What If Naruto Had The Power Of Vegeta And Become A half Saiyan

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[@anthonyhuffman1692]

This author forgets the powers. He gives Naruto naruto contelled for anywhere. He's been before. Why is it taking 30 minutes to go back to somewhere? He's already been. The story is full of stuff like this, so the story really needs a rewrite. And the story has just a b******* ending. I'm sorry this story just ended up being blocked. It's antichromatic as hell.

[@anthonyhuffman1692]

This author has no sense of poetic prophecy. Way, that just blurts out and the exact story plot is not how prophecy works seriously. This story just kind of is monotonous. Or monotone, it doesn't feel like it's got any dimension to it and are too completely forgets about Haku. Basically abasically gives the metal finger to everybody. But it doesn't feel like he got any satisfaction. It's just, it's just bluh. Can someone tell me where I can get the hour and 43 minutes? Of my lock bag. It's not a bad story. It's just kind of wise story. Why rock the story this way? It ends anti-climatic and it's kind of just blogs along. You turned something like Naruto crossover dragon ball into boring.