When you kissed him for the first time || Jungkook ff

[@DeSireFanfiction]

If you enjoyed it do leave a comment 🤗 Y'all guys asking for one more part so okay I'll make one more part 😭 And 70+ comments for the last part then....

[@Nteamz_Lune]

loved it🥹🥹💜💜

[@Marufa_panda]

Tbh it was too good ...I CAN'T EXPLAIN MY HEARTBEAT AT THE END GURL😭...💃love you sis

[@blackpinkisanevolutionot4615]

I guess u have to make another bonus or better make it series 🥴atleast for - abt jk and y/n parents - what happend to those criminals - that escaping I hope u can elaborate it a little more, with precise situations - abt Mia?? - y/n foster parents .... I hope u make these points clear in another episode maybe...

[@Nteamz_Lune]

@@DeSireFanfiction thank you 😭😭but can u add scenes bout those criminals what happened also in the flashback yn jumped in the water so how did she survive etc.how did jk end up in the orphanage? Bout the adopted parents too and since both wish to find their parents do they find them or not so many more scenes needed for this story 😭😭u r really good with details please do add or make this a series please 😭😭

[@avneetkaur4830]

Plzzz fast.... i want both of them to find their families 😭😭😭❤❤❤

[@shreenidhi08]

12:29 "He understood, more than he wanted to admit." i wish i have someone as understanding like him in my life

[@bjp54985]

I wonder if tae is yn little brother . I dont think her parents are alive if her brother is in the orphanage . But somehow, they have a def connection. Awesome series. I can't wait for more .. I wonder if she will ever remember jungkook as being the one that got her out of there and how they separated. Or maybe tae was perhaps a victim as well but thry didn't get him and he landed there . Maybe the parents are still looking for their children. Her memories were very happy . Let's hope for an awesome ending from all this tragedy. Unfortunately this happens everyday . It's so sad to think

[@MakkaPakka-i6e]

agree!!

[@TaTa_Mic07]

GIRL ,You have a way with words😍

[@DeSireFanfiction]

🥹🫶

[@Taebear7]

3 episodes are too short for this masterpiece..definitely need a whole series

[@moonchildc3894]

It was beautiful 💜... absolutely loved it

[@marveledits993]

HEy I'll were being selfish but we need to see there families so can u give another Bonus part😅😅

[@Taebear7]

i really cant stop myself from praising your writing skills..love you..want more parts😁😍

[@DeSireFanfiction]

Thank you 🥹🫶

[@himangi770]

This might be one of my favorite work of yours. ❤

[@DeSireFanfiction]

🥹🫶

[@Taebear7]

girllll k drama director is coming for you.. you are just an amazing writer

[@Iloveme591]

As usual it was fabulous and fantastic...✨♥️✨🤧 beautifully written with delicacy and emotions uff !!...👏🏻...

[@DeSireFanfiction]

🥹🫶

[@cutebubbly]

Need bonus for this masterpiece

[@kashvigera11]

I really really loved this series, didn't expected this from the title, but it's actually incredible and mind blowing. Thnk u for writing. ❤

[@DeSireFanfiction]

🥹🫶

[@anushkakushwaha4592]

You know what make it a series ... even after the ending it feels like it should go on further... but whatever it would be your writing is fabulous...

[@DeSireFanfiction]

🥹🫶

[@alexandra3767]

This was cute and romantic 🥰❤

[@Maha_The_Army]

Gurl can't wait for the last part 😍 iam very excited for the last one as I am eagerly waiting to read how you will show them expressing their love and them being together in the future.

[@lix_yongbok]

I like this story how some parts it happens in real life

[@lonelyflower1510]

Finally you are here😭😭😭 I was wondering if I will ever get the bonus part or not. My wait is over🥳

[@DeSireFanfiction]

Hope u enjoyed it🫶

[@lonelyflower1510]

@@DeSireFanfiction I loved it. And waiting for the next part now. My curiosity just increased.👀

[@m02-049]

Yup please make another bonus part pretty 🥺

[@shreenidhi08]

ooooooooo didnt saw this coming anyways im way beyond happy now

[@DeSireFanfiction]

❤️❤️

[@farzanayasmin6139]

owoo it’s too good Can you make another part of it 🤗🤗🤗

[@Nteamz_Lune]

sooooooo beautifully written again🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🤌🏻🤌🏻🤌🏻thank you for writing a scene with taehyun it was so amazing and it still doesn’t feel complete with thanks for watching i need another bonus 😭😭but loved each n every scene of yn n jk how u express n everything this part too goes in my rewatch playlist n lol i got so many of ur ffs in my rewatch playlist 😅😅thank you so much for uploading now waiting for what is next btw idk why the thumbnail for this ff caught my attention like i always do love all of ur thumbnails but ig i love this more idk y but ig probably coz of the font color n font for the tittle and the title of the 3 shot ff n yh the title fits so perfect "beyond the scars"...once again thank u for uploading so soon 💜💜💜💜and what r u gonna be uploading now? a series pr oneshots,twoshots/threeshots??sorry too curious coz recently actually since last few months other than ur channel i am unable to find any really good ffs to read the other authors ive subscribed to haven't quite read coz of the title n the story not being something i can read or its just them reuploading and one more author whose skills r also quite good hasnt updated since long like a month 😭😭and other than ur channel i barely leave comments on others ik authors expect us to not be silent readers but only u make me wanna always leave a comment😭😭and now i am back t n to rewatching ur old ffs😭😭thank u for updating so much💜💜💜

[@DeSireFanfiction]

Glad u love this part❤️ Honestly I love this thumbnails more too. And yes I'm not sure most probably I'll upload oneshots but my oneshots sometimes automatically convert into twoshots😹 And I love u gurl🥹🫶

[@Nteamz_Lune]

@@DeSireFanfiction was waiting for ur reply n u just did 🥺🥺if ur oneshots convert to twoshots dw we love it more…love ya too 💜💜

[@DeSireFanfiction]

@@Nteamz_Lune 🫶🫶

[@manishajawla7424]

Please please show there parents too because when they meet their parents than I think they will heal fastly and fully because if they didn't meet their parents than story feels empty.

[@Nteamz_Lune]

omg the bonus part is here yayy...will try to watch it as soon as possible 🥹🥹

[@sanjanameena55]

Waiting for next part 🥺

[@CreativeShalu-z6m]

It was beautiful❤

[@minmirae8623]

can you make another part of bonus part...this stories is really good and lovely!! 💜💜

[@tharushiweerasekara7386]

Damn that was awesome ❤ But am I the only one who feels that tae is y/n's brother 🤔🙃 I really didn't expect this bonus part since the last part end so well. So thanks for this ❤❤

[@DeSireFanfiction]

🥹🫶

[@priyaandpreetisah8274]

thanks for the bonus

[@DeSireFanfiction]

❤️❤️

[@cutebubbly]

You should defo carry it on it’s so good would be great if there was another part where they find their parents and their happiness

[@DeSireFanfiction]

❤️❤️

[@BlackRose-t4b]

It was awesome❤

[@esha_adnan]

Knock knock*... author from peep hole..."oh you again"smiling Me: yes, me again ( grinning ear to ear Author: how can I help now 😅?? Me: oh no!! This time I'm just here to thank you and being grateful to u for existing.. .. Awkward smile Me: you must b doing your work so ok byeeee ..( run from there, blushing)😂

[@DeSireFanfiction]

Love u😭😭🫶

[@taimaabdullahtisha8023]

I am blessed unnie love you 😘😘💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

[@MishalMushtaq-tq1ke]

Bonus part more romantic ❤

[@jagrutidash]

Loved it 😊

[@briannaelvir]

Glad there will be another part. I just feel like there’s a lot I want to see answered haha. This was amazing! I feel bad for the other kids that are still in that awful place though if the operation is still running Some things I still want to see though are: -what happened to taeho and the other boys that escaped? -what happened to the kids that were still stuck in the awful place. Is it still going? -do jk or y/n or any of the people who escape report the evil place or try to go back for the other kids (probably not jk or yn) -does jk ever find his mom and meet her again? Or does y/n ever find her parents again or do any of the parents find them? -i had a thought that Tae might be y/n’s little brother but idk. If so what happened to her parents? Or their parents? Also the age difference I’m not sure matches with y/n and her younger brother compared to tae and y/n -I have a little imagination in mind which could count as an idea but what if Jungkook and y/n ran into taeho again? Or the other boys that escaped? I wonder how that would play out you know? -I was reading the comments and what did happened to Mia? I’m sure she’s still there but we didn’t get to see her this episode lol. She probably freaked out and wanted all the details about how y/n and jk got together haha

[@briannaelvir]

Anyways sorry for my little rant! I just have all these thoughts. This is a very amazing and well thought out story. Loved it 💕

[@DeSireFanfiction]

I'm so glad you noticed each scene and shared all your thoughts! I loved reading through them🫶 I'll definitely try to make another part and clear everything up❤️

[@m02-049]

Please make another part.

[@mariammumtaz-bz4ys]

Please please make another part

[@_btsxaddicted_]

Is Taehyun Yn's brother..? I don't know why I get that feeling.... But it was really cute, girl you're so expressive! The one who'll get you will be so lucky I swear 💗🎀

[@DeSireFanfiction]

🥹🫶

[@cutebubbly]

Loved it

[@cutebubbly]

Really good

[@Diyasiikook]

I don't know if asking a bonus is rude, its just iam being a bit selfish, i liked the story too much. And i would love to know abit about their parents... Sonand a bit of their secret romance too. ❤❤

[@Hidden-ns]

Will they get their parents????

[@MakkaPakka-i6e]

🤍

[@cutebubbly]

More w❤

[@cutebubbly]

I’m tryna get to 70 comments 😂

[@DeSireFanfiction]

Lol😹

[@cutebubbly]

🎀🎀💜💜💜🩷🩷🩷💗💗💗🌸🌸🌸

[@cutebubbly]

💜🌸💜🌸🩷🌸🩷💗🎀💗🩷💜💜💗