"Hollyleaf forgot the oven was on in the tunnels." *oh no*
@sarahkey95785 жыл бұрын
She technically didn't know about that (maybe, idk)
@peidongchen88955 жыл бұрын
😂😂🤣🤣🤣
@peckneckanimations5 жыл бұрын
Her pie was burning, she was gonna use a “follow the Warrior code “ potion in it and save everyone from an over used plot line idea.
@Miss_Prowlheart5 жыл бұрын
Haha!
@Miss_Prowlheart5 жыл бұрын
Lps Maddie jo that’s really funny oh starclan!
@Miss_Prowlheart5 жыл бұрын
Petition to change the title to “Ashfur Gets Dumped by 3 Cats in Less Than 6 Minutes” Like to sign Ps gosh wow thanks for all the likes on this comment
@jbshelley715 жыл бұрын
Mhm
@Miss_Prowlheart5 жыл бұрын
Hehe. I’ve never gotten so many likes tysm
@jbshelley715 жыл бұрын
Ilikecrunchy AnimalJam bc it's hilarious
@Miss_Prowlheart5 жыл бұрын
GachaGalaxyFairyxoxo thank you!
@jbshelley715 жыл бұрын
Ilikecrunchy AnimalJam ur welcome random internet stranger person whose family and name and friends and place u live all I don't know
@r1nseandrepeat4 жыл бұрын
"i was always jealous you chose squirrelflight over me" the tables have turned
@sunday_sabrina86633 жыл бұрын
The turns have tabled
@sleeeepyy_3 жыл бұрын
@@sunday_sabrina8663 the tabled have turns
@RayneNeow2 жыл бұрын
have tabled the turns
@keresfeelinfruity47612 жыл бұрын
The turn have been tabled
@FroggoForLife03252 жыл бұрын
I lost it when Ashfur proposed-
@skye73585 жыл бұрын
The only thing I hate about warriors is that leafpool never married Pringles.
@Miss_Prowlheart5 жыл бұрын
YESSSSSS OMG
@ICEBUNNo5 жыл бұрын
Leafpool x Pringles is the best ship
@agenthuntergo5 жыл бұрын
Yeah! Why would she chose CROWFEATHER over Pringle’s?
@envii27675 жыл бұрын
Ikr Pringlepool
@agenthuntergo5 жыл бұрын
RositheCat Leafpool: NANI?!
@raecat92285 жыл бұрын
My nitpick: there aren’t enough ginger cats in ThunderClan.
@vscogirl32775 жыл бұрын
it kind of is....cats understand eachother like we know english sooooooo
@halfway76904 жыл бұрын
@That Geek Out Girl reply for a different comment?
@chaos3834 жыл бұрын
That Geek Out Girl most likely Edit: definitely is
@kyrakun25594 жыл бұрын
yeah there is only firestar. nobody else.
@user-hq6hq2jm9h4 жыл бұрын
Firestar and the occasional Firestar2
@roweeners96105 жыл бұрын
"And then Squierrflight spontaneously combusted." The end Me: *sniff* ThAt WaS bEaUtIfUl
@MATOGAST.4 жыл бұрын
That reminds me of another skephalo fanfic
@tellmethesongoftherain65343 жыл бұрын
*Squirrel* flight.
@lostdog93703 жыл бұрын
smol boi oh god
@BeanKally3 жыл бұрын
Squierrflight
@theduckie7013 жыл бұрын
XDD
@RocketPooch5 жыл бұрын
The fact that this story actually flows perfectly says a lot
@moonseaeeveelutionsdance88634 жыл бұрын
Yep
@Bleedinguptopias3 жыл бұрын
sToP mAkInG mE rEAliZe tHiNgS
@Bleedinguptopias3 жыл бұрын
@False Sanity, I’m white but BLM h e r?
@mycatisasupermodel49323 жыл бұрын
That we're awesome?
@RocketPooch3 жыл бұрын
@@mycatisasupermodel4932 y e s ! !
@agenthuntergo5 жыл бұрын
How come the cats never move territories anymore? I mean, we NEED those 25 chapters of walking!
@CringyFandoms5 жыл бұрын
Don't worry, were *evenually* going back to the mountains, and meet Twisted Branch and Dewy Leaf there
@carl_Grimes_drawz5 жыл бұрын
I know right I just miss those books so much the wasted time the brain numbing boringness uh I miss it
@Charlie-cz1ee5 жыл бұрын
I KNOW RIGHT!?!?!?
@errortoogay53955 жыл бұрын
Agent Hunter go At least someone agrees with me!
@crimsonilla65505 жыл бұрын
Your profile says it all 😂
@goldquietmoon87265 жыл бұрын
My nitpick Windclan: 8 cats Riverclan: 9 cats Shadowclan: 6 cats Thunderclan: 28 cats Erin: WE NEED MORE THUNDER CLAN WARRIORS My thoughts exactly Erin, I couldn't have said it better.
@erin.artemis4 жыл бұрын
Yes
@Cl-20484 жыл бұрын
They should all have about Thunderclan's amount
@kittyloveluvkitty73064 жыл бұрын
Yeah! Every cat in the other clans should give themselves to thunderclan so thunderclan can have just as many warriors as them! *laughs nervously* I’m sure I did the math right!
@markv67244 жыл бұрын
Skyclan: *i'm going commits kermit sucide*
@_marc0TwT__3 жыл бұрын
What about the kittypets? or bloodclan?- *SPINNING WITH FIRE ON A BUILDING BURNING IT**
@stereo20505 жыл бұрын
“Ugh, why do the medicine cats always have to sort through herbs?”
@kayayenenay61125 жыл бұрын
The fact that we never got to hear what Squirrelflight's and Leafpool's phone numbers are! 😭😢😭😲😲😲
@aristocat30124 жыл бұрын
yes i agree. I WANNA KNOWWWWWWWWW
@griffon1064 жыл бұрын
"Leafpool stared at Jayfeather as he tried to eat a rock" IM DEAD I CANT AAAAAAAAAA
@energeticeg82435 жыл бұрын
Jayfeather: What in the name of starclan is happening right now? Me: My thoughts exactly.
@addisonlane45145 жыл бұрын
I’m so angry that the books didn’t have Jayfeather day “Yeet!” While throwing the stick into the lake.
@ghostbovods21884 жыл бұрын
Omg 😂
@zhuqi81704 жыл бұрын
@@ghostbovods2188 So funny think about it, it would be like this. "You stopped me from saving Flametail!" Jayfeather hissed, his fur bristling and his eyes blazing with anger, "I'm done with this mouse-brained stick, it's letting cats die! Yeet!" Jayfeather flung the stick into the lake and Rock stared in horror as he vanished.
@SonTran-vb8xt4 жыл бұрын
@@zhuqi8170 rip
@zhuqi81704 жыл бұрын
@@SonTran-vb8xt lol xd
@LeafeonTheCat4 жыл бұрын
*say
@thinkinofanameidunno78164 жыл бұрын
Jayfeather:"What in *_Starclan_* is even happening right now?" Me:"Yeah, I agree."
@birch_thetree19055 жыл бұрын
OMG!! Life is so unfair for Deadfoot, he has to walk on three feet!! Wait, who's Deadfoot again??
@isopodozoli5 жыл бұрын
"Leafpool I love you " " *NOPE GOODBYE* "
@theartisticbird25355 жыл бұрын
my criticism: In book six of the first book "the darkest hour" they spelled raven paw as "rave paw"
@theartisticbird25354 жыл бұрын
this boi about to start a rave up in here lol
@luthientinuviel38834 жыл бұрын
This paw be raving
@theartisticbird25354 жыл бұрын
@@luthientinuviel3883 *R A A A A A A A A A A V E E E E*
@hiim_chainlii27243 жыл бұрын
My complaint is that they made the entire series of series and serieses of series suped edition? a typo and his real name IS rave paw
@theduckie7013 жыл бұрын
XD RAVE KITTY XDDD
@kiwiqueen1385 жыл бұрын
My nitpick criticism: There’s OBVIOUSLY not enough Tigerstar clones! Like, COME ON, we need AT LEAST twenty six more! It’s totally the most interesting and original idea that the authors came up with and it’s being W A S T E D.
You said this was a terrible fanfiction THIS IS A MASTERPIECE
@SparkDoesArt5 жыл бұрын
MWA PERFECTION 👌
@Blueberry-fd6vi5 жыл бұрын
Yes. Yes this is a masterpeice.
@dreamybombstudios7245 жыл бұрын
I know it's the best thing ever 😂
@Blueberry-fd6vi5 жыл бұрын
Maybe XD
@vvv-lp8sz4 жыл бұрын
*Brambleclaw jumped down and screeched "YEET!"* *"i have several questions-"*
@vipertoflarewingtothecloaker3 жыл бұрын
Me too
@person-kg7tk5 ай бұрын
Brambleclaw should have yeeted Ashfur.
@lee-xy2us5 жыл бұрын
Why does Leafpool cure cats?! I mean, I know she’s a medicine cat and all but like, WHY?
@macey93115 жыл бұрын
I know!!! I love your icon!
@lee-xy2us5 жыл бұрын
Sweetberry warrior Cats Thank you!
@eternal61485 жыл бұрын
Is that the newest book?
@DuneTheKaiju5 жыл бұрын
Um, because she's a medicine cat? Lol
@hearts4suntan5 жыл бұрын
Ugh, I hated the forest territory! There was that one tree that just made me really mad!
@critter_core5 жыл бұрын
kitties4ever12 um I kind of can’t get used to the lake camp...
@hearts4suntan5 жыл бұрын
@@critter_core Me too, actually. It kinda throws me off, especially when I'm reading a special edition.
@adamyusuf18054 жыл бұрын
Moon Dog Productions ikr. Even though there was 27 books about the lake (in the main series) compared to the 9 about the forest (and even then the first three books still had more walking then the forest.
@Kin_fe2 жыл бұрын
Too bad that every 5 minutes when I read either the lake or the forest camp, the camp changes into a completely different look.
@SaltwaterTaffyz3 жыл бұрын
“HOLLYLEAF!!! YOU LEFT THE OVEN ON IN THE TUNNELS!!” said FallenLeaves, running out of the Tunnels with his bum on fire.
@MapleshadeSyrup Жыл бұрын
@@hollyshine10 Fallen Leaves looked at Hollyleaf uncertainly, then yelled, "But you need to turn it off now! I don't want Ashfur getting any more fire scenes!"
@L-ghtlessSky6 ай бұрын
@@MapleshadeSyrupHollyleaf snarled at Fallen Leaves. “But my Dino nuggies are still RAW.”
@ambergibson32993 ай бұрын
@@L-ghtlessSky Fallen Leaves looked shocked, "HOW?! They whole tunnels is in flames!? They should be BURNT?!!" Hissing Fallen Leaves
@L-ghtlessSky3 ай бұрын
@@ambergibson3299 “YOU THINK I KNOW?! THESE STARCLAN-CURSED THINGS WON’T COOK! I am NOT eating RAW DINO NUGGIES, you WET RAT!” Hollyleaf yelled, losing her cool, just like the tunnels did.
@bejeweledbat135 жыл бұрын
Why are there so many characters with tails? Tails are overrated.
@indecizive.v3A5 жыл бұрын
LONGtail has special tail tho >:3
@davidgannonreal5 жыл бұрын
iKr FuR as weLL
@hexbug34845 жыл бұрын
Paws, too. Why does every cat have paws? It is so overused 😔
@indecizive.v3A5 жыл бұрын
@@hexbug3484 uuuuuuhhhhh...cloudtail's kitty pet name was fluffypaw's so...HE HAD EXTRA FLUFFY PAWS!! THEIR SPWECIAL! And my cat has oversized paws🤣🤣
@kay-jp6px5 жыл бұрын
@@davidgannonreal far to much of that 😒
@dracoqueen12635 жыл бұрын
I Think We Need More Cross Clan Romances That Don't Involve Thunderclan.
@stanleypfp4 жыл бұрын
If I could add to this, I would add: “Squirrelflight sighed and pointed her gun at Ashfur”.
@MoonfallEquinox Жыл бұрын
Leafpool joined them and pointed a gun at BrambleClaw, Jayfeather jumped in front of him, taking a shot to the tail
@energydragonninjago9 ай бұрын
Hollyleaf walks in and starts to blabber something about warrior code.
@SilverSpoonreal2 ай бұрын
@@energydragonninjagoLionblaze ran up to hollyleaf “shut up hollyleaf, you don’t have powers”
@LazymediasiblingsАй бұрын
Hollyleaf replies”MY POWER IS A CHAINSA-“ her chainsaw rumbling in her hands
@SilverSpoonrealАй бұрын
@@Lazymediasiblings “OH STARCLAN NO” Ashfur screamed as he hid behind Squirrelflight
@kenfunk78235 жыл бұрын
Can’t believe cats breath in these books,sigh SO unrealistic
@marimonsoon76364 жыл бұрын
They also exist,It’s so unrealistic.
@Cloudfiin4 жыл бұрын
Yeah.. we also play icehockey but it’s whatever.
@SonTran-vb8xt4 жыл бұрын
I know, and the fact that they are real in the story is the MOST UNREALISTIC THING eVERRR
@Little_Rat15 жыл бұрын
Med cats NEED to be able to have a mate... Wait no! Then Leafpool wouldn't be breaking the Warrior Code
@moriohmars4 жыл бұрын
I love how theres serious sentences like "Hollyleaf had a uneasiness she could not shake" and then theres stuff like "Leafpool gave Ashfur a good *L i c k*
@reedtheracco0n2 жыл бұрын
l i c k
@GanymedeTheCorgiCat2 жыл бұрын
l i c k
@vSpotfur Жыл бұрын
l i c k
@leeknowsleft_thigh Жыл бұрын
l i c k
@clairesnumber1fann Жыл бұрын
*l i c k*
@Slippery_Fire5 жыл бұрын
More like we wrote the best warriors fanfiction ever Also that rock was delicious
@KPH1075 жыл бұрын
You have a computer? Where? Wait no- HOW?
@Slippery_Fire5 жыл бұрын
Kylie Healy Shhhhh don’t tell BrambleStar 🤫
@greystripe79275 жыл бұрын
Jayfeather Medicine Cat don’t worry about it
@dreamybombstudios7245 жыл бұрын
Rock or stick? He was obsessed with both 😆
@Slippery_Fire5 жыл бұрын
Choco marshmallow kitty *I ate them both*
@aivexuviet115 жыл бұрын
"A stick?" Lionpaw, trying to be a medicine cat
@SonTran-vb8xt4 жыл бұрын
a StIcK?
@DappledLeaf4 жыл бұрын
That was the most beautifully written fanfic I’ve ever heard of. So touching.
@CornflowerStudiosOfficial Жыл бұрын
yes exactly
@snowywinterwishes56635 жыл бұрын
Why couldn't Ashfur's luscious long golden locks be cannon!?
@fishoutofwater11125 жыл бұрын
They are cannon-
@PikaPotterhead075 жыл бұрын
IKR
@BugsyBugYT2 жыл бұрын
They arent cannon since words cant express them
@Moss-u9y2 ай бұрын
The erin team needs to give ashfur a super edition but half the book it's just a detailed description of ashfur's hair he likes to imagine himself having
@voch1235 жыл бұрын
*looks at title* hmm... i never wouldve guessed that "perfect" was spelled that way
@sketchysim53515 жыл бұрын
XD
@chanteljoachim96715 жыл бұрын
No one: Not a single soul: Me: *What a plot twist!*
@castangred77135 жыл бұрын
I can’t believe that Twigpaw’s warrior name was Twigbranch, and not Twigstick Smh People these days, so disrespectful
@b1acksol5 жыл бұрын
God, couldn’t they have given her a sibling named pebblerock? Smh
@amelia87865 жыл бұрын
And who names a cat 'bramble'claw?' He should have been bramble'thorn.
@vari65885 жыл бұрын
ugh, you’re so right. also, “flip kit”? their really going downhill. it should’ve been fidgetspinner kit!
@felixfrost79735 жыл бұрын
I know right?!
@aname45355 жыл бұрын
Same! I hate them catching prey, just steal some kitty pet food!
@colorfulchameleon98915 жыл бұрын
So Leafpool and Ashfur think they're in love, but Squirrelflight comes. She still seems normal in her relationship with Brambleclaw. EXCEPT Brambleclaw loves Leafpool. But Leafopool doesn't love him back. Instead, Ashfur loves Brambleclaw. Due to Leafpool's rejection, he's ready to accept Ashfur's paw in marriage. But Squirrelflight jumps in to defend her mate. Leafpool is sad that Ashfur loved Brambleclaw more than her, and was disgusted that Brambleclaw loved her. Ashfur tries to get her back, but Leafpool rejects him. He did just propose to Brambleclaw a second ago! Leafpool realizes that all along she should've stayed with Crowfeather. This is a shipping mess.
@Lunaloaff5 жыл бұрын
Yup
@ruthie72375 жыл бұрын
@@Lunaloaff The only kind of shipping XD
@colorfulchameleon98915 жыл бұрын
@@ruthie7237 True
@shizcrazy69905 жыл бұрын
Word
@soartearstudio5 жыл бұрын
Reminds me of how I use to ship my OC Freedomwind with Tigerclaw/star, Longtail, Whitestorm, Boulder, Tallstar and Jaggedtooth
@PeanutWithWiFiAccess4 жыл бұрын
This needs To be a super edition Let's call it.... "Leafpool's Trek"
@coyotix3 жыл бұрын
HELP I JUST READ THAT AS LEAFPOOL’S SHREK
@Lost_Eclipse2 жыл бұрын
@@coyotix XDDDD
@tiberius07162 жыл бұрын
@@coyotix LOL
@nopiwasneverhere5 жыл бұрын
I hate that med cats can’t have mates! How will Jayfeather confess to the stick?! (..Guys you can stop telling me that the stick is broken. *It’s been 10 months* ) (aight now its been 2 years why)
@lobotomizedjb5 жыл бұрын
The stick died i think ;(
@marshallmicr0wave5105 жыл бұрын
Stick died
@kenzierainbow53615 жыл бұрын
Stick died?! Noooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!
@travisarnold42755 жыл бұрын
Wth is up with that stupid stick?!?!
@optimus63745 жыл бұрын
Cookielicous123 it’s ships like these that are so stupid and make no sense
@lol_sxmstar5 жыл бұрын
So....the Firestar children are having a rough time with their boyfriends.
@FiggyG112 жыл бұрын
get a move on sparkpelt, you cant be a widow forever
@pay38344 жыл бұрын
Leafpool: mentions CrowFeather Lesbian me: YOU MEAN MOTHWING?
@mercurymoonn5 жыл бұрын
I don't like how they all breath. Like, I mean, breathing is extremely overrated. They all do it. Ugh
@felixfrost79735 жыл бұрын
Exactly!
@LinkPlays3555 жыл бұрын
Why do we breathe I mean it is overrated
@poopdoody9885 жыл бұрын
We will die if we stop breathing! We have to breathe to survive. It's apart of life.
@alexx.79725 жыл бұрын
Poop Doody D I S G U S T A N G
@softiesirius53565 жыл бұрын
Poop Doody r/woooosh
@quincy12125 жыл бұрын
Okay, so, y'know how the dead cats aren't alive? Yeah, I HATE that.
@VAMPY13465 жыл бұрын
Ikr
@ok-ni6cm5 жыл бұрын
It’s so annoying
@PikaPotterhead075 жыл бұрын
I HATE that the dead Tigerstar isn't alive.
@animationsandvnsbasil5 жыл бұрын
UGHHH YEAH.
@animationsandvnsbasil5 жыл бұрын
THEY ARE CAPABLE OF BEING ALIVE.
@theunknownfate93884 жыл бұрын
*Squirrelflight seemed to shrink beneath Ashfur's hatred-filled gaze* Ashfur: *Smiles*
@princessnunafart5 жыл бұрын
What’s up with Squirrelflight’s third whisker? Had to stop reading the series because of it. 😒
@clockless13195 жыл бұрын
Things that were in this fanfiction Romance Ships Drama And finally weirdness
@feathertail89964 жыл бұрын
"Ashfyr realized that he left his personality back in old forest."
@feathertail89964 жыл бұрын
@Warrior cats facts why...?
@Ali-uc6dq5 жыл бұрын
What have you done this time, Akira? Edit: This was posted recently. Thanks for all the likes!
@milkyboi89535 жыл бұрын
70th like haha no 69 for u
@kedicurly5 жыл бұрын
You do realize nobody goes back to the comment, so what’s the point of thanking them if the people who liked it will never see it, the people who scroll will see it though, and they’ll cringe and won’t like
@Ali-uc6dq5 жыл бұрын
ScøutZA It doesn't really matter to me, though.
@Ali-uc6dq5 жыл бұрын
@@Myheartz4u Hi.
@Ali-uc6dq5 жыл бұрын
@@Myheartz4u Well.
@northstarcoyote63925 жыл бұрын
Dude why are all warriors characters cats? There should be warrior worms! DirtClan, RainClan, WiggleClan, and MudClan
@aimlessidentity95675 жыл бұрын
I get that's for the video but that's not a bad idea
@Mackeca5 жыл бұрын
You forgot about SquiggleClan. They're introduced in a later series.
@lol_sxmstar5 жыл бұрын
no, worms are distusting
@sophiesimpson12425 жыл бұрын
I think this is and always will be the best comment ever
@sophiesimpson12425 жыл бұрын
@@lol_sxmstar you know that it was just a joke right? Sorry I got you so mad.
@amyheart14895 жыл бұрын
My insides hurt from holding a laughter that can wake all of California
@sagehamm5 жыл бұрын
Crowfeather shouldn’t exist because birds don’t.
@dapeck45924 жыл бұрын
Amy Ingraham So Jayfeather doesn’t exist either
@feathertail89964 жыл бұрын
Or Feathertail
@kittyclearsight35645 жыл бұрын
I just think cats licking each other is inappropriate for the target audience
@felixfrost79735 жыл бұрын
So true
@warriorcatkitty5 жыл бұрын
XD
@dragonpies90525 жыл бұрын
Cats groom eachother though... by LICKING EACHOTHER LIKE A MOTHER LICKING HER KITTENS
@snowshower44155 жыл бұрын
@@dragonpies9052 r/wooosh
@sgtruru5 жыл бұрын
Dragon Pies 🤡🤡
@rexcake4 жыл бұрын
Jayfeather and lionblaze are really just representations of the viewers/readers
@hazelgrunts5 жыл бұрын
Hopwhisker is the first and only cat to ever be described as calico (Yes, really).
@Little_Rat15 жыл бұрын
MORE CALICO CATS
@zoe.b.85485 жыл бұрын
There all pretending to be tortoise shell
@shifter48995 жыл бұрын
@@zoe.b.8548 how did you know...
@zoe.b.85485 жыл бұрын
@@shifter4899 idk
@emilymonahan52325 жыл бұрын
@@shifter4899 Because every single calico cat is described as a tortoise shell with white.
@dougwalker43135 жыл бұрын
Why do so many cats have AMBER eyes? BLUE is 10 times better.
@aaronseres31515 жыл бұрын
Yeah, then Shadowstar would have no trouble finding the ambereyed Quick Water!
@color47955 жыл бұрын
yes
@dougwalker43135 жыл бұрын
This is for the challenge guys btw.
@IceCreamSwirls-q3r7 ай бұрын
Akira once said, “Blue is overrated” or smth in a video.
@glitchycat73065 жыл бұрын
IM DYING WHY DID IT HAVE TO END WITH HER BLOWING UP DANG I'm still laughing about the random microwave tho.
@hawkfoot10195 жыл бұрын
I hate that Longtail had a long tail!
@felixfrost79735 жыл бұрын
I know, that’s soooooo far far fetched
@cupcake_girl56215 жыл бұрын
Hawkfoot 101 oh yes! It’s truly awful!
@felixfrost79735 жыл бұрын
Cupcake_Girl lol
@leafigardens5 жыл бұрын
He wasn't mentioned to have a long tail in the books...
@mapleheart13795 жыл бұрын
Why are there SOOO many Firestar clones? We need the original: Jake!
@rainbowthedragoncat67685 жыл бұрын
JAKE IS EVERYONE'S FATHER. JAKE IS *YOUR* FATHER.
@cbowieg25794 жыл бұрын
Me: killing ashfur is part of the code? Me later: MOM I’M GOING TO KILL ASHFUR!
@angiehayakawa98094 жыл бұрын
Yes
@SonTran-vb8xt4 жыл бұрын
We kill kill kill
@SpireheartsCabin3 жыл бұрын
yes
@msrahman753 жыл бұрын
this needs more likes than it has lol
@msrahman753 жыл бұрын
also kill ashfur
@eyeofthebox9135 жыл бұрын
Why are they all named after nature? Nature is so boring (not actually true I love there names)
@dovefilms5 жыл бұрын
The warriors books are just super boring these days. Yknow what we need? 30 more forbidden couples.
@frostedcereal82434 жыл бұрын
I don’t agree nor disagree
@violetskiy8543 жыл бұрын
Poor aromatic aces
@HarperSnowhand3 жыл бұрын
They aren’t boring, but your not wrong.
@dovefilms3 жыл бұрын
@@HarperSnowhand no i very much am wrong this was satire.
@HarperSnowhand3 жыл бұрын
@@dovefilms okay. Hope you have a nice day.
@bubblelovessans2 жыл бұрын
*sniff* this was so emotional and beautiful, the plot, the drama, the action, the romance, this whole story brought me to tears.. i wish there was an actual book with this story written.. *sniff* great job
@rottingraptor5 жыл бұрын
my criticism: why didn't they use swords to fight?? They're WARRIORS after all, not just feral kittens.... smh Note: I introduced the series to my brother and he legitimately said this
@lol_sxmstar5 жыл бұрын
Because its suppost to be realistic and cats dont use swords
@agelessorca5 жыл бұрын
"And then Squirrelflight spontaneously combusted"
@BeanKally3 жыл бұрын
“Lionblaze sat in the back. Bucket full of popcorn. Ready to see the show that would unfold in front of him
@RocketPooch5 жыл бұрын
This reminds me of when I play the 'one word at a time' game with my friends to make stories. This is actually incredible, you should totally do it again! Pleaseeee lol? Now that I've joined your amino I REAAAALLY wanna join in with these things and write some mighty wack comments heh
@sierra6093 жыл бұрын
I would love there to be a part two. In fact these stories are just classics.
@charliehartwell19925 жыл бұрын
Something i hate about warriors is that there isnt enough op characters. We need more cats to yell at!
@chaos96084 жыл бұрын
4:25 Squirrelflight ran to Brambleclaw as fast as she could, trying to save him from the fire. Brambleclaws eyes widened as he stared at the horrified she-cat, a gleam of confusion burrowed deep in his amber gaze. “What fire?”
@loumorgan36825 жыл бұрын
10/10, great fanfic. Would love to see fanfic part 2 xD
@ilovecrack420695 жыл бұрын
Loumorgsie 17 lol same
@meatcat70705 жыл бұрын
They're are never enough TigerStar remakes to be misunderstood.
@jamieraye53455 жыл бұрын
Ikr
@corgibutnotherelmao3 жыл бұрын
“Ashfur tipped his fedora” Me: *niCe hAt tHeRe, SiR* Leafpool: ....
@_zoinkers_5 жыл бұрын
Where is Firestars colar? Is it still left in the old camp? Why cant they explain This?
@rainbowthedragoncat67685 жыл бұрын
Grammar police: Where is your spelling and grammar?
@RavenLunatic5175 жыл бұрын
That is an amazing question! I've always wondered where it went!
@SparkDoesArt5 жыл бұрын
Ikr they never talk about it!
@_zoinkers_5 жыл бұрын
Rainbow the Dragon Cat english isnt my first language
@Delaney._rose5 жыл бұрын
If it was it would have been burned in rising storm but they most likely just buried it
@lilcatgirl99375 жыл бұрын
Why do so many cats have fur?! Fur is so overrated.....like so many cats have fur! Why cannot they have HAIR instead?!
@siannap72095 жыл бұрын
Well, there’s rock... and... good point..
@angiehayakawa98094 жыл бұрын
Like Ashfur's long golden hair.
@Lost_Eclipse2 жыл бұрын
AshFur have a long blonde hair! This should be the new fashion of Warrior Cats!
@stellaadamson4 жыл бұрын
My nitpick: In this drawing, along with multiple others, ash fur is drawn with 6 marks on his forehead. They don’t explain this in the books and I’m left not able to sleep at night wondering HOW MANY MARKS THERE ACTUALLY ARE ON HIS HEAD.
@leothewolf21615 жыл бұрын
Its so rude that rosekit wasnt a mane character in the bluestars prophecy book! -_- it doeNt make sence!-
@chaos57345 жыл бұрын
Some cats just DISAPPEAR in between series WITH NO EXPLANATION LIKE THEY NEVER EXISTED
@-cinnamnlikesrolls-46144 жыл бұрын
My nitpick: “Honestly, why do people hate Ashfur? He's *smoking hot* “
@nancypowers1624 жыл бұрын
I see whatcha did there
@blondeashfur34452 жыл бұрын
I am 😌😌
@ahornminze5 жыл бұрын
Riverclan should be more attention,they just exists to,that villains can show how strong they are!
@Saucewithmoss5 жыл бұрын
Why did scourge have to die we need MORE EDGE IN THIS SERIS!!! >:(
@TrueKitty-s3f2 ай бұрын
‘I’m blind what are you expecting A quote from Jay feather
@foxfrantic70505 жыл бұрын
Brambleclaw you missed one squirrel...Back to an apprentice!
@melodysmusicaladventures5965 жыл бұрын
Nobody: Everyone with a sane mind: This Fanfiction: Hollyleaf forgot the oven was on in the tunnels Edit: I didn’t expect to get any likes let alone this many likes for this joke thank you all Edit 2: omg thanks for the likes again this is just a silly joke I made up and everyone likes it I’m happy 🙂
@Arctic_and_The_F0X5 жыл бұрын
“Everyone with a sane mind” _sorry that doesn’t apply to me_
@milliethecat13844 жыл бұрын
Nobody: Nobody at all: Not a single soul: Not even lionblaze: Not even thanos: Me: **writes fanfiction from ivypool's POV that's about Dovewing being worse than her and dovewing being a butt to her and acting like she's SOOOO much better and ivypool is singing Walk Without The Stars and dovepaw being the villain instead of ivypool**
@BayernMunichGlazer4 жыл бұрын
wow
@noodlecoffee1934 жыл бұрын
I love how this was mentioned and forgot about five seconds later.
@melodysmusicaladventures5964 жыл бұрын
Omg same XD
@zulpizalucero67355 жыл бұрын
Ashfur: *tries to marry Brambleclaw* Squirrelflight: YEET! *steals boi from ashie* Ashfur:.... Also Ashfur: *asks HaWkFrOsT to marry him* HaWkFrOsT: YES
@errortoogay53955 жыл бұрын
One criticism for warrior cats? Why aren’t there more cats that are the “chosen one”? I think the Erin’s forgot that it’s such a good plot driving mechanism. Don’t mind me trying to use big words to sound smart 🤣🤣🤣
@honeydewmelan4455 жыл бұрын
I too enjoy using large words to make myself appear more photosynthesis.
@tallypaw2 жыл бұрын
@@honeydewmelan445 your acting way to onomatopoeia right now. tone it down a bit to aesthenosphere, thanks.
@bluebird1e5 жыл бұрын
Why do no cats have wings? Like why? Wings are really cool. Wings are better than no wings.
@AstralArbourSys4 жыл бұрын
Agreed! Hey Erins, give Dovewing wings already!
@zhuqi81704 жыл бұрын
@@AstralArbourSys Wings are kind of weird...no offense
@linawu094 жыл бұрын
Or how about Gray Wing? Oh wait. He's dead.
@matthewhinkle30144 жыл бұрын
jay feather: what in starclan is going on Me: I'm so sad knowing your blind it was kind of a love story and a sad story and a funny story Jay feather: ... what?
@catjones37315 жыл бұрын
Rootpaw is too insecure! He has many talents waiting to come out and he's not even trying!
@CringyFandoms5 жыл бұрын
Ok, but How can you not like a bright *dolfin noises* highlighter orange cat that will be seen 5 miles away that makes it impossible to sneak up on anything and had a ghost cat wife when he was 18 with a girlfriend, and basicly left his freind for dead in a monster along with his daughter and clanmates that he was the leader of and had a hatered towards a giant brown tabby for no apparent reason until explained by a skinny apprentice that he is a murderer and took like A moon and a half to get that Yellowfang wanted to kill her evil baby eating son and not to get her more bedding?
@shifter48995 жыл бұрын
@@CringyFandoms X3 this reminds me so so so much of Moonkitti's yellowfang video
@catjones37315 жыл бұрын
I used a dead joke. H a h a.
@CringyFandoms5 жыл бұрын
@@shifter4899 yeah, I totally watched that, Moonkitti makes amazing videos
@rileyreads8475 жыл бұрын
Ugh! Why didn't Firestar name Berrynose Berrytail instead? This literally ruined the series for me!
@timbersky775 жыл бұрын
Riley Hildenbrand don’t you mean Berrystumptail lol
@shifter48995 жыл бұрын
No no no no no youve got it all wrong he should have been named Berry-Berry-Any-Tail-Lefty
@meremoo4 жыл бұрын
Again, Akira, you put together an amazing video. This one wins first prize, clearly.
@professionalwallflower59535 жыл бұрын
There's too many cats with two ears, like why not two tails or something?? jeez
@cheetochomperIol5 жыл бұрын
Why don’t Riverclan cats name thier fish? I mean...
@liljatupsu4 жыл бұрын
"Hollyleaf forgot the oven was on in the tunnels" is an underrated line
@Jordan-ge7to5 жыл бұрын
Warriors would have been so much better if TigerHeart/Star had 27 stripes on his back, instead of the most cannon design where he had 25. I'm appalled, so much so I burned every book with his name anywhere in it.
@lpsdoubletrouble70245 жыл бұрын
Wait so is that what started the fire, someone left the oven on?!?😂😂🤯
@wargiirl3 жыл бұрын
Ashfur and Bramblestar's love scene was amazing.
@anihutchinson24255 жыл бұрын
Blue Star didn't think that her kits would freaze to death in a snow storm parenting IQ 1000000.
@annoyedghoul72435 жыл бұрын
In the character descriptions, they never once mentioned Ashfur’s beautiful long locks of hair. I can’t believe the authors got their own book wrong.
@warriorspeace_kat40993 жыл бұрын
The different voices you made ajshdkashdkasjhd and w o w Everything flowed together in a terrible but smooth- I-
@ambrosia74835 жыл бұрын
Why was jay feathers name jay feather? It should have been Helen Keller and they should have made him deaf too!😤