writing a FANTASY BOOK with my bestie | writing a novel

[@taylorgraceee]

girl seeing you type out your story on that laptop...you're good! it would literally take me half an hour to write JUST that. i would have trouble finding an IDEA let alone character names lol lysm xx

[@ananeu]

ahh Taylor I’m sure ur amazing either way!! we both aren’t really experts so this was really lovely to hear!!❤️

[@taylorgraceee]

@@ananeu thank you ana! ur so sweet x btw i wanted to mention...i'm having a slight problem with artbreeder. i have it on both my hp laptop and phone and on there it works fine but on the laptop under my profile page it says `no user found'. would that have anything to do with it being on two devices? also is there i way i can find you on artbreeder bc i was wondering if i could follow you. anyways i'm loving it! it's all thanks to you, really xx

[@jasmine-ln6yw]

this was so fun to watch as a writer, and inspiring for me as well! y’all are so cute 💜

[@ananeu]

aww thank uuuu!! xx

[@letscraftwithalena7658]

How do you know what to write? I'm writing a poem and it took me three days to think of four sentences. Lol

[@ananeu]

haha awww! i think it takes only a liiiil bit of practice, but honestly, i think being bold and confident in your writing - and ideas - is a really big one! just start writing and don't judge it! your not done yet! hope this helped a lill!! xx

[@letscraftwithalena7658]

@@ananeu Tx a lot! You are the best!!! xx

[@Krisssteeen11]

I think writing a poem is way harder than just to write a simple novel

[@stylesvfx]

That was the BEST short story I’ve ever read!!!😍🤩📚

[@ananeu]

haha nooo wayyyy!! aw thank u so so much!! I’ll tell ambie❤️

[@windixoxoo]

OMG SAME!! it was so compelling, i wanted to read more!

[@himaritanaka9509]

i absolutely love your content, especially when im in the mood to write, but generally your content inspires me

[@windisnotspiralz]

You are one of the most underrated creators I have ever seen. Love it 😀

[@ananeu]

awww ur too sweet!! thank uu with all my heart!! xx

[@presleykeilani389]

This is so inspiring. I've written eight chapters in the book I'm working on with my best friend. I'm so happy you shared this. I like to call myself a discovery writer. Hehe not a planning fan but I still do plan the tiny details 😅 And I'm going to read that story of yours RIGHT NOW !

[@aishaahmad8734]

This was such a good video! You two look like the best of friends! Also, love the character name choices!

[@ananeu]

aw thank you!!! haha your comment means so much!! xx

[@loco_lucy]

I seriously love this channel, it’s all about writing and books which I love, and brand new ideas like such! (As far as I’ve seen anywho.) Keep it up, and great job! This story was amazing!🎉🎉

[@Drawn_By_Lix]

Me and my friend did this in a way it was done over social media dms and we used to do that all the time when we were younger ;-; honestly I miss that.

[@ItzLilacbliss]

Omg you guys should totally start a writing channel together!📗 Y'all are sooo entertaining!📚

[@ananeu]

aww tyyy!!!❤️

[@kyanasol]

I’m doing the exact same thing with my bestie! And it is really a fun experience! We both talk about the plot, I write a lot and so does she but she helps sometimes with my grammar mistakes

[@taliw7736]

Thanks for the link and motivation amber and ana :) Just read your short story its very interesting

[@annam.1857]

oh my goodness!! loved this vid!! i'll try to make a book too cus i luv writing. thanks for the creation.

[@lonzseg25]

Wow that’s really cool! Me and my cousin do this but on FaceTime.(I do the writing she comes up with ideas) But ya my book is going good I’m the second chapter yay! Also thank you for replying on my other comments and being so supportive!!!

[@taliw7736]

so cool

[@lonzseg25]

@@taliw7736 ❤️

[@ice12984]

I have to do this!! But I got to get one of my friends to agree first...

[@luna_balloona09]

hi ive been commenting on ur videos before and this is exactly what im doing with my bestie!!! thank you for answering all my questions so far :]]]

[@stella_gmbr]

THE NOVEL WAS SO GOOD WE NEED MOOORE

[@Citizenofyoutube]

The story was really good, I hope you would write another chapter for it.

[@jxrdyn8895]

I NEED MORE ITS SO GOODDDDD

[@kamifangirl3338]

this is such a amazing story

[@emilydearing777]

I think yall cured my writers block lol

[@naomi_carina]

I really wanna write a book, so I’ve been watching a lot of your channel. How do you come up with ideas so fast!!?? It’s amazing! By the way I love the story!!

[@ananeu]

aww ur tooo sweeet! I truly think ideas are always bumping around in my brain. its just a lot of daydreaming at school and not paying attention in clas haha

[@naomi_carina]

Haha! I have lots of ideas I just can’t piece together, and make sense of it without more details I can’t think of!

[@danjela3001]

@@naomi_carina Omg. I know I'm late, but same. I have so so many ideas put I just can't put them together. And when I do,it's a total mess. 😂

[@naomi_carina]

@@danjela3001 same lol

[@Daughter_of_Hades12]

i read the story and I want more! please make a part 2!

[@peqrlkandi]

One of the Character names I would have used is Aveline and Clove and also its from the name ideas

[@_lilyofthevalley_]

I READ THE STORY BUT NOOOOOOO, ASPEN DID NOT DESERVE THAT HAPPENING TO HER, NOR DID LIN!!

[@leandercage9506]

Hi! ive watched this video and was so inspired and stunned by your story, i loved it. i hope you continue it. I love your videos and you are such an inspireing person. lysm xx

[@ananeu]

ur so so sweet! thank you heaps xx

[@cositaloca]

Next chapter plz!

[@wateruga]

This is was such a fun idea. Also at 5:51 I legit thought you transitioned into a split screen video but it was just the door crack 💀

[@sarahferdinand5700]

Oh wow! That story was amazing. I saw this video and I remembered that I'm writing a fantasy book with my twin sister 😁

[@meresturg]

I am writing a chapter book with my best friend. It's about two girls who have OCD, dyslexia, autism, and anxiety. We write it together, one book is about Irene, and the other she wrote is about Lexi. They both have the same story but different perspectives.

[@fairylights8078]

WTF HAPPENS NEXT!??! Its so good i NEED TO KNOWWWWW

[@Bienke4x4]

Same, i was just getting the feel of the story, Then suddenly, it ended.... But it was interesting!!

[@MrVlandus]

Very cool. You gals make a novella out of it.

[@spicypumpkins2640]

Read the story. It was good and I enjoyed the video!

[@ananeu]

ahh aww thank uu!!

[@sydthekyd3195]

this was cute!!

[@enamulhoque4477]

Bro u guys look like u can be bff 4ever and im sure u will be!

[@babyyodabakesfunnyvids6264]

you look so pretty without makeup

[@ananeu]

awww wow thank uu🥺

[@AdreixDuncan]

How did you have the will power to stick to a short story

[@taliw7736]

Super cool Idea. idk if I could do this

[@olatunjibanwo5161]

Hi love your content alot i wanted to ask can one be a novel writer and a script writer together or can't 😊

[@StarMationYT]

I'm watching this so late but I just wanted to say this was so fun to see! Your channel never fails when I need inspiration to write my own story. ❤️ Are you still thinking about doing a part 2? (I'm not trying to be rude.)

[@ananeu]

aawwww thank uuu!! maybe a part two will come soon!! ill maybe to a poll hehe

[@naz_xoxo2010]

Ik this video was released like 10 months ago but I think you two should finish the book.

[@Bienke4x4]

Agreed!

[@calicavanaugh5647]

Do you know how to do this with your long distance besties?because I thought it would be so cool to write a book with them.

[@cabin_8]

Okay, i'm like a year late to this comment but! On google docs you can share a document with other people so you can be facetiming with your besties and each of you is gonna be writing on their own computer/phone!

[@letscraftwithalena7658]

Btw I love your novel!

[@ArianeEvangelina]

I used to try to do this with my bff as a kid, but she wasn't as into story telling as me 😅

[@viktorijaelina5505]

We started like late last year and we are only 4-7 chapters in with a lot of worldbuidling and a few more things not attached to the plot so we are trying to work on it but its soooo hard bc of our schedules

[@taliw7736]

Please keep doing cool challenges

[@viktorijaelina5505]

Oh heyyy im writing a book with my friend too

[@Lydiadydia]

When ana is a better writer then me in 1900000000 lives 😅....😢

[@OFFICIAL_OLIVIA10]

When i saw the video i thought you were gonna do plans charater deveolpent, Settings, Chapters

[@user-zw6cu9yv2h]

I READ THE STORY AND OH MY LORD I'MAHSKDHSADKJAAH ???? I LOVE IT

[@pookiebear15-j6t]

this was cute 😊

[@Bienke4x4]

Okay, but what happened? Did she die or something? Is there a sequel?

[@Lippie-Lo]

It took me a hour to finish one page of like idk how many pages

[@hyera251]

first 2 paragraphs and I'm already loving it 😭😭😭👏

[@M4rshmel0n]

Idk if you don’t like to talk abt this but this vid reminds me when you and your friend looked tg lol!

[@Catlogic-yv8hb]

Pls right more 😊😊😊😊

[@thewritervolts]

omg aspen legerrrrrrrrr

[@rxigntoca6500]

MY NAME IS ASPEN.

[@droogiebabydoll]

Yeah so?

[@bonniesweeten7300]

4:53

[@Shrek_49]

You Guys stole my name! (aspen) Jk lol But im curently writeing a book and i used the same boy baby name website for the main charectors dad's name His name is Alex Hans (Alex. A Greek name for a warrior of mankind) Love your videos btw 😁

[@rei_chan857]

I want to write with my best friend too by we have different writing styles(இдஇ; ) She writes in taglish. Mostly tagalog because she isn't used to english and I write in full english because I'm not that fluent in tagalog (•ˋ _ ˊ•) she HATES writing in english and I also HATE writing in tagalog....

[@wistfulwriterthingy12]

Just a tip from one writer to another: in dialogue, you don't need a comma outside of the speech marks. For example, "I hate you so much," she said. Or, "Who are you?" she asked. You keep doing it like this, which is grammatically incorrect and unprofessional, "Who are you?", she asked. I really like your content but this is just a small mistake I've noticed in some of your work. Moreover, I think you might want to brush up on your grammar as it is a tad messy and once again difficult to consume. You ought to use commas and other punctuation to break up your sentences, and dialogue too. Finally, you repeat the same words a lot (cocky). And there is no need to put hyphens in places like uninterestingly. You use the passive voice to a disconcerting extent and you misuse the hyphen for an en-dash (or em-dash if you are not a Brit like me)You've likely improved since this particular story, but I'd hate for these mistakes not to be seen. Good luck anyway!