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@AnhTran-cq6kp11 ай бұрын
Something I learned from this video is that for a problem-solution essay, to make sure the solution is portrayed more than the problem! Thank you for making these videos, I really enjoy them and learn a lot for my own essays.
@ovidiugangalic716311 ай бұрын
It was a really nice video, I didn't expect that starting with a quote was not recommended and I didn't expect the first draft to be a 3, I now understand I need to work a lot on my essay
@Zvppy11 ай бұрын
avoid quotes as ur starting sentence, and problem-solution ratio should be more solution based
@krithinb478811 ай бұрын
Great video! I learned a lot about structure for problem-solution and specific verbs to make an essay truly exemplary.
@Taran_K11 ай бұрын
I was honestly impressed how such a compelling story was fit into 650 words. I learned more about the problem solution ratio and how paragraphs should be split up.
@zionw183711 ай бұрын
Howwww do ppl write like this I feel like my essay is trash
@ayomide79318 ай бұрын
fr tho
@Letslearntogetheruzh72 ай бұрын
3:11 6:29
@lynniefangstudies212011 ай бұрын
what does it mean to be a "scholarship student?"
@aileenhdez343311 ай бұрын
Hi Kevin! Another helpful & insightful review of a Common App essay:) If possible, would you be able to read/rate a narrative-like essay rather than a problem-solution essay? Although every essay you've reviewed so far has helped me with my own essay, mine is less problem-focused and more a "story-telling" of what I think best describes me.
@arnavsinha519011 ай бұрын
Thank you so much! Having written tons of drafts without making much progress myself, I found that very helpful!
@aadikhops_1111 ай бұрын
This is such an underrated KZbin channel. I hope y'all reach more people because I'm sure it will benefit them immensely.
@elevatedschool11 ай бұрын
Thank you! This made my day! :)
@ovidiugangalic716311 ай бұрын
Can't wait for a new break dance, very interesting insights on the essay and how it went to extending outside helping his mom
@elevatedschool11 ай бұрын
And as always, if you'd like a professional review of your essay in
@CobraSniff11 ай бұрын
I need a discount 😢 This is almost 1/4th my dads salary…(Cursing the exchange rates)
@unique662511 ай бұрын
hi ive just done writing my essay, but its 730 words long, is it a problem?
@robzzz804611 ай бұрын
Definitely the structural elements in terms of parallel structure and the concision that was implemented to elevate the essay
@MechidPodcast11 ай бұрын
Both the essay and the dance were top!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@Sailor-boat11 ай бұрын
Flow of the essay through use of literary elements has really elevated! Wow! Unsure if I will receive your help, but, as this video by it self, this video helps enough :)
@tanmayee306611 ай бұрын
Realizing that using varying syntax (such as parenthesis) throughout an essay can help vary your sentences and make it more interesting to the reader while allowing you to add more snippets of your character. This video was rlly informative and has definitely been helping me with my college admissions process :)
@shoutotodoroki404711 ай бұрын
I really love your videos! Thank you very much for such videos. Just recently my mentor told me that my essay was really bad, so now I have to rewrite it. Your videos are really being helpful;
@qurbanalihussaini1233 ай бұрын
Very great tips! I loved the essay, and it touched me. Is there any possibility to admission officers think of our truly essay written by ourselves edited by ChatGPT?
@mihikas596011 ай бұрын
Thank you this was incredible!
@HJ-fr6ku11 ай бұрын
Hi Kevin , great work as always. I wanted to check out your website but I am getting a server error is it down?
@Oynsnaa9 ай бұрын
I can't even express how much I appreciate you T.T tysm
@Sailor-boat9 ай бұрын
If this is a 9/10, what would make this a 10/10?
@hunterdhruv299211 ай бұрын
Thanks for the info mate! I really hope i can crush this essay.
@KalebAklilu11 ай бұрын
Top quality video, you earned my sub.
@meomeomeomeow11 ай бұрын
That’s not a 8 to 9.5, that’s a 5 to 9, amazing edit.
@nyingngum794311 ай бұрын
Oh my! I love your reviews, Kevin. Thank you so much for your work. Whenever I type the link for the website you said we could use to submit our essays for review, it always shows error in my browser. I wish to ask if its possible for international students like me to submit our essays for review
@elevatedschool11 ай бұрын
It should work if you go to www.elevated.school/editmyessay
@kadirimariamdamilola990511 ай бұрын
Please make a video on gap year essay
@abdulla988611 ай бұрын
Does personal statement essay have to be in narrative form?