What If Ghostbusters II Was Better? - FanScription

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[@christenorio9555]

Review Netflix big mouth!

[@noenya8047]

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[@cjwrench07]

Matrix Revolutions. Where they actually reveal Zion is just another level of the Matrix, that’s why Neo could control a squid, and maybe they were all just an experiment of slightly future humans to make a Truly sentient AI. With it requiring the 7 version of “The One/Neo”(experimental AI) to get to that point of true choice not based on just an algorithm, but real wants, needs, and desires.

[@gageperuti5519]

Do the Schumacher Batman films. Both of them. If you can't, at least do Batman and Robin.

[@deshawnedwards6412]

Doug for next Disneycember can you do Collage Road Trip George of the Jungle 2 The Game Plan Race to Witch Mountain Bedtime Stories G-Force Prom Max Keeble's Big Move

[@Evanski]

10:23 "Are you telling me the universe runs like New York city? We just ship our trash across the river and make it Jerseys problem?" "More or less." *"I love it!"*

[@PannierLaw]

I honestly don’t see a difference between that and real life...

[@CycloneShadowYT]

That actually sounds like something they would say lol.

[@ackbarfan5556]

Evanski I loved GB2, but that line sealed it. I want this version more.

[@nicholastosoni707]

Although there IS the remote possibility of a more powerful entity tunnelling through from that world into ours. At the risk of invoking another, similarly-named franchise, need I remind you of Prime Evil?

[@michaelnelson1127]

That line actually made me laugh out loud.

[@mr.e5947]

That line you gave Peck towards the climax of the script was amazing "Three things: My mother said I was being petty to those men, I trust my mother way more than I trust anyone in the world, and she's been dead for 14 years" simply wow.

[@KyrstOak]

Really? I thought it was sort of empty and hollow.

[@Deathshead1923]

@@KyrstOak I personally like the idea of making Peck a more three-dimensional character instead of just an obstructionist prick.

[@ermacmacro7136]

@@KyrstOak Well in both movies, he's been thrashing the Ghostbusters because he thought Ghosts weren't real. If his own dead mother talks sense into him, that would make him change fast

[@crazyjack66]

I loved it too. I could even see William Atherton acting that scene.

[@experiment0789]

@@KyrstOak I personally like the idea of making Peck a more three-dimensional character instead of just an obstructionist prick, and while a little cliches it's kind of humorous to hear this grown man talk about his mom... that and I the fact that she being the reason he begrudgingly (I imagine) starts believing in ghosts is for me totally reasonable.

[@simontrainbrainz6038]

This fan script would have made more money, sold better, and would be kick ass if they made this.

[@gailcbull]

I love the idea of ghosts of Viggo's past victims getting to take their revenge on him. That would've been a lot more satisfying then positively-charged pink slime. I also love the idea of the statues becoming possessed by evil spirits as though the ghosts are using the statues as armour. It creates a nice continuity with the positively-possessed Statue of Liberty, and the role art plays in the return of Viggo.

[@BugsyFoga]

"HERE WE GO AGAIN" -Every cheap Sequel ever

[@ImpinAintEazy]

Coughepisode7cough

[@dippin4dots]

Nathaniel Foga mama Mia didn't even try to hide it

[@tjjordan4207]

How about "OH GREAT, HERE WE GO A- Wait, that was new"

[@AbMaSync]

How about "They're/He's/She's back"

[@MovieFan1912]

Home Alone 2, anyone?

[@missemeriin]

I love the voices, but Heather is probably my favorite as snarky Dana

[@Tadicuslegion78]

I don’t know what Rob is considering next. But I can think of a couple: Conan the Destroyer, Batman Forever, the original X-men trilogy

[@kylemorello4787]

I've got three animated examples: foodfight, cartoon all Stars to the rescue, and drawn together.

[@ChannelAwesome]

+Tadicuslegion78 Thanks for the suggestions!

[@cjwrench07]

Channel Awesome matrix Revolutions. Please. Matrix 2’s ending was setting up such and amazing twist, and instead they went the safe “you’re all free now, and the world it as peace” final movie.

[@louisduarte8763]

@SmashStomp Inc Maybe that's how the script was written; notes taken during a D&D game.

[@kylemorello4787]

@@cjwrench07 yeah, that does sound pretty generic.

[@BoundaryBreak]

I know theres lots of detractors for the second movie. But I loved it

[@themoviecritic1092]

Same

[@usern4metak3ns]

It was dope and came from the heart.

[@JimmyNotes]

I actually prefer the second Ghostbusters movie. I mean, they turned the Statue of Liberty into a megazord. 🤯

[@usern4metak3ns]

@@JimmyNotes I definitely enjoyed the peaceful and restoration aspect of the second ghostbusters. Really heartwarming concept that a psychokinetic ooze can feel strong emotions of Love and Hate. Totally a yin yang gang movie.

[@jahimjauh-hey5653]

Same

[@ninjamaster3453]

Thing i hated most about 2 was that the entire city and world forgot that trans dimensional ghosts that trashed the city before their eyes 4 years prior.

[@usern4metak3ns]

What are you talking about? That was a massive gas leak that caused hallucinations amongst the cities population... No ghosts or marshmallow men...

[@Naiverine]

@@usern4metak3ns what the hell are you talking about

[@sarahsims6164]

@@Naiverine it's a joke.

[@MovieFan1912]

One would think that the Ghostbusters would be commended for saving the world after their run in with Gozer, but instead, everyone just acts like it never happened. It makes as much sense as making the moon landing a front to investigate an alien spacecraft that crash landed on the moon.

[@Farlomous]

Just finding this comment and at the time I thought it was dumb too. Sadly tho, it foreshadowed the future really well in that once the big bad is defeated, the powers that be slowly stop reminding people and then they start to say untrue facts about it. Then they start attacking it until now it was a bad deed to fight the bad thing and it was misunderstood.

[@kingjammm3500]

I would want this version! It seems like a more logical and contempt story I would rather see this version then the actual version it seems more logical and with the lore it's an amazing fan scription. I love it I also love how you added Winston into the story more I always hated how he wasn't even there. I love that there was no baby , more lore based story , i like how fana and Peter are fiances instead of dating then leaving each other , it's more structural and is very in line with the story Edit:OMG thank you all for the likes!!!!

[@TBustah]

I think you mean “competent”.

[@TheSameGoobyGuy]

You said fana in the last paragraph

[@Realjeffthong12]

Dana*

[@neffyboy]

While I like Ghostbusters 2, it would be interesting to see this version of it.

[@dragon-tamer7956]

The word you're looking for is BETTER.

[@videogamehunter820]

I stand by you. For what it is, I enjoy what we got but this is pretty good.

[@xanderrey1879]

Oh my f***king god I love this movie. I’m a fan of GB 2 to be honest, but I do need to exclaim “this would have been awesome!”

[@ChannelAwesome]

+Xander Rey Thanks! Tha

[@BananaHoovyJ.Rabbit]

@@ChannelAwesome ah yes. My favorite word Tha

[@illuminocalypse5210]

This version is really good - too good, frankly. To the point that it almost pisses me off that we got what we got instead of something more like this. It COULD have been done!

[@BugsyFoga]

Then Ghostbusters 3 might've been a thing way before

[@dnmstarsi]

Yep and the game years later would've been the unofficial Ghostbusters 4.

[@cjwrench07]

dnmstarsi that game is the official GB3, until the new GB3 movie proves itself.

[@dnmstarsi]

@@cjwrench07 You misunderstood my comment, dude.

[@lostbutfreesoul]

Yeah, but 3 writes itself after you have already established other dimensions existing. Imagine if the ghostbuster's 3 team used the same doorway trick only happened to stumble onto ghostbuster's 2 dimension. Then you have the possibility of two similar overlapping dimensions beginning to collide and the mayhem that causes. That EPA guy can have the smuggest of looks on his face as they are shut down for a third time for starting a twisted "apocalypse."

[@tylerdenaro639]

I hope that they do a Ghost busters Three in the future because that would be a great movie too watch 😂😊😁😉🙂

[@matthewrooney8834]

Well done rob, you gonna make this a series

[@WalterCulture]

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[@MatCor-ty7zi]

"Are you telling me the universe runs like New York City? We just ship our trash across the river and make it Jersey's problem?" "More or less." "I love it!" This made me smile.

[@RVDDP2501]

I really enjoyed this, I'd really like to see more of these, Alien 3, The Fly II, The Lost World: Jurarric Park, RoboCop 2, The Blues Brothers 2000 and Son of the Mask to name a few :)

[@JacobNovember]

Blues Brothers 2000 is a prime candidate. The movie as it stands, I refuse to acknowledge exists. Aside from losing Belushi, that movie had problems.

[@nitro-verse5311]

Say what you want about robocop 2 and the fly 2 but everyone cant deny that the last fight with crane was kickass and the fly vomiting a dudes faces off was metal AF

[@dustywaynemusic6297]

Robocop 2 is a masterpiece

[@archivey-h8e]

Robocop 2 wasn't that bad honestly, it was no Terminator 2, but it was decent.

[@RVDDP2501]

@Sean Bassett * slaps head * how did I forget MIB 2?

[@thefonzkiss]

End credit scene - Walter Peck gets possessed or finds some haunted artefact, teasing another sequel.

[@residentgrey]

He can be forced to start another team after a major experience or another portal opening. Someone can steal the portal cannon/mine plans if not the weapon itself.

[@BananaHoovyJ.Rabbit]

Actually, this should lead into the video game

[@oryanstudios2252]

I love pecks monologue about his mother. It's great to give him a more well rounded character, while doing it in a clever creative way. Cudos!

[@Spindler2007]

Wow. This would have been amazing to see. It still has that darker feel the actual sequel had while keeping the humour of the first movie. When you mentioned how the court case should have played out with the slime coming up and releasing the Scolari Brothers, I thought to myself "that is exactly how I thought that should be like when Doug reviewed Ghostbusters 2". I definitely liked the idea of Vigo being powered by fear instead of anger. Seeing more ghosts including "good" ones to help fight Vigo is a great idea. The idea of Vigo wanting to marry Dana due to her past experiences with the supernatural is an interesting concept but I couldn't help but think of the ending of Beetlejuice where he tries to marry Lydia before the Maitlands stop him. Still the new plan for Vigo is an interesting concept.

[@TimeLordParadox]

I liked the original sequel. But this is a million times better. :D

[@MineKurtMininer]

Especially because of how we got this foreshadowed by Nostalgia Critic

[@thrillergirl021]

Wow, I love this fan script idea for the channel, I hope to see more in the future!

[@WalterCulture]

We have 3 other episodes up already! Check them out! kzbin.info/aero/PL0AQIMR-tpolSV_hNOJ_V2GJhq3heZpfv

[@Madam_StarFall]

Imagination is a beautiful thing. I could see this playing in my head and it was a lot of fun. Thank you

[@MythoMead]

I personally liked the ideas and changes to the script, and the use of iconic statues and land marks as well as artwork in the museum is brilliant. Vego is all about possession so having his haunting reflect that is a great change. Now here is a challenge, can you fix the Super Mario Bros movie?

[@KRSStudios]

FanScription: What If Dorothy Never Left OZ

[@DarkKnightofAnime]

yep definitely a better take on the sequel especially the Walter Peck stuff, although some of those puns kinda made me facepalm

[@theaychgee]

Good God some one get this guy in touch with the people that can make this happen..... damn good.

[@rodster6campingprepper]

For the most part I like it as it is though I wish we'd seen the ghostbusters interact with Slimer and explain why he's haunting the firehouse and that Egon and Ray use him to study. Some of the dynamic between Slimer and Peter from the cartoon would have been fun to see on screen too.

[@Foustdoodles98]

I really love this script! 34:06 I also love the parts where it's drawn, like it could fit in animation! I love how Janine is designed in the Ghostbuster suit, she looks hot!!

[@GBmovieluv]

I liked her part in this one too. Tho I find it interesting her being in love with Lewis was kept in this version. I still think her in love with Egon is better. Especially how it was carried over to GB Afterlife. Maybe Lewis's love interest could be a random character. Like one that saw him on the news of the Gozer attack

[@JoeltheSwedishDragon]

Dunno about yourself(and I also thought the original sequel was okay at best), but as a whole, this script sounds waaay better than what we got, mate. So good that it could easily be made, whether back then or today. And if it's to be made some time in the future as an animated fan-adaptation at least, with the voice work of you guys, I'd be so happy to help animate it.

[@CassDaMan1138]

I actually liked Ghostbusters 2.

[@neffyboy]

I like Ghostbusters 2 as well.

[@gtsgreatteacherscathach5550]

Same here but I wished this version was a thing now, but still I enjoy Ghostbusters 2.

[@Slayerlord0]

@@gtsgreatteacherscathach5550 Same.

[@Fractorification]

Me too, but this is waay better.

[@CaptAwesumNo1Zone]

You guys are not alone, I STAND WITH YOU, YOU ARE NOT ALONE.

[@Sci-FiActionMovieReviews]

When he said, Ray should mention the ancient burial grounds to Peck and Peter tells him not to ruin the surprise. I would have said don't ruin our chances for a potential client.

[@elizabethhurlbut1475]

That was a brilliant retelling of the Ghostbuster sequel.

[@ChannelAwesome]

+Elizabeth Hurlbut Thanks!

[@braincandyproduction976]

Your cut is so much better and now I wish I could see it on screen. Damn, it's so good!

[@ChannelAwesome]

+Brain Candy Production Thanks for the kind words!

[@emanuelrojas2]

Nostalgia Critic got his wish

[@Czah5]

That episode of TRGB when Peter gets possessed literally gave me nightmares as a kid. (FYI, this concept movie was so amazing that I am pissed now that it wasn't the movie)

[@Vercalos]

OK. I actually like Ghostbusters 2, but I really really *really* wish we had this version. I just almost fell out of my chair laughing at the scene you just described with Peck's little heart-to-heart

[@Lesley_RedRhody]

Rob, you had me until you called Ray an idiot. He’s not! Childlike? Perhaps. An aspect of his personality that was greatly exaggerated for the animated series. Not that there’s anything wrong with that. 😉 Seriously, though: As much as I respect your opinion and can appreciate the effort it takes to write for FanScription, you’re wrong about Ray. Dan Aykroyd is the mother fucking *KING* of exposition! If I remember correctly, he wrote most of his own dialogue. When it comes to delivering lines that have any kind of paranormal jargon- dates, cultures, religious beliefs, you name it- Aykroyd sells it like he absolutely, positively knows what he’s talking about! He did the same thing in Sneakers. By the way, I have nothing against the idea that Vigo should have possessed Peter instead. I just wanted to throw my humble objection in defense of my fellow Southpaw!

[@alexixeno4223]

Agreed. He was just childlike is all. Which is why I think he was the usual target for those type of things in the cartoon.

[@Undeadpriest94]

I had a very similar idea for a blog: Cinimatic Repair. The idea was to take a movie that had a solid core with potential to be good but repair all its problems. I'm not upset that you guys are doing something like this. In fact, I'm happy that somebody else is doing this kind of stuff. Keep this up.

[@TheHeroExodus]

Hmmm a whatif i can follow almost 100%. Change a thing or 2 and you'd be golden ponyboy. Shame 2 wasnt like this. Im sure it would have spawned a third within the 90s and maybe a 4th into the 2000. It'd probably rest a while afterwards but atleast ramis would have gotten to be a part of em. R.I.P. Harold "Egon Spengler" Ramis

[@teaguehansberry3135]

I loved what you did with Winston's character in this would be sequel!

[@Slayerlord0]

I'll always like Ghostbusters 2 but...yeah, I kinda wish this was a thing, now. Gotta say, though. During the "upgraded" ghosts run amok scene, need to keep the scampering fur coat and the Titanic gag. Best part of the whole movie.

[@Craxin01]

Someone invent a time machine so they can pitch this over the original version!

[@delyon5344]

That would cause the bootstrap paradox

[@Craxin01]

@@delyon5344 Not sure I know what a bootstrap paradox is.

[@delyon5344]

@@Craxin01 there’s videos that explain it a lot better than I can. It might also be closer to the grandfather paradox.

[@Craxin01]

@@delyon5344 Grandfather paradox is you killing your grandfather before he has a chance to conceive your father, thus you were never born so couldn't go back in time to kill your grandfather. The little I saw looking up bootstrap paradox is a self-contained loop where A leads to B and B leads back to A ad infinitum. Not sure if I got that right though.

[@delyon5344]

@@Craxin01 yeah so the grandfather part of that paradox is the example. If you replace the grandfather with the ghostbusters 2 movie when you send the new script back you kill the ghostbusters 2 original which prevents you from ever going back with the new script.

[@DigiRangerScott]

What if HE-MAN was a Ghostbuster?

[@andrewwblanchard6037]

BY THE POWER OF GRAYSKULL DON'T CROSS THE STREAMS

[@ninjamaster3453]

It would've flopped harder than the 1987 live action movie.

[@RedCloude]

Well, Skeletor does look like a ghost. though it would be interesting if Skeletor gets haunted and calls He-man for help. Skeletor: He-man help I'm being haunted by some ghosts. Nnyaaaaaahh!

[@Ironcabbit]

Then he’d be Jake Kong or Eddy Spencer.

[@J.Dome.A]

"I want you to do what I do every day, Dr. Venkman. Your job." Now that is a good line of dialogue.

[@michaelwalsh9616]

I'd love to see this script adapted into a comic

[@pauloltman4960]

22:44 that "three things" just gave me like legit chills!!

[@RedArmyReenactor]

God this would have been so much better of a movie! I would love to hear what they think it would be like if they kept the kid but made it the child of Vinze (sp?) and Zuul? And Vigo wants this child specifically because it was conceived while Louis and Dana were possessed by Sumerian Demigods!

[@LextheRobot]

Then the film would have needed to come out in 1985 instead of 1989. Unless the child gestated for an extra four years.

[@RedArmyReenactor]

LextheRobot why? Since the 1930’s we’ve been making movies that are set before they’ve come out. Why couldn’t they make the movie set in 1986?

[@LextheRobot]

@@RedArmyReenactor Good point. I'm just used to fans recurringly asking "Wait, is Louis Oscar's father?" without doing the math between the two existing films.

[@matteoar]

The Peck scene would have been hilarious. Now that I think about it, this whole plot would have been great.

[@oakenshadow6763]

"Alright, a blond bimbo! Nobody Linda Blairs me! Say hi to your kitten for me!" You can hear him start to laugh at the end, and could that not make you crack up? 30:37

[@austinroundsgallery83]

I got an idea for the next Fanscription episode: *What if Ghostbusters 3 was made?*

[@napamodesto8001]

This was actually very good! I only wish Hollywood writes like this.

[@amandaallen5038]

Holy hell, why aren't you writing Ghostbusters movies!?

[@JackedThor-so]

Holy hell, this would be the best thing ever - WAY more interesting and satisfying than what we got!

[@denzelperry7024]

The courtroom scene in 2 with Louis being fed his statement by Venkman is golden. Sorry, Ghostbusters 2 is superior for me for this and other reasons I can't be bothered to convince you with. Wouldn't change a single thing.

[@thefonzkiss]

Intriguing opinion. Totally wrong but intriguing. One or two funny scenes doesn’t make up for the rest of it being shit. Just about every friggin scene in the first one has comedy gold in it.

[@denzelperry7024]

@Dodge Morningstar it's my story and I'm sticking to it 😊 it is my sincere opinion indeed, thanks for appreciating that even in disagreement 👍

[@pickering86]

If I were to add one thing, during the final battle with Vigo, the rush of ghosts almost pulls him through the portal, or just past the doorway and he starts pulling himself back out. Then we hear a roar and the giant monster they'd seen when testing the new traps crashes its huge head through the doorway, swallowing Vigo in one bite. It pulls itself back inside and then they close the portal.

[@Goremaid]

I love the first week of the month cos I always enjoy this show (and that sounds cheesy but I genuinely mean it)

[@ChannelAwesome]

+Goremaid Thanks for watching!

[@robart1979]

This is really great Rob good job man I couldn't have come up with anything better and now all we need to do is invent a time machine

[@MovieFan1912]

Why didn’t we get this as the sequel? It recaptures what made the original good while also adding in new things to keep it interesting. You know, the things a sequel SHOULD do.

[@armorpro573]

I guess the movie executives thought differently

[@billymccrary2246]

What if Rocky was the Blue Turbo Ranger in Turbo: A Power Rangers Movie? What if The Amazing Spider-Man 2 were different?

[@nitro-verse5311]

Ur first suggestion completely washes away the second I mean Where did u think of that man? Hahaha

[@rodddossantos1437]

Well, obviously this would have been better than the ‘89 sequel, but I wish more people would experience and talk about the video game (the newer one). Very cinematic and written by Harold Ramis & Dan Aykroyd, and voiced by the original cast of actors. It really is something quite special.

[@BuckarooBanzai84]

Ok, I'll concede one more thing; I agree Winston was dealt a bad hand in this one. He went from being the everyman-character we were supposed to relate with, to being practically a cartoon. That being said, I'm glad you still agreed that Liberty was an essential element. (But yes, she should've had more to do.) =)

[@DelcoRanz93]

For the Montage scene I'd actually like to see a combination of ghosts as well as the possessed Statues because my favorite part from the original version's montage was the Titanic, though the model would have to be reworked for accuracy regarding the damage caused by the Iceberg as well as the split and the implosion caused by the trapped air in the back half of the ship.

[@GBmovieluv]

Also we could still have Cheech's character say Well, better late than never. Along with having him in other scenes

[@goob_goob_gooby_goob]

"I love it!" Also, for the new film coming in 2020, they need to bring back Walter Peck. They could have do his usual hating the ghostbusters thing, then have him let them bust ghosts near the end of the middle but nearer the end. #RessurectThePeck

[@goob_goob_gooby_goob]

Well, sucks to be you... me... I mean, Afterlife was great but unfortunately no Peck :(

[@yaraaltro]

Okay, somebody should hireRob for reboot writing, he gets more of it than many screenwriters we now claim we hate do.

[@sammylane21]

But Peck can't go against them when he himself witnessed same said 100ft Marshmellow Man in downtown Manhattan as 1000's had the same. We even see Peck stare up to Mr. Stay Puffed moments before it crushes the roof off a Church building...... which is right next to Diana's building.

[@BananaHoovyJ.Rabbit]

You misunderstand how stubborn Peck is

[@zeo1chris]

PLEASE! at the very least SOMEONE makes an animatic of THIS version!!!! TY Rob

[@Prettywhite4awhiteguy]

I like it and sets up a sequel that would have Winston, Jeannie and Lewis as the main characters, might've been direct to video but I'm 39 and as a kid I would've liked that

[@roboticgamer4645]

Peter:Who could this happen? Dana:Maybe it's the "protection" you got at the dollar store. Me: *WOOOO*

[@BrianJNelson]

Yours is a much better version. I always thought GB 2 was pretty weak and I was disappointed. I had a really good idea for a third movie that required them to start franchises in other cities and then eventually reunite with their new teams in St Louis, this time using the Gateway Arch as a giant "ghost portal". I would have loved to have written this script.

[@brandonprater4613]

I personally loved this idea! The only thing I may have added (maybe), would be having the ancient cult that was referenced in the original be Viggo's victims who became the river of slime. But that aside... the dialogue, the ghost dimension, the Statue of Liberty fight, as well as everything/everyone from the sequel you managed to keep in the story... I'd watch that movie! Great FanScription, looking forward to the next!

[@DuelScreen]

Love it. Would have been a better movie but there's a problem. This would create an opening for a third movie. 😄

[@dustyrose192]

if these guys wrote it could work

[@jamesanderson1930]

Loved to see Walter and Rob tackle tmnt 2...

[@dnmstarsi]

And 3.

[@SirKirk2000]

@Blake Mallard which 2, SotO or OotS?

[@nitro-verse5311]

@@SirKirk2000 yes.

[@archivey-h8e]

2 is a mess, almost as bad as 3, they don't even use weapons, they removed Casey & for some reason they didn't put in Bebop & Rocksteady. it needs a total rewrite & to allow turtles to use weapons again, turtles should have a little violence to it even if it's for kids.

[@jamesanderson1930]

Really they could do any of them. The best turtles movie we got was the 2007 animated version. It can’t be that hard to make a love action turtles movie.

[@PeterHowe228]

I would love to hear what Ghostbusters 3 would look like if it had been the sequel to this version of Ghostbusters 2 that took place in the mid 90s (94/95/96)

[@visionaryventures12]

I’m at 6:04, but I already like the way your opening sequence parallels the original at this point which depicted the ghostbusters setting up their company. Here they’re defending it.

[@christophestevenson1448]

Wow. This could be done as a cartoon.

[@kisekhan2818]

I would pay to see this on the big screen , maybe a animated one so we get all the cast in( even the ones who are gone from this world)

[@69wandering]

Dammmmnnnn I would have loved this version!

[@patrickbrown1179]

I had an idea for Ghostbusters 3 a couple of years before the death of Harold Ramis, and wanted to show it to him really badly...unfortunately he never got to see it. I did show it to many MAJOR Ghostbuster fans out there and they loved the idea very much (including The Kool-Aid Guy, Tara Strong and Jason Marsden). After Harold Ramis died they liked the idea of Luis Tully coming in and taking his place...even though many people said Rick Moranis probably wouldn't have budged for it. But EVERYBODY said they'd rather have that, than what happened in the reboot.

[@timmoore9855]

"A sequel about nothing is incredibly difficult to do." Waiting for Godot 2: Electric Buggaloo

[@mikecabral2420]

Peck's three reasons are hilarious and surprisingly heartfelt and I feel like it could actually work and feel genuine without feeling unearned or corney.

[@primetimemonkyhours743]

Pecks Mom Joke was genius

[@robertrostad3930]

Great voice-work emulating the secondary actors. Your Mayor Lenny was spot on.

[@BBBHuey]

Ghostbusters 2 could've had the Ghostbusters still in business after the Gozer incident. Ever since they destroyed the Stay Puft Marshmallow Man, its marshmallow (still containing the kinetic essence of Gozer) would've spread out across New York. Turning New York into a semi-permanent hotbed of ghostly activity.

[@jenniferschillig3768]

So glad you kept Peter and Dana together! That's one approach to sequels I've always disliked--as you put it, the "here we go again" business, undoing some resolution from the first (for example, a romantic relationship) so the whole thing can happen all over again--instead of, say, DEVELOPING said resolution. That's what I loved so much about the Mummy movies--they kept Rick and Evie together and developed them as a couple/family.

[@Spindler2007]

I've just had a really interesting idea. What if this version of the movie was made but done in animation? I got this idea when I remembered seeing some lost episodes of Doctor Who released on dvd but done in animation. This could have a mix of audio from the actual movie along with new sound effects and new voice overs from the original remaining cast and some voice actors. What does everyone think?

[@bond77581]

I think Speilberg should hire you guys to be his writers. This run through story idea actually sounds really good. Nice work y'all!

[@theretrobro3826]

22:13...Now THAT'S good writing!

[@KSCGGuy14]

Once again, you've impressed me Fanscription. I saw Ghostbusters 2 just days ago. And while I didn't hate it from beginning to end, I felt as though there could’ve been some adjustments if the sequel wanted to be as memorable as the original, or at the very least a decent film.

[@katherinealvarez9216]

If executed well, this could work. Maybe someone can do a comic? Especially with the statues coming to life and the ghost dimension. I love those ideas.

[@theshockerpit7274]

Just so you guys know if you believe in the concept of multiple realities, then there is a chance that a Ghostbusters movie like this exists and there’s probably a good chance that many of you have seen it

[@gregmcmahon957]

I really love this Ghostbusters 2 fanfiction .

[@DiamondBatToons]

This was actually REALLY REALLY Good! As much as I liked the original, this was SO MUCH Better!! I LOVE The visual art y'all made and I LOVE what you did with Winston! Hell, I even Liked the idea of a mid-credits scene! Although, if I had to change ONE thing in the mid-credits scene, instead of having Janine, you should've had an unknown actor and have it be the scene of the ROOKIE FROM THE VIDEO GAME putting the pack on and end it there, thus starting the VIDEO GAME Story as if it were like a subtle sequel! (Ghostbusters game would be like a GB 2.5 if you will) That would've been AWESOME!

[@tajcee]

Yeah, looking back on it, Ghostbusters II didn’t need to happen.

[@nitro-verse5311]

But the chart says...

[@bubbythebear6891]

But I say...

[@expeditionbuster]

Specifically, the THIRD season of The Real Ghostbusters is what made it more for kids. That is when they re-cast a bunch of voices and change Janine from being a tough Brooklyn gal to a more motherly character.

[@dylanogg347]

Personally, I friggin' love Ghostbusters II, but I would watch the Hell out of this film!

[@Kagatoamv]

I like your take on an alternate GB2. I don't dislike GB2, but I still remember how disappointed I was that Dana and Peter were already broken up and Dana had a kid. For some reason that really bummed me out the first time I saw it.

[@6094598]

what Doug brought up in the Nostalgia Critic review on this was at least a good foundation and what Rob did was a good expansion

[@kamiinazo2133]

This would have made a good movie and I love that you kept the statue of liberty in the end. You kept the best of the original, ditched the bad and made it better.

[@GBmovieluv]

Especially more kick ass!