i mean if they "raised a ruckus and no one cared" and theres only 3 of them forgotten by the system, he could've just let them out
@PeterDivineАй бұрын
Yeah, this one overstepped itself majorly with that line. You expect me to believe that literally hundreds of prisoners, and dozens of security guards, can just up and die/vanish over the course of a year and _no one_ outside starts getting alarmed? _None_ of them have families, or friends, or defenders, or contacts, even among the staff or wardens? That would be one hell of a lead to bury.
@hunterdidsomething843723 күн бұрын
@@PeterDivinecorruption and being silenced. Boeing has some competition
@TheCat_312 күн бұрын
did his lawyer just leave
@ValdVincent10 күн бұрын
@@PeterDivine I have a lovely story called Rikers Island to tell you about. This said the first clue this story is fully bullshit is that there is no such prison, because it's actually just a Jail.
@blinkyy10887 күн бұрын
@@PeterDivine THIS. You really expect me to believe Epstein was smuggling children to a private island for over two decades, as well as importing hundreds of american celebrities to play with them, and NOBODY said anything? No one noticed? Absolutely unrealistic, this has never happened, trans rights are human rights, etc
@innervexity Жыл бұрын
Soldier is actually canonically a lawyer in the tf2 story so i like that you made a lawyer using his player model
@vietnam_so_good7 ай бұрын
@Tigran-Abazyan never really read the comics, but i think he just convinced the court that he was a real lawyer and used a lamp for some reason.
@MostrandomM_toexisttoday7 ай бұрын
Did you know that you’re a sinner? But did you know that Jesus loves you and He can change that, all you have to do is believe that He died on the cross and rose from the grave 3 days later, repent, and accept God into your life, it’s your choice, Jesus loves you..
@BrOkEnboilergaming6 ай бұрын
@@MostrandomM_toexisttoday What does that have to do with Soldier being canonically in the tf2 comics????
@DeathTheDestroyer-vh4lu6 ай бұрын
@@BrOkEnboilergaming ive seen this guy in other videos I'm generally convinced he's a bot.
@BrOkEnboilergaming5 ай бұрын
@@DeathTheDestroyer-vh4lu thx for the info
@mrmason23 Жыл бұрын
I think this 'creature' actually represents starvation, the prison in OP's story is a presentation of the modern prison system where prisoners are treated less than humans and only there to exist until they get released. Since Kellen didn't exist because at the end the OP told so, all the stories of the ghost from Kellan (which the story seemed off or out of place to me from the beginning) is fake and made up and that includes the prisoners seeing the creature from the narrator himself, they were screaming due to them starving to death, the reason was guards were being layed off on mass and returned days later due to the company that owns the prison undergoing bankruptcy. TLDR: A prisoner made up a story about a ghost and a nice-guard named kellen after he was heavily traumatized and dehumanized by staying at a prison, which the company that owns it went into a process of bankruptcy, thus he and 200+ prisoners began starving due guards being layed off and not coming back days later after floors or blocks had starved to death. Then he and his 3 other friends began going insane after 11 days of starvation, which they survived by staying still, due to the disbursement company forgetting they exist or are still in there, and only had noticed their mistake after 11 days from the prison's closing.
@thetwistedaubreyjames9145 Жыл бұрын
This comment would be good if you didn't say "OP" 💀☠️💀☠️ redditor
@ismaelgingles9409 Жыл бұрын
Good theory 👍
@keithharrissuwignjo2460 Жыл бұрын
How would you explain the guard saving the 2 guys from the 4th floor
@DiamondG489 Жыл бұрын
@@keithharrissuwignjo2460Probably due to the two going absolutely insane from starvation and was taken to the side as 'punishment' for being disobedient which led to the guard either getting laid off or fired due to the mishandling of the situation
@keithharrissuwignjo2460 Жыл бұрын
@@DiamondG489makes sense thanks man
@Ba5Apostrophe Жыл бұрын
It is actually scary to think that I actually live near Pembina Prison. No wonder why people say the prisons and hospitals in North Dakota stink.
@jaysanders925 Жыл бұрын
Think you could snag a picture of the ghost for us?
@anobody7467 Жыл бұрын
@@jaysanders92524 hours lmao
@Ba5Apostrophe Жыл бұрын
I am definitely not going to prison just to get a photo of a ghost!
@Stupidhedgehog Жыл бұрын
@@Ba5Apostrophei could
@loner4978 Жыл бұрын
ive lived in ND for 7 years and ive heard stories about Pembina Prison but never this creepypasta
@Trollge1337 Жыл бұрын
"To all the people confused about Kellen: I read it as Kellen never existing and being just a coping mechanism to preserve some of their humanity. At least someone cared about them. But take that last paragraph and remove Kellen and reverse all the things he says, and I think that decodes it pretty well. Kellen never existed. We did not have a friend among the guards, and it was all bad. I was traumatized by the hell I went through being left to rot and left to die as nothing more than a number on some corporation's books." -Somebody else theory
@trolledfordrip Жыл бұрын
but then how did we hear this story cuz unless it was all on paper (ok that can be what it is cuz we do know he has some and a pencil) and if its 100% in his mind how can the other guards see him and talk to him?
@Swordsoulreaver Жыл бұрын
@danielmeers7166 and how did he move 2 prisoners to a different cell?
@trolledfordrip Жыл бұрын
@@Swordsoulreaver not kellen who did that
@Swordsoulreaver Жыл бұрын
@@trolledfordrip He initially moves 2 prisoners to the 5th floor, but the nightguard moves them back down and even says "What was kellen thinking?"
@trolledfordrip Жыл бұрын
@@Swordsoulreaver i was thinking of the nightguard when you said that my bad but yes kellen did move them first
@tyrantula2484 Жыл бұрын
you know we eating GOOD tonight when plant drops a 30 minute video.
@optisprimusproductions Жыл бұрын
The "eating while watching KZbin" good
@mr_noob_nab6548 Жыл бұрын
The legend has returned
@PichuonMC Жыл бұрын
FR
@Twigg_123 Жыл бұрын
FR, speaking nothing but, FAX
@flamingballz Жыл бұрын
its like a christmas morning when a new video pops up, and even greater if its a long one. i really love watching these
@Forgivemelordplease Жыл бұрын
Kellen is the goat🐐
@Zipperskull_ Жыл бұрын
Literally, the guy didn't even quit his job
@Forgivemelordplease Жыл бұрын
@@Zipperskull_real to the end
@vex7561 Жыл бұрын
Ikr he even risked his life for his job
@broom8964 Жыл бұрын
unfortunately kellen never existed (in the original story, it turned out in the end that kellen was just a coping mechanism for the main character)
@broom8964 Жыл бұрын
oddly that detail is left out in this version
@youforgot5594 Жыл бұрын
These animations are so nostalgic, wholesome and creepy at the same time.
@StaryExtra Жыл бұрын
Some may call it cheesy, corny, or outright stupid, but I like TF2 SFMs of creepypastas. It's not because it's a masterpiece or amazing, but it's just funny to see TF2 characters put into these ridiculously bad creepy pasta situations. It's fun to watch.
@mildly_miffed_man1414 Жыл бұрын
It is also amazing though
@prorandocopier7945 Жыл бұрын
Honestly Heavy would just break em out, fight that ghost while scout records and eggs him on, and Sniper calls his Mum and Dad
@bonelesspiza Жыл бұрын
In reality they would kick some creepy ass
@TemmieContingenC Жыл бұрын
There’s a sort of amateurish flare to it tbh. It’s so contrasting seeing silly TF2 characters act out a creepypasta that’s meant to be scary.
@prorandocopier7945 Жыл бұрын
to add on to my comment, heres my exact lines "Hey fatty, GO GET EM!" "YOU ARE BABY! BABY GHOST!" "Yea, Mum? I got out. Technicality, I know, I know."
@Bulbasaur617 Жыл бұрын
A fantastic recreation to this creepypasta. A wonderful job despite some limits. But you did your best here. Wonder what will you recreate next? Or work on next? We'll just have to see for ourselves. Although I do have some imaginations on what creepypasta I would like to see recreated.
@TheRealClaylex Жыл бұрын
I personally hope Plant does another Mr Nightmare one, LOVE when he does those.
@Bulbasaur617 Жыл бұрын
@@TheRealClaylex Yeah. It would be kinda short, but easy for them to work on. Unless it's one of Mr Nightmare's old Creepypastas.
@ismaelgingles9409 Жыл бұрын
I personally hope he does a wendigo creepypasta
@Cdoom541 Жыл бұрын
What was the original called if this was a recreation
@yredcat5772 Жыл бұрын
@@Bulbasaur617 The Trailer is a classic and I could totally see it animated
@Pancombine18 Жыл бұрын
The demon can be seen as a metaphor for the narrator's own hunger and feel of slow death of starvation and rotting alone in his cell, kellen can be seen as the narrator's hope that he will get out and the friendship he has created there from what happened is they closed the prison and left few prisoners behind to starve to death for 11 days until this mistake was found and corrected and no one cared in the end that they were held there for 11 days.
@loomingdeath1758 Жыл бұрын
yeah but how did the gaurds know kellen? Or see the Demon?
@Pancombine18 Жыл бұрын
@@loomingdeath1758 Hallucinations, Kellen is basically made up person the narrator created.
@loomingdeath1758 Жыл бұрын
@@Pancombine18 But it doesn't explain how the Night shift guard knew Kellen and said what he said.
@Swoljoel5 күн бұрын
Average English teacher
@derpfrancis Жыл бұрын
I find myself listening to tales like these from your channel while doing other things. Creepy, horrifying, spine-chilling, they're all pretty good stories. However, I'd say the scariest part of this one is that damn light in the tower. A lot of what's in this one is good. I just find it funny (even if it is annoying from an animator's perspective) to see that damn light going ballistic in the middle of a yard scene
@RYZEN-4070-TI-SUPER-OC Жыл бұрын
I use sfm and f some lights on the maps some of them for me keep flashing blue or red
@weegeegaming2201 Жыл бұрын
I hope nobody is like "oh why would you watch this just go listen to the audio". The visuals, even if its just tf2 characters, help me enjoy these creepy storys even more; they allow me to be more easily immersed in the story. Thanks so much for making me lose sleep tonight!
@randomguy-kq4qy6 күн бұрын
I dont think anyone would say that, if anything why WOULD you watch the audio version over this?
@weegeegaming22016 күн бұрын
@randomguy-kq4qy I'm probably going to rewatch these, I grew up off of gmod and creepypastas(mostly gaming). These videos felt special to me because it brought the two things I wanted together in a way I personally enjoyed. I'm sorry if that's shocking, but I'm not a complex person with sophisticated tastes - just another person human-ing through life..
@PurpleBroadcast Жыл бұрын
That was the best horror story ive ever heard. Even with sfm graphics, i felt scared, the vibe was always uneasy
@velboi3823 Жыл бұрын
I absolutely love the switch-up of how them being on the top floor went from feeling like a safe haven as they were dead last before everyone else, to the dread that they were the only ones left... beautifully made story
@AmyelidaK Жыл бұрын
genuinely one of the best critiques of the modern prison system i've seen. incredible work on both parts. wow.
@pieguy6992 Жыл бұрын
This is excellent. I've watched all of your SFMs, and nothing displays how much you've improved over time like this one. It was a joy to watch and, unlike most other creepypastas, legitimately freaked me out. Absolutely amazing work
@TheG_Boy Жыл бұрын
The simplicity of these and the use of TF2 models makes it strangely nostalgic
@Imnotsmg4bob Жыл бұрын
Oh God... I listened to this story a little while back... I still remember how horrifying it was at the end, gut wrenching and heart aching.
@spudermun9522 Жыл бұрын
This channel is underrated. I have no clue why this hasn’t blown up since the exploring the abandoned school one, but man I just love this content.
@PrimesNewExperiment Жыл бұрын
I'm gonna be honest, while this video isn't on the level of some of the other SFM animators, this creepypasta was legitimately the most terrifying shit I've ever watched in the last 5 minutes of it. I don't like the ending because the intro doesn't make sense either way but holy God, seeing those everything happen and get progressively worse was legitimately insane. It was so terrifying I had a nightmare on it like 10 minutes ago, I'm not kidding it's like 5 am. You did a very job making everything feel real even with base tf2 assets, this was absolutely terrifying.
@hunde01 Жыл бұрын
We can all agree that the worst part, is when it ended.
@Demonoob2237 күн бұрын
Yeah, that shot of Scout just shaking in pure terror as the demon looks around for him and after that when he talks about how nobody cared for him as he rocked back and forth trying to cope with the trauma shook me to my core.
@BluerayCD Жыл бұрын
I don't get what it is, but when a creepypasta is told with sfm for the visuals, it becomes 100x more entertaining
@Jazkal-V420 Жыл бұрын
Honestly the animation's quality is what got me coming back
@literallyjusts0meguy Жыл бұрын
Good story, horrifying to think about, and god tier animation.
@dapperbones6238 Жыл бұрын
This is really funny because a few weeks ago I listened to the original of this story and was thinking that it would be a perfect one to be animated like this. And behold, you have delivered me a great gift!
@tiandi5585 Жыл бұрын
This creepypasta is a classic! I always love coming back to it every year.
@forfaerghus8092 Жыл бұрын
As someone born, raised, and still lives in North Dakota, this story hits way too close to home.
@Sthangimations Жыл бұрын
One of my favourite creepypastas. I remember listening to the original when I was a lot younger and my dad let me visit his workplace. You nailed the recreation
@Ian_Paneque Жыл бұрын
Even if the animation is simple, it's really well done
@Non-ymous Жыл бұрын
don’t worry guys, the last three prisoners were freed actually, after 11 days of trauma.
@naus6081 Жыл бұрын
Fantastic work Plant; this is just impeccable. The mixture of sfm and creepy pasta fills the tiny niche in my heart that there’s almost nothing else for. You’ve just gotten better and better; this was such a joy. Great work again!
@nyanprime8345 Жыл бұрын
this was the very first Creepypasta I ever listened too, and it was the birth of an addiction strong for about 8 years now, I love Creepypasta and I never knew I needed this in my life, this is fantastic.
@christianmorris960 Жыл бұрын
This is too damn underrated.I was on a the edge of my seat the whole time.10/10 keep up the good work
@thedantagonist Жыл бұрын
no way man, you did an outstanding job animating this one!
@GoodOlMadly Жыл бұрын
That was amazing, So glad your around to make these amazing renditions!
@jayjay2x417 Жыл бұрын
Man i adore a good creepypasta with an intense ending like that, sad though that we didn't get to find out what happened to the other two remaining souls....but man. That was good
@julesjewels6325 Жыл бұрын
you have no idea how excited i got when i saw this notification on my feed, i’ve loved this story for years and you’ve really done it justice
@_molls Жыл бұрын
One of my all time favorite creepypastas, I’m so so happy to see it remade here haha
@Ramirez_76519 ай бұрын
I haven't listened to any creepypasta in a long while, but I did listen to the original creepypasta straight from the source you used. Amazing work, good sir.
@danielbogdanoski4412 Жыл бұрын
These sfm creepypastas are really well made, great job dude.
@MidnightVCoco Жыл бұрын
these animations make the stories so much scarier than anything I could visualize.
@basimaziz Жыл бұрын
This was a DELIGHT~. I have such a big smile on my face right now as I write this. Thank you so much for adapting this story into an animation~.
@Kev.TWDG1 Жыл бұрын
These SFM creepypasta have been a 10/10, keep going!
@RareZig Жыл бұрын
Man the story is something new and refreshing, the ending was pretty aight too.
@Skunkfan76 Жыл бұрын
Learning from lazy purples experience, I really appreciate you making these sfm movies
@traceedwards8946 Жыл бұрын
This is one of my favorite Creepypastas. Thank you for making this so much.
@TerryJives Жыл бұрын
Honestly might be one of your best animations so far
@sergentnewvegas2553 Жыл бұрын
A new sfm creepypasta? AND around 30 minutes?! YESSIR
@someoneunknown9084 Жыл бұрын
You also deserve more recognition, and I have seen from previous animations your sfm skills are getting a lot better
@cappedminer369 Жыл бұрын
great job ! also I recommend using other kinds of human models for sfm like left 4 dead, half life, even stuff from the workshop
@Federalprison6 Жыл бұрын
I know it’s a scary story, but the mercs in a scary situation is kinda hilarious
@cappedminer369 Жыл бұрын
@@Federalprison6 lol, yeah, though i don't think it ruins the scary mood
@weaponized_toaster Жыл бұрын
half life would be best, it's eerie, dystopian, and moat gmod maps use the models and textures, and that already makes them disturbing
@cappedminer369 Жыл бұрын
@@weaponized_toaster never played it but from what i've seen, yeah looks cool
@weaponized_toaster Жыл бұрын
@@cappedminer369 u rlly should
@Shadow659_YT Жыл бұрын
SFM Creepypasta content on youtube is so scarce, and plant here does it perfectly. I can't wait for what future content plant has in store.
@m.t.fguard8309 Жыл бұрын
I think I've watched this video like 5 times already that's how good it is, you need to make some more amazing stuff like this!
@Venomslayer449 Жыл бұрын
I love animated, creepy pasta, recipes type the ones with the team fortress two characters. Don't stop making these love this
@VoidiBoid Жыл бұрын
Absolutely beautiful man, you've got some bearings to be able to make an animation that'ss 30 minutes long.
@whyamistupid3826 Жыл бұрын
30 minute animation!?! Keep up the amazing work buddy.
@Valos_Nuull Жыл бұрын
You need to keep going with these really well designed animations; honestly you are quite skilled at this and I know you're gonna just become better and better each time you do them man. I love hearing this stuff from you're channel when I'm playing Team Fortress 2 or just relaxing and it's nice so thank you and keep it up at you're own pace.
@БогданКрименюк Жыл бұрын
Nibba said you're two times 🤡💀
@Thejudger2125 Жыл бұрын
nibba? Don’t you mean ni-
@Cdoom541 Жыл бұрын
These are keeping one of my favorite KZbin genres alive that being sfm creepy pastas nobody makes these anymore and it’s sad
@CAT_SAYS_NO Жыл бұрын
I was just looking for a video to watch while I eat, and plant drops another banger.
@TheRealClaylex Жыл бұрын
#spoilers for this SFMs story but If I remember the story correctly in its context: Everything about this story happened BUT Kellen was made up in the narrator's head. Either what the narrator saw messed him up so badly or the fact the literal government sent him and several other prisoners into an empty prison. Either or regarding both scenarios probably caused his mind to make him up to try to keep himself sane.
@arandomthingintheabyss2062 Жыл бұрын
wow that is endlessly messed up
@TheRealClaylex Жыл бұрын
@@arandomthingintheabyss2062 Its amazing even IRL the things your mind will do to keep yourself alive/sane.
@The_Breadman Жыл бұрын
Wait so everything including that demon was real but Kellen wasn't?
@arandomthingintheabyss2062 Жыл бұрын
@@TheRealClaylex ya like the entire when it really really cold you suddenly start feeling warm tho that becouse it makes you go insaine so it a bad example but you get what i meant
@TheRealClaylex Жыл бұрын
@@The_Breadman Could possibly be! Or possibly the demon wasn’t real and the narrators mind broke and he imagined it before he got out
@utahraptor700 Жыл бұрын
I'm loving your creepypasta animations! I've seen an improvement across your vids and it's always a great night when you upload.
@suspiciushomer5909 Жыл бұрын
Absolutely amazing, I've heard this story before but it is still an amazing creepypasta
@Saint_Million Жыл бұрын
What a fantastic story. Glad to see it animated! This is something great for sure.
@Raynardthefox Жыл бұрын
this is actually a great creepypasta
@lifeiscats13375 күн бұрын
This is one of the best SFM creepypasta animations I’ve ever seen
@anonymoususer_377819 күн бұрын
Fun fact: The red monster of this creepypasta is sometimes referred to as “The Executioner”, which is very fitting for a story based around a prison. (Look it up on the villain wiki)
@PichuonMC Жыл бұрын
Yes another SFM Creepypasta so good bro these are so nostalgic because i loved creepypastas back down still do!
@spacecolonyalliances.c.a1234 Жыл бұрын
Love these videos, always a joy to see creepypastas animated. If I may ask, would you potentially look into creepy pasta called the First Settlements. It has about 8 different parts, with a reading of them done by a channels called Dark Somnium. It is quite a good one, although a bit long for each part (Full series is 5 hours).
@Springy_trapy Жыл бұрын
FINALLY iver been waiting for another story. i love your stories
@ostaruempire Жыл бұрын
Another amazing 30 minute sfm creepypasta, keep up the kickass work brother!
@wtz246 Жыл бұрын
This is the best sfm creepypasta I've ever seen keep up the good work
@someoneunknown9084 Жыл бұрын
DUDE PLEASE DONT STOP DOING THIS I HAVE WARCHED EVERY SINGLE VIDEO YOU HAVE MADE BECAUSE I LOVE YOUR STUFF SO MUCH :)
@mrunknown8335 Жыл бұрын
Im so glad one of my favorite creepypastas gets an sfm adaption. Ita a good one too thank you!
@ammodown18 күн бұрын
this is by far my favorite animation you’ve made
@RIP2UALL Жыл бұрын
Really loved this one, glad to see it animated!
@MonstaCreepypasta Жыл бұрын
This is so good, it should be turned into a movie 👍
@noahmueller1468 Жыл бұрын
This story is quite possibly the scariest creepypasta I’ve ever heard, to this day I still struggle to get through it, even though I know what happens in it, and for that reason I love it
@MRDAY-to8vy Жыл бұрын
The sum of the story is (No One Cares). Man this is movie material here! Keep up the great work!
@БогданКрименюк Жыл бұрын
Just like real life Brilliant
@ms.cannibal5190 Жыл бұрын
Damn, the story is pretty great, and your choice for character clothing is good too. Prost
@Luka2000_ Жыл бұрын
Really love these videos. Remind me of the classic tf2 creepypastas from 2015. This was a really good one btw
@damienboi30 Жыл бұрын
this is the only VIDEO in the world i don't pause , skip or rewind. I think it's the best to do the homework with it
@T1meWanderer Жыл бұрын
Dude your sfm animation has improved dramatically keep up the great work
@a-pose_heavy Жыл бұрын
this is super interesting im half way finished like its really cool good job bro
@Night.rider.43 ай бұрын
This is so perfect, the story is perfect, and sfm captures it perfectly.
@captainsudan1891 Жыл бұрын
I LOVE PLANT WOOOOO. I watched this whole video and it was so good
@riseoftheepicscout454 Жыл бұрын
real
@t-squared000 Жыл бұрын
so true
@ramaalgetahbag139 Жыл бұрын
I've always loved this story and the animation with it made it even better thanks
@SheepsAhoy. Жыл бұрын
how did they survive 11 days without water
@archdornan81 Жыл бұрын
they sucked it from the bricks 💀
@013Jenova2 ай бұрын
Pee????
@MudZeePlayGamerАй бұрын
Rationing water from buying stuff from commissary?
@JonDoeLivesАй бұрын
Toilet
@roanbell29 күн бұрын
Bread
@originalname6648 Жыл бұрын
Great creepypasta and love your work man keep up the good work!
@autisticblood5123 Жыл бұрын
This animation is unique, though if I had heard about this creepypasta way before your animation variant of it, I would have felt very bad but I'm happy you did a nice thing to it with scout on his bed [Spoiler to plot for the people that hasnt seen this btw] It's like in my story of the animation: After 11 days, after the last few prisoners that were found in the prison somehow alive, taken out and other helpful care on what they went through, they got sent to their places and for the ending of Scout, he managed to get back home but after what he had went through, he will need a lot of mental help on what happened to him, though he is thankful to be alive.. Idk where I'm going with this. But overall, glorious animation like all the others Plant and I wish you a very great 2023! ^^
@jcption Жыл бұрын
you are genuinely my favorite youtuber now, i love these
@UsernotFound2018 Жыл бұрын
Theses animations are quite amazing, and the voice action spot on
@MultiGuyx Жыл бұрын
I like how Plant used Soldiers model as a lawyer, since it is lore accurate.
@ManMan-xt4rj Жыл бұрын
This is the first time I've commented on any one of your videos, and my god is it for a good reason. I've been re-listening to this exact creepypasta once a couple of months and seeing an animation of it pop up in my recommendations took me by absolute surprise this morning. Haven't even started watching the video but I know it'll be good. Edit : There were only three small mistakes I noticed, at 20:10 it was supposed to be the prisoner that was hitting the bars as a distraction, and at 20:53 it was the guard that said "Mary Mother of Christ", not the prisoner. Also it would've been better if you used a different model for the red ghost since it was described as a rotting woman by the two priests, and it was the entire floor that was turning red, not just a light coming from the ghost's eyes. Then again, creative liberty is a thing and overall this video was of good quality so I can't really complain too much about these small inconsistencies. Good job on this one. 👍
@Vaganformkillerbean Жыл бұрын
Plant is literally god tie at making creepypastas keep up the good work man
@silversolitaire1519 Жыл бұрын
Few things that cross my mind anytime I watch or listen to this story. 1.) It's incredibly well written for a horror story and is one of my favorites. 2.) *IF* this story is true, I hope all 4 men involved by the end got the closure they so desperately needed. 3.) *IF* this story is true, can't the author technically sue the judge for a biased sentence; one which also resulted in damages and distress, the men could then sue North Dakota for negligence that resulted in distress and damages (As they stopped hearing cases from the prison due to all the transfers), and the disbursement company for malpractice that resulted in distress and damages for not checking to see if the prison was truly empty and wrongfully terminating Kellen without a proper inspection or review? 4.)*IF* this story is true, and the men could sue the above listed parties, they would have a strong/airtight case as there were multiple parties that witnessed the events recounted in the story. If anyone practices law in North Dakota and is listening to/heard of/or saw this story, please let me know in replies if the above are valid, running under the assumption that this is all real.
@loomingdeath1758 Жыл бұрын
Maybe they did....its a creepy pasta and no one cared if they suffered....
@phantomenderbp7488 Жыл бұрын
Subscribed to you around minute 18. Amazing work, this is great fun!
@decoratedwheat4740 Жыл бұрын
This is one of my favorite stories from creepypastajr thank you for making an sfm of it.😊❤
@Dnbray Жыл бұрын
Hey Man, you remind me of me when i first started so I would like to give you some tips 1. Use more lights - i find the lighting to be quite inconsistent, sometimes you only use maps default lights which won't make your scene look to great, sometimes the scene is incredibly bright, way to dark or looks odd, using lights will also allow you to cast shadows which will make your scene look better 2. Use the camera setting like aperture, it blurs the background allowing your characters to be in focus and doesn't make the other parts of your scene become to distracting 3. Render settings - I noticed at some parts I could see these black dots, this happens if you haven't set the render settings properly for example make sure samples are set, don't use camera settings and I would recommend rendering as an image sequence as each frame will be high quality that way. Probably add to render time but will be worth it 4. Try to have your moving in some way - I noticed you might only move a character a little bit if its required, the characters always need to be moving even if just breathing or they look like mannequins that suddenly move hope this helps
@plant9669 Жыл бұрын
Thanks for the tips and i'll be sure to incorporate them into my future videos.
@linkfreeman1998 Жыл бұрын
Also be sure to recompile the map to hdr lighting. Some of the scenes in this video made me thinking u just took a map which doesnt have hdr lighting and just clicking the enable/disable lighting twice. Edit: and try to use the spline tangent in the graph editor.
@ummeko Жыл бұрын
this. was. amazing. THIS IS SO GREAT!!! i love your vids so much, great work !