"Borrasca" by CK Walker [COMPLETE] | CreepyPasta Storytime

[@SCP--dt2hf]

I like how later on as the distrust grows between Sam and his father he begins to call him sherif instead of dad

[@troy6646]

I thought the same thing

[@nonusbusinissus5632]

He should have went back and at least offed his father. This story as it is, is a raw mass of cancer. I hate trash writers who think that cliffhangering your story where the plot should start is something valid to do.

[@giverofharmony5491]

your profile picture is literally about to kill me

[@toxicgravy5019]

@@nonusbusinissus5632 Jesus dude calm down

[@tuskinradar8688]

@@nonusbusinissus5632 fear not, for the story does conclude, and conclude to satisfaction, if perhaps not precisely getting there as youd like

[@DaybreakTownGSA]

"It's a long story - but one you've never heard before" Binch this is my third time listening to the whole thing

[@areearee7773]

Hell yeah!

[@Saben.C-Spoon]

I think this is my 15th...not even exaggerating

[@areearee7773]

Saben Campbell Same

[@Fox1997-w6k]

It’s like the fifth time for me

[@imnotfrfrr]

14th lol its a good story

[@thatrandomgamer8258]

"Underneath the triple tree... A strange man waits for me... Should I leave or should I stay... My fate's the same either way." The implications of this poem change once you re-listen to the story.

[@uwantmikehawk1]

so true ad now only one question remains ... R U gay?

[@silvurr3609]

God I already knew how the story would go but combined with the suspense and built up, when the narrator said “Whitney never made it to school” my heart dropped.

[@danikinzstar]

Especially since her dad was accusing her of telling her brother about the triple tree.... he was suspicious that she knew, so he got rid of her. And she's his stepdaughter, her last name is M not W.

[@Simply_American]

@@danikinzstarholy shite

[@shriyapanda3904]

wait where is it mentioned that her last name is m??? @@danikinzstar

[@MM-jf1me]

​@@shriyapanda3904 43:17 "Whitney M" is carved into the Triple Tree. I think this is an error as the short story records her name as Whitney W.

[@Mary-et4bz]

This is even more horrifying to listen to the second time around because of how much foreshadowing and little details there are throughout the entire thing

[@fastbreakbank]

“Mr Prescott has been staring at me forever” that dude was plotting

[@fuzzy_buddy8642]

@@fastbreakbank you just can’t put in words how good this is overall best creepy pasta ever. Side note if you haven’t already listen to tales from a gas station literally comedy but also Intense

[@fuzzy_buddy8642]

I know it’s just the best overall because of that it drops hints here and there at the hole story which you don’t notice the first time but at all but in the secend time you notice them and it’s like bombs on how you didn’t notice it’s just hits Te nail perfect

[@Flutter_Aeina]

“He’s charging triple?!”

[@Rleon760]

Ya like every Kid who starts with a P and with a K I’m like ok he’s from here ok she’s not ok he is he is not

[@froggylover666]

this is the first creepy pasta i’ve heard that is 0% supernatural and it’s easily one of the best

[@allisonblack3813]

Pen pal is another one in a similar vein as this, being disturbingly possible, and also being brilliantly written, possibly more well written than this. The only difference is that, while this story is written more like a novel, that story is written more like an interview.

[@Schinzo__]

Cause it’s realistic stuff like this happens

[@botanicalitus4194]

yeah I agree with the comment above, you should read/listin to "Penpals". Its genuinely just so.... creepy and depressing in a way that I cant explain.

[@aaronshouting588]

Try “Autopilot”

[@aaronshouting588]

Also “Ability” is great too

[@shiomicchi7247]

"Let me be your dad while I still can." That particular line hits SO MUCH HARDER when you've listened to this story before and know just how violently the relationship between Sam and the Sheriff deteriorates.

[@jessicamessica2271]

It was crazy. The dad seemed so normal at first

[@Lakefront_Khan]

@@jessicamessica2271 Money changes people.

[@cr7jm3]

@@jessicamessica2271 was he ever normal though 😪😪😪

[@EpicFail2388]

in the qcode cole sprouse version the sheriffs lines are all hostile toward sam lotta yelling till he pulls a gun on sam for mentioning whitney at the end of part 1

[@futurevizzion7792]

@@cr7jm3 at the beginning Sam does mention that his dad might've done something bad where they used to live

[@shavedparmesanprosciuttoan4317]

1:53:51 sheriff walker says about Whitney “I love your sister more than you can imagine. She’s my daughter, Sammy, and I will NEVER give her up.” That line made me shiver

[@Veghead25]

I don't understand that line. He fucked her over forever.

[@MM-jf1me]

That line is simultaneously great foreshadowing and a little confusing as Prescott later says they're planning to kill her: I wonder if Daddy Dearest was in on that plan or if he had a change of heart and was willing to let Whitney go once she was no longer attractive to him.

[@Simply_American]

@@MM-jf1meread V or listen to Mr CreepyPastas reading of it. Than get back to me!

[@MM-jf1me]

@@Simply_American Thanks for the rec, but I've decided to avoid part V. I was listening to an interview with the author and she said part V was for readers unhappy with how part IV ended; I like how the story ended at part IV so I'm content with what I have.

[@Simply_American]

@@MM-jf1me I like part V mostly because we get more character development for Sam and a few others. The podcast by Qcode was also nicely done. And I believe in the later episodes of season 2 (part V) the author was at least a producer

[@rossbond7742]

“Underneath the triple tree, a strange man waits for me, should I go or should I stay, my fates the same either way”

[@morgancunningham9230]

Ross Bond after listening to the story that phrase sends chills down my body. Damn

[@kristarichards5913]

holy shit as soon i read this comment i hear the video start say it

[@cristiang.7160]

After listening to this 12 times, it never came through. Reading it now, holy shit

[@astrangeorange4225]

Cause if I stay there will be trouble

[@damionshort823]

It's funny... How I didn't notice it before... The room with the bed and strange smell in the treehouse... I thought nothing of it... But I think it may have been a testing room of sorts for the girls...

[@CreepypastaHorror]

This is one of the darkest stories to emerge out of our little pocket of the internet. Jesus Christ man.

[@nicolegandy8432]

Erick Alden The story is well written and told but damn it's disgusting

[@stunzeed9552]

Yeah this is messed up.

[@jarredgolden4744]

Hahaha hahaha watch the sequel video

[@francissanders458]

Jarred Golden what is the name?

[@jarredgolden4744]

Francis Sanders barassca V. Its years later once he's grown up

[@notnotagoodguy9600]

At first I thought this was just going to be a story about some kids who encounter a paranormal monster but holy shit

[@kuzago]

Not not a good Guy MEEEEEE

[@dojotommy123]

Humans are the true monsters

[@gooboi2079]

same

[@3rasvok24]

Pretty disappointing isn't it?

[@full_metal_athiest2871]

Same here

[@JelloFace]

Jesus Christ, when I first started this story I didn't expect it to hold such a tight grasp on my emotions. It started so lighthearted and it made you bond with the characters untill inevitably the dark turn was introduced and it all unleashed so quickly. This was a good story and worth the listen.

[@HerschZA]

You should definitely go listen to the sequel to this story

[@mrapple2544]

Is there a sequel?!!@@HerschZA

[@andrewjennings7306]

​@@mrapple2544borrasca V

[@TruecrimeWithLeeLee]

Also check out (Cursed VHS Tapes and How To Avoid Them). Both stories are freaking awesome and on KZbin.

[@Simply_American]

@@HerschZAwhat where!!!!

[@Mung1st]

“Let me be your father while I still can.” Is the most heavy hitting sentence throughout this entire story.

[@alicia6740]

That’s why Kyle and his little brother didn’t look alike. And why Kimber’s mom was so upset that they were dating...oof.

[@Rael14]

This story is crazy when you hear for the second time

[@alicia6740]

TRUE

[@lakebrady4392]

Omg

[@firekingM101]

Bro I didn't even realize

[@toiboiskullguy9331]

Sweet Home Alabama plays in the distance

[@InsaneToats]

Finally a story with enough balls to tackle an extreme touchy subject and provide a thrilling story to boot

[@elianpiano9543]

You're so right after hours of listening to creepypastas (probably days) you just doesn't get spooked by simple torture anymore

[@liamr7122]

+Toats This Creepypasta was so incredibly fucked up. It's way too relatable. This could be anyone's town. I am used to stuff being creepy or scary or even moderately disturbing, but this is overly so.

[@janiesmith476]

+Glitch MC 1. Not pretentious in any way. 2. Not ruining the story. 3. Shut the fuck up.

[@unixone7558]

+Glitch MC How are they being pretentious? And how are they ruining the story?

[@Godzillaaaaa11]

+Janie Smith Pretty sure glitch was being sarcastic.

[@lizvalencia4492]

Oh my god… when Sam called Meera’s husband and he was talking about them having “other options” I assumed he meant adoption…. It all makes sense

[@Simply_American]

I just finished and looking back at all of these comments is jarring

[@melissasantillanes436]

This is my 3rd time listening by all my favorite story

[@azariah_kyras]

I listened to borrosca back when it released. To this day I firmly believe that this creepypasta should be a movie or a show everything about it is amazing.

[@rhondaguzman2501]

I totally agree with you.

[@MrFusion]

The fact it hasn't been adapted as a mini series is insane

[@SCUMMY4205]

This could definitely be turned into a Netflix series. Could easily get 3-4 seasons out of it.

[@freneticgamer4174]

It would definitely have to be a series in order to get it right. It’s honestly the best horror short story I’ve ever heard from the internet.

[@salutic.7544]

As I was watching it I kinda mapped out a series over the course of the creepy pasta and I can say it’s about 8 episodes.

[@MrLapidary]

Now I understand why Whitney just stayed laying there. Her dad had sold her into this, so she knew they weren't going to save her.

[@TheVividKiWi]

😳

[@devistater28]

Her dad was the one "assigned" to her. That's why she puts out bad babies (inbred)

[@blazedbat]

@@devistater28 oop-

[@COCHlNO]

@@devistater28 Holy shit just realized, Prescott said she wasn't his so that must mean she's the sheriff's(her dad)

[@Rleon760]

@@devistater28 wait what?? Thought he got kimber

[@y2oducky]

I like how, as the story progresses, Sam stops calling the officer “dad”. Quite a nice little detail

[@labelladonna9122]

No matter how many times I listen to the story realizing what his father did to his sister Whitney hurts so much

[@galactic_bear]

OH COME ON I WAS ALMOST DONE!!!! AND I JUST HAAAAAD TP READ THE COMMENTS OMFG

[@MrFusion]

It's genuinely one of the most evil things I've seen in fiction

[@curlyqween34]

Wait what

[@tangent.arc38618]

​@@curlyqween34The father did the same thing as Jimmy prescot

[@jay_naidu]

Still hate Jimmy Prescott more for killing Whitney/lobotomizing Kyle and effectively getting away with it, even after Borrasca V.

[@haileyprosser5256]

I think what scared me most about this story is that it WASNT a supernatural monster but regular men. People are evil, and knowing that this COULD happen is far more scary to me then a made up monster

[@yeshuaischrist9951]

THEN IF YOU AREN'T A CHRISTIAN ... REPENT BECAUSE THIS IS NOTHING COMPARED TO WHAT HELL WILL BE.

[@sirenssorrowsolemn]

Yes same I much prefer human stories to the supernatural

[@apharys8921]

True. I prefer supernatural stories, they're more fun and interesting. Stories like this and the truth behind them are just disgusting.

[@plugshirt1684]

Personally I don’t care whether it is a more real or supernatural story as either can be scary it just depends how well the story is made

[@plugshirt1684]

@@yeshuaischrist9951 this comment has nothing to do with your Christian fear tactics

[@justinhawk7410]

Maybe if the history presentation HAD been a DARE presentation, Sam wouldn’t have ended up with a crippling heroin addiction...

[@GreenAndGoth]

OOF

[@chriscanfly6386]

Would have been more likely actually. Anti smoking/ drugs stuff actually have the opposite affect

[@TheVividKiWi]

Let me just say that DARE was not effective at all

[@AraCod]

Right...

[@jillianpantano6461]

Heroin** the way you spelled it, is a female that is courageous. Usually associated with books and movies.

[@billfurgerson7793]

We need to start a petition to make some of these movies. MCP, you have a gift for telling stories man. The gas station, my property isn't normal, and this NEED to be on film. With YOU as narrator.

[@yungmahon715]

This really doesn't and shouldn't be a film. Ever

[@NeonRahkshi]

@@yungmahon715 I Agree Wholeheartedly, This Is An Atrocity And Deserves To Burn. i mean, its a great story... if you like a royal Emotional Mind F#%k This Story Literally Had Me Seething, I Was Shaking And Could Not Stop. Worst Part: I Listened To This Story Right Before Bed, Thus I Had A Hard Time Calming Down Enough To Sleep.

[@zachwrenn]

This story shouldn't be a film, the images shouldn't be put on film

[@youtubeconnollyfamily]

Hell yeah it should be a film Good thing there are more lights on it and then the three knuckleheads who comment

[@NeonRahkshi]

@@youtubeconnollyfamily I Love The Story A lot, It Just Hurt Me. lol Kinda Like One Of The Dragons Of Deltora Books, Isle Of The Dead, I Love The Story, Hate The Feels.

[@gaigeriel]

out of every long classic creepypasta I dont know how I've ever never decided to listen to this one. But my god was this one of the most horrific things I've ever heard. With Penpal the horror primarily effected 2 incredibly unfortunate families but THIS was on another level, the feeling of helplessness is beyond harrowing

[@Updoggo1]

Hi gage

[@angelkt61]

Yes, this one and penpal I have definitely listen to more than once

[@gaigeriel]

@@angelkt61 Ya Penpal is something I go back to every couple years. Borrasca will def be something I return to in the future

[@baconbreath1898]

I return to both those all the time, I think I prefer penpal a little bit cause the ending gets me a little emotional but this one is also incredible

[@angelkt61]

@@baconbreath1898 yes, the end of penpal is definitely emotional

[@CobaltFyrestone]

"Its a long story-" *Looks at the length of the video* Clearly.

[@Lucifurge]

๑ Robin ๑ id suggest stories from a gasstation employee the compilation video is 8 hrs long.

[@The_Baecon_King]

Tales from the Gas Station was weird and funny to me I've listened to this b Borrasca v and gas station all the way through at work. Great way to pass the time

[@rook2130]

Try the second one

[@ticci7456]

Who needs Audible when you have Mr.CreepyPasta?

[@misdafireinfexus5828]

Because of tales from the gas station read by creeps (the books have more information )

[@rook2130]

Ikr

[@nelliesilvers1210]

Yeah...so take THAT Rebel Wilson😁

[@nelliesilvers1210]

@@misdafireinfexus5828 That was an awesome series on NoSleep. I always read GasStation Jack as a LOT more mellow though. Even his speech would be more laid back IMO. Still really well read though

[@emi-0]

Tales from the gas station, The lonely broadcast station and My name is Lily Madwhip...all 3 frigging awesome!

[@SultanFriendlyGuest]

This story is so heart wrenching and truly terrifying. It's one of the best creepypastas ever written. The puzzle pieces were all there, right from the beginning. And the end was still unexpected and shocking.

[@jennamiller3858]

7 years later and this story still shocks me and makes me cry. it’s absolutely amazing

[@ManicMoth]

WAIT everyone is saying the ending is so stupid but you forgot something. The baby his sister had was named William. The babies were only named P names and K names respectively due to last name of the father according to kimber's mother. The sheriff helped, so logically so did the new one. Sam's dad, which is why he had so much to do when he was getting prepared for the job. Its why he didnt listen to sam. He was part of it. So who is the father of william? Sam's dad. And the men didnt share the girls, that was stated. So sam's dad spent seven years raping his daughter- which is why all her baby's were bad ones. They likely had genetic issues. The end of the story depended on you thinking about the names.

[@theragedfrost3623]

to many spoilers

[@elianpiano9543]

I don't remember who William was because I listened to this is pieces, but you give it a whole new twist. I mean I figured out that his father knew about it but him doing also the rape just makes it a lot weirder. Only thing is if Presscot or the sheriff were smart they would take whitney I mean why give it to the dad?

[@ezrasolo4431]

+ManicMoth Also Kimber and Kyle were related witch also explains Kimber's mother not liking Kyle

[@FreindTrey]

Whitneys baby was a "community" baby, most likely referring to community "service". Her dad works for them and wouldn't be considered community service since he gets paid.

[@ManicMoth]

+Freind Productions but community baby was a reference to the baby going to a community member (ie sam's boss who became the parent of said baby)

[@benf4628]

Fantastic story. It actually earns the disturbing and gory parts at the end. It doesn’t just force the gore in. Plot twist was amazing. 10/10 Narration by MrCreepyPasta was great also. Added am extra level of suspense and depth.

[@gemmafeser1546]

Ben F this is so inspiring

[@Bigbird306]

I’m

[@dojjin1334]

Yeah it was superb. Gut wrenching end.

[@lennyrose5852]

I can’t stand the voice or narration but the story was good.

[@Legmeat]

“I love you sister more than you can imagine” haha FUCK what a line to hear on a re-listen

[@CryptidC0mplex]

OOOOF, YEAH AGREED-

[@hayleeofthevalley]

And yet he was gonna let them send her ass through the people grinder once she popped out her last baby 😭

[@asteri3251]

Hol up. 😨 is he-

[@georgeray5535]

wait wait wait hold on so with the whole thing about the names and how kids of Prescott and Keery (however you spell his name) being the initials (parker, phil, paul and kyle, kimber, kristine) and it’s implied that William is Whitney’s child william and walker does that mean the dad actually like

[@mrl2126]

​@@georgeray5535 Prescott claims she's not "his" and she flinches at the sight of Sam, who is described as similar as his father. so yeah ig

[@atimidbirb]

This story fills me with pure, unadulterated RAGE

[@dylandevilz7876]

This is the top 5 saddest creepypastas I've ever heard. The feeling of being helpless. just able to listen to this was just so sad even if it is just a fictional story. Honestly I wish there was an alternate ending.

[@morgancunningham9230]

Dylan Devilz I think the ending is what makes it so darn good. In the real world happy endings rarely exist and this story captures that so beautifully. From it’s realistic plot to it’s realistic ending. It’s a good story because it COULD happen.

[@captainmuricausa3430]

There is a sequel. It’s called Borrosca V

[@Dazzzaman69]

Dylan Devilz still be nice to samurai the fucks thou aye

[@dylandevilz7876]

@@morgancunningham9230 yeah I guess in the way it really does make it nice

[@cheyleereed9914]

Dylan Devilz what are the other 4? I’m bored and like to be sad sometimes 😂

[@Oxydepth]

Makes me happy that people are still being introduced to this story after all these years. Definitely one of the best stories to ever come out of NoSleep.

[@rapboi6860]

The whole setup to this made me forget it was a creepypasta

[@dtendy4153]

This is quite possibly the most beautifully written and horrifying creepy pastas on the internet. I absolutely love every bit of it, right down to the most subtle of details

[@Schinzo__]

It’s cause things like this actually happen

[@TheNukedNacho]

"Its a long story, but not one you've heard before." Please. This my n-th time listening to this story.

[@thescrublord9467]

My favourite creepypasta's 1. Pen Pal 2. Borrasca 3. I dared my best friend to ruin my life 4. Hangman 5. No-end house 6. On a hill 7. I grew on a child farm 8. The face of fear 9. I wish my son never experienced heaven 10. Cabin getaway 11. Asylum 12. Tales from the gas station 13. My family has been stalked for the last 4 years 14. the puppetmaster's regime 15. driftwood the numbers are not a top 15...it's just the number of all the creepypasta's I love edit 10/10/2021: It's been nice coming back to this after so long and seeing all the recommendations you guys have left me, I appreciate it a lot. I also like how you guys have also remained civil in the thread and very positive, it's brightened up my day during dark times so thank you all for replying to this comment. My creepypasta list may have changed over the years but I've also fallen out of reading and listening to them, so I hope your recommendations can get me back into it. Once again, thank you all so much I wish you all the best and happier times.

[@thescrublord9467]

make sure to place your favourite creepypasta's here

[@dickgrayson6497]

I've heard 13 and 3 and I really liked them

[@h.g.greggs]

I agree + lonely broadcast station but that one's a bit newer.

[@somtimesenoughidk9104]

Cancer UYE I love 1,2,3,4 and 13! Good taste

[@mostprofoundquiet]

My favourite series is probably the "I'm a Search and Rescue Officer for the US Forest Service.."

[@roy5al]

If you enjoy borrasca go give CK Walker’s other stories some love! Her way of writing is amazing and she has books of her works. I own three of them.

[@dawnrooeez817]

Is there a place to buy a physical copy or is it only on Kindle? I've been scouring the internet and can't find a physical copy to save my life :(

[@roy5al]

Dawn Rooeez You can go to her website, the author is C.K. Walker. I found her books on amazon to buy them, but I found the names on her site. She has all of her stories on her website. There are three books of collections of stories that you can buy on amazon: Cold, Thin Air Vol. 1-3.

[@daniangela9990]

Thanks!

[@MissMmmmmmmm]

Mayham mountain and the rocking horse story both have minnesota references.

[@kaledranger18]

This is one of the only stories where I've actually gone and bought the book after to show my appreciation (the other was Penpal by Dathan Auerbach). This is easily one of the best horror stories in recent memory alongside Mother Horse Eyes, The Horror from the Vault series, Cabin Getaway and My Friend Lived in an Alternate Reality.

[@naenae2068]

"I loved your sister more than you can imagine" Ooh, that makes my blood boil since every time after the first listen.

[@tangent.arc38618]

He loved her romantically or he was just acting?

[@nayussysuccer]

​@@tangent.arc38618He loved her in a sick way considering he impregnated her multiple times.

[@Cat-sampo]

@@tangent.arc38618 He was... loving her... "William" W for Walker

[@Veghead25]

​@@Cat-sampoHOLY. SHIT. I didn't understand until now.

[@sophisticaded]

I’m listening to this a 2nd time and OMG! it makes so much more sense now, all the kids names at the beginning, Why Kyle and Kimber dating was weird, and William...W for Whitney...Sherrif Walker. ugh. what a incredibly written, gut wrenching story. it’s like a car crash i can’t look away from

[@nicl5h453]

Wait why was Kyle and Kimber dating weird?

[@sophisticaded]

because they were siblings that’s why kimbers mom didn’t want them together!

[@nicl5h453]

@@sophisticaded oh shit I didn’t even think about that, they are both K babies

[@sophisticaded]

@@nicl5h453 yeah i was like ohhhh…that’s kind of…awful😂

[@Ten_Thousand_Locusts]

Who the hell is William?

[@CryingCupcake]

I avoided going into the comments so I wouldn't spoil anything, and WOW this really took a turn that I wasn't expecting. Jesus. I was expecting some supernatural shit in the mines, but this is just sad. Gonna go watch the next installment now. Hope the girls get saved...

[@shanejohnson6855]

LOL

[@lauc6673]

There's a next installment? Please send me the link or give me the name please!

[@drhypno6317]

@@lauc6673 Borrasca V, by the way semi-spoiler I think you know the truth William W=Walker

[@misdafireinfexus5828]

@@drhypno6317 whats the next instalment?

[@drhypno6317]

@@misdafireinfexus5828 borrasca v the sequel. The final chapter.

[@pillbugheart]

Man these narrations are always so good. Everything about the way he talks is so soothing except for the way he says "gestured"

[@elizabethstephens8353]

Guess cherred lol yes

[@Chelle8847]

@@elizabethstephens8353 haha! That kinda thing does irritate me even tho I know it's petty lol. But if someone is gonna narrate something like this they should surely know how to... Say words... Haha

[@canada1529]

He mispronounces gestured 4 times in this story. But he gets it right the 5th time!

[@subnautios7023]

Wdym? are you trying to spell guesscherred?

[@fishbarbeque8540]

This is INSANE, the story went from a relatively lighthearted mystery, too a dark evil, twisted tale of grief, loss, and horror.

[@Hawkman728]

What the shit. This is the best story I've ever heard! This needs to be a movie soooo bad. I mean shit. This is better that half the "horror/thrillers" that are coming out these days.

[@MassiveAchievement]

It's better than every horror movie ever conceived, not just half of the things that come today.

[@drhypno6317]

This entire story (1st and 2nd) is one of the best stories ever to be written another good one is 'penpal'. Both are phenomenal and add a sense of real danger as opposed to supernatural stuff that is not real.

[@sydneyheil1461]

I'll po​@@drhypno6317

[@DrunkPostit]

Incredible voice acting. Subtle changes to tone and pitch make it that much more interesting.

[@uzimyspecial]

The only problem i have with it is that it's waaay to fast....

[@chance2413]

"Subtle". You mean whispering to speed reading and yelling. Those changes are what make him an insufferable reader. Try Otis Jiry, Dr Creepen, or Creeparoni for real talent.

[@dhdjjeddhdjejd8468]

@chance413 oh fuck off dude, let people enjoy something without being a jerk.

[@jonahcryer6844]

This has to be some of his best narration and voice acting

[@lennyrose5852]

You’re kidding, right? The story is good but his voice is anything but subtle. Constant shifting from barely audible whispering so that you have to strain to hear, then one second later is basically yelling, then frantically talking very fast for a while and repeat. It pulls you out of the story. CreepsMcPasta or Mr. Nightmare both have far superior, *calm*, *steady* voices that you can generally listen to without touching the volume button at night.

[@skinnermclane4467]

After hearing the ending...damn. Kim's mom could have saved a loooot of heartache if she had just put that letter in her daughter's things so her dad wouldn't find it. I mean...she could have also just TOLD all this to her...but then again, clearly she wasn't thinking straight at the time.

[@EpicFail2388]

ithink its more weird her dad vanished without much explanation but kimber was kidnapped, but by who? her dad? the cops that showed up at the funeral?

[@willsil3097]

@@EpicFail2388 either the cops that sams dad called, or Kims dad. Either way, super messed up.

[@roosterwithnoname9020]

The cops kidnapped both of them. They most likely killed Kimber's dad. The letter said that those who spoke up about what was going on in the town were taken to the mountains.

[@ephin3242]

@@roosterwithnoname9020but the dad didn’t speak up about it?

[@roosterwithnoname9020]

@@ephin3242 You're right, Kimber's mom spoke out about it (in the letter). But since she's dead, they wanted to be sure and keep everyone in the family from revealing the truth about Borrasca. I think at the funeral of Kimber's mom... the sheriff and the cops probably told Kimber's dad that he and Kimber were a liability and that they were going to meet the shiny gentleman. That's probably why Kimber's dad was crying and protesting when the cops were taking him out of the church.

[@Sad-Lesbian]

"I love your sister more than you can imagine, she's my daughter, Sammy, and I will never, give her up." This hits that much harder.

[@dusk4974]

Yeah. Made me gag.

[@alkezar9542]

Pls explain

[@guaya8681]

@@alkezar9542 Instead of letting any of the other cops "take" Whitney, Sheriff Walter took her for himself, may even explain Jimmy Prescott´s line about Whitney only giving birth to "shit babies" 🤮 The Daley´s newborn son is named "William" Or at least that´s what I can gather from the story.

[@oltyler6915]

@@alkezar9542he literally gave her up

[@certifiedredditgenius]

​@@alkezar9542he sold her bruh

[@kit-kaboodii4050]

this story, coupled with "Penpal", has to be one of THE best creepypastas of all time. no matter how many times i hear it, chills always run down my spine. i would like to personally shake the hand of CK Walker and thank him for providing us with such a masterpiece.

[@MalySports]

I love them both also!

[@AntiFaGoat]

Shake her hand, you mean. She's got a facebook page for her work if you want to try reaching out to her.

[@maynase]

Penpal and Borrasca are by far my favourite 2 creepypastas. Both creepy, slightly fucked and amazing.

[@chicken.tendies9929]

*her*

[@grantm3332]

Sam: "It's a long story, but one you've never heard before" Me: *Listening to the story for the fourth time*

[@DarkPoison-eg9ml]

millions of times I've heard it my husband is listening now for the first time

[@youtubeconnollyfamily]

First for me

[@pallid9273]

I... I think I've been traumatized...

[@chipjuice8925]

Kyle really went through some character development, he went from 10 and drinking to 16 and smoking, He also blew his nose and became edgy

[@sethsmith2497]

This comment killed me because I’m sitting here reeling in Lovecraftian horror and here you are just exposing extreme character flaws in the story

[@UCannotDefeatMyShmeat]

Ngl I know people that went down that route

[@normalhuman9878]

Well that’s how boys in small towns are

[@DeathnoteBB]

@@sethsmith2497 How is aging a character flaw?

[@sethsmith2497]

@@DeathnoteBB aging isn’t a character flaw, lack of growth and development is.

[@Lechgang]

Words can't describe the feelings this story evokes, you just have to listen.

[@schuszter4280]

OMG it's the TD character reviews guy

[@inannaenigma9391]

The most horrifying thing about this creepypasta, unlike some of the more fantastical or nightmarish ones is that this fear, this horror is actually REAL, and more than likely something that either has happened or has the ability to manifest itself in our world.

[@AntiFaGoat]

Maybe not the baby mills specifically, but girls do get kidnapped into sexual slavery in our world. This story made me realize just how real the ideas of a town where people "disappear" and corruption of some police officers to support this are.

[@MarshyMarsh9]

I always admired writers who could write something so REAL and so...POWERFUL. One of those stories stories that makes you think, "Holy shit, this could happen somewhere and we have no idea!" I've been writing for a long time (still merely a student in it) and if I could write like this it would an amazing experience.

[@blendyyyboy4616]

Ryan James probably does happen now, it is a real world problem (I mean human trafficking and those "human cattle" farms) it's really, really messed up to think about

[@AntiFaGoat]

Darklordewa There have been baby mills? Can you direct me to a source about this?

[@blendyyyboy4616]

well i found this, www.washingtontimes.com/news/2016/jun/13/nigerias-baby-mills-victimize-vulnerable-mothers-s/ its not exactly like the story but its similar, also i first heard about baby mils from people i know saying they found some when exploring the deep web, but to be honest i never believed them

[@John_Wick69]

And I suddenly feel bad for having a villager breeder in minecraft

[@Paul-hn8en]

Oof

[@frithnanth1337]

LMAO

[@Rishimolestskids]

Omg thats how I felt

[@Ash-wu4oq]

DEADASS SAME

[@drowninginthelake]

@@Ash-wu4oq I'll literally okay minecraft with all of you RIGHT now

[@cennamonzimt]

I held off watching this for so so long. I'm glad I did and also wish I didn't. If I was any younger this would traumatize me but the story is written so horrifically well and detailed that leaving it any later would be a crime. It did what all creepy stories strive to be and more. So incredibly disgusting, it left me wondering and coming up with my own gross theories the entire way through. The story has such a unique plot. The characters had me completely hooked and each plot twist had me legit gasping. Towards the end it all added up so well and I was genuinely shocked to my core. Best narration I've seen in a very long time, thanks for reading it out in such an enthusiastic tone. I'm going to like on all my accounts and sub on my main. 10/10

[@carsonfulbright3583]

Watch it again all the hidden details are shocking

[@youtubeconnollyfamily]

I feel lucky listening to the story tonight for the very first time and looking at some of these comments. I’m skipping the spoiled ones LOL

[@morgancunningham9230]

Carson Fulbright for real tho!!! This is definitely one you have to watch again with a new perspective.

[@rottenapple1687]

@@youtubeconnollyfamily just watch Borassca V

[@youtubeconnollyfamily]

RottenApple16 I did and damn what a fucking great story best pasta story I have ever heard on KZbin. I don’t think anything else comes Close there are some really good ones obviously but wow this one really drags you in emotionally

[@TheJordanPayne]

Decided to listen to this for the first time in a while and saw this was posted 6 years ago. I was hit with a wave of memories that you were always there for. Thanks, MCP For everything.

[@Finny708]

That for everyting is kinda creepy for some reason

[@blon.djukey9956]

this is just terrifying starting like a child's monster fantasy then slowly realizing how grounded in reality the truth is makes it all the more horrific the worst part is how shit like this actually has and will again happen looks like I'm never sleeping again mrcreepypasta I've big fan of your narrative for a long time now but this story is a masterpiece of dismay and misery and will stay with me in the dark places of my mind truly horrified :/

[@DjDiamstatOfficial]

yep that's the scary thing about it that these things REALLY DO HAPPEN

[@daddygirlchanelhines4600]

Did she ever get pregnant. .....?

[@alishagonzalez1845]

Your statement is beautifully written and sounds sincere

[@yungmahon715]

Thankful for the great story but dreading remembering it in dark times

[@AngellicRuby]

Everytime I watch the beginning of this MOVIE it returns me to my childhood. I feel like the message behind the story is far more worth than the "Horror it has". Not many stories portray the obliviousness of children and how they don't realize that not everything is sunshine and rainbows, and the slow realization as they grow up really hits me. This story is a masterpiece, it is far underrated. I would even say it's up there with the best stories of all time in my opinion. I know it's late but I originally watched this when it first came out, but I keep coming back to it. I bought the book, I encouraged my mother to read the book aswell, as a matter of fact I have spread this story to everyone i can. It deserves more appreciation. I didn't even list off all of the twists and bits of the story around children understanding life. GOD I LOVE THIS!

[@darktiger0]

i need this converted into film, this needs to be a movie and it has to be done right. this is way too good to just say an online scary story or a book. people might disagree with me but i say if its done right, it will be gold.

[@killme6356]

There is a film like it thats from 2007, I think it's called The Reaping but IDK

[@MalySports]

This and Penpal both

[@SmokeAndChillAndromeda8]

i agree

[@retrobite943]

Hollywood always manages to fuck up the original concept

[@TheFingledorf]

It could be Kickstarted or Indiegogo'd

[@user-nq9lv2by1c]

MASSIVE STORY SPOLIER the only slight semblance of happiness from the end of this story is that kimber got away and is presumably safe somewhere, living in California, or at least i hope she is, god this was good, everything about it was fantastic.

[@robertgibson963]

watch borassca V its part 2. not as good tbh

[@paleogal3891]

@0:55 "... threw a bowl at my dad..." that would have been the end of my story.

[@soggyrats]

*0:54 sorry 0:55 puts us just after he says that TvT

[@TheMattc999]

Shalaya Garza same. Permanently.

yep yep, then the dad DID end her story, y'know, after torturing her for multiple years.

[@Lakefront_Khan]

@ "Bet you wish didn't throw that bowl huh Whitney! *grunting noises*" Seriously thats fucking petty.

[@moppingsomechickens9625]

anyone know the soundtrack? or the piano sound at 1:35:48?

[@MalySports]

I'm an emotional wreck right now after listening to this story. Fuck

[@griffinchillax12]

The ending literally hurt to listen to

[@MuShA61]

i agree completely

[@ScrubTheNub]

Im fucking pissed dude. Wanted Jimmy and the Sheriff to get what they deserved.

[@MalySports]

***** Same

[@Legonaughty]

Bro I'm wrecked wtf.....

[@themfckinfox]

Definitely worth a second listen (esp after finishing Borrasca V). All the little hidden hints and foreshadowing moments reveal themselves to you and you realize how clever the writing is. ALSO, the narration is incredible. I only recently got into creepypastas in general but I feel so lucky to have found this story. MrCreepyPasta, I like you. You’re cool.

[@Tobo226]

This is the best story mrcreepypasta has ever done, made me cry back in the day, I haven’t heard a more gripping story than this one

[@howyouskillz]

For the last half-hour of this video I was shaking uncontrollably with rage. Even now I can hardly type these words. The way this story chooses to evoke feelings of hatred and disgust over jump scares and edgy monsters is terrifyingly effective.

[@atimidbirb]

Bro same I was so ready to punch someone

[@arvidvanoosten1416]

I've probably listened to the entire Borrasca story 8 times now, and it just keeps getting better. It's so dark and so well written with so many little details. It's a perfect horror story. Incredible.

[@roll14tideroll]

The scariest thing about this story is the fact that they were taking calculus in the 10th grade

[@MassiveAchievement]

what? People used to take calc in 10th grade in the past. It's actually a pretty easy and intuitive subject. Now we take calculus in 11th grade. It's not like it is a big difference.

[@greystorm7862]

I took it in the tenth grade. It was boring

[@kristaisreading]

idk im in 10th grade taking calculus and its pretty easy

[@Recreationaltrespasser]

I bet you shoot at little girls that take physics.

[@traceygallegos7294]

roll14tideroll true

[@Dase_off]

Hey Mr.Creepypasta, If you see this just know this… your narration on this book is top tier. This story is going to get more and more attention and they better give you credit. Love you and never stop!

[@dominickjordan3052]

So wait, kimber and Kyle are both K’s, the both have red hair, and Kimbers mom didn’t want them dating. All evidence points to Kyle also being the result of this

[@velocity173]

Dominick Jordan 😬😬

[@itsmikefr]

:|

[@aki7362]

OMFG

[@ElRiki77]

everyone in town with a name that starts with a K is the child of Killian Clery. everyone with a name that starts with a P is the child of Prescott.

[@TheVividKiWi]

I KNOW RIGHT. FUCK.

[@melissab2991]

Mr Creepypasta. I want to personally thank you for reading this story aloud for us and allowing us to listen to you. This story really touches my heart and I’m so happy. This story is amazing and I can’t help but cry. Your voice is so powerful.

[@Gerbsert]

how does most of this have anything to do with borrasca edit: never mind 1:56:40 edit 2: holy shit

[@carsoncarruthers9606]

I love the character development in this comment 😂😂 but almost every detail had to do with Borrasca

[@four-en-tee]

lol, "why the fuck is there so much build up?... Nvm, i understand now."

[@zagorith14]

This comment is the perfect example of watching the whole video first before commenting. Though, it's always funny to see the response when they realize what's going on later in the story.

[@dillonmccool5914]

No matter how many times I listen to this story I always cry at that damn letter at the end, it always gets me.

[@TruecrimeWithLeeLee]

The part that gets me is when Sam finds Whitney. Between the story, narration & the music it all gets me worked up. And I'm bawling again now. This is my third time listening. 😢

[@RØSSETTØ.KUSTØM.MØPEDS]

Oh my god I’ve listened to this series at least 10 times and I keep finding new things every time that I didn’t notice. This story is so fucking disturbing because of the emotional bond with the characters it’s amazing writing, it also makes you realize that this is some people reality and that people can do disgusting things for their own reasons.

[@lentomoko1884]

Oof I haven't finished it and I'm lowkey scared

[@CobaltSthenia]

Borrasca is Spanish for "storm." Quite fitting, considering how much "calm before the storm" this story manages to build.

[@lorduncon6869]

Borrasca is also a english word though

[@flamelordguy7886]

Cobalt Sthenia indeed.

[@metatv24]

Cobalt Sthenia is borrasca Spanish? my parents are originally from Spain before they came to America anyways I've never heard them refer a storm as "borrasca" they instead say "tormenta"

[@CobaltSthenia]

Metalleon 24 I used Google translate, set the input to "Detect Language," inserted "borrasca," and it says it's Spanish for "storm." But that just means Spanish has at least two synonyms for storm. Maybe it's dialectic or archaic or otherwise nonstandard. I should add that the word borrasca is also an obscure English term for a no-longer-profitable mine.

[@kaeyasfavoriteeyepatch5924]

I'm fluent in spanish and I've never heard or said that word before...

[@ChelseaMichelle8911]

Borrasca + Borrasca V are by far my favorite creepypastas ever. It never gets old.

[@fieldsfamily2180]

The first time i heard this narration i was doing math homework in middle school, im now sitting at my desk at a full time job doing development, listening again. I find myself coming back to this every few years. I love your narration, the music, the story is also well written. Glad to see you still doing narrations, and thanks for this timeless reading!

[@dhdjjeddhdjejd8468]

This story is so well written it literally made my chest tight because I was so scared, and the thunderstorm outside isn’t helping my case.

[@montej4488]

*story ends* Oh look, I'm filled with unbridled rage

[@cainescouten-chappell362]

Felt.

[@haileyprosser5256]

There’s a part two!

[@eveleene3613]

@@haileyprosser5256 doesn't change what the man has said XD

[@soulzombie6972]

@@haileyprosser5256 what, after this video? How do we find it?

[@haileyprosser5256]

@@soulzombie6972 MCP has it on his channel 😉

[@willherrenkohl9260]

When I was at a residential treatment facility, the highlight of my day was when a mentor named taylor would read us this story, it took almost 2 months to completely finish.

[@1WEareBUFO1]

Are creepypastas really conducive to a healing curriculum? Questionable.

[@wicked2613]

I came here for a paranormal creepypasta but this…this affected me more than any paranormal story ever did

[@benmasclans4]

This would be a great Netflix series

[@islaydragons1563]

wolflord4 Correction: ALL of these stories would make a Great Netflix series

[@DjDiamstatOfficial]

@@islaydragons1563 a great anthology series!

[@gorillaplayzz6093]

wolflord4 Netflix ruins series’

[@MillerTime-w2s]

Just make it a youtube series.

[@Fox1997-w6k]

I would watch it if it was

[@SankyEON]

The last 20 minutes are unbearable to watch.

[@panickypatchwork8863]

Ik, I have so much pent up anger right now. I wish so badly that the sequel has those demons tortured in the most brutal way possible.

[@eggshedofficial]

listen instead

[@hypersleeper8252]

@@eggshedofficial hey i was gunna say that!

[@LightWeaver_Cyph]

The whole time I was listening I was like, please don't be human trafficking please don't be human trafficking... Goddammit

[@CountOfMonteCristo_]

I commend the story for making me feel so uncomfortable and worrisome for the main characters, that’s the sign of a great story right there, I need to buy a physical copy of the book.

[@chewtag]

heres an interesting fact, Kimberly comes from old english "Kimber Leigh", meaning "royal fortress in the woods"

[@gratgoby5946]

Chewtag wow

[@JokersAndVenom]

Too bad her name is Kimber... not Kimberly

[@chewtag]

@@JokersAndVenom its short form

[@indicol1942]

Cool fact it seems to fit

[@mediumsizedmammal]

*ACTUALLY* Kimber is what a lumberjack yells

[@tobiisspooky]

The voice impressions, the passion to the roles are incredible. I can feel the happiness, pain, fear, and anger through you're voice. This is the most amazing story I've ever heard. :)

[@christycapers4715]

That congested voice for Kyle tho... XD😹😹😹

[@vocondus]

Need that more often

[@DarkPoison-eg9ml]

brilliant just how I can imagine him

[@richardsimone2798]

It's Batman

[@aaaaaa69420]

I kept picturing Christopher Mintz-Plasse from superbad

[@thecircleoft.e.d2121]

It's actually pretty good; makes the character stand out.

[@xoxojessica_]

I miss the young them, I miss Whitney. We never really got closure. But they were so innocent and sweet when they were young, but then Whitney dissapeared is when everything started to unravel

[@ravendangernavy3575]

do you know there's a sequel?

[@xoxojessica_]

Raven Danger Navy there is ?? what is it called 😂

[@xoxojessica_]

Raven Danger Navy ohh are you talking about borrasca V ? cause i listened too that also

[@ravendangernavy3575]

@@xoxojessica_ yeah sorry

[@rickythereaper1943]

thats what really makes this story so sad to me is at it introduces you to the characters at such a young age just being happy children living their lives.

[@enterusername7412]

who else is a major fan of this story?

[@areearee7773]

I'm thinking a movie, with great actors, great story, perfect music, an AK-47, we'll get a tiny little Asian man to go into the mines... Okay those last two are too far lol

[@ironmike2010]

Some Dork and some XXX actors ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

[@Silentnightmare100]

I remember this being one of the bigger creepypastas out there when I was younger and heard it once. I forgot what this tale told but hearing it again now that I’m older and listening to every single word it just had me in awe and sadness for how much this is and can be real. And just kills my soul a bit for the reality it carries.

[@TheUnknownAK]

Yikes this was dark but excellent. It reminds me a lot of the "Pen Pal" series in it's grim-dark style.

[@panickypatchwork8863]

Ohmahgosh agreed. That story left me so sad and freaked out

[@koolguyN]

TheUnknownAK oh my god I love penpal!

[@megan1690]

That's the last one I listen to

[@MissMmmmmmmm]

What if both these authors made a story together???? 😮

[@loseraverage1040]

@@megan1690 same omg I love it

[@cracky-patty113]

I remember ages ago the beginning of this story almost made me not want to read it cause I thought I was just a little dramatic, but now it’s my fifth time listening to this overtime and the beginning is just so right every time just knowing the full story of it.

[@Missydizzychick1]

Ya'll better recognise, the baby of Whitney was called William...it begins with a W....just like her father's last name.

[@h.g.greggs]

holy shit, I've listed to this a dozen times and never realized oh my god that's messed up..

[@kepler1377]

Hailey G. Yep! Also why “she’s been putting out shit babies” because of inbreeding.

[@drhypno6317]

SPOILERS Read borrasca V, and yes Sam's father is a peice of shit, why do you think he had to leave in the first place, it was all there even in the beginning, out of all places to move he went to drisking. Who do you think Kimber was assigned to? The author of Sam's pain.... His father from the very beginning, even back home when people found out about that 14 year old girl.

[@abdulchowdhury6165]

Wait her father did it with her. OMG IM GONNA PUKE. Oh the shit people do for money is crazy

[@Llawliet130]

Oh god, that's why she looked away from him cause he said he looked just like his dad, same build and face. Holy fuck.

[@Donsguncorner]

Mann this is like the 4-5 times I've listened to this series through. I can say that this, "My property isn't normal" "Tales from the gas station" and a few others need to be full on movies. I'd pay to see them in theaters.

[@ollysockpuppet]

Well, I finished it. What should I do now...? LISTEN TO IT A-FREAKING-GAIN. this changed my life.

[@twbtsfan557]

Theres a sequel! Borrasca V

[@MarshyMarsh9]

I swear after hearing this again years later I LOVE how much emotion MrCreepyPasta gave the characters especially Kyle’s rage.

[@jellyfaun1683]

I cannot get over how good this story is. Even on my tenth, fifteenth, twentieth time listening to it...i always pick up another detail. The chilling thing.... SPOILERS... .. .. .. Is that a borassca is a mine that has lost its ore and dried up. A tunnel that used to produce something of worth but no longer does. And gets destroyed. like the girls.

[@jellyfaun1683]

and the fridge horror from the W name at the end. no wonder whitney's babies were 'shit', they're inbred.

[@robynsmith4164]

Wow, that’s such a crazy macabre definition of a “borassca”…!!! Thank you so much for your very insightful comment, bringing even more chills down my spine! 😁♥️

[@bigsepticc9948]

holy shit this story get better and better the more you think about it.

[@alekzl]

That's even creepier

[@vampier97]

Oh god....

[@TruecrimeWithLeeLee]

(Borrasca) and (Cursed VHS Tapes and How To Avoid Them) are my two top favorite stories!! Absolutely amazing stories with perfect narration! Stories that keep you on the edge of your seat. I listen to these stories over and over again.

[@LunarMockery]

I love how you give the character such personality and emotion! Even if its a slight change of your voice. Keep it up. Story is great too, beautifully written.

[@TheBookBaddie]

Back for a 4th listen I swear this, Penpal, and TFTGS are the best creepypastas you’ve narrated I never get tired of listening to them

[@srhrafael8390]

Uncle Gerry’s Family Fun Zone

[@user-es6gz3my9q]

My property isn’t normal Accounts from a lonely broadcast station I run a bar that serves one of a kind drinks to clients in exchange for their stories 💋👌🏼

[@pennygirl015]

Tales from a search and rescue officer is the best horror wise but this is the best story wise

[@persephoneabbot9125]

What’s TFTGS

[@pennygirl015]

@@persephoneabbot9125 I believe it’s Tales from the Gas Station. Which it’s great btw.

[@LeonTheBig]

This NEEDS to be a movie but it will never be made. People today cant handle a bad ending... Awesome job on the story btw, Mrcreeps!

[@TheOneTrueGhostyBoi]

Arson Aleks well if you read the second story it end off on a good note

[@anagrace5538]

I know, right? The last time I saw a movie with a bad ending, was The Mist. That was the only unhappy ending I have ever seen.

[@jarredgolden4744]

Its not the ending

[@emilyolsen6777]

this was the first horror story, i do not dub it a creepy pasta but true horror, that disturbed me, and it disturbed me deeply. hats off to C.K. Walker for disturbing the undisturbable. Horror is a comfort for me but this was the first one where I actively needed to take breaks. this was horrifying, this could happen for real and that is the scariest part and to be honest... I'm sure it already has somewhere and no one ever knew.

[@LetsTalkAboutPrepping]

It happens regularly throughout America and elsewhere. It's sickeningly common, far more than almost anyone realizes. Far far more