Dragon Ball Super GR -The Movie (Goku Meets Raditz 20 Years Later)

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In the story of dragon ball z, Goku was introduced to his brother Raditz for the first time. After defeating him, he was never to be seen again in any future arc where in DBZ or in dragon ball super. During that time, Goku has become far more powerful, reaching several advance forms of the super saiyan. And in this feature length movie, Goku will finally meet his brother Raditz again after over 20 years, and see just how much has changed for the both of them.
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[@SaadandTahavlogs]

@beastboyshub

[@SaadandTahavlogs]

Not real beastboyshub fake 1 sub

[@unknownghost1299]

#UnlcleRaditz

[@unknownghost1299]

Part 5 please

[@I86282]

#UncleRadditz

[@dontgoonthischannel1221]

Raditz gives off a "you can't beat me" kind of vibe but then goku gives of a "congrats you've reached level 1" vibe.

[@roeital5504]

"you have finished the tutorial, please proceed to continue to the main game"

[@zizochemlali4639]

Raditz: YES IM A SSJ Goku: oh so your ready for the tutorial turn into a SSJ2

[@tentaplayz3691]

For real

[@malachipenalver8436]

Lmao. Can relate

[@dburna21]

Right lol 😂

[@ewalk_]

Raditz: finally years of training to become the legend Goku: that’s cool but my 7 year old son already knows it

[@dabking9177]

“And did it at age 7” and has gone ssj3. Poor man gets rocked by his nephew

[@rightfulstorm5110]

And then Pan goes super saiyan when she is unborn 😂

[@chasejacob9826]

Both of his sons

[@shanemays3696]

@@dabking9177 Did say that super Saiyan to super Saiyan raditz was stronger than Goku, don't think Goten can beat Goku at super Saiyan.

[@Dom_Dako]

@@dabking9177 remember he did say that Raditz ssj was stronger than Vegeta and Goku ssj so it's unlikely that Goten would rock Raditz

[@theillustriousone8324]

Raditz' entrance was badass, he's huge with the special beam scar making him look like Blanka from street fighter

[@johnwardrop8418]

Out of all the DB manga here with Moro, Xicor, and everything. This is my my ultimate favorite! I never would have guessed or thought that anyone would bring Goku's family together! This is freaking awesome and hilarious! I LOVE IT!!! Definitely want to see more of this! I'm looking forward to next one here

[@apollo6024]

"The Legendary Super Saiyan? already fought him, nice guy, that Broly."

[@user-zo5ge3dn4o]

“And let me tell you, HE WAS JACKED, like his muscles were like 80% of my head. He beat vegeta too! And boy, did he scream.”

[@sanunazif7559]

@@user-zo5ge3dn4o i miss tfs

[@KenithLemley]

@@user-zo5ge3dn4o lmaoo

[@thegamergooster7449]

@@sanunazif7559 they still make stuff but its not as good as dbza

[@stevenstinnett5587]

Conor McGregor is possessed by a demon. Further support is feeding it worship. Making it stronger and if it has enough become godl

[@nihilisticabyss]

I’m a grown ass man and I ALMOST shed a tear this is what we all wanted to see back in the late 90’s early 2000’s good on you sir! Subscribed

[@NotJupina]

Everyone liked this

[@cooptheaterpresents]

Oh you're stronger than me. I cried watching this. Plus mentioning Gohan trauma and transferring it to pan oh yeah that tugged on the heart string.

[@Dommino_ondiscord]

I'm right there with you guys.. I had no idea these stories existed until now and it really bright back the love for the anime. I'm so happy about it.

[@Mikecool513]

Ok just glad I'm not the only one 😅

[@troyvang62]

666

[@benogle4951]

I love how in every story people write with raditz he's pretty chill and decent person despite the only Canon material that includes him shows him as quite the opposite

[@alanguages]

Well, Nappa and Vegita were much worse. Vegita literally committed genocide by destroying an entire planet. Imagine if they went to Earth first, there would have been nothing left.

[@matthinton19]

He was truly despicable but dbz loves a redemption arc

[@sedrosken831]

If Vegeta of all people can be redeemed, why not Raditz? Why not Goku's brother? Frankly I'm convinced the only reason something like this isn't canon is because Toriyama forgot about him like he did Launch.

[@benogle4951]

@@sedrosken831 well that is not what I am talking about, when Vegeta was redeemed he was still Vegeta same with piccolo, they kept the same personality for the most part but shifted their mentality over to being good, but with raditz they all seem to just change him into a new personality that does not quite match what we see but is still quite enjoyable

[@alanguages]

@@sedrosken831 Toriyama hated animating tails and long hair. Raditz has both.

[@digitalfracture2938]

I rarely comment on the fan made stuff, but this is probably one of the most believable situations to take place if a certain someone would consider making this canon. In the original Z Radditz is literally concerned to getting to Goku before the other two do in hopes of taking him back. You see that seen and you can actually see the worry. So this whole thing could play right into that with him and this entire episode sent happy vibes. I don't think I have ever really paid attention to the fan made stuff as I did this. I love a story where Goku can be back with his family. The whole thing with Dende re working the balls all the way down to his parents meeting him in hell, all of this was so well done. I have never wanted something to be considered canon from a fan made project before. This is my head canon, thank you so much for doing the narrative work on this. Not going to lie either, I started to get a bit emotional with the Gohan and Radditz interaction, a grown ass man "me" getting emotional over this shit. GO FIGURE lol Thank you again, this was top tier. SUBBED and sorry for the shit grammar spelling haven't slept yet.

[@nickiskillz3005]

Nappa be sitting in hell alone be like: 😐

[@whyareyouusinglightmode2098]

Nappa:Where defok is Vegeta?

[@TheBeaconRabbit]

LMAO

[@work.out.lika.freakfitness3835]

Hahahaha

[@landonez8856]

Vegeta what does the scouter say about his power level WHAT ITS OVER 690,000,000,000,000

[@Hankxiong]

Because he has no hair to become ssj lol

[@just_some_mf4167]

Goku: Vegeta is softer than me Vegeta: "I feel a disturbance in the force.."

[@sentientmustache8360]

**on the distance** “I’LL FUCKING KILL HIM!”

[@evillifeform1431]

@@sentientmustache8360 bulma: WHO ARE YOU GONNA KILL?? vegeta: no one ahaha

[@Nah_Crazy_YT]

🤣

[@Nah_Crazy_YT]

In the distance on earth Vegeta: I’LL FUCKING KILL HIM AND BLAST HIM TO BITS AND KICK HIS FUCKING ASS

[@Surrester]

@@Nah_Crazy_YT bruh Naruto

[@mnstr3nrgy862]

This is like the most wholesome DBZ thing I have ever seen. Good job.

[@TWHowl]

You killed this. You gave us so much story we’ve all wanted as fans. The whole family vibe of this is seriously entertaining and touching as a fan. Great work, I just need part 2 now, with Raditz and Bardock get taught how to transform and maybe the saiyan families have like a backyard tournament that attracts some villain.

[@zombathinlostleghackercat5233]

Imagine if SSJ Goten head-butted Raditz in the stomach, making him think it was Gohan and that he time traveled.

[@The_Blue_Otaku]

Raditz with Vietnam flashbacks

[@Benhazell08]

they have different haircuts

[@Myboyolise]

@@Benhazell08 and ?

[@johnstephanos1128]

Raditz: I'm the Legendary Super Saiyan! Goku: And I'm your Super Saiyan God, kneel and pray!

[@jackarot3959]

XD

[@morningivy]

😂

[@Corrupted_Eon]

Lol

[@AsianJesus514]

Raditz: I am the SUPER SAIYAN! Goku:……ULTRA INSTINCT!

[@thedarkdeath5094]

@@AsianJesus514 Raditz: WEEEEEEEEeeeeee!!!....

[@cardinalhamneggs5253]

I'm fifteen minutes in and my favorite part so far is when Goku points out how similar in appearance his SSJ3 form is to Raditz's SSJ1 form.

[@factandsuspicionpodcast2727]

This was actually impressive. I expected a cringe-inducing, Reddit-tier fan fic, but this actually felt like Dragon Ball. Enjoyed it.

[@phatphan1403]

Raditz's and Bardock's reactions are priceless when they see the one-per-1000-years Super Saiyan form suddenly goes on sales.

[@jacobifolds3147]

The super saiyan bargin sale

[@crashdragonkoro6484]

@@jacobifolds3147 thanks to push ups, sit ups and plenty of juice!

[@roberthaggerty8887]

​@@crashdragonkoro6484also a few times in the Time Chamber

[@dripplin]

Super saiyan raditz looks almost exactly like super saiyan 3 lol

[@nabiliftakhar2729]

Yeah

[@hazdra1896]

Mistook it for ssj3 in the thumbnail

[@xavierwilliams1074]

Imagine when he guys 3, how will his hair be then lol

[@hazdra1896]

@@xavierwilliams1074 it will wrap around it's opponents

[@averagegamer1422]

Raditz weak compared to goku but look super saiyan 3

[@isleschild]

Gohan: I can't forgive you, Raditz! Also Gohan: Yo Vegeta what's up

[@elvisluk1284]

Cuz Gohan started being with vegeta since frieza saga for YEARS, and has now gotten quite chill with him.

[@terraqua9013]

Dude this was extremely wholesome and satisfying. Nice job, bro.

[@ProtectionOfficerThomasLawson]

Though this is a fan-made story, the storyline falls in place perfectly.

[@cur1yh_3ad]

There are many plotholes that you may have not noticed

[@landroverrangeroversporths2569]

@@cur1yh_3ad *keep it that way.*

[@Gcan8012]

@@cur1yh_3ad Keep it that way

[@samuelmulubwachalwe227]

Gohan is not the type to be driven by vengeance and unbridled anger though

[@lilchris1839]

@@cur1yh_3ad like what?

[@topiheikkala4466]

I really do wonder how Goku doesn't even remember how he first died. It seems that accident as a child really did a number on him.

[@amodeloranewbione8753]

Not really I mean years went by and he forgot since he died more if ur talking about dbz goku then yeah I get why he doesn't remember raditz but if super or gt then raditz became irrelevant

[@Lupo32]

Goku didn't care for him , he was a low down dirty coward and bully

[@traagicshotss5449]

@@Lupo32 that’s not true at all, fighting has consumed gokus life. He even got excited at the thought of meeting raditz again, which if you know anything about goku seems extremely canon as goku would most definitely spar with anyone and everyone

[@Lupo32]

@@traagicshotss5449 Where and when was this at ?

[@RobbStewart]

This story needs to be submitted to Akira Toriyama himself to be reviewed and Canonized!!!

[@michaelkress8853]

My heart absolutely needed all of this. Thank you so much

[@diesel7835]

I really like this! I can tell you put TON of time and effort into making this. It's really good. Being a Dragon Ball fan for over 25 years I can tell you that it's definitely a good story you've co up with here. Well done.

[@lyricalvarez7919]

All the masterpieces in one. I will totally Watch this again.

[@adrianlopez3640]

I’ve seen this for the third time now

[@Dorizzmid]

Bardock:"someone is dying just to see you" Me:"she's already dead"

[@The_Blue_Otaku]

good one lol

[@tentaplayz3691]

Fr😂

[@SuperSayianGaming]

💀😭

[@Killmerightnow]

Kanojo wa sudeni shinde iru A Japanese translation

[@starwxst]

😐 so funny 😐😐😐😐😐

[@enjoyed_lemon]

Awesome loved it, had me in it the entire time. Thanks!! Going to go look for the next part!

[@izakireemsi2783]

Goku: "But yeah, no need to warm-up. Let's just go to god level or something, or at least 3." Radits: "......Uhh what?" That time you know you are fcked

[@SSDARKPIT]

You have to be pretty heartless to dislike something like this. I've always wanted Goku to wish back his family, this is amazing.

[@youchoob8090]

Raditz’s pride was like a Jenga tower, and Goku was like: “Ooo what’s this??” **Removes one piece as Raditz’s whole world comes crashing down**

[@fernandofuentes7073]

Goku just like : *touch* and then raditz life flashed before his eyes

[@atomicreactor6033]

Basically, take Vegeta's speech from TFS DBZA when he and Trunks came out of the Hyperbolic Time Chamber, replace Vegeta with Raditz and that's basically it lmao

[@AYOR_.]

O

[@ultraegobroly752]

Kekw

[@MortalMassakre]

Totally awesome writing! Felt like this could be a real part of the series from original creators. You did a great job capturing the character’s personalities and mannerisms. Implemented elements of the original story to fit your new twist. Everything made sense and there were no faults in the logic. Great work bro!

[@Denizae]

Wow thank you sooooo much for this. This is what I’d truly want as a fan. Unity ❤️ this is awesome. Loved it

[@Rxangel1]

"He's even softer than me now" Vegeta: yeah idk bout that kakarot

[@lanorris_reed3909]

I love how goku goes to hell just to flex

[@brianelegar3217]

He went to Hell to spar with Raditz. Upon the underwhelming revelation of his strength, he began to explain the progressive power of Saiyan transformations.

[@allister_macen7261]

@@brianelegar3217 it’s a joke dumbass😐😐😐

[@Kyuubey0406]

@@allister_macen7261 idk bro you seem more like the dumbass here.

[@traagicshotss5449]

@@Kyuubey0406 no no. The guy he replied to clearly didn’t get the joke, so he was right to explain it and call him a dumbass. Now you’re a dumbass as well congratulations 🎉🎉🎉

[@justyourbasicweeb9659]

@@brianelegar3217 Woosh

[@bakouzad5321]

Absolutely awesome. I love this. Keep making more of these !

[@BeginnerMoto]

This was amazing! Loved every minute of it!

[@jasonbradbury3484]

Goku: lets revive my family! Nappa: "HEY WHAT ABOUT ME!"

[@sorrychangedmyusername3594]

Vegeta: HAH you'd love to see it

[@eobardthawn6903]

More like this... Vegeta: *LMAO*

[@bruhntastic3021]

Dom : did you say family

[@brotbrotsen1100]

Nappa is busy producing his movie "citizen nappa"

[@GamerHubbyJ]

@@brotbrotsen1100 true

[@nanno2990]

I love how they just left Nappa alone in Hell.

[@magneric]

The ghost of nappa will still haunt vegeta though

[@Rickyy94]

Wow man! You are amazing! I'll watch every single videos of yours from now on. Thanks!

[@wannerubg2686]

💪

[@drippsosauceyy7243]

Absolutely amazing! Loved every second of this! One can only wish something like this would be animated and actually happen! It would be incredible!

[@lamb2646]

Chi-Chi must be rich to have enough food to feed five Matt Stoney’s.

[@ultraaxolotl6906]

Satan probably give them cash

[@user-id8mm1ui3l]

U mean 3-

[@Natas1333.]

@@user-id8mm1ui3l Gohan, gotenks, bardock, goku, gine

[@traagicshotss5449]

@@Natas1333. gotenks is the fusion of goten and trunks, no way goten and gotenks were sitting at the same table😂 I’m assuming you meant raditz lol

[@Natas1333.]

@@traagicshotss5449 i ment goten u nub

[@hecktai]

I feel like if nappa came back to life and turned to the side of good, he would be like the uncle that like always grills at the bbq and spoils the kids lol. Idk why, but when I played the db legends story, he just sort of gave me that impression. I think he would also be a cool saiyan. Hoping dragon ball decides to do a small arc or little episode similar to this where goku goes to visit or see the old saiyans.

[@excalibur876]

Definitely, Nappa grew on me through the DBL story mode, they kept his initial personality in check but implemented a whole side of him that actually made me like him… Exactly as u described, the uncle at the BBQ and spoils the kids, I would love to see how he, Goten, and especially trunks would interact.

[@traagicshotss5449]

@@excalibur876 I feel like Nappa “taking goten and trunks under his wing” (trying to be their master) and seeing goten and trunks put the work on Nappa would make for a hilarious but great smaller arc/ filler. But I agree DBL story really made Nappa way more interesting and likeable. There was nothing to him in dbz

[@justyourbasicweeb9659]

Bardock gives that same vibe though

[@shwingcrimson8202]

Idk if you know of him, but masako x, the VA for goku’s abridged voice did a what if about nappa turning good

[@tonyblank2022]

:D

[@piotrburgraf7572]

That one was hell of a funny one. Great work!

[@gabrielduarte7576]

I'm from Brazil and just discovered your channel, it's amazing, thanks a lot for existing bro

[@morningivy]

Okay, Gohan is WAY more aggressive in this story than he should be 😂 he's acting like an edgy teenager who has PTSD from being abused by his uncle as a kid.

[@snirambaya9587]

He is tho-

[@morningivy]

@@snirambaya9587 I just don't see Gohan reacting this way if they ever brought Raditz back in canon. He might be peeved or even angry, but when they explain the situation to Gohan he would calm down. He doesn't have THAT much pent up rage over Raditz kidnapping him, and he seems to be pretty mentally healthy as an adult.

[@tdaye6978]

Yeah they really overdid Gohan's anger towards Raditz. He's been done WAY worse by literally EVERY major villain in the series, and even some minor villains. If he didn't react this badly to seeing Frieza again, why he so butthurt about Raditz??

[@snirambaya9587]

@@morningivy I think he would lean his stuff on sight lol.. Only after doing that he will calm down and listen to the explanation, that's my opinion..

[@snirambaya9587]

@@tdaye6978 I think he didn't go crazy when Frieza came back because he knew it was either that or his universe getting erased..

[@patrulhadotempo]

EVERY TIME SOMEONE REACTS TO THIS COMMENT, I WILL COME BACK AND WATCH THE VIDEO TWICE MORE...

[@thebroyosgaming]

Cap

[@thebroyosgaming]

Show proof

[@ChrisBrown_29]

Cool

[@christianwillis5503]

Cap

[@RVGmetallicasaw]

Watch again.

[@cal1012000]

I can't believe that the main series of dragon Ball z never touched on this dude you're freaking genius and I can't believe I'm watching this for the third time and there's no fighting involved great job please keep up the good work

[@YS-ms5ue]

Great story!! Subscribed. I want the next part!

[@CheesyPasta516]

I like how Bardock was like "That's my boy! Pulling out is for the weak!"

[@truegrit9202]

Ayoooooo😂😂😂😭😭😭

[@Fugitive685]

Best part is it was a real woman

[@thegermanfool8953]

😂😂😂

[@cosmicwolf9918]

Super Saiyan Raditz: At last, I’ve reached a level beyond the average saiyan! And now I’m invincible! Ultra Instinct Goku: How cute

[@user-vs9ds3dc2y]

The power of Plot is unnatural.

[@ptwoeimin2131]

NOOOO, I WANTED MORE. PLEASE MAKE MORE PLEASE THIS IS AWESOME.

[@tylerredneck]

Oh man this was good loved it

[@PerfectAgenda]

I died laughing at 51:49 when you said “and with his fist clenched, ready to put Raditz to sleep.” 😂 out of all the ways you could’ve phrased that description you decided to go with that. I love it. 😂

[@deltaanimations7720]

Lol

[@ODthaOG]

😂😂😂

[@kingorza15]

Gohan on bumpers with him 😂

[@michaelwillconquer5931]

When raditz spoke about hell saying hell is in the mind i felt that

[@generalfreezer681]

That's what school is

[@beepboop1472]

@@generalfreezer681 are you 5?

[@tix2260]

@@beepboop1472 yes, yes he is

[@jhorwelleealimoot5410]

This is a great work!

[@taiwanjohnson9799]

Wow great love the way you deliver the information powerful accept reality✨💙👍

[@pegacornlol458]

Gohan really said “ it’s just a joke bro, look at the camera right there”

[@anicentkezzys9178]

nice pfp

[@SunnyDaking_]

It’s a prank bro 😂

[@thenerdyboin8228]

Lmfao

[@theoriginalzoom3275]

So Akira Killed Off 99% Of The Saiyans Because He Didn't Have Much Vegetables To Name Them After Of...When Ya Think About It It Honestly Makes Total Sense

[@ultraomenmurat9937]

That reminds me, if there are millions of Saiyans and their all named after vegetables, makes you think if there are any repeats and how many names if vegetables can they even have

[@chrisgateway7846]

Bardock and gine aren't vegetables though

[@manjukhatri2339]

@@chrisgateway7846 They are actually, there names are vegetable puns in Japanese but are lost after translation.

[@shade08538]

“Eddo” “Squasha” “Lemongaru” “Collarb” “Kohlarba” “Oniono” “Galangul” “Leek” boom, Saiyan/Vegetable names i call bullshit

[@divinetoxic-bs9836]

@@ultraomenmurat9937 there is a repeat dbz broly and dbs broly

[@dexrias]

This is such a amazing and wholesome story. I love it!

[@alexandreboodhna8298]

This is just what I needed

[@HectorHernandez-ui7sy]

I laughed where Chi-Chi says that to Goku to stop "bringing random strangers back home with you". Made me think Goku treats them like stray animals! "But Chi-Chi they followed me home" LOL

[@teleraadams-ratliff3512]

😏

[@sougotokiwa8439]

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

[@sabsfazbear7592]

I love how he goes from far weaker than nappa to THE NEW KING OF THE SAYIANS

[@otbb-los2116]

This was amazing

[@apoc5412]

This is so good!

[@Psnking09]

The Gohan and Raditz embrace made me tear up a bit. This was excellent man.

[@FJacket]

“Hearing how comedically slow goku is-“ is the greatest sentence starter in history

[@pg18666]

Brooo too good love it keep it up

[@corneliobravo8099]

#uncleraditz man this is an awesome one and good story as well.. I liked how raditz story came out and how they all just wanted to be a family in the end. Awesome job Arj as ALWAYS!!!! Keep them coming man KEEP THEM COMING!!!

[@knightzix_01]

the sight of goku and family eating together Fills my heart with joy and sadness

[@knightzix_01]

this was beautiful everything i Would have imagined If goku Brought back his family

[@Steven-bb5by]

I think it would be cool if gines’ father was a beast of a saiyan that bardock had to fight to win gine over and that’s where raditz gets his badass hair from.

[@williemills3186]

Who do u think beat up cumber the first time 😅😭

[@SonOfSassy]

This story brought a tear to my eyes. When Gine and bardock their two sons. Beautiful story. Uncle Raditz ❤️

[@lajaness4026]

Dope I'm feeling this.. you got a subscriber

[@omegavegeta1110]

Parents: hi Goku: *"computer error"*

[@naqypoo4843]

50:52 and in that moment Bardock revealed his true form: Dominic Toretto

[@robloxbois5168]

Lol

[@dragonballdimension5185]

🤣

[@user-vs9ds3dc2y]

Bardock negs Saitama

[@Jose-uf2il]

Loved it! Now where is the next part as im dying for it! Never have I seen a fan piece and you got me good. Great work!

[@marquisbean1752]

This is amazing. I love your passion.

[@egios9466]

Gine: Was he a good dad? *Background music stops*

[@lyoko_jpeg]

Oh no

[@AngelRivera-el9ps]

Bro his is one of the funniest dragon ball mangas I’ve ever watched they should actually make this in the series 😂 10-10

[@watbleed9037]

is this a fanmade or original?

[@JoCreep]

I’ll pay to see it

[@yostinromero3812]

@@watbleed9037 fanmade

[@dipsithecreeper]

Amazing! I always loved creative fanmade stories! This one is really interesting, it could be even something that can happen in the series.

[@RobSwizz1e]

This was a very well made fan manga. I truly loved the atmosphere and tone of this entire story. I kept hoping that something wrong would happen and set Raditz off into another tyrannical fit and try to flex his power with like a time skip and he's achieved SSJ 3 or something, but I'm glad that the story was humanized and we got to see a more relatable and understandable side to him. Not sure why so many people are confused about Gohan's reaction in this story though. Did you not watch Dragon Ball Z or Dragon Ball Super? Even in the tournament arc, he was not just some dork, he honed back into his teenager potential when he fought Cell, he was as tactical as he was when he learned from Supreme Kai and had to fight Buu. He's grown up and he has lived experiences that can haunt him. Gohan has gone through a lot of changes and emotions - some fleshed out more than others - and a lot of times we never revisit old sentiments and just expect the Z fighters to just get over things for the sake of a new story and a new big bad. This was revisited in a joking manner with Yamcha and his obvious drop in power level, whereas Tien and Krillin are far stronger since they keep up with their training. The joke is that he isn't strong enough to be considered a team mate for Universe 7 in the tournament arc. Gohan went through a lot of crap, clearly not as traumatic as Raditz, and yet everyone expects him to just brush aside PTSD and previous experiences. You can grow up, be reasonable, strong, and thoughtful, and you can still have your dark moments, and Gohan, with his limited features as an adult, shows that he struggles with his own real world issues and now fatherhood. This portrayed him well as his past came back to haunt him during a time when he watched his "uncle" kill his father, and he couldn't do anything about it. Regardless of the Dragon Balls being able to revive him, that is one hell of a traumatic thing to experience. He also gave Raditz a warning, to show him he meant his rage, anger, and his power that he can stop him if he wanted to now. He was no longer a weak little child. I think he played the entire scenario very well, and it is understandably a likely reaction he would have had if Akira Toriyama ever visited this storyline. Maybe with more cheesy lines and a obviously a fight scene or two, but I do think Gohan would have done the same thing.

[@yeetdiscreet1278]

I’m honestly more upset that creators/writers keep depicting him as SSJ2 being what represents the pinnacle of his power. It’s wrong. Dead wrong. It’s a step back and creators keep treating it as though it’s not. His Mystic form is the pinnacle of his power, And the fact that Goku is able to reach MUI state shows where we are in the timeline which means that Gohan should immediately default to Mystic form since it’s a form that is vastly superior in every way. It’s annoying as hell and doesn’t make sense with his character. Even in this context. If you are coming across someone who was your sexual offender or kidnapper when you were a child, why would you NOT come at them with your absolute best shot? This is clearly not his best shot. It doesn’t make any sense. That said, his reaction being the way it was… Yes, it is a little bit much. The series has not showed much in the way of PTSD affecting his ability to fight or anything. It always attributed his unwillingness to fight and get involved to the human side of his hybrid DNA-it depicted that side as one of his greatest strengths that gave rise to his incredible potential… But also his biggest weakness because he has more humanity. If he had at least one more outburst due to PTSD related issues, then this over-the-top outburst would actually make a little bit more sense. But as it is… It seems kind of extreme. Usually he hast to be provoked in that very instance to such anger, it’s not usually past events that happened decades ago that give rise to such fury. What happened afterwards made more sense. It’s pretty well written, I will definitely give him that. I enjoyed this a lot.

[@glitchlessyt9292]

@@yeetdiscreet1278 about the mystic form, doesn't mystic disappear if you don't train?

[@yanis9871]

Man wrote an essay

[@Everweed420]

Gohan is pretty well tempered and not very aggressive and also a scholar. I think the story was really good but i also dont think gohan would instantly attack radditz upon seeing him sitting at the dinner table eating with his dad and his mom. Its definitely a cool fan fiction story though idk why bardock was confused about seeing goten and called him an imposter right after goku told him he had a wife and kids though or all the talk about love between all of them when they're depicted as a warrior race even his mom is usually a little tough. Writing is pretty difficult especially picking up another writers work and extending on characters that didn't have a lot of part in the origina. I think they did a really good job but i also think people saying gohan wouldn't react like that are valid as well we are all fans that care about the characters and they're just giving their input. Obviously the creator put a lot of effort into it and did a great job but its hard to get 100% right with everything and I don't think the people saying hohan wouldn't react that way are doing it to be mean or shit on the work. Constructive criticism is usually ways of helping someone perfect what they are doing and make it better.

[@LittleLad9]

I'm still kinda confused on why *Gine* of all people would be in hell though.... ignoring that, *this is an amazing story!*

[@MariaGarcia-bq4hp]

Same

[@MariaGarcia-bq4hp]

Why the heck is gine in hell

[@doggoincorporated3686]

Maybe she went to hell because she wanted to stay with bardock

[@LittleLad9]

@@doggoincorporated3686 Still. Even if she requested that, Yemma isn't gonna give her permission willy nilly. As sad as it is.. she's just a dead mortal nothing of a higher status like Beerus. Goku is an exception because of how much he helped. He went against beings that could easily enter and exit the place i like to call the Judgement House. Think of the Ginyu Force Incident when they went to "conquer" King Kai's planet for Freeza. Though, Goku wasn't there.. if he was still dead King Yemma would request for Goku to deal with them. Gine hasn't done anything that would get the favor from Yemma. Like I typed before, she's just a dead mortal. Nothing more, nothing less.

[@bhbltigertysen3813]

Maybe before raditz and Goku was born she was a fighter just like bardock,so she could’ve killed tones of innocent people ( just a theory)

[@Skillz_JPVIGOR]

Dude good work, I wish I could see a part 2 of this. I really liked it a lot. Keep it up (I just realised he already did lol)

[@Yashahiro_]

You make awesome stories !

[@maxiviano100]

Raditz at the start: I want revenge Raditz after revived: I have changed and i thinked about everything i did now iam a good person

[@xerofire]

When you finally come upon the revelation that the second son always inherits the signature hair

[@nonghole4870]

😂

[@makugiru7096]

That was awesome bro...👍😎

[@prod.by_HoneyBee]

Really great work arj! I enjoyed it very well! Thanks a lot!!!

[@Majuub-QuickshotNation]

Goku: You're Vegeta's friend right? The guy I tested Kaioken on. That was great Training. Thanks! *Supa Hot Fire Squad appears* Me: OH MY GOD... HE JUST WENT XGAMEZ MODE

[@antoniobrown8422]

Omg stfu that shits old

[@k1ngmeal483]

@@antoniobrown8422 no its really not

[@antoniobrown8422]

@@k1ngmeal483 how's it not?

[@k1ngmeal483]

@@antoniobrown8422 im pretty sure alot of people still use that meme. You dont have to be so rude about him using it like who tf hurt you?

[@antoniobrown8422]

@@k1ngmeal483 just because people still use that meme doesn't mean its not old. Nobdy hurt me, people just think that its entertaining or funny and its not

[@Hyper_Nova324]

This is my dream what if, I've always wanted to see how something like this would play out, if I could choose any what if to become canon it would be this one by far. I'd definitely love to see it continued for as long as you possibly can.

[@jessekoss3785]

this was some wholesome stuff man i can't deal

[@himswol]

Great Work keep it up

[@user-ii4zy6bz8w]

I've enjoyed every second of this video, like I'm literally there.

[@jordanjeffgo8048]

That's a good 1 hour show. Enjoyed it. Liked the video.

[@romarioosborne589]

Damn that was amazing.

[@lillpoetboy]

This was great

[@Sin_ofGreed_]

36:12 Raditz: Boi to I look pleased to you? 😅

[@TwistedMajora]

I love that 4th wall break at 53:21.

[@callumleask2907]

Really lovely story this. Thanks

[@domlemon176]

The raditz and Gohan part was some of the heaviest shit I have ever seen. No lie I teared up when I seen raditz did. And mi guy just found you and thought this was manga for dbs that wasn't fan made and clicked to see this arc. Wasn't disappointed that it was fan made (which normally I don't like fan made) was extremely delighted to see what you created and now I need more and to me personally I'm dubbing this another timeline for the whole series because this was just riveting with the story and how he narrates. I'll be watching your career with great interest