How to Paraphrase | Tips & Practice | English Writing Skills

[@jtmthegamer2104]

By taking music classes, a few studies have shown it can advance test scores of english and math to more than 15 percent.

[@WorldwideSpeak]

Wonderful!

[@emiliaadoma]

Woooow nice one

[@mudassirhussain3802]

Thanks for this lecture bc it is going to be very helpful for my exam which is scheduled tomorrow

[@WorldwideSpeak]

You are very welcome and best of luck on your exam. You can do this! 😃

[@Birdslover2x]

thank you for helping

[@WorldwideSpeak]

You are very welcome!

[@rajaloni8704]

How abt the "sentence structure" of the paraphrasing ?? Any particular approach??

[@ivanmuromtsev1233]

Music lessons in some studies showed more than a 15 percent improvement in English and math test scores.

[@klaudiamartin9978]

Engaging into music lessons has a great contribution of more than 15 percent on your math and English scores as noted by some studies .

[@WorldwideSpeak]

Good start. How about this: Engaging in music lessons increases your math and English scores more than 15 percent.

[@lucasMthalane]

Several literatures proved, that doing music classes can change the maths and English results greater than fifteen precents.

[@WorldwideSpeak]

Well done. Just a few minor corrections: Several pieces of literature have proved that taking music classes positively changes math and English results by fifteen percent.

[@DIAMOND-rl6vz]

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[@أملياسين-خ7ق]

Many studies explain that math and english exams can be improved more than 15 percent by attending musical lessons ❤❤

[@WorldwideSpeak]

That is an AWESOME sentence! Way to go. 😃😃😃

[@tanvir8628]

A few research says, music lessons supports to get more than 15 percent in English and Math.

[@WorldwideSpeak]

Wonderful start! Try these suggestions: We would use "some research" instead of "a few". Also, you need to tell me WHAT increases by 15 percent. Submit your paraphrase again 😃. Thank you!

[@blossomnabi]

According to some studies, attending music lessons may help increase math and English score over 15 percent.

[@WorldwideSpeak]

Wonderful 👏👏👏!

[@blossomnabi]

@@WorldwideSpeak thankkk youuu 🥺🤍🤍

[@SoniaAmir-v1o]

Some research have shown that you can get high marks in your English and Math test if you are having music classes.

[@WorldwideSpeak]

Well done! Just change this: if you are taking music classes.

[@danawaleed311]

Getting music classes helps evolve math and English test scores by over 15 percent, according to some research studies

[@WorldwideSpeak]

Great start! You should use the verb "take" instead of "get". And you may want to use a different word in place of evolve. Feel free to submit the paraphrase again with those 2 suggestions! Thank you 😃

[@shaqaiqsaeiq]

Based on some studies, over 15 percent of math and English grades can be enhanced by enrolling in music classes.

[@tasnim3li147]

Some studies reveal that math and English test scores can be improved to more than 15% by having music lessons.

[@GenkiJo]

If you are learning about music, there are studies saying your exam scores will increase higher than 15 percent in English and Math.

[@WorldwideSpeak]

Wonderful ~ my only correction is: If you learn music,

[@afiasultana573]

According to several researches, music lessons increase over 15% Math and English testing scores.

[@WorldwideSpeak]

Great start! You will want to switch your phrases - "over 15%" and" math and English testing scores" - so it reads: According to several research studies, music lessons increase math and English testing scores by over 15%. Hope this helps!

[@connornguyen9177]

English and math test score can be improved by 15 percent by taking the music lesson according to several studies

[@chikaonyezumere180]

Math and English Test Scores is better by over 15% through being taught in Music lessons as shown by some studies.

[@WorldwideSpeak]

Excellent! Just a couple of changes: Math and English test scores are 15% better when music lessons are also incorporated, as shown by various studies.

[@rosag7386]

Math and English Test grades can be advanced over 15% when studying music according to Some Research

[@WorldwideSpeak]

Well done! Just remember to put a "." at the end of your sentence. Also, there is non need to capitalize the words "test" and "some research". Thank your for learning with us! 😃

[@rosag7386]

@@WorldwideSpeak Thank you for correcting my sentence and sharing your knowledge on this topic.

[@issraomer3232]

To increase math and English score in the exam by more ehan15% , learning music is helpful as found by some studies.

[@WorldwideSpeak]

Good job! Just make sure "scores" is plural. 😃

[@zyadawadhalshamrani2401]

According to some studies, people who attend music lessons acquire higher scores by over than 15 percent.

[@WorldwideSpeak]

Love that!

[@WorldwideSpeak]

*According to some studies, people who attend music lessons acquire higher scores by MORE than 15 percent.

[@msohaib_rumi632]

studies have shown that music classes aids to the score of students by more than15%.

[@WorldwideSpeak]

@@msohaib_rumi632 *Studies have shown that music classes boost students' scores by more than 15%. In this one - boost is a better word choice than aid because it's a bit "stronger and more visual" :). Hope this helps!

[@narielledavid7570]

According to study, over 15 percent of english and math exam grades increase by having music lessons.

[@charlotte-mecklenburgschoo9466]

Research reveals math and English test scores can be improved by about 15% with music education. (Jackson aged 16)

[@WorldwideSpeak]

Well done 👏👏👏!

[@bethesermon]

Participating in music lessons aids to build quiz marks over 15 percent , a research reveals .

[@WorldwideSpeak]

Excellent! You would probably need to use "in raising" instead of "to build". But overall, well done. 😃

[@raflyfslll]

Students receive an increase over 15 percent on their math and English test results since they join music lessons based on some researches.

[@WorldwideSpeak]

Well done! Here are few minor changes: Based on current research, students improve their math and English test scores by 15 percent after participating in music lessons.

[@raflyfslll]

@@WorldwideSpeak thank you!🫶

[@WorldwideSpeak]

@@raflyfslll You are very welcome!

[@Efohasan]

15 percent of the scores increasing by Achieving music lesson and it proven by few articles.

[@WorldwideSpeak]

Good start. Let's try this: You can increase your scores 15 percent by taking music lessons.

[@Efohasan]

@@WorldwideSpeak thanks mam for reply❤️

[@Efohasan]

​@@WorldwideSpeak Study shows that music can enhance your score

[@tasnim3li147]

Some studies reveal that math and English test scores can be improved to more than 15% by having music lessons.

[@tasnim3li147]

Some studies reveal that math and English test scores can be improved to more than 15% by having music lessons.

[@tasnim3li147]

Some studies reveal that math and English test scores can be improved to more than 15% by having music lessons.

[@tasnim3li147]

Some studies reveal that math and English test scores can be improved to more than 15% by having music lessons.

[@WorldwideSpeak]

Well done! The only thing I would correct is use of prepositions ~ "... can be improved by more than 15% from having music lessons." Thank you for learning with us 😃.