's hilarious
@Miss_Prowlheart
@Miss_Prowlheart 5 жыл бұрын
GachaGalaxyFairyxoxo thank you!
@jbshelley71
@jbshelley71 5 жыл бұрын
Ilikecrunchy AnimalJam ur welcome random internet stranger person whose family and name and friends and place u live all I don't know
@r1nseandrepeat
@r1nseandrepeat 5 жыл бұрын
"i was always jealous you chose squirrelflight over me" the tables have turned
@sunday_sabrina8663
@sunday_sabrina8663 3 жыл бұрын
The turns have tabled
@sleeeepyy_
@sleeeepyy_ 3 жыл бұрын
@@sunday_sabrina8663 the tabled have turns
@RayneNeow
@RayneNeow 3 жыл бұрын
have tabled the turns
@keresfeelinfruity4761
@keresfeelinfruity4761 3 жыл бұрын
The turn have been tabled
@FroggoForLife0325
@FroggoForLife0325 2 жыл бұрын
I lost it when Ashfur proposed-
@RocketPooch
@RocketPooch 5 жыл бұрын
The fact that this story actually flows perfectly says a lot
@moonseaeeveelutionsdance8863
@moonseaeeveelutionsdance8863 4 жыл бұрын
Yep
@Bleedinguptopias
@Bleedinguptopias 4 жыл бұрын
sToP mAkInG mE rEAliZe tHiNgS
@Bleedinguptopias
@Bleedinguptopias 3 жыл бұрын
@False Sanity, I’m white but BLM h e r?
@mycatisasupermodel4932
@mycatisasupermodel4932 3 жыл бұрын
That we're awesome?
@RocketPooch
@RocketPooch 3 жыл бұрын
@@mycatisasupermodel4932 y e s ! !
@agenthuntergo
@agenthuntergo 5 жыл бұрын
How come the cats never move territories anymore? I mean, we NEED those 25 chapters of walking!
@CringyFandoms
@CringyFandoms 5 жыл бұрын
Don't worry, were *evenually* going back to the mountains, and meet Twisted Branch and Dewy Leaf there
@carl_Grimes_drawz
@carl_Grimes_drawz 5 жыл бұрын
I know right I just miss those books so much the wasted time the brain numbing boringness uh I miss it
@Charlie-cz1ee
@Charlie-cz1ee 5 жыл бұрын
I KNOW RIGHT!?!?!?
@errortoogay5395
@errortoogay5395 5 жыл бұрын
Agent Hunter go At least someone agrees with me!
@crimsonilla6550
@crimsonilla6550 5 жыл бұрын
Your profile says it all 😂
@goldquietmoon8726
@goldquietmoon8726 5 жыл бұрын
My nitpick Windclan: 8 cats Riverclan: 9 cats Shadowclan: 6 cats Thunderclan: 28 cats Erin: WE NEED MORE THUNDER CLAN WARRIORS My thoughts exactly Erin, I couldn't have said it better.
@erin.artemis
@erin.artemis 4 жыл бұрын
Yes
@Cl-2048
@Cl-2048 4 жыл бұрын
They should all have about Thunderclan's amount
@kittyloveluvkitty7306
@kittyloveluvkitty7306 4 жыл бұрын
Yeah! Every cat in the other clans should give themselves to thunderclan so thunderclan can have just as many warriors as them! *laughs nervously* I’m sure I did the math right!
@markv6724
@markv6724 4 жыл бұрын
Skyclan: *i'm going commits kermit sucide*
@_marc0TwT__
@_marc0TwT__ 3 жыл бұрын
What about the kittypets? or bloodclan?- *SPINNING WITH FIRE ON A BUILDING BURNING IT**
@skye7358
@skye7358 5 жыл бұрын
The only thing I hate about warriors is that leafpool never married Pringles.
@Miss_Prowlheart
@Miss_Prowlheart 5 жыл бұрын
YESSSSSS OMG
@ICEBUNNo
@ICEBUNNo 5 жыл бұрын
Leafpool x Pringles is the best ship
@agenthuntergo
@agenthuntergo 5 жыл бұрын
Yeah! Why would she chose CROWFEATHER over Pringle’s?
@envii2767
@envii2767 5 жыл бұрын
Ikr Pringlepool
@agenthuntergo
@agenthuntergo 5 жыл бұрын
RositheCat Leafpool: NANI?!
@raecat9228
@raecat9228 5 жыл бұрын
My nitpick: there aren’t enough ginger cats in ThunderClan.
@vscogirl3277
@vscogirl3277 5 жыл бұрын
it kind of is....cats understand eachother like we know english sooooooo
@halfway7690
@halfway7690 5 жыл бұрын
@That Geek Out Girl reply for a different comment?
@chaos383
@chaos383 5 жыл бұрын
That Geek Out Girl most likely Edit: definitely is
@kyrakun2559
@kyrakun2559 4 жыл бұрын
yeah there is only firestar. nobody else.
@user-hq6hq2jm9h
@user-hq6hq2jm9h 4 жыл бұрын
Firestar and the occasional Firestar2
@roweeners9610
@roweeners9610 5 жыл бұрын
"And then Squierrflight spontaneously combusted." The end Me: *sniff* ThAt WaS bEaUtIfUl
@MATOGAST.
@MATOGAST. 4 жыл бұрын
That reminds me of another skephalo fanfic
@tellmethesongoftherain6534
@tellmethesongoftherain6534 4 жыл бұрын
*Squirrel* flight.
@lostdog9370
@lostdog9370 4 жыл бұрын
smol boi oh god
@BeanKally
@BeanKally 3 жыл бұрын
Squierrflight
@theduckie701
@theduckie701 3 жыл бұрын
XDD
@addisonlane4514
@addisonlane4514 5 жыл бұрын
I’m so angry that the books didn’t have Jayfeather day “Yeet!” While throwing the stick into the lake.
@ghostbovods2188
@ghostbovods2188 4 жыл бұрын
Omg 😂
@zhuqi8170
@zhuqi8170 4 жыл бұрын
@@ghostbovods2188 So funny think about it, it would be like this. "You stopped me from saving Flametail!" Jayfeather hissed, his fur bristling and his eyes blazing with anger, "I'm done with this mouse-brained stick, it's letting cats die! Yeet!" Jayfeather flung the stick into the lake and Rock stared in horror as he vanished.
@SonTran-vb8xt
@SonTran-vb8xt 4 жыл бұрын
@@zhuqi8170 rip
@zhuqi8170
@zhuqi8170 4 жыл бұрын
@@SonTran-vb8xt lol xd
@LeafeonTheCat
@LeafeonTheCat 4 жыл бұрын
*say
@energeticeg8243
@energeticeg8243 5 жыл бұрын
Jayfeather: What in the name of starclan is happening right now? Me: My thoughts exactly.
@griffon106
@griffon106 4 жыл бұрын
"Leafpool stared at Jayfeather as he tried to eat a rock" IM DEAD I CANT AAAAAAAAAA
@kiwiqueen138
@kiwiqueen138 5 жыл бұрын
My nitpick criticism: There’s OBVIOUSLY not enough Tigerstar clones! Like, COME ON, we need AT LEAST twenty six more! It’s totally the most interesting and original idea that the authors came up with and it’s being W A S T E D.
@alex-zd2kw
@alex-zd2kw 5 жыл бұрын
KiwiQueen 13 ikr!!!
@tacofox28
@tacofox28 5 жыл бұрын
Yes more plz...maybe that will spice it up more
@neatleefolded
@neatleefolded 5 жыл бұрын
Pft Ikr? *N O T E N O U G H*
@lipstreet2
@lipstreet2 4 жыл бұрын
There should be at least 10 clones of everyone!!
@Pookafan1
@Pookafan1 4 жыл бұрын
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@kayayenenay6112
@kayayenenay6112 5 жыл бұрын
The fact that we never got to hear what Squirrelflight's and Leafpool's phone numbers are! 😭😢😭😲😲😲
@aristocat3012
@aristocat3012 4 жыл бұрын
yes i agree. I WANNA KNOWWWWWWWWW
@vvv-lp8sz
@vvv-lp8sz 4 жыл бұрын
*Brambleclaw jumped down and screeched "YEET!"* *"i have several questions-"*
@vipertoflarewingtothecloaker
@vipertoflarewingtothecloaker 3 жыл бұрын
Me too
@person-kg7tk
@person-kg7tk 6 ай бұрын
Brambleclaw should have yeeted Ashfur.
@bejeweledbat13
@bejeweledbat13 5 жыл бұрын
Why are there so many characters with tails? Tails are overrated.
@indecizive.v3A
@indecizive.v3A 5 жыл бұрын
LONGtail has special tail tho >:3
@davidgannonreal
@davidgannonreal 5 жыл бұрын
iKr FuR as weLL
@hexbug3484
@hexbug3484 5 жыл бұрын
Paws, too. Why does every cat have paws? It is so overused 😔
@indecizive.v3A
@indecizive.v3A 5 жыл бұрын
@@hexbug3484 uuuuuuhhhhh...cloudtail's kitty pet name was fluffypaw's so...HE HAD EXTRA FLUFFY PAWS!! THEIR SPWECIAL! And my cat has oversized paws🤣🤣
@kay-jp6px
@kay-jp6px 5 жыл бұрын
@@davidgannonreal far to much of that 😒
@stereo2050
@stereo2050 5 жыл бұрын
“Ugh, why do the medicine cats always have to sort through herbs?”
@theartisticbird2535
@theartisticbird2535 5 жыл бұрын
my criticism: In book six of the first book "the darkest hour" they spelled raven paw as "rave paw"
@theartisticbird2535
@theartisticbird2535 5 жыл бұрын
this boi about to start a rave up in here lol
@luthientinuviel3883
@luthientinuviel3883 4 жыл бұрын
This paw be raving
@theartisticbird2535
@theartisticbird2535 4 жыл бұрын
@@luthientinuviel3883 *R A A A A A A A A A A V E E E E*
@hiim_chainlii2724
@hiim_chainlii2724 3 жыл бұрын
My complaint is that they made the entire series of series and serieses of series suped edition? a typo and his real name IS rave paw
@theduckie701
@theduckie701 3 жыл бұрын
XD RAVE KITTY XDDD
@vivichan1013
@vivichan1013 5 жыл бұрын
You said this was a terrible fanfiction THIS IS A MASTERPIECE
@SparkDoesArt
@SparkDoesArt 5 жыл бұрын
MWA PERFECTION 👌
@Blueberry-fd6vi
@Blueberry-fd6vi 5 жыл бұрын
Yes. Yes this is a masterpeice.
@dreamybombstudios724
@dreamybombstudios724 5 жыл бұрын
I know it's the best thing ever 😂
@Blueberry-fd6vi
@Blueberry-fd6vi 5 жыл бұрын
Maybe XD
@isopodozoli
@isopodozoli 5 жыл бұрын
"Leafpool I love you " " *NOPE GOODBYE* "
@thinkinofanameidunno7816
@thinkinofanameidunno7816 4 жыл бұрын
Jayfeather:"What in *_Starclan_* is even happening right now?" Me:"Yeah, I agree."
@nopiwasneverhere
@nopiwasneverhere 5 жыл бұрын
I hate that med cats can’t have mates! How will Jayfeather confess to the stick?! (..Guys you can stop telling me that the stick is broken. *It’s been 10 months* ) (aight now its been 2 years why)
@lobotomizedjb
@lobotomizedjb 5 жыл бұрын
The stick died i think ;(
@marshallmicr0wave510
@marshallmicr0wave510 5 жыл бұрын
Stick died
@kenzierainbow5361
@kenzierainbow5361 5 жыл бұрын
Stick died?! Noooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!
@travisarnold4275
@travisarnold4275 5 жыл бұрын
Wth is up with that stupid stick?!?!
@optimus6374
@optimus6374 5 жыл бұрын
Cookielicous123 it’s ships like these that are so stupid and make no sense
@hearts4suntan
@hearts4suntan 5 жыл бұрын
Ugh, I hated the forest territory! There was that one tree that just made me really mad!
@critter_core
@critter_core 5 жыл бұрын
kitties4ever12 um I kind of can’t get used to the lake camp...
@hearts4suntan
@hearts4suntan 5 жыл бұрын
@@critter_core Me too, actually. It kinda throws me off, especially when I'm reading a special edition.
@adamyusuf1805
@adamyusuf1805 4 жыл бұрын
Moon Dog Productions ikr. Even though there was 27 books about the lake (in the main series) compared to the 9 about the forest (and even then the first three books still had more walking then the forest.
@Kin_fe
@Kin_fe 2 жыл бұрын
Too bad that every 5 minutes when I read either the lake or the forest camp, the camp changes into a completely different look.
@moriohmars
@moriohmars 5 жыл бұрын
I love how theres serious sentences like "Hollyleaf had a uneasiness she could not shake" and then theres stuff like "Leafpool gave Ashfur a good *L i c k*
@reedtheracco0n
@reedtheracco0n 2 жыл бұрын
l i c k
@GanymedeTheCorgiCat
@GanymedeTheCorgiCat 2 жыл бұрын
l i c k
@vSpotfur
@vSpotfur 2 жыл бұрын
l i c k
@leeknowsleft_thigh
@leeknowsleft_thigh 2 жыл бұрын
l i c k
@clairesnumber1fan
@clairesnumber1fan 2 жыл бұрын
*l i c k*
@colorfulchameleon9891
@colorfulchameleon9891 5 жыл бұрын
So Leafpool and Ashfur think they're in love, but Squirrelflight comes. She still seems normal in her relationship with Brambleclaw. EXCEPT Brambleclaw loves Leafpool. But Leafopool doesn't love him back. Instead, Ashfur loves Brambleclaw. Due to Leafpool's rejection, he's ready to accept Ashfur's paw in marriage. But Squirrelflight jumps in to defend her mate. Leafpool is sad that Ashfur loved Brambleclaw more than her, and was disgusted that Brambleclaw loved her. Ashfur tries to get her back, but Leafpool rejects him. He did just propose to Brambleclaw a second ago! Leafpool realizes that all along she should've stayed with Crowfeather. This is a shipping mess.
@Lunaloaff
@Lunaloaff 5 жыл бұрын
Yup
@ruthie7237
@ruthie7237 5 жыл бұрын
@@Lunaloaff The only kind of shipping XD
@colorfulchameleon9891
@colorfulchameleon9891 5 жыл бұрын
@@ruthie7237 True
@shizcrazy6990
@shizcrazy6990 5 жыл бұрын
Word
@soartearstudio
@soartearstudio 5 жыл бұрын
Reminds me of how I use to ship my OC Freedomwind with Tigerclaw/star, Longtail, Whitestorm, Boulder, Tallstar and Jaggedtooth
@snowywinterwishes5663
@snowywinterwishes5663 5 жыл бұрын
Why couldn't Ashfur's luscious long golden locks be cannon!?
@fishoutofwater1112
@fishoutofwater1112 5 жыл бұрын
They are cannon-
@PikaPotterhead07
@PikaPotterhead07 5 жыл бұрын
IKR
@BugsyBugYT
@BugsyBugYT 2 жыл бұрын
They arent cannon since words cant express them
@Moss-u9y
@Moss-u9y 3 ай бұрын
The erin team needs to give ashfur a super edition but half the book it's just a detailed description of ashfur's hair he likes to imagine himself having
@SaltwaterTaffyz
@SaltwaterTaffyz 3 жыл бұрын
“HOLLYLEAF!!! YOU LEFT THE OVEN ON IN THE TUNNELS!!” said FallenLeaves, running out of the Tunnels with his bum on fire.
@MapleshadeSyrup
@MapleshadeSyrup Жыл бұрын
@@hollyshine10 Fallen Leaves looked at Hollyleaf uncertainly, then yelled, "But you need to turn it off now! I don't want Ashfur getting any more fire scenes!"
@L-ghtlessSky
@L-ghtlessSky 8 ай бұрын
@@MapleshadeSyrupHollyleaf snarled at Fallen Leaves. “But my Dino nuggies are still RAW.”
@ambergibson3299
@ambergibson3299 5 ай бұрын
@@L-ghtlessSky Fallen Leaves looked shocked, "HOW?! They whole tunnels is in flames!? They should be BURNT?!!" Hissing Fallen Leaves
@L-ghtlessSky
@L-ghtlessSky 5 ай бұрын
@@ambergibson3299 “YOU THINK I KNOW?! THESE STARCLAN-CURSED THINGS WON’T COOK! I am NOT eating RAW DINO NUGGIES, you WET RAT!” Hollyleaf yelled, losing her cool, just like the tunnels did.
@tonialopez-fresquet293
@tonialopez-fresquet293 Ай бұрын
@@ambergibson3299 as this was happening, Firestar was attempting to figure out what in the name of StarClan the two legged lizard cats (slug cats rainworld) were doing in camp.
@Ali-uc6dq
@Ali-uc6dq 5 жыл бұрын
What have you done this time, Akira? Edit: This was posted recently. Thanks for all the likes!
@milkyboi8953
@milkyboi8953 5 жыл бұрын
70th like haha no 69 for u
@kedicurly
@kedicurly 5 жыл бұрын
You do realize nobody goes back to the comment, so what’s the point of thanking them if the people who liked it will never see it, the people who scroll will see it though, and they’ll cringe and won’t like
@Ali-uc6dq
@Ali-uc6dq 5 жыл бұрын
ScøutZA It doesn't really matter to me, though.
@Ali-uc6dq
@Ali-uc6dq 5 жыл бұрын
@@Myheartz4u Hi.
@Ali-uc6dq
@Ali-uc6dq 5 жыл бұрын
@@Myheartz4u Well.
@lee-xy2us
@lee-xy2us 5 жыл бұрын
Why does Leafpool cure cats?! I mean, I know she’s a medicine cat and all but like, WHY?
@macey9311
@macey9311 5 жыл бұрын
I know!!! I love your icon!
@lee-xy2us
@lee-xy2us 5 жыл бұрын
Sweetberry warrior Cats Thank you!
@eternal6148
@eternal6148 5 жыл бұрын
Is that the newest book?
@DuneTheKaiju
@DuneTheKaiju 5 жыл бұрын
Um, because she's a medicine cat? Lol
@DappledLeaf
@DappledLeaf 4 жыл бұрын
That was the most beautifully written fanfic I’ve ever heard of. So touching.
@aivexuviet11
@aivexuviet11 5 жыл бұрын
"A stick?" Lionpaw, trying to be a medicine cat
@SonTran-vb8xt
@SonTran-vb8xt 4 жыл бұрын
a StIcK?
@Slippery_Fire
@Slippery_Fire 5 жыл бұрын
More like we wrote the best warriors fanfiction ever Also that rock was delicious
@KPH107
@KPH107 5 жыл бұрын
You have a computer? Where? Wait no- HOW?
@Slippery_Fire
@Slippery_Fire 5 жыл бұрын
Kylie Healy Shhhhh don’t tell BrambleStar 🤫
@greystripe7927
@greystripe7927 5 жыл бұрын
Jayfeather Medicine Cat don’t worry about it
@dreamybombstudios724
@dreamybombstudios724 5 жыл бұрын
Rock or stick? He was obsessed with both 😆
@Slippery_Fire
@Slippery_Fire 5 жыл бұрын
Choco marshmallow kitty *I ate them both*
@stanleypfp
@stanleypfp 4 жыл бұрын
If I could add to this, I would add: “Squirrelflight sighed and pointed her gun at Ashfur”.
@MoonfallEquinox
@MoonfallEquinox Жыл бұрын
Leafpool joined them and pointed a gun at BrambleClaw, Jayfeather jumped in front of him, taking a shot to the tail
@energydragonninjago
@energydragonninjago 10 ай бұрын
Hollyleaf walks in and starts to blabber something about warrior code.
@SilverSpoonreal
@SilverSpoonreal 4 ай бұрын
@@energydragonninjagoLionblaze ran up to hollyleaf “shut up hollyleaf, you don’t have powers”
@Lazymediasiblings
@Lazymediasiblings 3 ай бұрын
Hollyleaf replies”MY POWER IS A CHAINSA-“ her chainsaw rumbling in her hands
@SilverSpoonreal
@SilverSpoonreal 3 ай бұрын
@@Lazymediasiblings “OH STARCLAN NO” Ashfur screamed as he hid behind Squirrelflight
@castangred7713
@castangred7713 5 жыл бұрын
I can’t believe that Twigpaw’s warrior name was Twigbranch, and not Twigstick Smh People these days, so disrespectful
@b1acksol
@b1acksol 5 жыл бұрын
God, couldn’t they have given her a sibling named pebblerock? Smh
@amelia8786
@amelia8786 5 жыл бұрын
And who names a cat 'bramble'claw?' He should have been bramble'thorn.
@vari6588
@vari6588 5 жыл бұрын
ugh, you’re so right. also, “flip kit”? their really going downhill. it should’ve been fidgetspinner kit!
@felixfrost7973
@felixfrost7973 5 жыл бұрын
I know right?!
@aname4535
@aname4535 5 жыл бұрын
Same! I hate them catching prey, just steal some kitty pet food!
@kenfunk7823
@kenfunk7823 5 жыл бұрын
Can’t believe cats breath in these books,sigh SO unrealistic
@marimonsoon7636
@marimonsoon7636 4 жыл бұрын
They also exist,It’s so unrealistic.
@Cloudfiin
@Cloudfiin 4 жыл бұрын
Yeah.. we also play icehockey but it’s whatever.
@SonTran-vb8xt
@SonTran-vb8xt 4 жыл бұрын
I know, and the fact that they are real in the story is the MOST UNREALISTIC THING eVERRR
@pay3834
@pay3834 4 жыл бұрын
Leafpool: mentions CrowFeather Lesbian me: YOU MEAN MOTHWING?
@birch_thetree1905
@birch_thetree1905 5 жыл бұрын
OMG!! Life is so unfair for Deadfoot, he has to walk on three feet!! Wait, who's Deadfoot again??
@northstarcoyote6392
@northstarcoyote6392 5 жыл бұрын
Dude why are all warriors characters cats? There should be warrior worms! DirtClan, RainClan, WiggleClan, and MudClan
@aimlessidentity9567
@aimlessidentity9567 5 жыл бұрын
I get that's for the video but that's not a bad idea
@Mackeca
@Mackeca 5 жыл бұрын
You forgot about SquiggleClan. They're introduced in a later series.
@lol_sxmstar
@lol_sxmstar 5 жыл бұрын
no, worms are distusting
@sophiesimpson1242
@sophiesimpson1242 5 жыл бұрын
I think this is and always will be the best comment ever
@sophiesimpson1242
@sophiesimpson1242 5 жыл бұрын
@@lol_sxmstar you know that it was just a joke right? Sorry I got you so mad.
@PeanutWithWiFiAccess
@PeanutWithWiFiAccess 5 жыл бұрын
This needs To be a super edition Let's call it.... "Leafpool's Trek"
@coyotix
@coyotix 3 жыл бұрын
HELP I JUST READ THAT AS LEAFPOOL’S SHREK
@Lost_Eclipse
@Lost_Eclipse 3 жыл бұрын
@@coyotix XDDDD
@tiberius0716
@tiberius0716 3 жыл бұрын
@@coyotix LOL
@tonialopez-fresquet293
@tonialopez-fresquet293 Ай бұрын
Leafpool’s Star Trek Her 12 year mission: to explore strange new herbs
@voch123
@voch123 5 жыл бұрын
*looks at title* hmm... i never wouldve guessed that "perfect" was spelled that way
@sketchysim5351
@sketchysim5351 5 жыл бұрын
XD
@mercurymoonn
@mercurymoonn 5 жыл бұрын
I don't like how they all breath. Like, I mean, breathing is extremely overrated. They all do it. Ugh
@felixfrost7973
@felixfrost7973 5 жыл бұрын
Exactly!
@LinkPlays355
@LinkPlays355 5 жыл бұрын
Why do we breathe I mean it is overrated
@poopdoody988
@poopdoody988 5 жыл бұрын
We will die if we stop breathing! We have to breathe to survive. It's apart of life.
@alexx.7972
@alexx.7972 5 жыл бұрын
Poop Doody D I S G U S T A N G
@softiesirius5356
@softiesirius5356 5 жыл бұрын
Poop Doody r/woooosh
@feathertail8996
@feathertail8996 5 жыл бұрын
"Ashfyr realized that he left his personality back in old forest."
@feathertail8996
@feathertail8996 4 жыл бұрын
@Warrior cats facts why...?
@RocketPooch
@RocketPooch 5 жыл бұрын
This reminds me of when I play the 'one word at a time' game with my friends to make stories. This is actually incredible, you should totally do it again! Pleaseeee lol? Now that I've joined your amino I REAAAALLY wanna join in with these things and write some mighty wack comments heh
@sierra609
@sierra609 3 жыл бұрын
I would love there to be a part two. In fact these stories are just classics.
@quincy1212
@quincy1212 5 жыл бұрын
Okay, so, y'know how the dead cats aren't alive? Yeah, I HATE that.
@VAMPY1346
@VAMPY1346 5 жыл бұрын
Ikr
@ok-ni6cm
@ok-ni6cm 5 жыл бұрын
It’s so annoying
@PikaPotterhead07
@PikaPotterhead07 5 жыл бұрын
I HATE that the dead Tigerstar isn't alive.
@animationsandvnsbasil
@animationsandvnsbasil 5 жыл бұрын
UGHHH YEAH.
@animationsandvnsbasil
@animationsandvnsbasil 5 жыл бұрын
THEY ARE CAPABLE OF BEING ALIVE.
@chanteljoachim9671
@chanteljoachim9671 5 жыл бұрын
No one: Not a single soul: Me: *What a plot twist!*
@Little_Rat1
@Little_Rat1 5 жыл бұрын
Med cats NEED to be able to have a mate... Wait no! Then Leafpool wouldn't be breaking the Warrior Code
@kittyclearsight
@kittyclearsight 5 жыл бұрын
I just think cats licking each other is inappropriate for the target audience
@felixfrost7973
@felixfrost7973 5 жыл бұрын
So true
@warriorcatkitty
@warriorcatkitty 5 жыл бұрын
XD
@dragonpies9052
@dragonpies9052 5 жыл бұрын
Cats groom eachother though... by LICKING EACHOTHER LIKE A MOTHER LICKING HER KITTENS
@snowshower4415
@snowshower4415 5 жыл бұрын
@@dragonpies9052 r/wooosh
@sgtruru
@sgtruru 5 жыл бұрын
Dragon Pies 🤡🤡
@theunknownfate9388
@theunknownfate9388 5 жыл бұрын
*Squirrelflight seemed to shrink beneath Ashfur's hatred-filled gaze* Ashfur: *Smiles*
@dracoqueen1263
@dracoqueen1263 5 жыл бұрын
I Think We Need More Cross Clan Romances That Don't Involve Thunderclan.
@melodysmusicaladventures596
@melodysmusicaladventures596 5 жыл бұрын
Nobody: Everyone with a sane mind: This Fanfiction: Hollyleaf forgot the oven was on in the tunnels Edit: I didn’t expect to get any likes let alone this many likes for this joke thank you all Edit 2: omg thanks for the likes again this is just a silly joke I made up and everyone likes it I’m happy 🙂
@Arctic_and_The_F0X
@Arctic_and_The_F0X 5 жыл бұрын
“Everyone with a sane mind” _sorry that doesn’t apply to me_
@milliethecat1384
@milliethecat1384 5 жыл бұрын
Nobody: Nobody at all: Not a single soul: Not even lionblaze: Not even thanos: Me: **writes fanfiction from ivypool's POV that's about Dovewing being worse than her and dovewing being a butt to her and acting like she's SOOOO much better and ivypool is singing Walk Without The Stars and dovepaw being the villain instead of ivypool**
@BayernMunichGlazer
@BayernMunichGlazer 4 жыл бұрын
wow
@noodlecoffee193
@noodlecoffee193 4 жыл бұрын
I love how this was mentioned and forgot about five seconds later.
@melodysmusicaladventures596
@melodysmusicaladventures596 4 жыл бұрын
Omg same XD
@cbowieg2579
@cbowieg2579 4 жыл бұрын
Me: killing ashfur is part of the code? Me later: MOM I’M GOING TO KILL ASHFUR!
@angiehayakawa9809
@angiehayakawa9809 4 жыл бұрын
Yes
@SonTran-vb8xt
@SonTran-vb8xt 4 жыл бұрын
We kill kill kill
@SpireheartsCabin
@SpireheartsCabin 3 жыл бұрын
yes
@msrahman75
@msrahman75 3 жыл бұрын
this needs more likes than it has lol
@msrahman75
@msrahman75 3 жыл бұрын
also kill ashfur
@lol_sxmstar
@lol_sxmstar 5 жыл бұрын
So....the Firestar children are having a rough time with their boyfriends.
@FiggyG11
@FiggyG11 2 жыл бұрын
get a move on sparkpelt, you cant be a widow forever
@sagehamm
@sagehamm 5 жыл бұрын
Crowfeather shouldn’t exist because birds don’t.
@dapeck4592
@dapeck4592 4 жыл бұрын
Amy Ingraham So Jayfeather doesn’t exist either
@feathertail8996
@feathertail8996 4 жыл бұрын
Or Feathertail
@rexcake
@rexcake 4 жыл бұрын
Jayfeather and lionblaze are really just representations of the viewers/readers
@dougwalker4313
@dougwalker4313 5 жыл бұрын
Why do so many cats have AMBER eyes? BLUE is 10 times better.
@aaronseres3151
@aaronseres3151 5 жыл бұрын
Yeah, then Shadowstar would have no trouble finding the ambereyed Quick Water!
@color4795
@color4795 5 жыл бұрын
yes
@dougwalker4313
@dougwalker4313 5 жыл бұрын
This is for the challenge guys btw.
@IceCreamSwirls-q3r
@IceCreamSwirls-q3r 8 ай бұрын
Akira once said, “Blue is overrated” or smth in a video.
@hazelgrunts
@hazelgrunts 5 жыл бұрын
Hopwhisker is the first and only cat to ever be described as calico (Yes, really).
@Little_Rat1
@Little_Rat1 5 жыл бұрын
MORE CALICO CATS
@zoe.b.8548
@zoe.b.8548 5 жыл бұрын
There all pretending to be tortoise shell
@shifter4899
@shifter4899 5 жыл бұрын
@@zoe.b.8548 how did you know...
@zoe.b.8548
@zoe.b.8548 5 жыл бұрын
@@shifter4899 idk
@emilymonahan5232
@emilymonahan5232 5 жыл бұрын
@@shifter4899 Because every single calico cat is described as a tortoise shell with white.
@-cinnamnlikesrolls-4614
@-cinnamnlikesrolls-4614 4 жыл бұрын
My nitpick: “Honestly, why do people hate Ashfur? He's *smoking hot* “
@nancypowers162
@nancypowers162 4 жыл бұрын
I see whatcha did there
@blondeashfur3445
@blondeashfur3445 2 жыл бұрын
I am 😌😌
@hawkfoot1019
@hawkfoot1019 5 жыл бұрын
I hate that Longtail had a long tail!
@felixfrost7973
@felixfrost7973 5 жыл бұрын
I know, that’s soooooo far far fetched
@cupcake_girl5621
@cupcake_girl5621 5 жыл бұрын
Hawkfoot 101 oh yes! It’s truly awful!
@felixfrost7973
@felixfrost7973 5 жыл бұрын
Cupcake_Girl lol
@leafigardens
@leafigardens 5 жыл бұрын
He wasn't mentioned to have a long tail in the books...
@clockless1319
@clockless1319 5 жыл бұрын
Things that were in this fanfiction Romance Ships Drama And finally weirdness
@bubblelovessans
@bubblelovessans 3 жыл бұрын
*sniff* this was so emotional and beautiful, the plot, the drama, the action, the romance, this whole story brought me to tears.. i wish there was an actual book with this story written.. *sniff* great job
@meatcat7070
@meatcat7070 5 жыл бұрын
They're are never enough TigerStar remakes to be misunderstood.
@jamieraye5345
@jamieraye5345 5 жыл бұрын
Ikr
@dovefilms
@dovefilms 5 жыл бұрын
The warriors books are just super boring these days. Yknow what we need? 30 more forbidden couples.
@frostedcereal8243
@frostedcereal8243 4 жыл бұрын
I don’t agree nor disagree
@violetskiy854
@violetskiy854 3 жыл бұрын
Poor aromatic aces
@HarperSnowhand
@HarperSnowhand 3 жыл бұрын
They aren’t boring, but your not wrong.
@dovefilms
@dovefilms 3 жыл бұрын
@@HarperSnowhand no i very much am wrong this was satire.
@HarperSnowhand
@HarperSnowhand 3 жыл бұрын
@@dovefilms okay. Hope you have a nice day.
@BeanKally
@BeanKally 3 жыл бұрын
“Lionblaze sat in the back. Bucket full of popcorn. Ready to see the show that would unfold in front of him
@BasilKats
@BasilKats 5 жыл бұрын
The books aren't realistic, cats don't speak English. The books should be written in meows.
@olio9350
@olio9350 5 жыл бұрын
Meow. Fireheart mewed wearily. Sandstorm was taken aback. She looked at Fireheart in shock and hesitantly whispered. "M-meow??"
@brownie909
@brownie909 5 жыл бұрын
Thegolden Pineapple Firestar sighed. “Meow.” He told her as he turned away and walked out of ThunderClan territory and leaped over the wooden fence of Twolegplace.
@still_astray_
@still_astray_ 5 жыл бұрын
Firestar: Meow Graystripe: Meow meow Fireheart: Meow?!
@lol_sxmstar
@lol_sxmstar 5 жыл бұрын
THEY ARE WRITTEN IN MEOWS. IT SAYS MEWS AFTER EVERY WORD THEY SAY AND THEY ONLY USE ENGLISH BECAUSE ITS A BOOK AND CATS SPEAK DIFFERENTLY THAN US, TO OTHER CATS IT SEEMS LIKE AN ACTUAL WORD BUT TO HUMANS IT DOESN'T BC WE DIFFERENT SPECIES
@-ix-3152
@-ix-3152 5 жыл бұрын
@@lol_sxmstar Meow??
@_zoinkers_
@_zoinkers_ 5 жыл бұрын
Where is Firestars colar? Is it still left in the old camp? Why cant they explain This?
@rainbowthedragoncat6768
@rainbowthedragoncat6768 5 жыл бұрын
Grammar police: Where is your spelling and grammar?
@RavenLunatic517
@RavenLunatic517 5 жыл бұрын
That is an amazing question! I've always wondered where it went!
@SparkDoesArt
@SparkDoesArt 5 жыл бұрын
Ikr they never talk about it!
@_zoinkers_
@_zoinkers_ 5 жыл бұрын
Rainbow the Dragon Cat english isnt my first language
@Delaney._rose
@Delaney._rose 5 жыл бұрын
If it was it would have been burned in rising storm but they most likely just buried it
@TrueKitty-s3f
@TrueKitty-s3f 3 ай бұрын
‘I’m blind what are you expecting A quote from Jay feather
@chaos5734
@chaos5734 5 жыл бұрын
Some cats just DISAPPEAR in between series WITH NO EXPLANATION LIKE THEY NEVER EXISTED
@mapleheart1379
@mapleheart1379 5 жыл бұрын
Why are there SOOO many Firestar clones? We need the original: Jake!
@rainbowthedragoncat6768
@rainbowthedragoncat6768 5 жыл бұрын
JAKE IS EVERYONE'S FATHER. JAKE IS *YOUR* FATHER.
@stellaadamson
@stellaadamson 4 жыл бұрын
My nitpick: In this drawing, along with multiple others, ash fur is drawn with 6 marks on his forehead. They don’t explain this in the books and I’m left not able to sleep at night wondering HOW MANY MARKS THERE ACTUALLY ARE ON HIS HEAD.
@rottingraptor
@rottingraptor 5 жыл бұрын
my criticism: why didn't they use swords to fight?? They're WARRIORS after all, not just feral kittens.... smh Note: I introduced the series to my brother and he legitimately said this
@lol_sxmstar
@lol_sxmstar 5 жыл бұрын
Because its suppost to be realistic and cats dont use swords
@agelessorca
@agelessorca 5 жыл бұрын
"And then Squirrelflight spontaneously combusted"
@ivywolf6582
@ivywolf6582 4 жыл бұрын
My criticism is that in warrior cats super edition crooked stars promise when he was a kit they once said “crooked paw” when he was at the barn
@princessnunafart
@princessnunafart 5 жыл бұрын
What’s up with Squirrelflight’s third whisker? Had to stop reading the series because of it. 😒
@anihutchinson2425
@anihutchinson2425 5 жыл бұрын
Blue Star didn't think that her kits would freaze to death in a snow storm parenting IQ 1000000.
@corgibutnotherelmao
@corgibutnotherelmao 3 жыл бұрын
“Ashfur tipped his fedora” Me: *niCe hAt tHeRe, SiR* Leafpool: ....
@meremoo
@meremoo 5 жыл бұрын
Ashfur is a pervert, stalker, and murderer, but it would've made the books more interesting if he lived.
@leothewolf2161
@leothewolf2161 5 жыл бұрын
Its so rude that rosekit wasnt a mane character in the bluestars prophecy book! -_- it doeNt make sence!-
@zulpizalucero6735
@zulpizalucero6735 5 жыл бұрын
Ashfur: *tries to marry Brambleclaw* Squirrelflight: YEET! *steals boi from ashie* Ashfur:.... Also Ashfur: *asks HaWkFrOsT to marry him* HaWkFrOsT: YES
@bluebird1e
@bluebird1e 5 жыл бұрын
Why do no cats have wings? Like why? Wings are really cool. Wings are better than no wings.
@AstralArbourSystem
@AstralArbourSystem 4 жыл бұрын
Agreed! Hey Erins, give Dovewing wings already!
@zhuqi8170
@zhuqi8170 4 жыл бұрын
@@AstralArbourSystem Wings are kind of weird...no offense
@linawu09
@linawu09 4 жыл бұрын
Or how about Gray Wing? Oh wait. He's dead.
@charliehartwell1992
@charliehartwell1992 5 жыл бұрын
Something i hate about warriors is that there isnt enough op characters. We need more cats to yell at!
@chaos9608
@chaos9608 4 жыл бұрын
4:25 Squirrelflight ran to Brambleclaw as fast as she could, trying to save him from the fire. Brambleclaws eyes widened as he stared at the horrified she-cat, a gleam of confusion burrowed deep in his amber gaze. “What fire?”
@catjones3731
@catjones3731 5 жыл бұрын
Rootpaw is too insecure! He has many talents waiting to come out and he's not even trying!
@CringyFandoms
@CringyFandoms 5 жыл бұрын
Ok, but How can you not like a bright *dolfin noises* highlighter orange cat that will be seen 5 miles away that makes it impossible to sneak up on anything and had a ghost cat wife when he was 18 with a girlfriend, and basicly left his freind for dead in a monster along with his daughter and clanmates that he was the leader of and had a hatered towards a giant brown tabby for no apparent reason until explained by a skinny apprentice that he is a murderer and took like A moon and a half to get that Yellowfang wanted to kill her evil baby eating son and not to get her more bedding?
@shifter4899
@shifter4899 5 жыл бұрын
@@CringyFandoms X3 this reminds me so so so much of Moonkitti's yellowfang video
@catjones3731
@catjones3731 5 жыл бұрын
I used a dead joke. H a h a.
@CringyFandoms
@CringyFandoms 5 жыл бұрын
@@shifter4899 yeah, I totally watched that, Moonkitti makes amazing videos
@lilcatgirl9937
@lilcatgirl9937 5 жыл бұрын
Why do so many cats have fur?! Fur is so overrated.....like so many cats have fur! Why cannot they have HAIR instead?!
@siannap7209
@siannap7209 5 жыл бұрын
Well, there’s rock... and... good point..
@angiehayakawa9809
@angiehayakawa9809 4 жыл бұрын
Like Ashfur's long golden hair.
@Lost_Eclipse
@Lost_Eclipse 2 жыл бұрын
AshFur have a long blonde hair! This should be the new fashion of Warrior Cats!
@glitchycat7306
@glitchycat7306 5 жыл бұрын
IM DYING WHY DID IT HAVE TO END WITH HER BLOWING UP DANG I'm still laughing about the random microwave tho.
@loumorgan3682
@loumorgan3682 5 жыл бұрын
10/10, great fanfic. Would love to see fanfic part 2 xD
@ilovecrack42069
@ilovecrack42069 5 жыл бұрын
Loumorgsie 17 lol same
@not_wednesdayadams
@not_wednesdayadams 5 жыл бұрын
I am upset with the lack of dogs in warrior cats. They’re discriminating against other species!!
@megalovore
@megalovore 5 жыл бұрын
Warrior cats is mainly books about "Cats" So That's why.
@not_wednesdayadams
@not_wednesdayadams 5 жыл бұрын
Snooper BRUH its a joke at the end of the video he says “in the comments leave criticism about warrior cats that is WAY too nit picky” so I did just that. It’s a joke
@megalovore
@megalovore 5 жыл бұрын
@@not_wednesdayadams I didn't watch the end so meh, Good point.
@PuddlesTheMolten
@PuddlesTheMolten 5 жыл бұрын
@@megalovore *COUGH* R/woooosh *COUGH*
@3jfj493wns
@3jfj493wns 5 жыл бұрын
@@PuddlesTheMolten r/ihavereddit
@Noodleswithaspoon
@Noodleswithaspoon Жыл бұрын
My fanfiction be like: For the first time in the whole book series Jayfeather purred, trying his best to look towards lionblaze but looked past him to Cinderheart. Lionblaze gasped and stepped on Jayfeather, effectively killing him.
@annoyedghoul7243
@annoyedghoul7243 5 жыл бұрын
In the character descriptions, they never once mentioned Ashfur’s beautiful long locks of hair. I can’t believe the authors got their own book wrong.
@eyeofthebox913
@eyeofthebox913 5 жыл бұрын
Why are they all named after nature? Nature is so boring (not actually true I love there names)
@raiz0r_ip
@raiz0r_ip Ай бұрын
Ah yes, the Warrior Code: 1: Defend your clan 2: Hunt on your own land 3: Feed your kits and elders 4: Respect your food 5: KILL ASHFUR 6: Write code on the beach 7: Haha you cant read this rule
@MarioMamTess
@MarioMamTess 5 жыл бұрын
Why did chapter 9 of River of Fire have to be so short? All you had to do was write 4 more pages of Alderheart worrying over nothing!
@amyheart1489
@amyheart1489 5 жыл бұрын
My insides hurt from holding a laughter that can wake all of California
@Avveplayz
@Avveplayz 6 ай бұрын
”I have several questions…” Does that means that jayfeather could see when leafpool gave ashfur a good L I C K
@ahornminze
@ahornminze 5 жыл бұрын
Riverclan should be more attention,they just exists to,that villains can show how strong they are!
@Carol-di4eb
@Carol-di4eb 5 жыл бұрын
Why do all the cats have normal hair colors? Why can't it be pink or purple??
@callmetrigg5401
@callmetrigg5401 5 жыл бұрын
Wait. THEY HAVE HAIRRR??? XD
@ace-is-trying8977
@ace-is-trying8977 5 жыл бұрын
U know Millie exist and she talks to dogs!
@averageashfurkinnie9051
@averageashfurkinnie9051 5 жыл бұрын
Heatherstar is basically purple xd
@matthewhinkle3014
@matthewhinkle3014 4 жыл бұрын
jay feather: what in starclan is going on Me: I'm so sad knowing your blind it was kind of a love story and a sad story and a funny story Jay feather: ... what?
@Saucewithmoss
@Saucewithmoss 5 жыл бұрын
Why did scourge have to die we need MORE EDGE IN THIS SERIS!!! >:(
@cheetochomperIol
@cheetochomperIol 5 жыл бұрын
Why don’t Riverclan cats name thier fish? I mean...
@likearazorblade
@likearazorblade 4 жыл бұрын
When the fedora flew on Ash’Furs head. I thought it was a cockroach coming to kill me-
@Jordan-ge7to
@Jordan-ge7to 5 жыл бұрын
Warriors would have been so much better if TigerHeart/Star had 27 stripes on his back, instead of the most cannon design where he had 25. I'm appalled, so much so I burned every book with his name anywhere in it.
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