95% commitment on rally trophy in wreckfest

I'm making a breakdown of this new track, because it is the single most technical track in the game... for the meantime here is some racing footage and the first pace notes I've written, and also for the track i would appreciate feedback on the pace notes, what you would change and where
r5 long into off camber l4 dont cut
l6 crests into l3 r3 long
l2 tight into crest r6
jump into right 4 long
caution low grip r4 into l6 long
r4 drop into l6 long
caution l5 dont cut
r5 long into crests,
caution jump into crests into jump hard landing
r6 drop into crests l5 tightens into drop
low grip r5 into l4 tight
l5 long into jump
l3 long low grip
r4 long crest into jump l4 very long
jump into r6 very long keep right
l5 tight into jumps very long r6
caution heavy landing into l3 long after crest
r4 dont cut into r5
caution drop into l2
l3 dont cut r3 stay tight
jump into right 5 crests long into r6 over crest
caution heavy landing into r3 low grip
l6 into l4 tightens
narrow l6 over crest into r6
l6 very long, crests
l4 cut
finish

[@eewasalreadytaken3664]

@SlayerofMidgets ITookEli here- thx for the video

[@slayerofmidgets3201]

I'm sure you know lol, but for those who don't There will be a full video coming out on this track very shortly

[@kaurpold9706]

I tried with tune of: 4, 4, 5, 1. Still far behind though. You seemingly had lower gear ratio or not?

[@slayerofmidgets3201]

Yeah, I'm using 3352 there, I think, it might be 2 suspension but I don't think it'll make much of a difference

[@kaurpold9706]

@@slayerofmidgets3201 Alrighty, not sure if I keep trying it. Not reafy for that track,best time I had was 6.58 or something. Nice driving you did there!

[@slayerofmidgets3201]

@@kaurpold9706 the only thing I can recommend is don't drive at 100% ever, honestly on any track, but here specifically it'll always end up in a crash, hence the title 95% commitment, I could get a faster time, but I am significantly more likely to crash to such a extent its not worth it, so I'll drive slower than I know I can go and use that time to setup better for the next turns, react to the next turn based on where you will be, and it'll get a lot easier, also the soft suspension makes the car floaty so it handles more smoothly and loosely which on rally, is usually better

[@kaurpold9706]

@@slayerofmidgets3201 Yeah, I crashed alot and suck in general, heh. But been playing WF as only racing game in long years. So been playing this game for 2 months, getting better. Though far from being competetive. I enjoy it though!

[@slayerofmidgets3201]

@@kaurpold9706 glad you're having a good time, everyone gets better eventually, I'll be on black flag #2 or #1 in just over a hour if you drop in I can show you a few lines or something