Well done. Not great but vastly superior to most of what's out there. A definite step in the right direction for these types of stories on KZbin.
@EpicSci-FiStory7 ай бұрын
Thanks man!❤️🩹
@drkirish7 ай бұрын
You sir are a wordsmith . I can listen to this story and see it play out.
@Rick-s5g7 ай бұрын
Too many inconsistencies- they couldnt communicate then they could? Its a survival situation and laughing?
@ReneMiller-si3py7 ай бұрын
Is Jack the most common name in the future?
@williamthompson11094 ай бұрын
It’s an extremely common name now, so it makes sense that a lot of people will name their characters that
@Rick-s5g7 ай бұрын
I listened to about 2 minutes
@lizakelly437 ай бұрын
Stopping it like that, not good
@FeralPreacher7 ай бұрын
Good story but the abrupt ending sucked. Good narration and meaningful dialog.
@Scot_WestTexas7 ай бұрын
It’s obvious these dialogues aren’t done by Americans. The stories are sometimes good, but the rest really sucks. I could take it and correct it in 20 minutes. Why don’t you guys use actual Americans to put out the final text? You guys suck at it 🤷♂️