David Mamet's Writing Advice: "There's No Such Thing As Character"

[@kauffrau6764]

During Covid I started writing fiction, then I went to Masterclass and watched David Mamet, four times. My writing got better as I listened to him. I'm going to watch him again...not only for the education, but he is so interesting and has such wide range of knowledge, it's fascinating and elevating. Thank you for highlighting him here.

[@sottinger2638]

I love David Mamet! I had a master class subscription for a year but ended up only watching Davis Mamet over and over.

[@rmacfarlane]

it's a suprisingly insightful class. I bought it before they had a subscription model and revisit it pretty frequently

[@kauffrau6764]

Me too! I did watch some other authors etc. too.

[@edwinjacobellis4852]

I sum it up as, “What kinda guy would do something like that!”

[@hellbooks3024]

There’s always a power play between playwrights and actors. Mamet is interested in certain things and not in others. Some things exist more strongly with strong characters than others., It would be hard to justify Peter Sellars in Strangelove for example, playing those 3 parts exactly the same. What’s he doing there, anyway? It’s like music. The oboe is a particular character in a larger context. The woodwinds all come in at their times in the score and add their personalities. You can imagine a complex orchestral piece played on synthesized pure electronic tones. There would be a lot lost. Conversely, there is music which is happily transposed from one instrument or set of instruments to the other. Art of Fugue for example.

[@MartyScorchedEarthse]

“Played by crack-shot Alec Baldwin.” LMFAO snuck that one in there

[@rmacfarlane]

had to

[@nickherting4698]

lmao

[@michaelmayo]

Yea! Someone showed some love for "The Edge." Great movie, killer soundtrack.😊

[@rmacfarlane]

So underrated

[@edgarabramz]

Really good summation of this specific part of David's writing approach. ✍️

[@rmacfarlane]

Thanks

[@MAFion]

I thought of this while I auditioned for (and was offered) the part of John in Oleanna at our community theater. I also thought of it when I turned it down. Mamet takes this action motivation thing to an extreme to the detriment of character. If I think of Martin Mcdonaugh or Kenneth Lonergan or Amy Herzog, the illusion of character fees much more flushed out.

[@rmacfarlane]

Well I think it’s nice that he lets the actors figure out the rest of it. He only puts on the page what absolutely needs to be there

[@VinceLyle2161]

It took me a few days of thinking about what Mamet said to first get it and then agree with it. When you think about conflict, some conflict is caused by people acting exactly the way you think they're going to act. But conflict also comes from people acting unpredictably. And sometimes when someone does something unpredictable, others say he was acting "out of character." That's when I got it. If you know your plot, if you know all the actions that are going to lead you to your conclusion, then there's no "character," there's only what each of the people in your story must do at that point of the plot. If some thug has to pull a gun and shoot someone, then that's what has to happen. If an honest, upstanding, mild-mannered fellow turns his back on every one of the principles he's lived by in the rest of the book to seduce a woman, then that's what has to happen.

[@TeddyRumble]

Plot is what characters do, in a particular situation.

[@reputablehype]

Would love more essays from you, you really do a good job on covering topics but keeping it simple and calm.

[@rmacfarlane]

Thanks very much. I’m working on a big one that should be out before the end of the year. Planning to do more about screenwriting as well. Thanks for your kind words

[@ОПГКобаны]

Wow, that's a really great advice....... Thank you for sharing it in essay!

[@rmacfarlane]

you're very welcome

[@theexpresidents]

Finally, a fan of _The Edge._ One of the hardest screenplays I ever had to track down; in fact, it took me years and it was originally called "The Bookworm." This analysis is fucking good, I gotta admit. You deserve _way_ more views. Now analyze _Speed-the-Plow_ !

[@rmacfarlane]

Wow where did you find it? I’d love to read that. A truly underrated film. I have not seen speed the plow. One of the many Mamet films I’m yet to watch

[@chrismill6483]

@@rmacfarlane I second this. I have been searching for long time, and so far I come up empty.

[@dillonhorner7110]

It was a hard find for sure but worth it

[@dillonhorner7110]

The edge is an underrated masterpiece. In the hands of another director, it would be deemed a classic like a few good men today.

[@noamflorin4554]

Great essay, keep going!

[@rmacfarlane]

thank you

[@harryom3497]

This video sums it all up for me. Thanks man i am gonna write well now.

[@rmacfarlane]

haha

[@bhotaling1]

What you choose to do is your character. How you do it, as well.

[@rmacfarlane]

Well said

[@keithkhabo1285]

Great essay, loved the part where you discussed Drive and Ryan Gosling.

[@rmacfarlane]

thanks!

[@CrackedPropane]

Dialogue is some of my favorite parts movies but I never knew of this guy I gotta watch this guys’ movies

[@rmacfarlane]

Oh they’re great. Glengarry Glen Ross is the one

[@JoshHarrisPhotography]

Glengarry Glen Ross, The Verdict and House of Games (which he directed) are his classics. I would also check out The Spanish Prisoner, Heist and State and Main. He's one of my favorites.

[@winstonsmith8240]

To do is to be- Satre To be is to do- Camus Do be do be do- Sinatra.

[@AlyxCoe]

That was written on the wall in the ladies' bathroom in my college bar. 😂

[@rmacfarlane]

i think you have to attribute the author, if anyone knows who wrote this ridiculous joke

[@princeofcupspoc9073]

David, David, David. That style of writing is great if you are a genius at writing dialogue. Most of us are not so lucky, and we may need our brown shoes. And, crack shot.

[@rmacfarlane]

Yes it certainly helps. Doesn’t seem to easy to study dialogue either

[@niallphillips7045]

Superb, clear and helpful.

[@rmacfarlane]

thanks Niall

[@TeddyRumble]

When I wrote my film Amy's Baby, I needed to know the characters. I knew Kristen was smart and tightly wound, and Amy was a party girl, not as bright, more emotional. I decided where they went to college, what their families were like, these things made the characters more real, more concrete. I can't write without knowing who they were. When I've acted, I needed to know who my character was, flesh him out. Otherwise, I couldn't know his motivation, how he would act/react.

[@rmacfarlane]

whatever helps get across meaning to the audience is fine with me

[@furiusfan]

Great video. You got a new subscriber! Can I ask you what's the music you played in the background for the part of "This concept, applied", please? Shazam can't recognize it with your voice. Lol

[@PolarisBanks]

Gymnopédie No. 1 by Erik Satie

[@furiusfan]

@@PolarisBanks thank you!! 🙏

[@rmacfarlane]

thanks! yes i think its a jazz version of the satie piece from Artlist

[@migol1984]

Redbelt is my personal favorite of his.

[@rmacfarlane]

never even heard of it!

[@ChristianGustafson]

The Edge seriously underrated.

[@rmacfarlane]

yeah an excellent film

[@MarcosElMalo2]

I skipped that part of the video because I haven’t seen it yet.

[@ChristianGustafson]

@@MarcosElMalo2 I think I’ll watch it this afternoon.

[@orangewarm1]

there's the things that people do. Repeatedly.

[@supergrover8or]

Yep. I can't recommend his master class enough. His recent book "recessional" is whacky...but also worth a look!

[@rmacfarlane]

ill have to check the book out

[@guitarquartet]

excellent stuff! and 'crack shot' Alec Baldwin - absolutely hilarious 🙂

[@rmacfarlane]

thank you!

[@tenchan634]

wish i could hear anything over the band

[@XxSEETH3RxX]

I can't afford masterclass. Wish I could.

[@rmacfarlane]

i'm sure mcdonalds are hiring

[@XxSEETH3RxX]

@@rmacfarlane Why be an asshole. Or is it just a mental illness?

[@rmacfarlane]

I paid £80 for the Mamet class when I was a broke student. Do ten hours of work at minimum wage and you will be able to buy it

[@aluisious]

What and how are boring questions. People only really get excited for why.

[@rmacfarlane]

what fortune cookie did you get that from

[@doozledumbler5393]

He is correct. Actors who perform any play by Mamet sound like they're reading from a script and aren't real characters.

[@careyyost4981]

Best Mamet movies aren’t directed by him.. but I still enjoy them stiff as they are 😐

[@wbjr6715]

When the actors are bad, or are stage actors,

[@careyyost4981]

⁠@@wbjr6715Rebecca Pidgeon in Spanish Prisoner seems like the most faithful deadpan performer. Recommended!

[@brachio1000]

I don't get the no-character idea. It's true of movies, tv, and plays, but novels and short stories can dig into a character's thoughts and emotions.

[@dogstick12]

Char ACT er Taking Action needs to drive or be a result of thoughts and feelings

[@mondoenterprises6710]

So Paul Newman didn't have a character in The Verdict? Nor Sean Connery in Untouch? I don't understand. They reveal their character thru their actions and words.

[@rmacfarlane]

sounds like you understand it just fine

[@andykaufman7620]

David Mamet is wrong. Character is NOT simply 'action' that a character does. Character is the inner guide within that informs a person (or character) as to their true nature and what types of 'action' or behaviors they will exhibit.

[@dogstick12]

You are describing ethics A char act er is guided by ethics and morals

[@andykaufman7620]

@@dogstick12 To clarify the use of the term Character then is a stand-in for 'morals' or 'ethics'. As in the statement: "Sports does not built character, it reveals it". That is the connotation I meant.

[@B_Estes_Undegöetz]

The Edge … needed a much better director.

[@rmacfarlane]

Aw I dunno. I still love it. Generally I think it’s pretty well done

[@garethb1961]

I like Sky. You perform an important function covering stories that other media won't. But on this matter, you are wrong.

[@Tysto]

The problem with the advice that character is only what characters say and do is that Mamet's characters, like Sorkin's, all talk alike and act alike. They're stories are often compelling anyway, mainly because they hire good actors who bring something interesting to their characters that isn't on the page.

[@rmacfarlane]

When it comes to Mamet, I certainly don’t agree. He has a style, but his characters don’t all act alike or even sound the same. Sorkin’s often sound the same but his characters actions are, I think, unique. He does like a certain style of story, but I wouldn’t conflate the rhythm of his characters speech with a lack of individuality in how the characters behave

[@stiankallhovd7041]

I felt very upset with Mamet after watching this video... First, if the video creator's interpretation of Mamet is correct (I don't know whether it is, but hope so!), what Mamet is trying to say can be boiled down to "reveal character through action and dialogue rather than exposition." I believe I said it way simpler right there. And I'm practically a nobody in the storytelling world! There's a lot I could say about Mamet's statement, but I'll settle for this: I know for a fact that many who read novels, watch movies or play certain types of video games, all want to immerse themselves in the stories they engage with. *They want to believe that the characters and worlds they engage with are real.* So what happens to their experience of story if they take Mamet's "advice" to heart? I for one would neither be moved nor excited by a story if I were to think that "I'm just seeing words on a page right now" or "I'm only seeing some images on the screen... No reason to cry or be excited." Suspension of disbelief or immersion in characters and story worlds is absolutely key to our enjoyment of stories (or at least to many of us). But taking Mamet's statement to heart would utterly ruin that experience. Furthermore, how does it improve our storytelling a ability to think that characters do not exist...? As a screenwriter myself, I desire to think of my characters as real people, with the full capacity of human emotions. As I've been planning out scenes for the fantasy series I'm working on and working on the first screenplay, I've many times felt deeply moved or saddened by the fate of the characters throughout the story and by particular character moments. It still remains to be seen how an audience will react to those scenes. But would I really be able to write scenes like that -- even think of those scenes -- if I had the mindset that characters are just "actions and dialogue on the page"? In conclusion, I see nothing valuable in Mamet's statement, whether as a storyteller or as a consumer of stories. I have to wonder whether Mamet has considered the full consequences of taking his statement to heart; what that would do to us as storytellers and story consumers...? He may have meant to say one thing, but he does bear responsibility for all the other possible implications of what he says, upon all those people who listen to his advice without bringing it into question. For those who may be looking for places to learn storytelling, I myself have learned a lot by watching videos on Film Courage (KZbin channel). A lot of what is said there applies to novel writing as well, and to other story forms. 😊

[@dogstick12]

The audience doesn't see your characters thoughts or fears

[@careyyost4981]

I love Mamet’s masterclass but when he executes based on his apparently rigid philosophy, his characters come across as readers. House of Games stands out possibly because Joe Mantegna’s most understated performance is still great because of what he projects, seemingly involuntarily. The screen adaptation of Glengarry Glen Ross is possibly his most appealing movie and it’s because dir Foley let the excellent cast give added nuance and naturalism. His dialogue read without inflection from the page, very dissonant, repetitive, staccato makes full emersion into his world nigh impossible for me.. His “characters don’t exist” is the sort of literalism that leads to boring anti metaphysical outcomes 😭

[@rmacfarlane]

a take many people have, not one I think reflects reality, but I may be wrong

[@Mrch33ky]

This explains why all his characters sound like the same person talking.

[@rmacfarlane]

booo

[@owlcu]

Utter nonsense. Character is the fingerprint of personality, absolutely unique to each individual, who will react to a situation in their own unique way. Write any way you like, but the people in your script will perform only as they know to perform, within the confines of an "identity" contrived by their own limitations.

[@rmacfarlane]

that is the wankiest explanation ever

[@theexpresidents]

"Who will react to a situation in their own way...." Yeah, by _doing_ things. Action. Which is what Mamet said.

[@MrRa-gk5dm]

Mamet isn’t looking deep enough, *why* do characters act? If your story is poorly written, to serve the plot. If it’s well written, character creates the plot.

[@dogstick12]

Ethics is the fingerprint of character

[@icipher6730]

@@MrRa-gk5dm In other words, plot is always function of character, not the other way around.

[@UncensoredScion]

What he said isn't wisdom, what he said is idiocy and it's intended to make you and others incapable of making things so that people don't come and supplant him in a position while he's still alive. The idiocy of saying something as baseless as "there is no such thing as character" is astronomical and on the level of literary abuse the likes of which isn't seen much. It's absolutely wrong to call him good, he's evil pure and simple and you can tell that from the abysmal glasses he wears.

[@icipher6730]

All well and good, but I don't believe this kind of advice can be considered universal, meaning that it doesn't work for all forms of fiction. There's a gulf between how these things work in screenwriting/playwriting and in literature.

[@rmacfarlane]

very possibly, though i think the lessons at least partially transfer to prose

[@williampowell3378]

Backstory is overrated.

[@faithbad666]

Man You're Great ty

[@rmacfarlane]

you're better