Who’s excited for the new hunger games? Written and performed by Eric Feurer
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@TheRepublicOfUngeria Жыл бұрын
He forgot to mention: The Town he lives in used to be a coal mining town before the mines shut down when they opened up the tooth processing facilities, so the town is called Coal Gate.
@snichelsticks8653 Жыл бұрын
take my like and leave
@o0Scarrow0o Жыл бұрын
God dammit this comment is amazing
@ninyaninjabrifsanovichthes45 Жыл бұрын
The main character also has heightened senses and psychic abilities for some reason They call this superpower the Senso Dyn
@TheRepublicOfUngeria Жыл бұрын
@@ninyaninjabrifsanovichthes45 He got them from the fiendish mutant witch. Her mutation caused her to grow her eyes out of her toes, so they call her "Floor Eyed".
@WTFisTingispingis11 ай бұрын
GET OUT
@sneeznoodle2 жыл бұрын
You're laughing. His rebel dad is in Mega Jail™ and you're laughing.
@serenegenerally Жыл бұрын
It do be funny tho
@NoNameTbh4 Жыл бұрын
Why is it trademarked 💀
@RushWheeler Жыл бұрын
You're laughing. Everything's about to change and you're laughing
@SandwichGlitch Жыл бұрын
@@NoNameTbh4 Because it's not regular jail, it's mega
@broblerone413 Жыл бұрын
You're laughing. His mom is going to die in six pages and you're laughing.
@hydqjuliilq272 жыл бұрын
“I’m described in the book as a plain-looking 15 year old, so naturally I’ll be played in the movies by a 20-something supermodel.”
@tatehildyard53322 жыл бұрын
Child labor regulations. Actual teens cost you more only to end up shooting less
@samuelbenhardt42302 жыл бұрын
Oh me? I'm kinda plain. What the hell does that mean you ask? People come in all different shapes and sizes? Oh it means I'm thin, have dark hair, shy. It'll be expressly stated that I'm not conventionally attractive like Titssica, but every hunky guy and my childhood best friend will have a thing for me. Who do I choose??
@WetSaucySlommy2 жыл бұрын
They should use reverse makeup for characters like this. Make the actors look 50% worse
@livcaitbff2 жыл бұрын
@@tatehildyard5332 sure but it’s still funny that characters who are described as plain are played by literal models who are conventionally attractive in every way
@Pukeprincess2 жыл бұрын
I’m 14 and I hope I never age again
@SexyBeamShooter2 жыл бұрын
"I got a job grinding poor people teeth at the tooth mill" is a classic.
@BlastinRope2 жыл бұрын
Gonna throw that one on my christian mingle
@SexyBeamShooter2 жыл бұрын
@@BlastinRope WHEEZZZEEEE.
@abbycollins Жыл бұрын
It makes electricity for the beautiful rich people cities. That’s the plot twist! 😀
@sel9981 Жыл бұрын
"I got a job grinding poor people teeth at the tooth mill" in other languages 歯医者で貧乏人の歯を削る仕事に就いた J'ai trouvé un travail en broyant les dents des pauvres au moulin à dents. Я работаю на зубной мельнице, перемалываю зубы бедняков. 我在磨牙厂找到一份给穷人磨牙的工作 Sain töitä köyhien hampaiden hionnassa hammasmyllyssä -
@invisiblemilkbag10 ай бұрын
the wheeze made that joke
@dhiibvulk90362 жыл бұрын
"I hate the government, but I also have a crush on it?" Is like the title of those ""real"" animated stories
@Jess-jt4zf2 жыл бұрын
That's every single one of those "poor rebel boy falls in love with the rich villain government official's daughter" lmao
@Maybe_a_Spoon2 жыл бұрын
The fact I had to read a book for class that followed that exact plot is making me cry with the accuracy
@snivythefencer28982 жыл бұрын
@@Maybe_a_Spoon Drop the title
@alondraisabel49792 жыл бұрын
basically red queen
@keithgawain36142 жыл бұрын
Sounds like an anime or Japanese light novel
@TheAmityElf2 жыл бұрын
This was like a public execution of the Divergent series.
@drackar2 жыл бұрын
I thought that was the movies.
@johnwhite15342 жыл бұрын
@@drackar They were based on equally shitty books
@thomaskole98812 жыл бұрын
those movies didn't have enough public executions. At least Hunger Games had some balls to make their cookie cutter authoritarian goverment seem ruthless.
@peggedyourdad95602 жыл бұрын
@@thomaskole9881 I honestly really like the book series, I just need to read the last book, lol. But, I can understand the criticisms towards it.
@JayImahara2 жыл бұрын
Divergent was a public execution of Divergent.
@christopherverhoef91122 жыл бұрын
"He's gonna be that shy, beefy boy I over-described on page 5." I once deduced who the villain was in a mystery story solely by the length of his introductory paragraph.
@ms.moronic91652 жыл бұрын
Good for you, Chris.
@golzaye33932 жыл бұрын
Which book?
@highviewbarbell Жыл бұрын
@@golzaye3393 all of them
@veryangryduckpl2122 Жыл бұрын
@@highviewbarbellMeet the Detective
@azariyelvarro627111 ай бұрын
Me: Reads a book Character: Dies Another character: It must have been a traitor! *Get introduced to dead character's grieving girlfriend the next chapter* Me: Geeze, who could it be? One of the characters we've know forever... or this new addition who is directly connected to the smuck who blew up last chapter?
@EdgieAlias2 жыл бұрын
"I'm strong and quiet." One... one of those things, maybe.
@jellyfishjames35042 жыл бұрын
"and."
@sandroselladore35062 жыл бұрын
yeah lol
@kal97282 жыл бұрын
SIGMA MALE LMAO
@juriepica11742 жыл бұрын
"My name? Crest" gets me every time
@maxwelljacobs9612 жыл бұрын
Really missed an opportunity to use "Cole...Cole Gate".
@WCBProductions2 жыл бұрын
@@maxwelljacobs961 I audibly cackled like a fkcin witch, good job
@fulana_de_tal2 жыл бұрын
@@maxwelljacobs961 like how in the selection the mc is named America
@tiredfrog3082 жыл бұрын
I admittedly didn’t get the joke because I’ve never heard of that brand before (I do not live in America), but the context makes it hilarious.
@BeazerProductions2 жыл бұрын
@@maxwelljacobs961 True, but Cole is a normal human name on its own, while Crest is exactly stupid enough to be a YA name.
@jadagastia69452 жыл бұрын
It's the guy in the background disappointedly going "oh" after realizing Eric's 230 pun that really does it for me
@gem95352 жыл бұрын
Right as I was reading it 🤣
@hx55252 жыл бұрын
I don’t get it
@randomduck86792 жыл бұрын
@@hx5525 Tooth Hurties
@flipflopzthreeonethree18732 жыл бұрын
2:48 for anyone who didn't catch it lmao
@SeppelSquirrel3 күн бұрын
So on this popsicle, there's a joke: "When is it time to brush your teeth?" And the answer is, "Tooth-thirty." I thought that was neglecting the fact that it could be improved to be "Tooth-hurty" and I'm so happy this guy is on the same wavelength as me. 😁
@ChristmasPterodactyl2 жыл бұрын
Honestly, the rebel leader and the government itself being the two ends of the love triangle is an actually clever idea.
@noahsvirsky99622 жыл бұрын
"kid who grew up loyal to the government and would never dream of betraying them, but falls in love with a rebel/rebellion leader and the government is evil now" has also been done to death
@frogfish15672 жыл бұрын
Alternate idea: kid grows up loyal to a rebellion and falls in love with the evil government. Corruption arc time
@josephdavis92342 жыл бұрын
I think Marie Lu did that in Legend.
@dvf17362 жыл бұрын
@@josephdavis9234 Legend is more about changing the gov for the better and how everyone is in a grey area rather than classic YA protagonists overthrowing the government. Young Elites does a corruption arc with the main character turning from a rebel to a warmongering tyrant once she's in power
@thisisausername93562 жыл бұрын
Read this wrong and I thought you meant the rebel and government leader being the same person (like they claim to be a rebel but ultimately end up being revealed to be a government leader) just disguised enough to look like two different people and the protag thought both of them was hot
@bluevelvt2 жыл бұрын
we’ll split the last book into two movies, but the first part will be such a flop we just give up on the second
@okayokay6022 жыл бұрын
its okay you can just say divergant
@revimfadli46662 жыл бұрын
Too real
@gem95352 жыл бұрын
@@okayokay602 S H O T S F I R E D
@dotmp43532 жыл бұрын
I love ur pfp
@aSmallGreenDot2 жыл бұрын
@@okayokay602 and hunger games
@dvf17362 жыл бұрын
To this day, the only YA novel I remember was one where it started off cliche as hell, but then the protagonist rebel girl realized that overthrowing the government meant she was now in control, and the rest of the book is just her hunting down her rebel friends and realize that being a tyrannical dictator is awesome
@hollow_w33n2 жыл бұрын
name?
@blueee00882 жыл бұрын
This sounds really awesome. Name?
@dvf17362 жыл бұрын
@@blueee0088 young elites is the name. It's pretty slow at first tho
@Coffee-hj5di Жыл бұрын
Bruh, that actually sounds awesome and original, what the heck
@grandinquisitor8335 Жыл бұрын
That seems like a cool subvert on the whole rebellion trope, I would like to see that used more tbh.
@EtherealAmoeba2 жыл бұрын
A dystopian YA novel that is secretly a dental hygeine ad? Oh gosh now I can only think about the time when Wendy's did stories on wattpad. .
@mynamejeff35452 жыл бұрын
Wendy's did what.
@estheromoyele33212 жыл бұрын
@@mynamejeff3545 they were weird romance fan fiction stories of like- y/n x their drinks. It was surprisingly well written💀
@mynamejeff35452 жыл бұрын
@@estheromoyele3321 I genuinely feel worse for knowing this
@estheromoyele33212 жыл бұрын
@@mynamejeff3545 you’re _welcome_
@RicketyRails4U2 жыл бұрын
Please... where? A link? Is there more than one? I've never had to use wattpad before, but I cant deny the draw this has for me.
@mynamejeff35452 жыл бұрын
"I HATE the government! But I also have a crush on him?..." Yeah relatable. I believe I can *change* him, god damn it!
@endTHEhegemony_Today2 жыл бұрын
This is a seriously underrated sentiment shared by more current Americans than we ourselves even realize
@ratosphere2 жыл бұрын
You can't :(
@lukejensen99332 жыл бұрын
Things are going to *CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANGE*
@ThatRipOff2 жыл бұрын
@@endTHEhegemony_Today “Grrrr I hate the government because it was founded on racist imperialism and is run by fascist white supremacist capitalist pigs!! … So anyway, here’s my 500 page twitlonger on why everything should be controlled and regulated by the government!”
@user-zz3sn8ky7z2 жыл бұрын
@@ThatRipOff The person you're replying to straight up said that thinking you can change the government isn't reasonable, where on earth did you get the "government should control everything!!!"
@AydenGraceMusic2 жыл бұрын
“By a woman with two first names, a hyphenated last name, and very sad eyes” 10 seconds in I’m already dead 💀 😂
@professorhazard2 жыл бұрын
she IS going to buy a horse with her movie money
@FishDrinkLightGreen2 жыл бұрын
Lmao
@andreasanchez1453 Жыл бұрын
Me who’s writing a YA novel with a pen name Gabriella DeWitt
@thetaaaa Жыл бұрын
@@andreasanchez1453 Mkay but how sad are your eyes
@livtastic3971 Жыл бұрын
@@andreasanchez1453 How much do you like horses?
@Jess-jt4zf2 жыл бұрын
That's literally that one book where food is illegal and a poor boy from the slums and a rich girl who's parents work in the government discover they both can experience hunger so they run away together and like a 1000 things happen in the span of two days.
@josephcowan67792 жыл бұрын
That's exactly what I thought of too. Except in that book, she switches things around by making the main character rich and privileged, so she slowly finds out (in 2 days) how the world REALLY is.
@Grace-hw7zt2 жыл бұрын
What book is that???
@Jess-jt4zf2 жыл бұрын
@@Grace-hw7zt It's called Hungry by author H.A. Swain. Alizee (youtuber) did a good review, you could watch that if you want to understand what the book is basically about and hear some quotes. I wouldn't recommend reading it unless you are really into bad YA books. Some parts are definitely "so bad it's good" but there's not a lot of them tbh and it gets pretty boring at some parts. It's like 400 pages and it's too long and too rushed at the same time lol... There's a lot of things that get brought up and are very detailed just to never appear again or to get killed off later with just a few sentences. You think "oh, this is probably going to come up again and there is going to be a major plot twist" but there never is lmao The reviews about the book are usually better written and more entertaining than the book itself lol
@thatcatholicgirl56752 жыл бұрын
wait hol'up if food's illegal how do people live?
@josephcowan67792 жыл бұрын
@@thatcatholicgirl5675 Glad you asked. A big company provides nutrition pills which fill all their caloric needs and also suppresses hunger. Idk if it even even says how it works or what it's made out of since most of the plants are destroyed?
@sarasthoughts2 жыл бұрын
"It's vaguely chicago and steampunk for no goddamn reason" HELP
@3Guys1Video2 жыл бұрын
XD
@carysk40832 жыл бұрын
This is why I'm avoiding Chicago in my story
@thejuiceking2219 Жыл бұрын
i get that, but also steampunk is based so i'm okay with that
@BenHopkins1000Ай бұрын
@@carysk4083Miami has much more character
@frog7312 күн бұрын
@@BenHopkins1000 I'm actually using Miami for my story
@venisquxxr82142 жыл бұрын
as an avid reader of ya, this is so accurate it's painful
@sophiaschier-hanson41632 жыл бұрын
As someone who works at a middle school and has consequently read entirely too much of the stuff, WHY?! 🤣
@EveningRose_BigRed2 жыл бұрын
@@sophiaschier-hanson4163 you get to pretend ur the cool main character LMAO. It’s pretty much self-insert
@GummyDinosaursify2 жыл бұрын
It's missing the generic love triangle where clearly the asshole guy is the one she likes, but the nice guy is there too to create generic drama of which will be solved in two pages after being hinted at for the entire book.
@asheiou2 жыл бұрын
@@GummyDinosaursify the hunger games? 😭
@semi_enigma2 жыл бұрын
@@GummyDinosaursify I think that love triangle includes the government?
@cryztalqueer2 жыл бұрын
Imagine this but he is depressed and he talks like a moody teenager.
@averyroberts40932 жыл бұрын
^ But also in a stereotypical fashion that doesn't actually hit anything even sorta plot related
@The_Sunny_One2 жыл бұрын
And there’s a love triangle
@serenegenerally Жыл бұрын
Oh god don’t tell me this is twilight 🤢-
@Cody_Wolf12 жыл бұрын
Left out how the clearly evil thing is normally called “The [insert completely normal word but capitalize the first letter to make it ominous]”
@smartalec20012 жыл бұрын
The Dentistry!
@awelotta2 жыл бұрын
@@animatorireenie8319 Honestly it is.
@Alexander-tu3iv2 жыл бұрын
Instantly thought of the society from red rising
@tsg_frank58292 жыл бұрын
The Eye The Crab The Cube The Organization The Window The Network I've made all those up but one
@nekrataali2 жыл бұрын
They never have abbreviations for organizations, either, unless it's some kind of pun. It's always either something like "the Society," "the Alliance," or "T.E.E.T.H." or "G.U.M.S." Real life has stuff like the IRA, PLO, or the KKK. If an organization isn't abbreviated, it has a name that explains ideology/makes it clear whose side they're on/isn't some generic noun. Groups such as the French Resistance, the Central Powers, Spanish Republicans, Westboro Baptist Church, and so on. Very few organizations have on-the-nose branding. DARE, PETA, and MADD are some examples of organizations abbreviated to be related to what they represent, but it's not on-the-nose like it is in fiction.
@csblakeley2 жыл бұрын
Where's the love triangle?? It can't be a real YA dystopia without a pointless love triangle between the boy/girl you liked before and the girl/boy/bird you just met who has... *dramatic pause* a mysterious backstory that will be explained after the cliffhanger in the first book.
@AndreFerreiraGreiskul2 жыл бұрын
The love triangle is between the main character, the leader of the rebels, and the government.
@NicholasStyx2 жыл бұрын
More often than not, the 3rd part of the triangle either isn't introduced or at least doesn't matter until book 2
@jadejunnie32852 жыл бұрын
And then gay love interest gets thrown in briefly in a sequel
@jchen89022 жыл бұрын
One love interest is from the law enforcement/government and the other is a rebel. To save the mc from being a two-timer, one of them will die sacrificing themself for the mc to help make the decision for them.
@tearsofboredom79562 жыл бұрын
No it's never an actual love triangle, it's always just a love angle
@lisatarsavage69442 жыл бұрын
The funny thing is, when the dude made the joke about the rebel group name being a pun, my mind actually didn't go to any modern YA dystopian novels - it went to Les Miserables. In the book the revolutionary group is called Les Amis de L'ABC. Because they're almost all students. But it's also a pun because in French, the language the novel was originally written in, "l'abaisse " meaning "the abased" aka "the poor and suffering", is pronounced the same way.
@BeazerProductions2 жыл бұрын
Quite a pun from the same writer who gave us John McJohn.
@ashvinvaidyanathan72392 жыл бұрын
Seethe harder
@thesunwillneverset2 жыл бұрын
@@ashvinvaidyanathan7239 Seethe? Who's seething?
@NoConsequenc32 жыл бұрын
@@ashvinvaidyanathan7239 are you lost buddy? Need twitter?
@SoWhosGae2 жыл бұрын
@@BeazerProductions It doesn't make sense when you say it in English but there's nothing wrong with it in French.
@montag39012 жыл бұрын
this sounds like something Starkid would absolutely make into a musical
@bitrash63642 жыл бұрын
YES
@juliavargas132 жыл бұрын
I NEED this musical right now
@pflasterstrips72542 жыл бұрын
Can't wait for one verse of a song from it weirdly trending on TikTok because it's the perfect audio for a joke.
@Roaring_Lotus2 жыл бұрын
OMFG YES
@notsonegative17362 жыл бұрын
SHUT UP AND TAKE MY MONEY
@eruiluvatar57012 жыл бұрын
Imagine 1984, but it's dumbed down like a YA Dystopian book. Nothing would change with the thought police, but there would totally be a love triangle between Julia, Winston, and O'Brien haha. Winston's parents are probably still alive somewhere and it would end on a cliffhanger with Big Brother being his actual long-lost brother.
@user-qk7en8pq1u2 жыл бұрын
Can we have a ya animal farm, always wondered what the pigs did with them puppies, steamy love triangle?
@RushWheeler Жыл бұрын
@@user-qk7en8pq1u why did you think writing this was a good idea
@billbilly9485 Жыл бұрын
@@user-qk7en8pq1u I hope u think about this a year later
@alienfromlhs1140b Жыл бұрын
@@user-qk7en8pq1u danimal farm
@Booklover-coffeelover Жыл бұрын
And in the end of the trilogy it is revealed that the Big Brother is actually the misunderstood villain, Winston overthrows the Party, escapes with Julia and they live with eternal love and bliss in the woods 😃😂
@joemullarkey57192 жыл бұрын
I just started The Maze Runner series and the slang is painfully accurate. I swear they’ve thrown like 15 different random words that are given no meaning in the first 20 pages alone.
@endofpixel37122 жыл бұрын
Shut it greenie
@joemullarkey57192 жыл бұрын
@@endofpixel3712 oh excuse me, Shuckface.
@jackson-mq9vm2 жыл бұрын
@@endofpixel3712 *slint it greenie
@megl.94702 жыл бұрын
if you think that's bad get ready for the worldbuilding. and the capitalization. oh, the capitalization.
@-Teague- Жыл бұрын
Maze Runner is such an incredibly dumb series it's mind boggling
@descrisleuthy2 жыл бұрын
2:47 that soft groan of a man who got the pun
@lynneamackey99902 жыл бұрын
You can practically hear the face palm in his voice 😂
@halodragonmaster2 жыл бұрын
He's done for the night
@christy18192 жыл бұрын
“That’s why my teeth are fucked” This isn’t a YA novel, this is just England
@EZOnTheEyes2 жыл бұрын
"Except for mine" -The royal family, probably
@rubyy.73742 жыл бұрын
England: where they have free health care, yet somehow can’t afford a dentist
@mnbvcx662 жыл бұрын
@@rubyy.7374 Dentists aren’t free in the UK once you’re an adult. Procedures and other things like braces can get pretty expensive. Not that you asked lol.
@samkadel81852 жыл бұрын
@@mnbvcx66 That and overall people in the UK tend to have slightly better teeth than in the US, it's just that people in the US are more likely to get cosmetic dental procedures, so the rich Americans you see generally have better-looking teeth.
@nebula5412 жыл бұрын
@@samkadel8185 also, teeth looking perfect (and more white than it naturally is) is pushed a lot more in america
@BirdMoose2 жыл бұрын
The fact that I don't see many "making sand-soup for my beautiful weak little sister" comments is a crime.
@omorinintendoswitchedition Жыл бұрын
Don’t forget his weak and dying mother!
@ninyaninjabrifsanovichthes45 Жыл бұрын
@ Primrose Everdeen
@catbatrat1760 Жыл бұрын
True!!
@catbatrat1760 Жыл бұрын
His weak little sister, but also don't forget his mom who's gonna die in 6 pages ^w^
@mensch79music3 Жыл бұрын
Should have also put in: "I was wearing my father's old hunting jacket. Fortunately, he was a women's size 10."
@seinquant2 жыл бұрын
"my name? crest." i was dead within the first 10 seconds but i think i sunk deeper into the ground 💀💀
@fancifulbread80402 жыл бұрын
Nah Nah Nah, this is a Ya novel. Every name has to be spelled weird as shit so: Kryst Edit: as soon as I posted this I realized the name was a play on the toothpaste. Fuck I'm dumb.
@emoscotchtape2 жыл бұрын
Is it REALLY a YA novel if it doesn't have 2 bland male characters for a love triangle?
@theunholysmirk2 жыл бұрын
It does! The rebel leader and the government, of course.
@halodragonmaster2 жыл бұрын
@@theunholysmirk mother- You are correct
@whoop60472 жыл бұрын
it's like, "oh wow here's my bestfriend who i've known all my life. he's smart, handsome, funny, attractive, and kind but then there's this other guy i know nothing about. he's mysterious, a douche, or both, but he has a troubled past and i'm sure he's gonna get a single page worth of character arc so he's still in the running!"
@kaykeunil2 жыл бұрын
@@whoop6047 plz omg I’m always like literally don’t choose any of them you have better things to focus on, and if you absolutely have to have a romantic interest make it the actually decent person that shows care for you
@orlock202 жыл бұрын
The story where the audience sides with the villain because the hero is too bland like Spike over Angel on Buffy.
@DragonaxFilms2 жыл бұрын
"Crest" is such a YA main character name too.
@qwaabza10 ай бұрын
NOOOOOOO I JUST REALIZED ITS A TOOTHPASTE PUN
@VeginMatt2 жыл бұрын
9/10 dentists recommend this book!
@redpepper742 жыл бұрын
The last one is in mega jail
@kayleejazz16692 жыл бұрын
I’d buy it if it was some sort of parody novel of dystopia ya novels.
@knightforlorn67312 жыл бұрын
maye thats the next big Scary Movie type idea. those movies made a lot of money, whatever you think of them, and they exist by just.... taking what was already there...
@frankie86572 жыл бұрын
me too
@daftbanna72022 жыл бұрын
@@knightforlorn6731 yeah maybe 4 years ago
@StudioUAC2 жыл бұрын
fuuuuuuucccckkk!!!! that's a genius idea!!!
@chuc.dxq38092 жыл бұрын
Agree!
@danny82842 жыл бұрын
the 230’s joke is UNDERRATED
@Worgrunner2 жыл бұрын
Is it tooth hurties?
@chinezerebel94432 жыл бұрын
get it?
@danny82842 жыл бұрын
@@Worgrunner yep!
@hellterminator2 жыл бұрын
@@Worgrunner I assumed it's because humans have 32 teeth.
@mrbungeealwaysrhymes90232 жыл бұрын
I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD I CANT
@TheZizamie2 жыл бұрын
Love Square between Y/N, Crest, Beefy Shy Boy Leader, and Government
@Helloknight2 жыл бұрын
yes. I approve. I may write this in the future, idk
@jackiebrubaker11562 жыл бұрын
What about rebel dad in Mega Jail? 😏
@orionbloomcrown932 жыл бұрын
@@jackiebrubaker1156 Y/N breaks into the mega jail (and we have no clue on why y/n's in the mega jail but we find out near the end of the book) Y/N and Crest run into each other and he tells Y/N that he's trying to break his dad out of mega jail. Y/N decides to help Crest we they form a bond. How Y/N meets government and beefy shy boy leader is something I don't know yet but I really wanna hear some more ideas for this. I thought way to much on this.
@jackiebrubaker11562 жыл бұрын
@@orionbloomcrown93 ooh, that's good! Maybe Y/N and Crest get "captured" by the rebels, but quickly gain the boy leader's trust (cue lots of tension)
@bumblehoney72062 жыл бұрын
I feel like a lot of stories are falling into that "it's not cool unless it's illegal" category
@fingernecklace48172 жыл бұрын
I mean...
@bumblehoney72062 жыл бұрын
@@fingernecklace4817 yeah, I know
@azekia Жыл бұрын
Arson 😎
@ninyaninjabrifsanovichthes45 Жыл бұрын
Public masturbation I don't get it, what's the kick? Why don't you just do it at home like the rest of us? Big flatscreen TV, 50 channels of pay-per-view... In a Starbucks, that's nice.
@rontheron48072 жыл бұрын
Half of teen dystopian books: What if being in love.. was *illegal* ?? Gay people:
@jfm142 жыл бұрын
For real tho. 😂
@jmvt32 жыл бұрын
Just don’t be gay lmao
@rontheron48072 жыл бұрын
@@jmvt3 omg i can’t believe we never thought of that, my bad bud you just saved my life 😫💕
@jmvt32 жыл бұрын
@@rontheron4807 no problem, all things are possible through God.
@bellac63112 жыл бұрын
@@jmvt3 ur....ur being satirical right? this is a joke right?
@jessicamichalsky8862 жыл бұрын
I have a feeling he thought of the 2:30 joke and woke up in a cold sweat to write this.
@ASHERUISE2 жыл бұрын
I don't think he thought of it it's a classic but still good in this context.
@deepsea53482 жыл бұрын
Missed opportunity to call it “Crestfallen”
@_elevenofspades2 жыл бұрын
This 4 minute skit unironically has better worldbuilding than the entire “Divergent” series, sorry not sorry Edit: mom look at me i’m famous :3 Also, I meant for this comment to be just a joke, I personally don’t like Divergent but I understand if you’re a fan of Divergent, like, I get the appeal and I’m not judging your taste 🤍 Just don’t get in fights on the comment section please :,)
@lulusobel86432 жыл бұрын
FUCKING DIVERGENT! I WAS FORCED TO READ IT IN SCHOOL!
@veemie81482 жыл бұрын
@@lulusobel8643 wow you had a shitty school
@endorianentertainment2 жыл бұрын
as bad as Divergent is at least it was written by an author who cared and not just as a shameless cash grab like a lot of the genre
@lulusobel86432 жыл бұрын
@@endorianentertainment Well, that’s nice to know.
@thewinter_2 жыл бұрын
@@endorianentertainment The first book, maybe. the rest of the series, well...
@frozenfirenow74852 жыл бұрын
This isn’t a fictional Dystopia. This is just what being British feels like😤
@cellularautomaton.2 жыл бұрын
sending british people my heartfelt thoughts and prayers 😔
@nocturnalpisces12992 жыл бұрын
@@cellularautomaton. what a sad, horrible disease 💔
@rurihime49652 жыл бұрын
Eww Bri'ish 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
@tylercoon17912 жыл бұрын
So a real life dystopia?
@PsychoSavager2892 жыл бұрын
I went to the cinema in 2015 and saw back-to-back trailers for the latest Hunger Games, Divergent and Maze Runner films. The only way I was able to tell them apart was that I knew Hunger Games had Jennifer Lawrence in it.
@inirafitzpatrick3152 жыл бұрын
“ I hate the government!!! But I also have a crush on it???
@thefunfactman60982 жыл бұрын
Why can't there ever be a YA Novel where the villains actually have a plan that makes sense. Or even better, where the villain has an actual point. All I want is a well written novel dammit.
@canaisyoung36012 жыл бұрын
Well, then, you're better off reading the older classic novels and short stories that everyone says are problematic.
@queerlibtardhippie93572 жыл бұрын
People who say things like this are the same people who literally pick the first book they see on Amazon's self-publishing book page.
@3Guys1Video2 жыл бұрын
@@canaisyoung3601 :0
@therook30082 жыл бұрын
Write one yourself! I believe in you!
@thefunfactman60982 жыл бұрын
@@therook3008 I wish, but i can't write for shit
@WTKB822 жыл бұрын
The fact that the audience didn’t laugh at two-thirty thing 😂😂😂
they did though, each time he emphasized it, too :P It's probably recognizable as the joke "when's your dentist appointment?" "At tooth hurty"
@pinkbunnypeepsyall82512 жыл бұрын
i died at the guy who just groaned “aw fuck” when he said that 😂
@alexgrey79722 жыл бұрын
The pause was calculon levels of excellent
@neonGawdzilla2 жыл бұрын
I'm SO FREAKING GLAD y'all have improved the microphones. Fuck yeah! Audible comedy!
@niamhha90142 жыл бұрын
And if it’s a girl, her name is Elisianna Lightning but she goes by “Li”.
@andybono942 жыл бұрын
“Also it’s where my rebel *DAD* is...” Also i got an ad for invisalign right after this lol
@professorhazard2 жыл бұрын
I refuse to believe that Rebel Dad and The Government aren't the same guy
@littlethiefluka2 жыл бұрын
what about the one trope where the MC bands together with other people like them, such as: - the overly-angsty one who has an overly-angsty backstory - the oddly positive one who actually is either working with the antagonist(s), has an overdramatic death after a few chapters, or is just REALLY depressed and is trying to hide it until that one minor thing that makes them have a mental breakdown - the rowdy, violent one who wants to fight everything but is actually really nice - fanservice character who might be part of a love triangle/square basically the harem trope in every other fantasy anime. another trope could be that the entire story was just a dream and the reader just got trolled big time, or it could be the most basic isekai you could think of.
@casperrabbit72542 жыл бұрын
I feel like all that's missing is a Harry Potter-esque sorting system for fans to put in their twitter bio and buy merch of 🤣
@joritech35711 ай бұрын
Lmao I never thought of that to be why authors randomly put that shit in their books for no good reason.
@Taylor_Lindise2 жыл бұрын
That long pause to check to see if I got the joke was fucking golden. Also, thank you for giving me that time. I finally understood the joke :P
@rdtiel2 жыл бұрын
Do you have sad eyes?
@bluefalcon63562 жыл бұрын
Omfg, I remember reading this book, with a kid, in basically the slums, in a world where books were illegal and there was distinct rich and poor separation via force field. Fits this video perfect
@Raindrop_24012 жыл бұрын
Currently reading Ready Player One at the age of 19 and it's pretty obvious that this was made for people 5 years younger. The plot radiates "Teens will find this deep" energy thoughout and it hurts my soul. Wade is also just a total fucking incel too. Makes me nervous to go back to the Gone series. Loved those books when I was 13 and I always tell people that they are the exception when it comes to YA books but now I'm really questioning that.
@hannahcraig67632 жыл бұрын
sometimes ya is really good and sometimes it's really bad and actual 13 year old seen to have no ability to distinguish between the two
@fishactivation50872 жыл бұрын
I enjoyed Ready Player One, but only because I was at the right age for it and I love pop culture. The second book was woke trash.
@Raindrop_24012 жыл бұрын
@@fishactivation5087 I've heard about the sequel and how god awful it was. Gonna just not read it and pretend it doesn't exist
@simona.97302 жыл бұрын
Ernest Cline can't go 4 lines without making some ham-fisted 80s pop culture reference, like he's Seth MacFarlane or something.
@kingtesttube4996 Жыл бұрын
I liked it at first, but now I remembered how Wade finished the challenge by memorizing TWO COMPLETE MOVIE SCRIPTS.
@fredtwo83472 жыл бұрын
The genuine awe from the audience as he pulls out the toothbrush. Legitimately brilliant storyteller
@yohanehakurei2 жыл бұрын
You forgot to include the very weird romance plot that occurs when the two free spirited Male and Female decide to start dating and destroy the totalitarian government.
@orlock202 жыл бұрын
Just to set up another totalitarian government because the now freed people don't have the education or lack of corruption to run a Democracy.
@RealTrey19 Жыл бұрын
“Add a love triangle!” -J.P. Beaubien from Terrible Writing Advice: Dystopias
@xnet_cascade62572 жыл бұрын
He’s also kinda dressed up like a stereotypical protagonist in a dystopian YA series/movie
@OrangeDied2 жыл бұрын
I actually had an idea for a reverse dystopian novel a bit ago, told from the perspective of the people starting the perfect society, and their thought process and stuff
@canaisyoung36012 жыл бұрын
A utopian novel?
@OrangeDied2 жыл бұрын
@@canaisyoung3601 well no, the point is to show the process of people starting the dystopia and why they did things
@tylercoon17912 жыл бұрын
There’s already one of those. It’s called the communist manifesto
@grandinquisitor8335 Жыл бұрын
I would suggest reading the culture series by Iain Banks than
@awanderingperson708 Жыл бұрын
try animal farm
@EllieC1302 жыл бұрын
“I hate the government… but I also have a crush on it” me knowing capitalism has a lot wrong with it but knowing I’d literally die if society collapsed.
@jaustin976012 жыл бұрын
Why do you assume society would collapse without capitalism? Capitalism is a relatively recent invention
@EllieC1302 жыл бұрын
@@jaustin97601 its more that such an abrupt change in society would probably lead to inter country conflict and collapse. Idk what’ll happen if the western world becomes less capitalist over time but it happening super suddenly would probably be no bueno.
@scienceandponies2 жыл бұрын
Capitalism is the cause of the collapse.
@nyahnyahson5232 жыл бұрын
@@EllieC130 That's why infrastructure is so important, and why it kinda always has to be the basis of any change. Building a strong foundation should always be a first step for anything, uwu
@Ze_N00B2 жыл бұрын
@@scienceandponies Like, no? You can‘t even consider it recent since it‘s just the concept of people being entitled to their capital, which you could trace back all the way to the first caveman. And if you‘re gonna argue „money“, people have been using salt as a currency all the way back 6000 years before Christ. And yes, giant corporations are shit, I get it, but have you considered the damage that the few socialist, or generally non-capitalist countries have managed to cause? At some point you have to consider that we‘re in the billions already, despite animals that are also in the billions are usually fucking tiny and that by the way physiological potencies work we will always have a moderate amount of suffering. Capitalism is just the best choice, even if it sucks. And it did cause the colllapse, but so did socialism, and so did every other form of government, because our rapid reproduction has already pushed us far beyond the limitations of our environment and just now came to realise our effect on the planet.
@thatonepenguinyoumightsee7191 Жыл бұрын
“I hate the government, but I also have a crush on it?” God that part was too painfully accurate to books.
@tracyh57512 жыл бұрын
This has such a quiet humor to it. Eric will just wait on a joke for a bit, you're not laughing yet, and then you can't hold it off anymore and the joke kills you.
@max_mittler2 жыл бұрын
How is nobody talking about “my life is just like yours, except for one dumb ass thing” hahaha
@ninyaninjabrifsanovichthes45 Жыл бұрын
Because that's how these novels work.
@thecoverclovers56242 жыл бұрын
As a YA dystopian writer…this is the best thing I’ve ever seen omg this is amazing. Love this. Just subbed.
@casachica2 жыл бұрын
Wtf I was just on a Eric feurer marathon for the last 20 mins and this is the latest y'all uploaded 😭♥️
@Going1outof102 жыл бұрын
The sad eyes part really got me
@TaoScribble2 жыл бұрын
It's sad that the toothbrushes being illegal thing isn't even as absurd as it gets. There's one where food doesn't exist anymore, and the main character is special because she still gets hungry and her stomach growls. I mean, it _could_ work, but not the way it was approached/presented. And some parts came off as fetish-y, at least to me.
@sparrow3412 Жыл бұрын
What book is this
@zzach_attack4602 Жыл бұрын
@@sparrow3412 it's called hungry
@meganchambers81082 жыл бұрын
3:42 a MASTERCLASS on intonation in comedy!!!
@20moonkin2 жыл бұрын
Plot twist this was his elevator pitch to paramount
@leahmaldonado8742 Жыл бұрын
I love the pause to explain the joke “tooth-hurty”
@breet94992 жыл бұрын
the person wheezing every few minutes improved the jokes by 10000%
@ranttime88302 жыл бұрын
“Which means: he’s gonna be that shy beefy guy i overdescribed on page 5” this is too true
@kloop2232 жыл бұрын
Not the teeth and rebel dad 0-o Edit: NOT THE SISTER AND MOM AJBEBSKSM
@inwemeneldur20252 жыл бұрын
I'd *love* an entire book written in such an ironic tone in the first person
@insignificantduck3132 жыл бұрын
This makes me thankful for the fact that The Unwanteds strayed from the dystopian theme quickly.
@yapflipthegrunt4687 Жыл бұрын
And then milked itself.
@dennisdegennaro7459 Жыл бұрын
The Unwanteds was good. Just pretend the sequel series never happened, because it was so bad it lowered my opinion of the original series by association
@insignificantduck313 Жыл бұрын
@@dennisdegennaro7459 I never read the sequel series but I read the back of the first book once and yeah it sounds... there
@dennisdegennaro7459 Жыл бұрын
@@insignificantduck313 I gave up after reading the first two, so maybe it got better but every friend I've asked says it doesn't
@TheGreatCalsby2 жыл бұрын
Never have I been so personally attacked by something I 100% agree with
@chaosnoelle2 жыл бұрын
love that one person in the audience that just wheezes at every joke
@feliciah.kruuse42502 жыл бұрын
1:23 a ballon in the audience
@TessTheAngel7 күн бұрын
Saw this comment as i heard it and that made it so much better 😭
@Fandomsaremylifee2 жыл бұрын
“I hate the government…. But I also have a crush on it???” ICONIC LINE
@peachpetal8152 Жыл бұрын
Could you give me the timestamp for that line please?
@kazzafraz56072 жыл бұрын
I remember reading Farenheit51 for school and we had to write a story about a dystopian world and I ended up writing a shitty Detroit Become Human fanfiction that just ripped the plot points from the book
@Neonbean-2 жыл бұрын
Well.. what grade did you get? I'm curious now lmao
@kazzafraz56072 жыл бұрын
@@Neonbean- I remember my teacher making comments about it but I literally can’t find any trace of the actual grade
@Neonbean-2 жыл бұрын
@@kazzafraz5607 Awww rip... Well, worth a shot in asking lmao
@thegrimmretails37772 жыл бұрын
@@kazzafraz5607 your teacher didn't care, I promise you. They just wanted you to write something.
@realPurpleOrb Жыл бұрын
Detroit: become Detroit
@angusmarch10662 жыл бұрын
"Ive got a job grinding poor people teeth at the tooth mills." *wheeeeeze*
@RichterTheRat Жыл бұрын
The sad thing is, Suzanne Collins had a much stronger, more imaginative series of books called The Underland Chronicles before she wrote Hunger Games, and unfortunately Hunger Games is what she got famous for.
@catbatrat1760 Жыл бұрын
Damn... How does she feel about this? Is she like the guy who wrote I Have No Mouth And I Must Scream and was upset that something he didn't work that hard on is his most famous work, or is she like "Meh, I got famous, and I'm happy for that¯\_(ツ)_/¯"?
@joda769710 ай бұрын
The pain of lots of creators. Take the mathematician John Conway for example. Everyone only knows him for the game of life. Even i forgot what he actually did, but it wasn't insignificant.
@ritzexists220110 ай бұрын
the main problem for me is all the potty humor in the first couple books. it goes away eventually but I remember trying to re-read those books and just not being able to get past it. Makes the series hard to recommend too.
@fmcgucket30762 жыл бұрын
Is this a new take on one of your pandemic-era sketches? This version is even more painfully on point. Hate it. Love it.
@Makalo43 Жыл бұрын
I once literally saw a ya novel about how people weren’t allowed to eat actual food 💀
@johnseppethe2nd2 Жыл бұрын
Did they have to inject the required amount of daily nutrients or something?
@Makalo43 Жыл бұрын
@@johnseppethe2nd2 I think it was something with supplement pills? I cant remember
@ninyaninjabrifsanovichthes45 Жыл бұрын
I once read a YA dystopian novel called Unwind about a future US where pro-choice and pro-life people fought a civil war over abortion and compromised on allowing parents to have their kid's organs harvested at like 15.
@JackSassyPants2 жыл бұрын
Your delivery was stellar, big Mikey Day vibes in the best way.
@darknesswithin2667 Жыл бұрын
The best part is the uncomfortably long pauses. You can just imagine the author patting herself on the back for that joke and expecting it to get applause.
@colonelcrab47722 жыл бұрын
2:36 Good use of the Norm Macdonald Pause & Stare after a really corny and bad punchline, whether it unintentional or intentional, it works every time
@colonelcrab47722 жыл бұрын
I counted and he holds that pose and silence for a total of 10 long seconds
@ultra66712 жыл бұрын
I'm surprised this guy didn't call his character "Cole Gate".
@Briarhoes2 жыл бұрын
“I gotta go, my mom’s about to be killed by whatever-who-cares” best line delivery i cackled
"toothbrushes are illegal" that's not a dystopia that's great britain
@dorkinabubble77722 жыл бұрын
That dying wheeze at 2:08 😆
@The_Sunny_One2 жыл бұрын
Just waiting for the Netflix adaptation now
@kitecorbin39142 жыл бұрын
I McFreaking lost it at "Tooth Hurties" 😂😂😂😂💀💀💀
@Mskittenlover122 жыл бұрын
I think the most shocking thing about the Hunger Games is (spoiler alert even though the movie series is nearly 10 years old and the book series even older)... That the mom never dies and they(they being Suzanne Colllins)killoff the fucking little sister instead. You know, the same sister Katniss spent the ENTIRE FIRST BOOK NEARLY DYING 100 DIFFERENT TIMES TO PROTECT??? 😑
@Ooffoop2 жыл бұрын
Step 1 subvert expectations Step 2 dead kid
@KrisRN239352 жыл бұрын
Still pisses me off...
@saltedjules_2 жыл бұрын
suzanne collins does a little trolling
@ninyaninjabrifsanovichthes45 Жыл бұрын
And it's not even the government that does it, it's the rebels doing a false flag attack because sure.
@Khronogi3 ай бұрын
And then she proceeds to kill the leader of the rebels for some reason?
@thefaulkness2 жыл бұрын
I'm so glad you made this work live, its a banger, everythings about to CHANGE
@hushbolman2 жыл бұрын
"Nobody knows why" *Balloon dying noises*
@rivercat262 жыл бұрын
I thought the 230s were a reference to the fact that all dentist appointments are at 2:30 because you don't schedule them far out enough
@Happy-to3tf2 жыл бұрын
“I hate the government! But i also have a crush on it?” Republicans