What if Naruto is Killed By His Teammates And Makes A Deal With Shinigami | Part 1

#narutowhatif #killed #teammates #deal #shinigami

[@MichaelLee-zn6jw]

Part 2 please!!!

[@Naruto_742]

Please part 2 please please

[@calvinsmith8586]

I would love to see part 2❤❤❤🥰😍

[@davegravel882]

That's the fox and the former Hokage !!! Too bad it was never finished

[@RaiderMXV]

@davegravel882 not exactly it's different from the original and as the author of the fox and the former Hokage I can verify.

[@davegravel882]

@RaiderMXV Really well started the same way!! Sorry then my bad

[@RaiderMXV]

Sorry for not finishing this story.

[@GrandElderTurtle]

Did you make this???

[@GrandElderTurtle]

Did you make this???

[@loganheart7672]

No worries at least 12 others only made part 1 and gave up, I believe they also said this what if was too difficult to continue.

[@Kinesis999]

I know for a fact to my knowledge anyway {lol} this story isn't new but an old one that wasn't finished >.> a few that has this intro start but someone else... hell one where Tsunade goes back in time but in that world, she's reincarnated as her own child, but the child ends up absorbing that Tsunade hahaha but still ... sigh... these story keeps coming back likes its new...

[@RaiderMXV]

@@Kinesis999 you are correct for the original version. But this isn't it.

[@sgtmcgreevy-1852]

Can we have a part two please when possible?

[@TabithaSwartzlander]

Please post part 2.

[@anthonyhuffman1692]

I don't want anybody to get the wrong idea.I like this story but it has done something that is at the top of my pet peeve list. Okay, what's within being 15 in body? He supposed to be 12 if it's before the teams are assigned, people keep aging them up not and they totally missed one of the key pillars of the original story. They're supposed to be child soldiers for the love of God. The author wrote the story the way he did to draw attention to the child. Soldier problem in the world today. But people keep whitewashing gossip over it like it doesn't happen. Don't age him up. It does not enhance the story at all. I mean, the authors can write the story. The way they want to I still like the stories but that 1 thing, just frustrates me is because they feel like they're doing something good, just like these guys that eliminated the word rape thinking it's going to eliminate the act, but it doesn't it makes it hard to talk about? And before someone says it's not that bad. Yes, it is making them older has ripped one of the pillars out of the d*** Naruto story and quite frankly. It's getting a little frustrating that so many of these fan fictions come out and they do the same thanks. Everybody complains about cliche as well aging them up is a f****** cliche from hell. Another thing is they're talking about this. Artificial age of adulthood in the ninja world. You do realize that the age of adulthood is 12 if you graduate as a ninja from the ninja Academy? It's 12 no aphans or butts about it. It's 12 they can go and die for their village or their coentry seriously. Because people have gotten this. You've got a baby people till they're in their 20s in the United States and other parts of the world. They all think oh they're not adults. We're gonna keep them from smoking. Drinking and watching p*** until they're in their 20s. But you can go die for your country by joining the National Guard at 16. If your parents write off on it and at 17, you don't even need your parents permission as long as you graduated high school. And you can graduate high school any time if you go to the college or community college or community college in your area and take the adult education Diploma, which is not the same as AG. ED and adult education Diploma means you've finished everything for f***'s sake. Stop baby and people till they don't know how to take care of themselves. They're living in their mama's basements until they're in their late 30s for the love of God.

[@Shademon]

Put in title HAREM ! I stopped after 7 min !