Writing Dialogue: 20 Smart Tips

[@whytmangatv]

"I am your father."

[@ikindoflikemangoes4951]

Whyt Manga Indeed you are

[@nadia_yaya_]

No No No That's Not It Lol

[@Silverf0x0x]

Yes. Yes you are

[@shilforiakaptaper2088]

realy o yay

[@Terrence789]

"NoOoOoOoOo!"

[@ChaosTool93]

I love movies that explain a plan exactly , but tben everything goes to shit, nothing works as indent but by chance all the steps that were planed still happen for a different reason or by accident, so at the end it leaves people wondering if the person who's plan it was, has alot of pure luck, is awesome at spontaneously adjusting the the current situation or has planned everything all along. Best thing is if the person telling this plan is in prison talking to a guard or surrounded by enemies, talking directly at them. That moment when you are told what is going to happen, and even if you do anything to stop it, you are forced to watch the plan played out as if you are just a chess figure being played without any control over to situation, is one of the most basass scenes for me to watch

[@notcringeenough5158]

watch reservoir dogs, if you like heist movies, this is gonna surprise you!

[@peco3806]

Whyt you gotta watch Hunter X Hunter (2011), then watch Aleczandxr's videos analysing it. Trust me watching HxH and those videos will improve your story writing, I feel like it's a necessity for anyone trying to make a shounen battle story.

[@MrLukabot]

Weeb Indeed, right now, in my opinion, I find his story very boring and his characters also.

[@peco3806]

Honestly (just from the first 4 chapters since I'm poor) I agree sorta. I feel like there's just so much that can make this story *A LOT* better. From what he's said and the fact that it's been over a year I feel like volume 2 will be a lot better.

[@peco3806]

Oh yeah and read *BERSERK!* Or watch the 1997 anime or Golden Age movies.

[@MrLukabot]

Weeb I'm at chapter 147 already in Berserk. Love it and all. But I find the art style stiff a lot. In my opinion I prefer HxH's art style over Berserk.

[@MrLukabot]

Let's hope Whyt doesn't plan to create a typical shounen that doesn't change anything.

[@arinamday5917]

I could watch your inking for hours, love those clean lines god bless

[@sasuke09871]

:O just realized you were at 125k subs, thats awesome! Ive been here since 3k.

[@noahsd]

almost to 500k

[@TheToonTwinzShow]

We're really in awe of Saturday AM and how dedicated you all are. We're pushing hard with our animations and big goals that we have and hey who knows our creativity might cross paths in the future ✌😉😊

[@allaccordingtoplan5560]

Thanks this will definitely assist me with writing the dialogue for my manga

[@cabbage790]

Bro I'm litterly write all this down. Seriously ' xd

[@whytmangatv]

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[@nanyummyify]

Whyt Manga Great tips man you are so skilled and i know you've worked hard to get where you are now. There's no where else to go but up. Keep going :)

[@brandonjohnson9832]

with me being a writer this video is exactly what I needed. you should do more videos for writers, specifically how to overcome writers block.

[@galacticbambi949]

im not a pro writer in the least but latching onto characters you develope in a story help when you can flesh them out more. Thats just me maybe. I also take experiences that i do everyday. There was one day o had writers block and while i was making tea in the morning i was thinking how cool it'd be if someone had some capability that was comparable to a kettle. Like if there blood boiled and there bones whistled, or if they had some ability to boil there blood and like have excessive scebts within it to captivate people or maybe poison people. I linda scrapped the idea, but point being Life is a great writers block block xD. Thats just me maybe

[@duskyer2391]

11:50 This can be seen as far as Scooby Doo. Whenever Fred explains the trap they make it rarely works vs when he doesn't explain the trap to the audience.

[@knightofthewind1000]

How did you know? I was just struggling over this issue when you posted this, you mad man!

[@cosmicroar1277]

Thanks for the tips, WhytManga.

[@ignaciocardoza307]

I'm sketching as a watch this. When he said Sometimes silence can be the best response... that hit hard for me lol

[@Jack-xf3ge]

What type of paper do you use for your comics? I'm new to this

[@whytmangatv]

Deleter type B B4 paper.

[@MicahBuzanANIMATION]

Your advice is spot on. I've been itching to try comics for awhile, and these videos are super inspiring.

[@joshualadner6096]

The plan part about making the audience think it didn't go to plan when it did is like in Now You See Me 2 with the plane and it was all set up!

[@blobmaster118]

bruh im early as shit, also cant wait for Vol.2

[@harrythecat8198]

You have talent bro !!

[@freeyahmean]

Nice tips .... really helpful

[@theultimatenarutofanboy2345]

I love your work! Keep it up!

[@drawingstuff6660]

I Love your channel

[@king.2597]

I think Isayama is the master of dialogue, worldbuilding, character development, and especially foreshadowing The guy is 20 steps ahead of most mangakas

[@harshalkolase9249]

Hard agree bro

[@joshualadner6096]

I can't wait for volume 2

[@artknight9921]

Thanks for the tips!!!

[@heliosrevenant6599]

Awesome vid. The Tipps are really helpfull

[@TheHaakii]

Just ordered a copy of vol 1

[@spiritlesswolf2029]

Do you have a video on planning out a script for a manga book?

[@anirudhshokhanda863]

Hi I run a manga myself and I want to thank you whyte manga as I didn't know how to do it you helped me to make the manga in which I am the typesetter and it helped me very much thank you whyte manga

[@eri-hn2er]

I know I'm like really late but can you tell me the name of your manga I would like to read it 😁🙃

[@harshalkolase9249]

Dude, thanks a lot

[@Creeperboy099]

I keep feeling like my story has some holes in it

[@elo6126]

here since 34k keep growing bro! make your comics to a show!

[@curtisdrago]

You have a nice voice. I'm not a mangaka, but definitely a writer. Everything you talked about got me excited to write, but sadly, it's late and I'm tired.

[@laurafaes9014]

Thank you so much! you got the best manga-making tips :D

[@VRXconnect]

Great video bro, these tips helped me make a scene waay better

[@shilforiakaptaper2088]

im crying i love your vids

[@shilforiakaptaper2088]

like plz whyt manga

[@MrJerkdude1]

Wow crazy fan alert XD

[@arc3243]

this helped a bunch, thanks for the info

[@arc3243]

subscribed lol

[@tristanclendenen6621]

Really helped me out but slow down a lil dawg lol u jus rattle off like 16 things at once but when I got use to that u really helped me out

[@leenewey4683]

So the speech bubbles are drawn and the text is done on the computer ? what program is it you use ?

[@phapmai7294]

thank you whyt maga .I drawre you

[@lovinalili21]

When is the exact date when Vol. 2 is coming out!? T^T (Can't wait)

[@io-qg8ur]

*foreshadow with swag*

[@Unsung_Tide]

Hey Whyt Manga can you do a tutorial on how to draw different body types?

[@galacticbambi949]

thanks for the tips :D

[@randoqiqks]

Noti squad💯💯

[@rocketmanart7964]

When I come up with characters I put myself into the character

[@tarunryadav5471]

Whyt Manga akibento is not available for India and I'm from India

[@KatarRawr]

Grimmjow!!

[@jdhdragon12]

can you push for a SAHD:AM app?

[@itzjdn8048]

When the hell do we get a paperback volume 2 on Apple black

[@jloveseveryone2253]

Whyt manga can do a video how to draw a manga cover plz

[@nazgul4228]

OMG my charachter is soo similar!

[@wehateven]

Hi guys

[@something298]

Thanks!

[@something298]

Amazing tips!

[@something298]

Cant believe i was first!

[@frostegames836]

Do you also wanna make manga? :)

[@theinsanebeam2097]

How many pages do you prefer for a chapter

[@fennecfox7172]

can you make manga hairstyles that are close to the present one? like 2017 hairstyles

[@michellenguyen7152]

May I ask what kind of paper is best for line art?

[@wiggie666]

im guessing thats the interface of manga studio 5 . yes i think I got this stuff down , thx. do you go to comic con at all ?

[@blobmaster118]

i did the survey and i love the poster man! Also i hope i win a subscription, goodluck to everyone else who entered. :)

[@jloveseveryone2253]

Shoutout to the early squad

[@joiizzal]

did you suspend the drawing of original characters

[@talimediaart]

If you can make a video of why do mangaka in Japan have phrases on their covers like in Bleach volume 1 it's titled Death and the Strawberry. Is there a reason for that?

[@alexark4893]

Nephtalie Albert it's the name of the volume

[@talimediaart]

Crimson Creeper oh okay. Is it necessary to have it? Is what I'm asking.

[@alexark4893]

Nephtalie Albert Not Really, seeing as the volume name is actually in the book, but I can guess it can be nice for decoration

[@igrgic1]

do you use any specific font of some kind or do you to the writing yourself?

[@Idan_denisov]

Which kind of program do you use in this video

[@saisumitpatnaik7886]

Which application is that

[@PyrexNemobeats]

SPOILER ALERT JKK SPOILERS ALERT DONT READ THIS COMMENT IF YOU DONT WANT TO BE SPOILED At the 12:38 You just basically explained the sukuna gojo fight ending lol

[@redpanda8814]

Who's deku?

[@harrythecat8198]

Its you draw this pages of manga ???

[@whytmangatv]

yeah

[@taozuki]

Oh

[@sticki8862]

800th Like

[@Kyo_Ara_0]

Rethorical questions...

[@archangelwing]

I've been wondering how to pronouce Fattimunga's name for the longest time lol. I've been pronouncing it in my head "Fatty munga" lol i'm so sorry Wait, SANO'S A GIRL????

[@BigBoyNoel01]

FIRST boi

[@alejandrazendejas5409]

second

[@brianlarosiliere1329]

y dont u just use a screentone

[@kydd1304]

Blah lala

[@quilitybmg1398]

wow 1 like 0 views when i opened the video fuck yea

[@iTheNem3sis]

wtf the spoiler though. You didn't give me time to stop. Disliked.

[@ilikeburgers]

★_Vizualize_★ gay

[@jaywells5857]

★_Vizualize_★ he gave you plenty of time shitstick

[@notgivingoutmyname9557]

Why does he give away so many spoilers about the future of Apple black in his vids