Alayne II Q&A w/ RedTeamReview

[@Brassblitz]

Good writing takes time. And if you wrap it up within 10 years you'll still be faster than George. 😂😭 The quality and care you guys are taking to capture the spirit of the story is fantastic. Excellent work and kudos to all the writers and contributors!

[@ryanmurfin7492]

If GRRM does release WOW, Preston Jacob better compete this project still. This version has me hooked and not sure if I will survive if it's not completed.

[@don_5283]

There is no way George is finishing TWoW. It's not going to happen. I think his best play, even if Brandon Sanderson IS available, is to just legitimize Preston's work and be done with it. Maybe even reach out and do a direct collaboration.

[@B_dizzy-l5v]

The most authentic thing Preston could do is not finish it

[@Aaaeendrew]

He's not even trying to write WoW at this point.

[@MutteringCondolences]

@@don_5283 And the most disappointing part of GRRM not finishing TWoW is that we'll never see Fire and Blood Vol. 2. Seriously, I enjoyed that 700 page history more than reading about Dany dithering about in Meereen and refusing to do what needed to be done.

[@DoubleDowner]

Me too, I am fully in on this version. I just want the Preston Jacobs version from now on, no joke.

[@sorayacatfriend]

Have Mord come to Casterly Rock somehow, Tyrion owes him a reward

[@alanpennie8013]

I keep hearing the name as Maud, because I had an aunt called that. I'd forgotten that very nasty jailor and have no desire to encounter him again.

[@ssa3101]

@@alanpennie8013 me as well. Who the fu*k cares about mord.

[@MrPhbahia]

amazing

[@helpconflict9851]

preston's comments about the squishers just makes me imagine GRRM announce that the books are all done, including an extra sixth book called "A Summer of Squishers"

[@pry87]

The biggest issue on whether Sweet Robin marches or not depends on who Sweet Robins Regent will be. If the Regent marches with the army or stays in the Vale. If the regent would be politically savvy enough to Keep Sweet Robin close or not. If Littlefinger manages to scheme his way into being the regent and marches, he would 100% take Sweet Robin with him. If Blackfish ends up the regent he would probably not take Sweet Robin with him. So the real question is who will be the Regent of the Vale and how will they be determined? Will the Regent march with the army or stay in the Vale themselves? If the regent marches will they take Robin with them to maintain their control and ensure no one else can gain influence over Sweet Robin? If the Regent marches and leaves Sweet Robin, who is left with him and how does that dynamic play out. Also their is the consideration of how would Sweet Robin react to potentially being separated from Alayne. I could see some people flying if that happens against his will.

[@iliaponomarev1624]

It's relatively clear to me that Blackfish will be the regent. And, I don't know, Bronze Jon as the commander? Separating with Alayne is an issue. But, well, is there a real reason for Alayne to march with the army?

[@manband20]

One of the ideas I pitched heavily for in the Writer's Discord channel was the idea of Blackfish vs. Littlefinger infighting. Blackfish is a warmonger who only wants revenge and sees Sweets as a pawn. Littlefinger wanted Sansa to be raped so she could be forced to marry Harry and then become Queen of The Vale, The North, and The Riverlands. They both want to use their kids for control of The Vale's army, but for different reasons. I think Littlefinger would be his Regent, though, as he is technically his stepfather. But I also pitched hard for Blackfish to be both the mystery knight AND Lord Commander of the Winged Knights, effectively making him the leader of Sweetrobin's Kingsguard. This means that Blackfish is always present around meetings with Sweetrobin and allows him to see through Littlefinger's bullshit, causing tension and drama in the ranks. In the end, though, Sweetrobin is probably going to legitimize Sansa and she will be crowned as a Queen so it really comes down to what Sansa wants when she realizes that her adopted stepfather and great-uncle by blood are both conniving assholes that don't actually care about her.

[@umwha]

Here’s what the plan will be. The Lannisters don’t know that Robin has been declared a king. They still think Littlefinger is their ally and littlefinger is lord of harrenhal. Therefore, Littlefinger will use his lordship to go to harrenhal, and refurnish it to become the stronghold of Robin, before the Lannisters find out. He, Robin and Alayne (and others) will be based there, as the commanders conduct their war. However, what I think will happen is: while en route to Harrenhal, or while traveling from harrenhal, Little finger , Sansa and Robin will fall into the hands of the Beotherhood without Banners. This could mean they are present for Jaimes trial, or they could arrive afterwards.

[@alanpennie8013]

@@iliaponomarev1624 To get away from Myranda mainly.

[@iliaponomarev1624]

@@manband20 If I'm Blackfish, I don't really see why Littlefinger shouldn't die next morning of an acute case of a sword in the stomach.

[@jacobm482]

I was surprised to hear Gilwood Hunter's reason for kneeling was to oust Littlefinger. I thought Maester Willamen was warning him about Black Walder trying to take the Twins from his Half-Hunter niece.

[@PrestonJacobstheSweetrobin]

A man can have more than one reason.

[@CaptainTimeStories]

Great work as usual. It did make some of its own decisions but overall the direction is going strong, looking forward to the emissary! While it was both efficient and long, this came at the cost of Sansa’s agency. This could become a problem if all future povs have a similar rushed format. The pre released TWoW chapters are all somewhat slow, whereas the project has all been very quick.

[@hinasakukimi]

hopefully there will be a thorough editing process

[@musculusiv4172]

Some thoughts about the future of Sansa, Sweetrobin and Daenerys (correct me if George already said something different on the matter): I always felt like thematically it was inevitable that Sansa would eventually (have to?) marry Sweetrobin. Maybe there has to be some Littlefinger - Sansa stuff at Harrenhall first but I could see this as a reason why Sweetrobin would have to come to the Riverlands with them. I think it would also be fitting in a way if Sweetrobin would become more "bossy" in his own very childish way and that the Lords will find it harder to just ignore him and his whishes/whims now that they made him King. Maybe King Sweetrobin is a bit more than the lords bargined for? I'm also not that convinced if Daenerys truly ever will return to Westeros. It's the whole thing with George always looking to subvert expectations... From the start of the story Dany is set on reconquering Westeros, wouldnt it be really fitting if that's not what she would end up doing? I always thought there's a good chance that she ends up in Valyria either to rebuild it or as a hermit to secure the survival of Dragons in the world after realising that wherever she goes people would try to either kill or steal them. After all the main thing Quaithe tells her is REMEMBER WHO YOU ARE. Of course Dany thinks this means remembering that she is a Targaryen but as Preston often says, our characters are always wrong about these things. Why shouldnt this mean remembering that she is a VALYRIAN instead? She deffinitely isnt a Westerosi, she wasnt even raised there and has no memory of the place. I do also see the option of her playing an important in Westeros with her Dragons in defeating the Others. However that still doesnt rule out that she would return to Valyria at the end of the story for one of the reasons above. In any case, imo her next stop will 100% have to be Ashai where she will find something that will set her on her path, be it Westeros or Valyria.

[@Scott100W]

I think Daenerys' next stop has to be vaes dothrak after the end of ADWD.. And surely she would be set on returning to mereen ASAP so although I would love to have some chapters in asshai, I don't think that's on the agenda for this story

[@musculusiv4172]

She already is in Vaes Dothrak. She will probably return to Mereen and go to Ashai from there... But by how Quaithe is talking about Ashai it clearly is important to Danys story, I dont think Ashai can or will be skipped

[@PainCausingSamurai]

How has this project effected your view of ASoIaF in general and George's struggle with writing Winds? Do you think this style of collaborative effort could be useful to professional writers, or is it already standard practice?

[@alanpennie8013]

It is in TV land. In written fiction the tradition is for two writers to collaborate.

[@Mj_Jetson]

With the regent situation is KL, why would Mace Tyrell call to the Westerlands for a new regent? I kinda see him trying to put Marge in that position (she is of age, and is kinda family to Tommen), and Cersei uses the backlash from that (and a few other of Mace's miscalculations) to get herself very flimsily back in power briefly.

[@MutteringCondolences]

Margaery is still under investigation by that Faith Kangaroo Court and needs to stand Trial. Mace might be powerful as Hand of the King after Kevin's Death, but there is no way the Religious Fantatics that are swarming King's Landing will allow a woman accused of lewdness, fornication, adultery, and high reason to be the Regent. TLDR: If Mace names Margaery as Regent, within a day he'll be dealing with a city wide rebellion by armed and organized religious lunatics. Mace might be a weak man, but he's not completely stupid.

[@Mj_Jetson]

@@MutteringCondolences in Kevan's epilogue, Mace wants to declare Marge innocent. Kevan rebuffs him, but now Kevan's dead. I could see Mace declaring her innocent and making her regent (if he's stupid enough to declare her innocent, he's stupid enough to make her regent). And yeah, you're right; that absolutely would drive the sparrows crazy and force him to backpedal on both counts. Since its hinted that Cersei is back in power by the time Harys Swyft makes it to Braavos a month later, Mace Tyrell kinda has to make some egregious political miscalculations (its clear from Kevan's epilogue that the Tyrells are rightfully SOOO fed-up with Cersei, so they'd never willingly consent to her return to power.)

[@baitbait65]

Sweet Robin could be like Ivar the Boneless riding into battle on a winged knight's shield and letting arrows fly.

[@SapphireSolstice67]

“On”?

[@SapphireSolstice67]

That’s a fake account obviously

[@manband20]

Regarding Sweetrobin staying behind when they march on Harrenhal, I think this is the exact last thing that should happen. Littlefinger would want Sweetrobin along for the sole purpose of legitimizing Alayne AND for the possibility of him dying along the way, two things he absolutely needs to happen for his plans. Blackfish would have some subconscious desire to keep his family close (Family, Duty, Honor and all of that) but he also would need to have Littlefinger's King around so he could try to assert himself as the true leader of their rebellion. Who is Sweetrobin more likely to agree with: his beloved great-uncle or his hated stepfather? Sure, he's a little boy, but he is still technically a King. Meanwhile, Bronze Yohn and Nestor would want Sweetrobin to stay behind at The Gates of the Moon for protection and that is the factor that makes Littlefinger and Blackfish agree that their sad, sickly little boy-king absolutely must come along. If he stays behind, he would more than likely need to remain in their custody. This means neither Baelish nor Blackfish control the King directly. And if something goes wrong, the Royces can pull out and hold Sweetrobin hostage. Sweets can absolutely end up back in The Vale at some point, but the logistics of him being a hostage and staying behind versus being a puppet and coming along are something that need to be considered.

[@sheilahilton356]

Great Q&A Carmine and Preston. Doing George’s work as usual 😀❤️

[@SHARKVADERS]

PJ IS BACK FOMOS

[@sunnydragon722]

So a couple of questions I thought of while listening. 1) will we still get a scene similar the show with Alyane being revealed to Sansa? I mean Miranda would still want her out of the picture to try and sink her fingers into sweet Robin, and she believes she can proof she killed Lysa. Sweet Robin could always annul the marriage to Tyrion rather than remove the bastard status. After all it is a 7 kingdom custom that the high septon has to annul the marriage and they are no longer part of the 7 kingdoms. And while ppl may frown on it, if it means gaining an allied they may just shrug. Or potentially simply name a new high septon of the Vale/the Riverland And the rest, provided that he annulls the marriage. This would allow for more conflicts with the faith and kinda have a henry the 8th vibe of "oh your gonna be like that? Ok I'll start my own church." 2)Was Alyane giving her favor to someone named after daemon blackfyre and whose house is a large blackfyre supporter a hint that someone will try to marry sansa of to Ageon, who may or may not be a blackfyre, who is being supported by blackfyre sympathizers? I think you mentioned that it may be a possibility in the dragons in the Riverland (?) Series.

[@ksolesky2]

I always wondered how Dorne felt about the High Septon when they were independent. In real life there are dozens of times France or Spain or someone made their own Pope because they were at war with Italy

[@lokidoki525]

I thinkt that the main povs will get more chapters like 7-8 but the side povs maybe onle get 2-3. like Areo Hotah, Asha, Victarion

[@umwha]

The story needs Robin to leave the vale I think. Here’s why he would go. Winter is here and he’s in the vale. They could just wait for the winter to be over before starting their campaign. However, they also want to strike while the enemy is weak, they need to win people to their side before winter, and so Robin needs to be out for people to pledge too. Because, during winter the smaller houses will seek aid from the larger forces: the Lannisters. Therefore the Lannisters may actually be stronger after winter. That’s why they need to bring the smaller houses into the fold NOW. So Robin will be set up in Harrenhal, to hold a kings court where nearby people can come to pledge themselves to him.

[@keirangrant1607]

How are you and the other writers going to prepare a POV chapter for Cersie, do some angel dust and got temporarily crazy?

[@marcneef795]

Dragon Demands on the Round table would be epic 😇

[@jessetuttle9287]

Davos's arrival on Skagos and finding out that they are not as uncivilized as claimed. But, building an army and navy to take the north. They have a Khazadum/Erebor type of feeling and Rickon Stark is their ticket. They have their own half-maesters which have advised them in agriculture, mining, military, and governance. Somebody please put likes on this suggestion.

[@AzorAhai1tk]

Really excited for the eventual Quentyn chapter

[@chrisp1259]

Gotta put Cersei back as Regent, no? She's back at the Red Keep with Tommen when Kevan dies and is the only ranking Lannister lordling in Kings Landing. She's gonna retake that by force

[@corbinskywalker]

GRRM PLANNED IT ALL

[@a.k.summers5633]

In regards to Carmines suggestion about going over the chapters ... if George told not only that the butler did it, but also why and how... it would really suck.

[@ModernSynthesist]

Yes, we're excited 👍 But, no, we don't want to speed things up! 🖐️ You are cranking out gold at this pace, so let's keep things as they are. Honestly can't understand how you're still keeping your output with a new kiddo.

[@look4lec]

"Back and forth with the editors" can I hire them? Pretty good editing.

[@JoniukasVader]

Back are we and

[@MaxMustermann678]

Hey Preston! You said you wanted to read up on medieval military logistics. I wrote a comment here with a recommendation to the "acoup" blog by historian Bret Devereaux, but youtube seems to have removed/hidden it. Maybe because the comment had external links and youtube thought it was spam lol.

[@daboos6353]

I always thought it'd be cool for the Mountain Clans to side with Dany and Tyrion later on.

[@youngmaddogg5230]

“Hot D was on my mind” -Preston 😂😂😂😂

[@stephaniec9539]

Alayne II was epic cant wait for the next chapter

[@profoundpronoun4712]

Loved this chapter! ❤

[@smack80]

YO PRESTON! Our kids are almost the exact same age! My son is about 2 weeks old and my daughter is 2 years and 10 months old. I got married 4 years ago. We are like life decisions twinsies!

[@keegannoble1809]

Off topic, but are you guys gonna review Andor? It’s shockingly the best Star Wars show so far.

[@PrestonJacobstheSweetrobin]

We will, definitely

[@jewsco]

@@PrestonJacobstheSweetrobin more to add to your plate wow this is getting ridiculous

[@nialloliverkempson8210]

@@PrestonJacobstheSweetrobin You'll have to start franchising soon, you must be busy af

[@santiagogarza8121]

You'd think little finger would like to keep sweet Robin by his side though right? Like it would be a huge loss to leave him with some other lord

[@siryves]

Chpt Suggestion: you should definitely have a John chapter, a Dead John chapter of course. Exploring warging or white walker raising of dead or the god of light. A pov from animal form, a zombies mind or even an actual afterlife audience with a freaking mythical being would dope

[@parthdeshpande2966]

Ayyy my boy Mord needed a shout out😭😭

[@jakub_paints6775]

I mean Tywin is my favorite character. Especially the show one. Altough I don't condone some of his actions, I still like him. I mean people love Daenerys and look what she has done, how many people she has killed.

[@franbalcal]

Who is Robert Arryn's heir now? I'd love some internal monologue of Sansa and how Harrenhal AND Riverrun should actually belong to her as the most senior Tully (that hasnt abdicated or is presumed dead) I know this might now advance the plot, but would be amazing to have a recap on how her Sansa's hisband, Lord Tyrion would be the current lord of Casterly rock, how she also was close to becoming the wife of the heir to Highgarden, would be Lady of the Vale if she indeed marries her cousin. How had she married Joffrey she'd be queen and a Baratheron and with rebel Renly dying withot heirs, her second son with joffrey would have been Lord of the Stormlands (probably) Also like more thoughts on how her Father grew up in the vale and kinda reconnect with him that way. visiting the places he visited, etc.

[@fazediamond5671]

Hector Harding I think

[@jswagaudio]

100 YEARS MORTY

[@musculusiv4172]

Where can you submit questions for these Q&As?

[@MyUserTubeAccount]

come on Preston, that's not fair, Tywin has a very large fanbase!

[@lead_downpour8854]

When it comes to large armies on the March like that, especially one comprised mainly of the levies of these feudal lords, would many (obviously not all) of the support roles be covered by the jobs and expertise of the foot soldiers, carpentry, cooking, construction etc?

[@Scott100W]

The only thing that felt a bit off was the Miranda confrontation being a bit too on the nose for GOT IMO. Feels like it was shoehorned in a bit quick and sudden to add more intrigue to the fallout of Harry's death. Still loved the chapter though, appreciate the effort!

[@feconisb.3067]

Preston is a new Rings of Power podcast coming?

[@booboo1970]

You can't rush perfection.

[@Nosraceroom]

You know, depending on how ambitious the Vale Lords are, they could have Sweetrobin legitimize Mya Stone as a Baratheon

[@justthat4333]

Excellent chapter

[@PhilHibbs]

6:04 “Oh, you think he’s dead, do you?”- GRRM

[@lauriketola1454]

Brienne probs has to kill stoneheart so she would kinda be a oathbreaker like jaime. Curious about the scene with littlefinger where his hands are sticky when he told sansa in sos that always keep your hands clean. Does it mean that he is losing his mojo?

[@Scott100W]

I was wondering this too! Or is it an indication that Littlefinger killing lysa will be his downfall because he stickyed his own fingers in the murder rather than using a catspaw?

[@m-baka]

I demand thousands of squishers and time surfers

[@ChicagoMicrofarm]

This is not relevant to this chapter, but since George isn’t going to take us to Asshai, I would love it if this project did! I don’t think anything would be more satisfying to me than Asshai revealed as some sort of ancient crypto-technological “island”. Despite my rational knowledge of the equivalence of magic and uncomprehended technology, my science teacher mind wants the latter! Despite his stating that planetos isn’t in the 10,000 Worlds, there’s a harmonic beauty about casting it as such that I think It would be grand enough to meet the gigantic expectations that (at least) I have for a big, all-explaining climax of the story.

[@feral7523]

Littlefinger has to bump into Lady Stoneheart in the riverlands!

[@hibiscus779]

subverting expectations - Littlefinger POV chapters could contain increasingly tortuous rationalizations of him turning into Sansa's simp. I fully expect Sansa to be the 'more beautiful' queen in the Valonquir prophecy. Also - Sansa is a warg. Ok, she lost Lady, but imagine how formidable of a schemer a warg would be? She could warg into rats and spy on everyone

[@thewatcher2538]

this is sweetrobins fanfic we can under no surcumstance kill sweetrobin

[@evancappello9288]

You think he may do the same as Crows/Dance and split this up so each character has more individual chapters?

[@equinoxomega3600]

Now you understand why it takes GRR Martin so long to write the book.

[@mourningsword98]

A question for Preston: Is there a released reading order of these chapters with TWOW sample chapters? Obviously this takes place after Alayne 1 but I'd love to see how it all fits together

[@chrishowland8857]

There is a playlist on his channel

[@mourningsword98]

@@chrishowland8857 Does it include the GRRM written sample chapters?

[@AzorAhai1tk]

@@mourningsword98 Some of then as of right now but not all. I think he's adding them to the playlist once it's their "turn"

[@writernightly2397]

Hey preston have you heard of Interesting Nerd Club’s theory that Jaime will call for a trial of the 7? They give some compelling reasons and candidates who can show up as well.

[@vitormattos5368]

Steffon Lnnister is dead since AClash, if a westerner is to be named probably is Devan or Damion or Adam Marbrand or even Harys Swyft

[@TheAnimeguy44]

I loved the chapter overall but one thing i didnt like was sansas lack of agency. This isnt necessarily ylur problem as its something sansas story has suffered from in general but its something i would like to see gojng forward is sansa taking more agency and moves to forward her plot

[@MyUserTubeAccount]

what is this obsession with Sansa and "agency"? MAYBE she is the personality type that does as she is told, some people are indecisive people pleasers. Arya has agency, Dany has agency, Arrianne has agency, Asha has agency, Margeary has agency, Catelyn had agency, Melisandre has agency.... maybe Sansa is not the second coming of Vito Corleone/Littlefinger/Varys? what if that happens? she is NOT going to be "da queen in da North!".

[@alanpennie8013]

@@MyUserTubeAccount I think she probably is tbh. Though how important that title will be with Bran and Jon around...

[@davidgretzschelcommunicati1630]

What the hell are "dead things in the water", if they're not squishers?

[@itaipee]

So who is the heir to the Vale after Harry died ? Also , since Little Finger legitimacy came from King Landing , is he still in charge ?

[@Scott100W]

I think it's been stated that none of Jons nieces can be the heir so there's a few options after that.. Harry would leave behind 2 bastards, though he would not have had the chance to acknowledge the 2nd as it isn't born yet. Also onee of Jons nieces was carried off by burned men so there's likely at least a couple Arryn heirs in that clan. No idea what would be decided, if sweetrobin dies, the veil will likely go into civil war.

[@HolsteinerCox]

Thank you.

[@permiebird937]

The chapter is great. I really enjoyed it. My question is why did Harry not fly in the final tilt? Sweet Robin was chanting "fly-fly-fly" then Harry slips off his horse like a drunk? If Harry dying in the final tilt is to suggest Sweet Robin influenced that outcome, Harry should have been propelled airborne at some point, before falling dead. That would have had a vibe of the Billy Mummy twilight zone, the "wish it into the cornfield" one, because of the terrifying power the child appears to have.

[@mrsputum4082]

I‘m really not trying to be a dick but the audio is still noticeably panned to the left which makes listening through headphones a bit uncomfortable. And I swear, I’m not saying this because I enjoy complaining or something, I think it’s in your best interest fix this issue, because that way you could easily increase the quality of these podcast episodes.

[@PrestonJacobstheSweetrobin]

This was a one time weird thing. Audacity errored and dropped a track.

[@mrsputum4082]

@@PrestonJacobstheSweetrobin ok, because a few weeks ago I had a short exchange with Carmine about the same issue and he didn’t quite seem to believe that there was any problem at all, so I figured it was the same thing this time.

[@OfficialRedTeamReview]

@@mrsputum4082 Yeah that was a different issue all together

[@joshuaherbert30]

Please do Quentyn after Hotah II

[@alanpennie8013]

So Sweetrobin will channel some Other pov...

[@PainCausingSamurai]

It would be great if you could get other book reviewers who aren't necessarily ASOIAF experts in on the roundtable. Daniel Green maybe.

[@OfficialRedTeamReview]

If they hit either of us up, sure but I've learned my lesson, long ago, not to go asking for anybody

[@Kaknamenuss]

Why is there even a regent and a Hand? Isn't the Hand basically a regent?

[@Remember1453AD]

Should The Sansa chapters end with the return of the Sansa identity?

[@trippinzombiez]

Uncut Jousting Chapter when

[@ryasa777]

Please if Dany gives Sweetrobin a ride on a dragon ie makes him fly i will die

[@LSK1]

❤❤❤❤

[@QueenDaenerysTargaryen]

Dracarys 🔥🔥🐉🐉🐲🐲

[@lokidoki525]

Preston, please dont drop jon as a pov. It would be really boring without him. Except if you decide to have him die and stay dead.

[@JoaoBurgess]

first of all: Fora Bolsnaro! second: find a group to translate Preston's chapters into Portuguese

[@jovan3686]

You guys should have Destiny as a guest for house of the dragon since he gets pretty heated when he talks about GOT

[@Borgcow]

Just sayin’, but I would pay $12-18 for a “What About Mord” T-Shirt. Just sayin’

[@Kapulaites]

How is GRRM going to showing POV at Castle Black in WOW with Jon stabbed?

[@PrestonJacobstheSweetrobin]

Mel

[@iliaponomarev1624]

@@PrestonJacobstheSweetrobin Mel is probably supposed to run away to Nightfort or somewhere with the surviving Queensmen, Jon loyalists and wildlings after Bowen Marsh wins the Battle of Castle Black?

[@hankshistory9486]

Wouldn’t the mutineers be outnumbered at Castle Black?

[@iliaponomarev1624]

@@hankshistory9486 They would be badly outnumbered, but Freys were also outnumbered by Stark forces during the Red Wedding. So, I guess, it's a coin toss who wins?

[@captainmoky]

melisandre and Davos perhaps???

[@MrScientifictutor]

Who mourns for mord?

[@TableTopNeverStop]

Squish me Preston

[@matthewbird1067]

Carmine finding his calling as an agent today.

[@maxmercer1931]

Wow, Carmine is furious with what Preston is doing to Littlefinger... This gon be lit

[@OfficialRedTeamReview]

No I'm not?

[@maxmercer1931]

@@OfficialRedTeamReview well, let's hope for a falling out. Being emotionally invested in a character and then having the writer doing something to them one totally disagrees with is dynamite

[@OfficialRedTeamReview]

@@maxmercer1931 um...k?

[@mirasantana157]

This chapter is bad even for a fanfic. How can you write a Sansa POV chapter and remove all her protagonism and give it away to other male characters, especially one as dull as Robert Arryn ?!?! You clearly doesn't understand the character of Sansa, and what her storyline represent. She should be the Queen not freaking Robin Arryn or any freaking Waynwood as you implie. The story is hers not theirs.

[@fazediamond5671]

She’s a bastard tho

[@zacrusk5274]

Preston #1!!

[@hibiscus779]

Most of it was good but some of the developments were way too abrupt and felt rushed - Robert declared king, and recognizing Alayne as Sansa. Robert makes no sense as king. Repeating the Rob as king in the north moment here for Robert felt like you were plagiarizing that chapter while missing the earned loyalty and devotion that made kingship so natural for Rob.