What If AHSOKA AND MAUL Went To Mustafar To Find Anakin | Star Wars Fan Fiction

Thoughts? I hope you enjoy this as much as I enjoyed making it! Have a great day everyone 💙💚

[@ISawFiveHoursOfSleep]

Anakin: nOOoo, why would you save me? You see what I've become? KZbin Ads: Have you considered therapy?

[@storytellerx8]

Beautifully written

[@thestarwarsgalaxy]

Wow thank you!

[@ArmaniGaming445]

@@thestarwarsgalaxy hello there

[@Zeke313_Editz]

Fantastic! Really loved how maul tackled Anakin nearly into the lava!

[@thestarwarsgalaxy]

Glad you liked that part!

[@ARandomInternetUser08]

You might say, Maul "mauled" Anakin...

[@Zeke313_Editz]

@@ARandomInternetUser08 indeed lol

[@cjcampbell4799]

That was a really good story. There's a lot of fan fictions out there, but this one was tight.

[@Tamamo-no-Bae]

Little nitpick: Rex would have called Obi-wan General, not Commander. But I really loved this story! Well done

[@thestarwarsgalaxy]

Hey everyone! I hope you enjoy this fan fiction as much as I enjoyed writing it! It would mean a ton if you leave a like and subscribe, I appreciate you all 💙💚

[@kylejones865]

I loved it we really need a part 2 to this

[@majesticmsfc]

Yes endings are so so important to a story so many youtube fan fiction videos forget this and give us rushed and weak endings that really ruin it.

[@tonythehappynerd7241]

Would’ve been cool if after Anakin killed Maul, he’d say, “this is for Qui-Gon.”

[@That0therG]

As cool and brutal as that would be, I disagree. Anakin would be so far gone down the dark side that Qui-Gon would be the last thing he would be thinking about

[@ericgaines5470]

The thing that's funny is bith maul and Anakin are natural force beings maul being born with pure sith eyes but not being evil shows that he was like the father. Hear me out I've said it constantly the father is threason his children behave the way they do. He doesn't ever teach them how to coexist only ever to trys controlling them. If you need both light and dark to exist than you know the only control is by accepting it. Maul is untainted darkness to be shaped and molded however you allow it to be raised and influence. The same is for Anakin he's born capable of both he dark and light and his upbringing is what brings about the unbalanced. He is naturally balanced by birth the problem is a lack of understanding and outside influence. No one talks about the fact that every time anakin was giving into his anger Palpatine was influencing it with darkside spells and artifacts he showed anakin as a child. He literally was always manipulating him trying to make it seem as if it was Anakin's own thoughts. They were his. Every thought he had of his own was telling him to run away. That was the force trying to get him out of the way of manipulation. Ulyes he succeeded in the end but the force was constantly trying to bring him back and out because it knew the jedi couldn't stop it because they couldn't see. They were willfully blind.

[@splashnskillz37]

Star Wars: Episode III - Rise of the Chosen One

[@imember7375]

what if obi wan turned to the dark side after satine's death

[@thestarwarsgalaxy]

Check my What if playlist, you’ll love what u find haha

[@petervishnakov]

why does this have under 1000 likes this is so cool

[@notapplicable1296]

This is excellent I was reluctant but fool was i. Straight fire

[@thestarwarsgalaxy]

Haha great to hear!

[@arrryan55]

Thanks for this beautiful story, it really is a safe haven for people coming from the end of the clone wars series 😭

[@dylantuten6621]

This was awesome! I was surprised how maul went out I thought anakin and obi were gonna body him just for interfering.

[@rowdyverboven9286]

we need part 2😊

[@randywilliams5628]

Wow!!! Really well crafted! Thank you for this. I have imagined what would have happened if Ashoka met Anikan on Mustafar. But she died. You thought about teamwork! Great idea.

[@thestarwarsgalaxy]

Thank you very much! I’m happy to hear you enjoyed! 💙💚

[@matthewdunlap3700]

A lot of plot holes yes but the idea and execution are like poetry

[@dylanaarts6043]

There's so much potential after this. Sidious already had Exegol, he'll be jumping bodies there all the time. He knows anakin will have a child too. He'll send spies to find out more about this potential apprentice. Sidious finds out that anakin got twins. This sparks an old interest of sidious, a dyad in the force. What could be stronger than the bond of the 2 children of THE CHOSEN ONE.

[@JM00237]

What if anakin had a father?

[@KetamineUser69]

Bro was fatherless 💀💀💀

[@kyberart7]

Love this what if❤❤

[@IsobelleBenedict]

Loved the story. Really great descriptions, plot and voices, although I noticed Obi-Wan sounded Scottish

[@soularprimestudios5930]

Hmmm all three main clone wars jedi killing Sideous didn't see that coming honestly

[@albertoespinoza1658]

Excelente, muy muy bueno. A very great story. Congratulations

[@havesomeculture]

I hate this world and I hate my life, but my fundamental interests like this keep me going.

[@stevenl1706]

Star Wars won’t end your hatred but just distract you. You need to focus on why you hate your life and this world. What is the source of your hatred? Your problem is spiritual. Seek the LORD God. Find him in his Son Jesus Christ and that hatred will turn to love for your life and the *people* of this world. You will only hate this world more if you find Christ, but your love for God flow upwards. Star Wars isn’t going to save you from your sin. This is your distraction.

[@CT-1975]

You should stream republic commando or jedi fallen order

[@thestarwarsgalaxy]

I want to play KOTOR for the first time on stream!

[@chasetopsecret2018]

You will do a part 2

[@chadfox6030]

Maul would of been killed easily by Vadar

[@zc16_]

i wouldnt say easily but he wouldn’t have lasted all that long

[@drippyandcursed]

Actually happened in one of the comics Vader almost lost to a clone of maul and had to stab himself through his chest to kill the clone

[@Andrea-tz7bm]

​@@drippyandcursedthis is suited Vader , pre suited Vader is a beast he would have killed maul

[@ImortalPvP]

Remember anakin hadn’t grown all the way at this point, I think it would have been more even than people think, though I think Anakin would win

[@drippyandcursed]

@@Andrea-tz7bm yes he would

[@haydenfowle7576]

Rex should of used Stun on The Corascuant Guards because they were his brothers too

[@dylanh7600]

Maul would be shredded by anakin he has no emotional attachment to him

[@SpideyEdits96283]

Nice bro

[@moabman6803]

I don't think Padme would go back to Anakin at this point.

[@davidhall9627]

ahsoka, obi wan, annakin a Triad?

[@thestarwarsgalaxy]

Yup!

[@markanthonyona8730]

What of Obi-wan was the chosen one

[@oliversherman2414]

Rex should've called Obi-Wan general instead of commander. Other than that, great story

[@sirujano177]

Why did I read it as "What if Logan Paul went to Mustafar to find Anakin" 💀

[@thestarwarsgalaxy]

Thats my next one for sure hahaha

[@MartinCorrigan-t9l]

I loved this story but i am getting fed up with anakin getting away with everything and not face any consequences for god its like every 1 is in love with him or something he nearly killed his who is pregnant he killed innocents in the temple who had nothing to do with the war and even killed children in the world anakin would be hanged or killed on the spot or in prison for life for god seek make him face real consequences for a change and stop making padme go back to toxic fuck

[@KathyXie]

Poor Maul, he can't even win in Fan fiction

[@therealnearwater]

I can imagine a scenario in which Anakin, or Vader, after killing Maul, ends up catching Obi-Wan and Ahsoka off guard and using a powerful force push to send them flying, his motives were solely to learn the power to save Padmé, believing he still could, even though he literally choked her moments ago. The duo would get up and ignite their lightsabers with Anakin doing the same, charging at Obi-Wan first but Ahsoka defends him and the three begin to fight. Anakin is outnumbered for a moment until Sidious lands his shuttle and walks out with a group of Coruscant Guard troopers. All three of them would sense the Emperor's presence. "The apprentice is still alive," he says. The Coruscant Guard troopers lift their blasters at the two Jedi, but they are caught off guard when they are shot down by Rex, one by one. Sidious notices this and blasts force lightning at Rex, who is thrown back immediately. He then ignites his lightsabers and spins in the air to join the fight. The battle was now even, Obi-Wan and Ahsoka vs Sidious and Vader. The two Jedi tried desperately to get Anakin to think about what he was doing, but Vader keeps up his relentless assault. Obi-Wan would engage Sidious while Ahsoka would engage Vader. Obi-Wan's Form III defensive style of Soresu would help him be able to block and parry many of Sidious' strikes, and Ahsoka would begin to struggle against her former master, the chosen one. Sidious would have enough though and blasted his UNLIMITED POWER of force lightning at Obi-Wan, but Kenobi blocks the lightning with his saber, similar to how he did with Dooku in Attack of the Clones. But Sidious' lightning was far more deadly than Dooku's. It would be a while before the Jedi Master was eventually overwhelmed with lightning, and he couldn't hold it for any longer, and so he eventually got electrocuted, and Sidious then picked him up with the force and threw him into the lava. Ahsoka watches as Obi-Wan was thrown into the lava, and this gave Vader an opening and he disarms her. He force chokes Ahsoka before he slices her through the chest, killing her. Sidious would congratulate his apprentice for his success, but Vader, realizing that Padmé is still near her ship, would prepare to rush towards her. But let's say that in this timeline, Sidious actually cares about Anakin, and tells him that he will be there to witness the birth of Padmé's children, in the hopes that she can be saved. Anakin is hopeful at that moment, and he rushes to Padmé's ship and brings her in with the assistance of C-3PO and R2-D2. Once Vader leaves Mustafar, Sidious does too and follows him to the Grand Medical Facility on Coruscant, where Padmé would have a safe birth with both Anakin and Palpatine by her side, but she didn't really like the fact that the Emperor was around, and she still hoped there was good in Anakin. Anakin was so relieved to see that she had given birth safely, and he thanked his master for everything. Sidious did see a lot of potential in Luke and Leia, and he offered to train them alongside Anakin. Anakin is taken aback by this, but he believes it could work, so he agrees. Padmé on the other hand did not. She did not want her children to become like their father, so she said that she would rather raise them on her own. Palpatine honestly did not like this, and Anakin was quite reluctant on letting Padmé raise them on their own, but he decided it would be best to do so. But Sidious felt a lot different about it. Anakin, however, would try to make a compromise with them. He could have him and Palpatine train Luke in the ways of the dark side while Padmé would raise Leia to become more of a political figure. They would both be taken aback by this, but it was eventually agreed on. So Anakin and Palpatine took Luke in and left Padmé to raise Leia, where she chose to raise her on Alderaan, since that was wherr her close friend Bail Organa lived and was a peaceful world where she could teach her about how politics works in general, and teach her to fight for democracy, freedom, and peace for the citizens of the galaxy. Meanwhile Anakin and Palpatine would be on Coruscant where later Palpatine presents Anakin to the Senate, propping up Anakin as a hero who saved him from the attempt on his life. Padmé watched in horror as Vader voiced his frustrations with the Jedi in particular, most notably the Jedi Council. He wouldn't be lying, but he would be saying it in a certain point of view that made the Jedi look worse than they already did. He voiced the entire story, how he was told to wait in the council chambers, then when he rushes out from the temple into his speeder, heading into the Chancellor's office, and when Windu was about to kill Palpatine, he stepped in and saved him. He also voiced how he went to Mustafar and executed the evil Separatist leaders. Vader made a promise to the galaxy that he would hunt down any remaining Jedi for their crimes against the Empire. The Senate erupts with applause, as Padmé sheds a tear, realizing how far her husband had truly fallen, but she still hoped there was good in him. Anakin quickly became the poster boy of the Empire, similar to how he had been the poster boy of the Republic. He alone would inspire millions of galactic citizens to join the Empire, as everyone who had respected Anakin throughout the Clone Wars would believe that the Empire's actions were fully justified. To be continued.

[@ManutdLucki]

what if anakin was raised by the force itself/ the force gods of mortis

[@chriselliott171]

Sideous would have no hope if this happened... but i'd still LOVE to see this fan fiction

[@Xmetalfanx]

FORGETTING plot armor .... i would say there is only a few who could turn Anakin back to the light, "right away" ... Padme maybe #1 but Ahsoka was always a #2 in my book. that sort of brother/sister bond they had .. .and hell she left the order too as we all know ... she could show how its totally possible to stay in the light but NOT be a Jedi ... also pointing out stuff like "the ability to cheat death sounds like a sith trick and isn't possible" sort of a friend/little sister to Anakin when he feels like he's even being judged my Obi Won

[@thestarwarsgalaxy]

Agreed for sure

[@wizard_of_poz4413]

I mean padme kinda did the opposite of redeem him

[@TherealKRG-d7p]

I got an idea what if maul and palpatine worked together in clone wars

[@CT-1975]

He already made one similar to that

[@shrimpwalk8230]

I don't really see how Ahsoka could hold her own in the fight against Sidious. She barely held her own against Maul perhaps only a day or two ago, and now she's up against Darth Sidious? I don't know about this one, chief. Even with Obi-Wan and Anakin there, I don't feel like she would have survived that battle, not to mention the fact that Obi-Wan was removed for a good portion of that battle.

[@kevinkegerise9187]

I like the story but a few things I don’t think I can see happening are one Maul lasting so long against Anakin and two Ahsoka being able to contend with Sidious even with help.

[@joshuaschreiber1914]

Ashoka was able to match Maul and even defeat him. And Maul was able to temporarily hold his own against Sidious on at least one occassion. I certainly wouldn't put Ashoka on par with Sidious by any means, but she has proven to be on a tier between Obi Wan and Maul, meaning she could definitely at least hold her own here, even if she is the weakest duelist of the group.

[@joshuaschreiber1914]

As for Maul against Anakin I wholeheartedly agree. He's strong, but Ashoka could beat him, and she was weaker than Anakin. Tbh I would tier them at: Anakin=Obi Wan>Ashoka>Maul

[@satinekenobi4ver855]

Unfortunately I don’t believe that Ahsoka would be in the battle with Palpatine/ Sidious for long as she wasn’t a good enough duelist to of any sort use to Anakin or Obi wan infact she would be a distraction to them both so it is likely that Anakin would send her off to look after Padme knowing that she is not skilled enough or experienced enough to help him and Obi wan face Sidious. Obi wan and Anakin at their strongest and powerful when they are together and they have a bond to each other the hasn’t been seen in the Jedi Order for more a thousand years or more. Anakin and Ahsoka bond is weak comparison. So she is the last one out Padme and Obi wan who could bring Anakin back to the light if padme and Obi wan couldn’t.

[@dianesinger9729]

Enjoyed it especially Maul dropping in the lava talk about poetic justice

[@maxccrowfeather3019]

Maul would absolutely destroys Anakin

[@chrisphipps432]

Ashoka and maul would be crushed by Anakin at this point

[@chromxrobinandcorrinxcamil9031]

Interesting. Very… interesting.

[@y.n.tryone4683]

Maul would have beaten this verison of Vader if he wasn’t cocky but Ashoka would have stopped him

[@Fatherofheroesandheroines]

Kenobiiiiiiiiii

[@Cluelessgamerrrr]

What if Darth Vader beat obi wan and then killed palpatin? Loved the video dude

[@lgpt9832]

i believe Ahsoka would have died in the duel but that's just my opinion

[@martincorrigan8240]

Should of just let maul kill anakin

[@BonnieThebunny7051]

What if Darth Vader was had General Grievous's cybernetics?

[@TheHighborn]

Anakin became the strongest 'cos he got all the exp for both maul, and sidius. Truly, a dick move, to loot everything with the killing blows

[@sussysuchomimus]

What if Aayla Secura trained anakin?

[@slipknotfan666-nv7mx]

Watching a second time because the vid is cool af

[@markusbelden4569]

Oh this is going to be fun😈