EAS Scenario. An Intruder.

[@robertstewart1223]

Listen my friend...Millions of us, hell...tens of millions of us come to KZbin looking for EAS based videos; Real, Not Real, simulation, science fiction...It don't matter. If you do them well your page will EXPLODE with subs. But and this is a big but...If you don't take the time to really buff the corners and make it shine, you won't get too far. In 1 minute and 33 seconds you have created something that caught my eye...looks like it could be a very creepy thing I'd like to listen to. But smooth it out...add an AI voiceover, add some spooky ambiance and let the situation simmer and get more drastic as the seconds tick by. I'd even suggest having a friend that you might believe is a 'word nazi' look over your script to see if you have worded it better. For instance... "Do not answer. No matter if they seem human or not" First...Answer what? Don't assume we know what you mean. Say "If there is a knock on the door or, if someone calls out your name, do not answer. " "Remain quiet and do not panic." Little things like this matter. I wanna see this Scenario when you complete it. Do me (and yourself) a favor. Go over and check out a page called Ambient Escapades. I think this page is the best of the best and I'm a picky bastard. I told them that they need to fix the sequence of their EAS tones even though they have done everything else perfectly! I believe you could be really good at this if you use other really good scenario pages as reference. I will be watching for you...good luck

[@dipshit5000]

Where's the voiceover?