15 Ways To Write And Personalize A First Line In A Cold Email

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[@AlexBerman]

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[@ariane.abarboza]

This is the best YT channel I ever seen in this topic. Keep up the great content.

[@AlexBerman]

Thank you

[@marlonsanders]

Alex, thank you for taking the time to do this video. Your experience with this is invaluable.

[@marlonsanders]

Next I hope you can do email address / list options. I know you use Dribble. But you do emails for a broad variety of clients. How? Scraping emails from Linked In is against their tos. And services like growbots are simple to use but cost quite a bit per email. Yesterday I saw another service that is $100 per 3,000 emails. As an agency, I’m sure you aren’t paying that! My target audience us buz coaches and life coaches.

[@AlexBerman]

@@marlonsanders I have one on lead pools coming up

[@dami869]

Hey@@marlonsanders, what was the service that was $100 for 3,000 emails?

[@kandiliofficial]

Thanks for sharing. I am having a hard time personalizing emails, just got hired as SDR recently and my Communications Manager said my compositions are too serious and business-oriented while the head coach said it was a bit unprofessional when I changed the tone of my writing. Lol.

[@andreyseas]

Brother you're a beast! Love your content.

[@AlexBerman]

Much appreciated Andrey

[@austinwebb6373]

Love it! It's all about sending the right email to the right person at the right time.

[@AlexBerman]

With the right message, yes

[@FestivaLagoon]

Only that you can't tell whether it's the right time

[@emzgalante2640]

This is basic practice, standard procedure! But I guess it’s useful to some not-so knowledgeable beginner email marketers out there. Great channel by the way!

[@AlexBerman]

Thanks

[@jingruiz2380]

Hi Alex! Awesome video. Been watching some of your videos and kudos to all the efforts you gave to share your knowledge about best examples of cold emails. Can you share more examples on making first lines? Thank you and God bless

[@AlexBerman]

Hey! Everything is in Email10k. Check it out: Email10k.com

[@nazarkyrychenko2809]

I'd rather use it for LinkedIn connect. This is a good approach for 1 message at Linkedin. However, it's only a connect. There will be a long way to sell something. Thanks, Alex for one more great video.

[@AlexBerman]

Report back with the results? Thanks!

[@skill705]

what i learn from this video is in my scenario i will use First Name Last Name Key as provided by my emarketer, I will replicate 20 - 25 such lines through out the data by simple drag down, and place them in LN section, while emailing that can be use as Dear [FN], [LN] - this Last Name key will pick up all those intro lines that i replicated Then use small body of my email Avoiding: Bullet points, Hyperlinks, Capsletters, Vibrant Colours, Big Fonts, Unnecessary Bold Letters, Spam Words, Long Subject Line & email body, formal message body, over-using Recipients name, email size greater than 500 KB, Including: Auto Unsub Button

[@queensuccessoyemike2370]

this is really helpful thank you so much 🎉

[@mattfabrico5295]

Great video Alex - how long does it normally take you guys to hit the benchmarks you talk about? (60% opens, 10% reply, 2-4% meeting book rate) Would you say around a month?

[@AlexBerman]

1 month to start getting good results, then after that it's like smashing your head into a wall - a constant process of optimization and changing

[@ultimateecomagencyoutreach7775]

Awesome video Alex, keep it up!

[@htmben]

I was waiting for this video for a long time ..

[@AlexBerman]

You like it?

[@htmben]

@@AlexBerman YES !

[@FionaChandoll]

Thank you!

[@nam.1652]

Hey Alex, how much personalized should the P/s line be? I stalked the decision maker and found out his hobbies, his favourite quotes,... Should I include those personal things into the P/s line too?

[@AlexBerman]

Yes

[@nam.1652]

@@AlexBerman Thanks Alex

[@123MarcosoPolo]

Hey Alex, thanks for sharing the content. Sadly, I'm not from the States, but my clients are. I've seen you always using Hi or Hey to start the mail. From your experience is this more successful than using "Dear"? I got a reply recently who mentioned "I prefer people who are more professional and do not Hey or Hi." Thank you

[@AlexBerman]

More successful for us by far yes

[@terrancecollins2232]

Damn, Alex, you have this cold. I'm spending far too much time getting the kind of personalization you do. Maybe I need to be less critical and a bit more folksy, in a good way.

[@AlexBerman]

Thanks Terrance

[@mcjavier3784]

Love this. Very helpful. I recently encountered a "roadblock" while doing this. LinkedIn profile is close to empty and there's not much result coming up when I tried Google. What do you think is the best route to take? Thanks.

[@Ric_A]

Solid Tips!

[@NayanKaushal]

Alex, my man!!!! 👍

[@macphillip1501]

I am a professional graphic designer and have a new SEO agency, I have sent 500 cold custom emails about services but none of them replied, do you think what i have to do? What can i change to getting responses. Thanks Mac

[@AlexBerman]

Hey! I'd love to take a look and get these campaigns going. Hop in our course and I can give specific feedback: email10k.com

[@yourvideopartner]

Hi Marc I'm going through a similar thing right now would be interested to see if you've cracked it? 😁

[@mobilecrushersscreeners2628]

It is very helpful!

[@AlexBerman]

Thank you :) Best of luck!

[@romeoklaassen9537]

Hey Alex, do you have a video like this on writing a personalized P.S. Line?

[@romeoklaassen9537]

Is there a difference or is it the same process?

[@thishitscustom333]

Hey Alex, how do you get around LinkedIn's profile viewing limit? In Sales Navigator there's barely any personal info on the profiles, and normal LinkedIn has profile viewing limits. Thoughts?

[@burtonh1]

Alex, I am ready to rip my hair out. What if the company doesn't have anything interesting on their website to write about in the first line of an email? And they don't have a LinkedIn profile either.

[@seanolivas2658]

Hi Alex, something has been keeping me up at nights. How to keep your domain reputation while finding a good subject line over 80%? Would you recommend using another domain as this first phase of finding a subject line has the most likeliness of people hitting the spam button. You're thoughts? Thanks! YB

[@Adeel547]

Unable to download file 🤤

[@AlexBerman]

What browser are you on?

[@Adeel547]

@@AlexBerman Chrome

[@AlexBerman]

@@Adeel547 Mind testing on another browser? lead pages bugs sometimes. If it keeps happening, send me an email and I'll send it over asap [e-mail] - thanks!

[@jesuscedeno]

helloo

[@Genuine308]

Crush😉

[@AlexBerman]

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[@Genuine308]

Wow i dint expected reply from you..😊💖I just loved the way you speak...your slang...really addicted to you Alex... perfect name,perfect voice and perfect language...

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[@AlexBerman]

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