"Borrasca" by CK Walker [COMPLETE] | CreepyPasta Storytime

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[@Mary-et4bz]

This is even more horrifying to listen to the second time around because of how much foreshadowing and little details there are throughout the entire thing

[@dylanwatkins978]

“Mr Prescott has been staring at me forever” that dude was plotting

[@fuzzy_buddy8642]

@@dylanwatkins978 you just can’t put in words how good this is overall best creepy pasta ever. Side note if you haven’t already listen to tales from a gas station literally comedy but also Intense

[@fuzzy_buddy8642]

I know it’s just the best overall because of that it drops hints here and there at the hole story which you don’t notice the first time but at all but in the secend time you notice them and it’s like bombs on how you didn’t notice it’s just hits Te nail perfect

[@Flutter_Aeina]

“He’s charging triple?!”

[@Rleon760]

Ya like every Kid who starts with a P and with a K I’m like ok he’s from here ok she’s not ok he is he is not

[@notnotagoodguy9600]

At first I thought this was just going to be a story about some kids who encounter a paranormal monster but holy shit

[@kuzago]

Not not a good Guy MEEEEEE

[@dojotommy123]

Humans are the true monsters

[@gooboi2079]

same

[@3rasvok24]

Pretty disappointing isn't it?

[@full_metal_athiest2871]

Same here

[@alicia6740]

That’s why Kyle and his little brother didn’t look alike. And why Kimber’s mom was so upset that they were dating...oof.

[@Rael14]

This story is crazy when you hear for the second time

[@alicia6740]

TRUE

[@lakebrady4392]

Omg

[@firekingM101]

Bro I didn't even realize

[@toiboiskullguy9331]

Sweet Home Alabama plays in the distance

[@lizvalencia4492]

Oh my god… when Sam called Meera’s husband and he was talking about them having “other options” I assumed he meant adoption…. It all makes sense

[@Simply_American]

I just finished and looking back at all of these comments is jarring

[@melissasantillanes436]

This is my 3rd time listening by all my favorite story

[@shavedparmesanprosciuttoan4317]

1:53:51 sheriff walker says about Whitney “I love your sister more than you can imagine. She’s my daughter, Sammy, and I will NEVER give her up.” That line made me shiver

[@Veghead25]

I don't understand that line. He fucked her over forever.

[@MM-jf1me]

That line is simultaneously great foreshadowing and a little confusing as Prescott later says they're planning to kill her: I wonder if Daddy Dearest was in on that plan or if he had a change of heart and was willing to let Whitney go once she was no longer attractive to him.

[@Simply_American]

@@MM-jf1meread V or listen to Mr CreepyPastas reading of it. Than get back to me!

[@MM-jf1me]

@@Simply_American Thanks for the rec, but I've decided to avoid part V. I was listening to an interview with the author and she said part V was for readers unhappy with how part IV ended; I like how the story ended at part IV so I'm content with what I have.

[@Simply_American]

@@MM-jf1me I like part V mostly because we get more character development for Sam and a few others. The podcast by Qcode was also nicely done. And I believe in the later episodes of season 2 (part V) the author was at least a producer

[@silvurr3609]

God I already knew how the story would go but combined with the suspense and built up, when the narrator said “Whitney never made it to school” my heart dropped.

[@danikinzstar]

Especially since her dad was accusing her of telling her brother about the triple tree.... he was suspicious that she knew, so he got rid of her. And she's his stepdaughter, her last name is M not W.

[@Simply_American]

@@danikinzstarholy shite

[@shriyapanda3904]

wait where is it mentioned that her last name is m??? @@danikinzstar

[@MM-jf1me]

​@@shriyapanda3904 43:17 "Whitney M" is carved into the Triple Tree. I think this is an error as the short story records her name as Whitney W.

[@ManicMoth]

WAIT everyone is saying the ending is so stupid but you forgot something. The baby his sister had was named William. The babies were only named P names and K names respectively due to last name of the father according to kimber's mother. The sheriff helped, so logically so did the new one. Sam's dad, which is why he had so much to do when he was getting prepared for the job. Its why he didnt listen to sam. He was part of it. So who is the father of william? Sam's dad. And the men didnt share the girls, that was stated. So sam's dad spent seven years raping his daughter- which is why all her baby's were bad ones. They likely had genetic issues. The end of the story depended on you thinking about the names.

[@theragedfrost3623]

to many spoilers

[@elianpiano9543]

I don't remember who William was because I listened to this is pieces, but you give it a whole new twist. I mean I figured out that his father knew about it but him doing also the rape just makes it a lot weirder. Only thing is if Presscot or the sheriff were smart they would take whitney I mean why give it to the dad?

[@ezrasolo4431]

+ManicMoth Also Kimber and Kyle were related witch also explains Kimber's mother not liking Kyle

[@FreindTrey]

Whitneys baby was a "community" baby, most likely referring to community "service". Her dad works for them and wouldn't be considered community service since he gets paid.

[@ManicMoth]

+Freind Productions but community baby was a reference to the baby going to a community member (ie sam's boss who became the parent of said baby)

[@JelloFace]

Jesus Christ, when I first started this story I didn't expect it to hold such a tight grasp on my emotions. It started so lighthearted and it made you bond with the characters untill inevitably the dark turn was introduced and it all unleashed so quickly. This was a good story and worth the listen.

[@HerschZA]

You should definitely go listen to the sequel to this story

[@mrapple2544]

Is there a sequel?!!@@HerschZA

[@andrewjennings7306]

​@@mrapple2544borrasca V

[@TruecrimeSalads]

Also check out (Cursed VHS Tapes and How To Avoid Them). Both stories are freaking awesome and on KZbin.

[@Simply_American]

@@HerschZAwhat where!!!!

[@rossbond7742]

“Underneath the triple tree, a strange man waits for me, should I go or should I stay, my fates the same either way”

[@morgancunningham9230]

Ross Bond after listening to the story that phrase sends chills down my body. Damn

[@kristarichards5913]

holy shit as soon i read this comment i hear the video start say it

[@cristiang.7160]

After listening to this 12 times, it never came through. Reading it now, holy shit

[@astrangeorange4225]

Cause if I stay there will be trouble

[@damionshort823]

It's funny... How I didn't notice it before... The room with the bed and strange smell in the treehouse... I thought nothing of it... But I think it may have been a testing room of sorts for the girls...

[@InsaneToats]

Finally a story with enough balls to tackle an extreme touchy subject and provide a thrilling story to boot

[@elianpiano9543]

You're so right after hours of listening to creepypastas (probably days) you just doesn't get spooked by simple torture anymore

[@liamr7122]

+Toats This Creepypasta was so incredibly fucked up. It's way too relatable. This could be anyone's town. I am used to stuff being creepy or scary or even moderately disturbing, but this is overly so.

[@janiesmith476]

+Glitch MC 1. Not pretentious in any way. 2. Not ruining the story. 3. Shut the fuck up.

[@unixone7558]

+Glitch MC How are they being pretentious? And how are they ruining the story?

[@Godzillaaaaa11]

+Janie Smith Pretty sure glitch was being sarcastic.

[@azariah_kyras]

I listened to borrosca back when it released. To this day I firmly believe that this creepypasta should be a movie or a show everything about it is amazing.

[@rhondaguzman2501]

I totally agree with you.

[@MrFusion]

The fact it hasn't been adapted as a mini series is insane

[@SCUMMY4205]

This could definitely be turned into a Netflix series. Could easily get 3-4 seasons out of it.

[@freneticgamer4174]

It would definitely have to be a series in order to get it right. It’s honestly the best horror short story I’ve ever heard from the internet.

[@salutic.7544]

As I was watching it I kinda mapped out a series over the course of the creepy pasta and I can say it’s about 8 episodes.

[@CobaltFyrestone]

"Its a long story-" *Looks at the length of the video* Clearly.

[@Lucifurge]

๑ Robin ๑ id suggest stories from a gasstation employee the compilation video is 8 hrs long.

[@The_Baecon_King]

Tales from the Gas Station was weird and funny to me I've listened to this b Borrasca v and gas station all the way through at work. Great way to pass the time

[@rook2130]

Try the second one

[@ticci7456]

Who needs Audible when you have Mr.CreepyPasta?

[@misdafireinfexus5828]

Because of tales from the gas station read by creeps (the books have more information )

[@rook2130]

Ikr

[@nelliesilvers1210]

Yeah...so take THAT Rebel Wilson😁

[@nelliesilvers1210]

@@misdafireinfexus5828 That was an awesome series on NoSleep. I always read GasStation Jack as a LOT more mellow though. Even his speech would be more laid back IMO. Still really well read though

[@emi-0]

Tales from the gas station, The lonely broadcast station and My name is Lily Madwhip...all 3 frigging awesome!

[@justinhawk7410]

Maybe if the history presentation HAD been a DARE presentation, Sam wouldn’t have ended up with a crippling heroin addiction...

[@GreenAndGoth]

OOF

[@chriscanfly6386]

Would have been more likely actually. Anti smoking/ drugs stuff actually have the opposite affect

[@TheVividKiWi]

Let me just say that DARE was not effective at all

[@AraCod]

Right...

[@jillianpantano6461]

Heroin** the way you spelled it, is a female that is courageous. Usually associated with books and movies.

[@y2oducky]

I like how, as the story progresses, Sam stops calling the officer “dad”. Quite a nice little detail

[@Hawkman728]

What the shit. This is the best story I've ever heard! This needs to be a movie soooo bad. I mean shit. This is better that half the "horror/thrillers" that are coming out these days.

[@MassiveAchievement]

It's better than every horror movie ever conceived, not just half of the things that come today.

[@drhypno6317]

This entire story (1st and 2nd) is one of the best stories ever to be written another good one is 'penpal'. Both are phenomenal and add a sense of real danger as opposed to supernatural stuff that is not real.

[@paleogal3891]

@0:55 "... threw a bowl at my dad..." that would have been the end of my story.

[@soggyrats]

*0:54 sorry 0:55 puts us just after he says that TvT

[@TheMattc999]

Shalaya Garza same. Permanently.

yep yep, then the dad DID end her story, y'know, after torturing her for multiple years.

[@Lakefront_Khan]

@ "Bet you wish didn't throw that bowl huh Whitney! *grunting noises*" Seriously thats fucking petty.

[@moppingsomechickens9625]

anyone know the soundtrack? or the piano sound at 1:35:48?

[@labelladonna9122]

No matter how many times I listen to the story realizing what his father did to his sister Whitney hurts so much

[@galactic_bear]

OH COME ON I WAS ALMOST DONE!!!! AND I JUST HAAAAAD TP READ THE COMMENTS OMFG

[@MrFusion]

It's genuinely one of the most evil things I've seen in fiction

[@curlyqween34]

Wait what

[@tangent.arc38618]

​@@curlyqween34The father did the same thing as Jimmy prescot

[@jay_naidu]

Still hate Jimmy Prescott more for killing Whitney/lobotomizing Kyle and effectively getting away with it, even after Borrasca V.

[@SultanFriendlyGuest]

This story is so heart wrenching and truly terrifying. It's one of the best creepypastas ever written. The puzzle pieces were all there, right from the beginning. And the end was still unexpected and shocking.

[@John_Wick69]

And I suddenly feel bad for having a villager breeder in minecraft

[@Paul-hn8en]

Oof

[@frithnanth1337]

LMAO

[@Rishimolestskids]

Omg thats how I felt

[@Ash-wu4oq]

DEADASS SAME

[@drowninginthelake]

@@Ash-wu4oq I'll literally okay minecraft with all of you RIGHT now

[@CryingCupcake]

I avoided going into the comments so I wouldn't spoil anything, and WOW this really took a turn that I wasn't expecting. Jesus. I was expecting some supernatural shit in the mines, but this is just sad. Gonna go watch the next installment now. Hope the girls get saved...

[@shanejohnson6855]

LOL

[@lauc6673]

There's a next installment? Please send me the link or give me the name please!

[@drhypno6317]

@@lauc6673 Borrasca V, by the way semi-spoiler I think you know the truth William W=Walker

[@misdafireinfexus5828]

@@drhypno6317 whats the next instalment?

[@drhypno6317]

@@misdafireinfexus5828 borrasca v the sequel. The final chapter.

[@naenae2068]

"I loved your sister more than you can imagine" Ooh, that makes my blood boil since every time after the first listen.

[@tangent.arc38618]

He loved her romantically or he was just acting?

[@nayussysuccer]

​@@tangent.arc38618He loved her in a sick way considering he impregnated her multiple times.

[@Cat-sampo]

@@tangent.arc38618 He was... loving her... "William" W for Walker

[@Veghead25]

​@@Cat-sampoHOLY. SHIT. I didn't understand until now.

[@thatrandomgamer8258]

"Underneath the triple tree... A strange man waits for me... Should I leave or should I stay... My fate's the same either way." The implications of this poem change once you re-listen to the story.

[@joshbarker-s6k]

so true ad now only one question remains ... R U gay?

[@Oxydepth]

Makes me happy that people are still being introduced to this story after all these years. Definitely one of the best stories to ever come out of NoSleep.

[@rapboi6860]

The whole setup to this made me forget it was a creepypasta

[@dtendy4153]

This is quite possibly the most beautifully written and horrifying creepy pastas on the internet. I absolutely love every bit of it, right down to the most subtle of details

[@Schinzo__]

It’s cause things like this actually happen

[@MalySports]

I'm an emotional wreck right now after listening to this story. Fuck

[@griffinchillax12]

The ending literally hurt to listen to

[@MuShA61]

i agree completely

[@ScrubTheNub]

Im fucking pissed dude. Wanted Jimmy and the Sheriff to get what they deserved.

[@MalySports]

***** Same

[@Alan69696]

Bro I'm wrecked wtf.....

[@inannaenigma9391]

The most horrifying thing about this creepypasta, unlike some of the more fantastical or nightmarish ones is that this fear, this horror is actually REAL, and more than likely something that either has happened or has the ability to manifest itself in our world.

[@AntiFaGoat]

Maybe not the baby mills specifically, but girls do get kidnapped into sexual slavery in our world. This story made me realize just how real the ideas of a town where people "disappear" and corruption of some police officers to support this are.

[@MarshyMarsh9]

I always admired writers who could write something so REAL and so...POWERFUL. One of those stories stories that makes you think, "Holy shit, this could happen somewhere and we have no idea!" I've been writing for a long time (still merely a student in it) and if I could write like this it would an amazing experience.

[@blendyyyboy4616]

Ryan James probably does happen now, it is a real world problem (I mean human trafficking and those "human cattle" farms) it's really, really messed up to think about

[@AntiFaGoat]

Darklordewa There have been baby mills? Can you direct me to a source about this?

[@blendyyyboy4616]

well i found this, www.washingtontimes.com/news/2016/jun/13/nigerias-baby-mills-victimize-vulnerable-mothers-s/ its not exactly like the story but its similar, also i first heard about baby mils from people i know saying they found some when exploring the deep web, but to be honest i never believed them

[@jennamiller3858]

7 years later and this story still shocks me and makes me cry. it’s absolutely amazing

[@blon.djukey9956]

this is just terrifying starting like a child's monster fantasy then slowly realizing how grounded in reality the truth is makes it all the more horrific the worst part is how shit like this actually has and will again happen looks like I'm never sleeping again mrcreepypasta I've big fan of your narrative for a long time now but this story is a masterpiece of dismay and misery and will stay with me in the dark places of my mind truly horrified :/

[@DjDiamstatOfficial]

yep that's the scary thing about it that these things REALLY DO HAPPEN

[@daddygirlchanelhines4600]

Did she ever get pregnant. .....?

[@alishagonzalez1845]

Your statement is beautifully written and sounds sincere

[@yungmahon715]

Thankful for the great story but dreading remembering it in dark times

[@nayussysuccer]

No fucking wonder Kim's mom was so against Kyle. They were half siblings

[@cringeworthy4755]

Holy shit... 🤮

[@galgazitgalili3416]

Fucking hell I didn’t even realize this until I read your comment, both start with K…

[@MarkyVG]

That’s why she would always kick him out and despise him you are correct she knew the whole time

[@xxforeskin_gamerxx4395]

Fuck, I thought it was odd how the author made them both red heads

[@CodeeXD]

​@@xxforeskin_gamerxx4395 yeah one of he mean girls even makes a comment when they ask Sam if he's related to her, when he says no she says he doesn't have red hair anyway

[@darktiger0]

i need this converted into film, this needs to be a movie and it has to be done right. this is way too good to just say an online scary story or a book. people might disagree with me but i say if its done right, it will be gold.

[@killme6356]

There is a film like it thats from 2007, I think it's called The Reaping but IDK

[@MalySports]

This and Penpal both

[@SmokeAndChillAndromeda8]

i agree

[@retrobite943]

Hollywood always manages to fuck up the original concept

[@TheFingledorf]

It could be Kickstarted or Indiegogo'd

[@grantm3332]

Sam: "It's a long story, but one you've never heard before" Me: *Listening to the story for the fourth time*

[@DarkPoison-eg9ml]

millions of times I've heard it my husband is listening now for the first time

[@youtubeconnollyfamily]

First for me

[@pallid9273]

I... I think I've been traumatized...

[@atimidbirb]

This story fills me with pure, unadulterated RAGE

[@pillbugheart]

Man these narrations are always so good. Everything about the way he talks is so soothing except for the way he says "gestured"

[@elizabethstephens8353]

Guess cherred lol yes

[@Chelle8847]

@@elizabethstephens8353 haha! That kinda thing does irritate me even tho I know it's petty lol. But if someone is gonna narrate something like this they should surely know how to... Say words... Haha

[@canada1529]

He mispronounces gestured 4 times in this story. But he gets it right the 5th time!

[@subnautios7023]

Wdym? are you trying to spell guesscherred?

[@kit-kaboodii4050]

this story, coupled with "Penpal", has to be one of THE best creepypastas of all time. no matter how many times i hear it, chills always run down my spine. i would like to personally shake the hand of CK Walker and thank him for providing us with such a masterpiece.

[@MalySports]

I love them both also!

[@AntiFaGoat]

Shake her hand, you mean. She's got a facebook page for her work if you want to try reaching out to her.

[@maynase]

Penpal and Borrasca are by far my favourite 2 creepypastas. Both creepy, slightly fucked and amazing.

[@chicken.tendies9929]

*her*

[@TheNukedNacho]

"Its a long story, but not one you've heard before." Please. This my n-th time listening to this story.

[@fishbarbeque8540]

This is INSANE, the story went from a relatively lighthearted mystery, too a dark evil, twisted tale of grief, loss, and horror.

[@arvidvanoosten1416]

I've probably listened to the entire Borrasca story 8 times now, and it just keeps getting better. It's so dark and so well written with so many little details. It's a perfect horror story. Incredible.

[@montej4488]

*story ends* Oh look, I'm filled with unbridled rage

[@cainescouten-chappell362]

Felt.

[@haileyprosser5256]

There’s a part two!

[@eveleene3613]

@@haileyprosser5256 doesn't change what the man has said XD

[@soulzombie6972]

@@haileyprosser5256 what, after this video? How do we find it?

[@haileyprosser5256]

@@soulzombie6972 MCP has it on his channel 😉

[@CobaltSthenia]

Borrasca is Spanish for "storm." Quite fitting, considering how much "calm before the storm" this story manages to build.

[@lorduncon6869]

Borrasca is also a english word though

[@flamelordguy7886]

Cobalt Sthenia indeed.

[@metatv2273]

Cobalt Sthenia is borrasca Spanish? my parents are originally from Spain before they came to America anyways I've never heard them refer a storm as "borrasca" they instead say "tormenta"

[@CobaltSthenia]

Metalleon 24 I used Google translate, set the input to "Detect Language," inserted "borrasca," and it says it's Spanish for "storm." But that just means Spanish has at least two synonyms for storm. Maybe it's dialectic or archaic or otherwise nonstandard. I should add that the word borrasca is also an obscure English term for a no-longer-profitable mine.

[@kaeyasfavoriteeyepatch5924]

I'm fluent in spanish and I've never heard or said that word before...

[@cennamonzimt]

I held off watching this for so so long. I'm glad I did and also wish I didn't. If I was any younger this would traumatize me but the story is written so horrifically well and detailed that leaving it any later would be a crime. It did what all creepy stories strive to be and more. So incredibly disgusting, it left me wondering and coming up with my own gross theories the entire way through. The story has such a unique plot. The characters had me completely hooked and each plot twist had me legit gasping. Towards the end it all added up so well and I was genuinely shocked to my core. Best narration I've seen in a very long time, thanks for reading it out in such an enthusiastic tone. I'm going to like on all my accounts and sub on my main. 10/10

[@carsonfulbright3583]

Watch it again all the hidden details are shocking

[@youtubeconnollyfamily]

I feel lucky listening to the story tonight for the very first time and looking at some of these comments. I’m skipping the spoiled ones LOL

[@morgancunningham9230]

Carson Fulbright for real tho!!! This is definitely one you have to watch again with a new perspective.

[@rottenapple1687]

@@youtubeconnollyfamily just watch Borassca V

[@youtubeconnollyfamily]

RottenApple16 I did and damn what a fucking great story best pasta story I have ever heard on KZbin. I don’t think anything else comes Close there are some really good ones obviously but wow this one really drags you in emotionally

[@TheJordanPayne]

Decided to listen to this for the first time in a while and saw this was posted 6 years ago. I was hit with a wave of memories that you were always there for. Thanks, MCP For everything.

[@Finny708]

That for everyting is kinda creepy for some reason

[@howyouskillz]

For the last half-hour of this video I was shaking uncontrollably with rage. Even now I can hardly type these words. The way this story chooses to evoke feelings of hatred and disgust over jump scares and edgy monsters is terrifyingly effective.

[@atimidbirb]

Bro same I was so ready to punch someone

[@bipoc-alypesproductions198]

Oh my god I’ve listened to this series at least 10 times and I keep finding new things every time that I didn’t notice. This story is so fucking disturbing because of the emotional bond with the characters it’s amazing writing, it also makes you realize that this is some people reality and that people can do disgusting things for their own reasons.

[@lentomoko1884]

Oof I haven't finished it and I'm lowkey scared

[@dillonmccool5914]

No matter how many times I listen to this story I always cry at that damn letter at the end, it always gets me.

[@TruecrimeSalads]

The part that gets me is when Sam finds Whitney. Between the story, narration & the music it all gets me worked up. And I'm bawling again now. This is my third time listening. 😢

[@benmasclans4]

This would be a great Netflix series

[@islaydragons1563]

wolflord4 Correction: ALL of these stories would make a Great Netflix series

[@DjDiamstatOfficial]

@@islaydragons1563 a great anthology series!

[@gorillaplayzz6093]

wolflord4 Netflix ruins series’

[@AndrewMiller-w5x]

Just make it a youtube series.

[@Fox1997-w6k]

I would watch it if it was

[@Donsguncorner]

Mann this is like the 4-5 times I've listened to this series through. I can say that this, "My property isn't normal" "Tales from the gas station" and a few others need to be full on movies. I'd pay to see them in theaters.

[@xoxojessica_]

I miss the young them, I miss Whitney. We never really got closure. But they were so innocent and sweet when they were young, but then Whitney dissapeared is when everything started to unravel

[@ravendangernavy3575]

do you know there's a sequel?

[@xoxojessica_]

Raven Danger Navy there is ?? what is it called 😂

[@xoxojessica_]

Raven Danger Navy ohh are you talking about borrasca V ? cause i listened too that also

[@ravendangernavy3575]

@@xoxojessica_ yeah sorry

[@rickythereaper1943]

thats what really makes this story so sad to me is at it introduces you to the characters at such a young age just being happy children living their lives.

[@jeremykyle8936]

"Im not trusting the cops im trusting my dad"🙃🙃🤠🔫

[@Wyrd80]

Didn't work out to well.

[@Keri425]

jeremy kyle my dads a cop

[@blumiu2426]

@@DjDiamstatOfficial I don't think that was the case as it would have been obvious if they wanted quality babies. Inbreeding doesn't guarantee that nor any implication the dad was part of the sex ring or Prescott would have said it just to screw the kid up more. If so, then...really makes no sense.

[@YoungCub]

jeremy your names kyle..... the fuck

[@Radladbadsad]

Gosh, that's why Sam talked about his dad having a lot more money..

[@willherrenkohl9260]

When I was at a residential treatment facility, the highlight of my day was when a mentor named taylor would read us this story, it took almost 2 months to completely finish.

[@1WEareBUFO1]

Are creepypastas really conducive to a healing curriculum? Questionable.

[@beasty9624]

was anyone else dissapointed about who kimber was dating in the second act?

[@Wyrd80]

There names both start with k. It's part of the story. Wouldn't have worked if she had dated Sam.

[@SCP--dt2hf]

WOLFY yep

[@s0l4r_27]

When I first saw this I thought u we’re gonna spoil something so I didn’t look at it lol

[@Slavino]

In my opinion it made the story better, like you're too good for her.

[@everyone1708]

It would have been to simple and expected

[@wicked2613]

I came here for a paranormal creepypasta but this…this affected me more than any paranormal story ever did

[@potterheadcauseican9614]

Why is everyone saying this is so dark like this seems so nice? (Edit) OH SHIT THAT’S NOT WHAT I EXPECTED

[@cinnamon4205]

PotterheadcauseI can I’m 45 minutes in I’m scared

[@tsukarikaoru]

I would've appreciated a warning

[@plugshirt1684]

Nothing too bad until the end where you realize how fucked everything has been the whole time

[@underpixel1475]

@@plugshirt1684 "Fucked" *I'll be taking my leav-*

[@plugshirt1684]

@@underpixel1475 damn you pun man

[@NBAReefer]

So the making five nights at Freddie's a movie but not borrasca? This world needs fixing quick

[@cannibal6140]

ZombieInHd 11 you

[@cannibal6140]

ZombieInHd 11 y

[@cannibal6140]

ZombieInHd 11 ÿÿ

[@kaseywoods6587]

the fnaf movie was cancelled

[@jn3440]

They made it into a podcast actually with Cole Sprouse

[@fi9263]

The real question is.... Did Kyle drink the rockstar... Or the monster...??

[@MangledRobot1990]

XD

[@gudmythman]

2:08:52 Rockstar

[@discountyoutuber6707]

The waspless fig it was rockstar. It stated it clearly. Now for the second drink.....

[@garrettking712]

His names Kyle. What do you think

[@yungmahon715]

@@gudmythman so he's a traitor to his own people

[@Tobo226]

This is the best story mrcreepypasta has ever done, made me cry back in the day, I haven’t heard a more gripping story than this one

[@insertnamehere7129]

Top ten HATED Borrasca characters: 1-10 prescott

[@staglianio8149]

What about sheriff Cleary and and the main characters dad?

[@insertnamehere7129]

+Andrew Stagliano them too 🙃

[@staglianio8149]

+purgeist no just the high officials all the other ones were just ok with it

[@Mannnnnnnn]

+Da Stag i thought the main characters dad was the sheriff

[@AnubisXKanto]

Yeah, the former sheriff was in with the Prescotts on the whole thing and the MC's Dad justs accepts how this situation is.

[@melissab2991]

Mr Creepypasta. I want to personally thank you for reading this story aloud for us and allowing us to listen to you. This story really touches my heart and I’m so happy. This story is amazing and I can’t help but cry. Your voice is so powerful.

[@arepi2067]

Kyle's voice hurts me. lol

[@thestray9179]

Rainy Day Ghost agreed

[@areearee7773]

I find him edgy

[@malkavian6275]

i kind of liked it, in a weird way

[@gorillaplayzz6093]

He sounds like Joey Wheeler

[@Omega_Sigma]

Joey Wheeler? Naw he sounds like kevin eleven

[@Silentnightmare100]

I remember this being one of the bigger creepypastas out there when I was younger and heard it once. I forgot what this tale told but hearing it again now that I’m older and listening to every single word it just had me in awe and sadness for how much this is and can be real. And just kills my soul a bit for the reality it carries.

[@mintymelt]

Does anyone else agree that he has the most soothing voice in the world?

[@candyqueenify]

So does let's read 😍

[@carterdahl2178]

Morgen Freeman and Neil deGrasse Tyson

[@amylaub0707]

Creepsmcpasta does to me!

[@xero2851]

Mortis media also has a great voice ( I dont know how to spell it)

[@todengel6692]

Even his voice wasn't able to soften this story. My heart feels like a stone.. unmoving and a burden..

[@punkvalley7237]

Sorry to those of you watching this for the first time

[@SmokeAndChillAndromeda8]

i see why you posted this after i heared it.

[@ethanberry8644]

Blake's revenge I'm gonna cry now.

[@niftyramenchef]

Wow 😳 the fucking ending I can't even

[@joew4921]

Blake's revenge this fucked me up so bad

[@cincylaw14]

I kept thinking something good would happen...I'm shook

[@LeonTheBig]

This NEEDS to be a movie but it will never be made. People today cant handle a bad ending... Awesome job on the story btw, Mrcreeps!

[@TheOneTrueGhostyBoi]

Arson Aleks well if you read the second story it end off on a good note

[@anagrace5538]

I know, right? The last time I saw a movie with a bad ending, was The Mist. That was the only unhappy ending I have ever seen.

[@jarredgolden4744]

Its not the ending

[@tobiisspooky]

The voice impressions, the passion to the roles are incredible. I can feel the happiness, pain, fear, and anger through you're voice. This is the most amazing story I've ever heard. :)

[@lpshorselover1949]

Did anyone else ship Kimber and Sam? Cause I did and I still do.

[@okielegopro]

I’ve thought of it, but C.K said it was never her intentions for them to be together in anyway. Kyle and kimber was always the plan

[@areearee7773]

Somewhat

[@jaggerallen2252]

Hell yea! And i was pissed when her and Kyle got together

[@baskitgiy]

Some Dork it was made that way because it was a created a conflict that was Kyle and Kimber were siblings

[@areearee7773]

baskitgiy Yes I'm well aware. I've listened to this story like 20 times.

[@challengerjakku1943]

Rewatching this since the sequel to borrasca is here ^_^ love this pasta

[@JUStCALLMEZIMM]

Jakkuthe KoreanJesus Same

[@Vykker522]

Jakkuthe KoreanJesus What's the name of the sequel? I'm having a hard time finding it

[@challengerjakku1943]

Borrasca V

[@Vykker522]

Jakkuthe KoreanJesus Wow. It seems so obvious now. Lol thanks

[@challengerjakku1943]

No worries mate

[@Dase_off]

Hey Mr.Creepypasta, If you see this just know this… your narration on this book is top tier. This story is going to get more and more attention and they better give you credit. Love you and never stop!

[@prophetpurity8051]

Best 3 hours of my day. This was awesome

[@prophetpurity8051]

Even though this was fucked up

[@ironmike2010]

TheSansPanzer123 LOL ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

[@enterusername7412]

who else is a major fan of this story?

[@areearee7773]

I'm thinking a movie, with great actors, great story, perfect music, an AK-47, we'll get a tiny little Asian man to go into the mines... Okay those last two are too far lol

[@ironmike2010]

Some Dork and some XXX actors ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

[@nicholasdecker5541]

This whole thing, is the most sinister thing I have ever heard. The story telling is phenomenal, this got me feeling a sorta way right now. I'm suddenly judging my own environment now for shit.

[@_mimic1]

As a resident of Missouri I am EXTREMELY uncomfortable

[@jeremiahmyers284]

Same

[@redtide7]

As someone with most of his family living in Missouri, I'm more than just a little worried. Just happy this story didn't end with a "so human trafficking sheriff dad, let's not meet"

[@csr9183]

I too was disturbed by the reference to the former St Louis Rams

[@jasonswofford9123]

I feel ya I live in Butler co to boot

[@tylernichole487]

I live 30 minutes from Butler County in the setting. My guess is Drisking is another name for the town where I'm from

[@glitch.gaming01]

Holy. Shit. I found myself breathing heavily at the end of this. It’s an amazingly written story but god damn

[@SafaanaQawi_DarkenSoul]

Listened to this first while it was coming out in parts waiting anxiously for the next part...then again in 2017...and then now...still one of the best stories. Movie of this sticking true to the story would be so fricking good.

[@anthonyrobert1101]

2017 is an amazing year

[@hand-heldmisfortune]

you never realize how this story sucks you in until you listen to it again and know what happens. but when you dont know your feeling and thinking about what could happen. it's awesome.

[@YoungMailly]

Not sure how you guys find the ending disappointing. It ties in all the loose ends. I'm sure you dislike it because it's not a happy ending...well too damn bad.

[@darkslayer13371]

It's made me more protective of my girl friend XD

[@elianpiano9543]

I became used to a bad ending after listening to so many creepypastas. It's the story that counts

[@hunteredwards6350]

I don't like it for 2 reasons.1 kyle dies and 2 we don't know if kyles gf made it out.

[@YoungMailly]

Hunter Edwards Kyle didn't die, he became a vegetable. His gf died, they're killed after they've run their use.

[@MasterOfTheBrood]

+Anthony Mailly no kyles girlfriend Kimber escaped, she was the one that left her mother's letter at the end, it was Whitney who was killed

[@fiddledydoodle]

the BEST creepypasta ever written- don't even bother trying to change my mind. This story is a masterpiece.

[@yungmahon715]

Never felt a story so deeply before.. first one to actually horrify me too "It was torture in the purest form"

[@yungmahon715]

2:18:08 okay fuck this story

[@Behemoth9030]

@@yungmahon715 all of us who has heard this, we’ve all been there, dude.

[@claire_7681]

This story tore me apart and put me back together again. This doesn’t deserve to be called a creepy pasta, it deserves to be called a story. This story made me feel more pain, rage, and sadness than any other book I’ve read. It hit home and it stuck with me. Great job on the narration

[@Deontreyr1]

Perhaps one of the best freaking stories I have ever heard. This needs to be a movie!!! Why did it end that way? Another 45 minutes would have allowed Whitney to be saved. Jesus Christ!!!!

[@captainmuricausa3430]

De'Ontrey Reddish have you read the sequel?

[@Lena_Oxton]

there's a sequal called borraska v that's three hours long

[@titani1k]

I've read some dark stuff on the internet, but this...holy shit.

[@yeshuatjie1578]

Damnn i just started and im scared now😂

[@ingridfrey6799]

This being the very first creepypasta I've listened to ... Absolutely gripping and intensely upsetting. Had to sit in silence for 10 minutes after I finished it. Wow!

[@jacuelinecalvillo9741]

why isn't this a movie.. ?!?!?!

[@thronesofblood3595]

I agree

[@invalid_grizzly3649]

Yeaaa

[@axxm1278]

true

[@gianiyo15]

Why aren't we founding this?

[@fraydizs7302]

this was written less than 6 months ago i doubt movie producers and directors even know about it yet

[@DrGrill-jm2cl]

This did not end how I thought, this is fucked up it messed with my mind a bit. Whoever wrote this has one fucked up and creative mind, they should write a script for a movie m

[@theusername5869]

Got mixed emotions lol

[@undeadleyley]

This is the kind of shit I like because it puts that feeling of dread in the pit of my stomach of "holy shit, this actually exists and can/is/did happen almost anywhere for any reason." sometimes the old fantasy ghost schtick isn't enough to throw a curve ball at my face.

[@willkeener3090]

I saw borrasca and thought it was like part 5 then I saw the [complete] part

[@darkvioletcloud]

+Will Keener Part 5: Kyle recovers from being a vegetable, Sam gets clean, and Kimber and Kyle get back together and everything is okay.

[@MrCreepyPasta]

+DarkVioletCloud but the incest! The incest! Not ok!

[@willkeener3090]

+DarkVioletCloud I thought that maybe Sam would come back to the town or something in like a shorter story format where he could meet his dad who's a drunk due to all the things he knows he has done. That's a way there could be another part without compromising the depressing ending in which the story needed

[@user-lo8888]

+MrCreepyPasta please read more of CK Walker

[@darkvioletcloud]

***** I am in such conflict due to me shipping Kyle and Kimber and my morality that incest is bad. ...Maybe it's okay since they're most likely half-siblings and/or they should never reproduce? I just want the characters to be happy.

[@Korihor666]

Been listening to horror stories for years and finally listened to this one because I kept hearing this story referred to as an “incident” on the creep cast and a few other comments that made it clear whatever I listened to before it would be “Dr Seuss” by comparison. I couldn’t get into it at first a while back because of the slow burn but it’s reputation compelled me to actually listen this time and give it a proper chance. They were right. It’s not for the faint of heart. I’m still shaken up from this story and glad I listened at the same time. Horrific is the best word I can think to describe what I just listened to.

[@nuggwife7162]

Dear Mr Creeps. You've heard this a million times but here's too a millionx1 ... you are by far the best narrator - ever. You put so much emotion into all characters & every story. You could make the worst stories ever created good! That's talent! Stay awesome Mr Creeps 👍🏻🖤

[@Tom-z9p5p]

This needs a movie or a miniseries.

[@gagejohnson1513]

1 hour and a half to drink 2 beers Says Miller light Okay I understand

[@micaharies]

the official beer of day drinking

[@raymonddark8531]

I'm at the 40 minute mark, and holy shit, this is like Stephen King levels of writing. I should be sleeping right now, but I CAN'T.

[@Eternalbloo]

This has strong Stephen King energy, I love that

[@hebejeebies1924]

29:30 - 'look nobody likes them, people are just nice to them because they're related to the Prescott's' - oh you have no idea

[@pantrat3153]

goddamn this needs to be a movie this is by far my favorite creepy pasta oml

[@robinman5901]

Riley Dear Agreed!

[@JUStCALLMEZIMM]

Riley Dear this and Penpals would be so sick

[@moviestar9655]

Riley Dear this can't be a movie. It was an amazing story but it would cause a worldwide depression

[@jn3440]

It's been made into a podcast staring Cole Sprouse

[@IAmARealHumanPerson]

SPOILER: Blew my mind at the end to realize the mom didn’t hate Kyle. She just knew that Kyle and Kimber were half siblings and shouldn’t date. This story hurt my heart.

[@damionshort823]

Idk what it is... But for some reason my mind finds comfort within this story... Whenever I struggle... Whenever I feel like I can't handle this life or world... I flee to this... I flee to drisking (however you spell the town) it's a sick twisted story yet I find comfort in it and for the entire duration of it everything just seems so simple... I feel a sense of nostalgia... Ig it may be my fucked up past and me being able to relate to the struggles and pain of the characters as they figure things out and grow up from naive innocence...

[@Dream-qy9ir]

Same

[@Dream-qy9ir]

No matter what I feel or what mood I’m in this shit is so soothing

[@sushivex2412]

This was far the most interesting story I’ve heard, and it took a deep fucking turn bro. I cried at the end because of the letter, and that his own dad was a part of it and tried to blame his own son for Kyle. But it now explains why Kimber’s mom was against her dating Kyle, because they both started with K’s. This was fucking amazing but when it took the turn I was extremely disturbed.

[@BenNerdBooger]

Can't wait for the rest of borrasca v to be done. About to start part 2 now

[@Matt-cu4kh]

How’s that going for ya?

[@blockacre3365]

its been more than a month since listened to this and I still don't hear the distant saws of neighbours working on their houses the same. Best story I've heard in my life. Better than any book

[@calebdaly1214]

this gives a really mature gravity falls feel

[@LlamaSocksRock]

Caleb Daly holy shit you're right

[@mamabear2847]

Caleb Daly omg 😂

[@blahblesplah4009]

Holy shit it is

[@brittsilva]

Shit...why you gotta do me like that

[@mr.joesterr5359]

I don’t know anything about gravity falls other than it is a kids show so I’m trying to imagine what the fuck that show could be about lol