reading the WATTPAD FANFICTION I wrote when I was 12 because I embrace cringe

[@Faline_San]

Rate my acting abilities out of 10 🙏 (the abs are very real) Edit: for people who are new here I don’t care what pronouns others use for me, go wild, play spin the wheel with it or something it’s funny to imagine 😭😭

[@imightbesleeping]

10000000000000000000/10

[@hauwings1e13ko9]

10/10 the best thing ive seen in my life

[@m9ryam]

10 🦶🏼💗

[@wxsteriahh]

oh so good

[@melanieeilish5412]

✨10✨

[@Kishan-sy4wf]

“The bushes have evolved” she should seriously consider becoming a director with those lines, or an actor! 👏💀

[@supakku]

HELPPP THE WAY SHE SAYS "BOOSHES"

[@angelameifernandez]

Went straight out of a Pokémon game

[@eggiebot]

“MY PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ANSWERED!” This has two possible outcomes: 1. She asked god for a sign she’d finally escape the fanfic 2. This is a whole new level of interspecies friendships

[@willowwilliams498]

his pronouns are he/him.

[@faeromation]

@@willowwilliams498all pronouns but prefers he/him

[@portablehell]

THE FACT THAT HE TOOK THE TIME TO ACT OUT THE STORIES 😭😭😭

[@Faline_San]

It took way too long 😭😭😭

[@camilagrijalva4109]

. Like fal would ever NOT use an opportunity to make a buffoon out out themselves 😹 I mean it’s FAL. He’s just made this way

[@mohanthegay4398]

we appreciate his dedication to the fine craft that is wattpad

[@RamJacobSlays]

Did i miss smthng, why is it a ‘he’😭😭😭😭?

[@blueandtrue3027]

@@RamJacobSlays fal uses he/they pronouns

[@lovelykoushi]

12 year old faline after writing a better story than 90% of wattpad writers today

[@prayinq]

😭

[@PearllDoubleL]

Why is this true

[@Nasoko-q7d]

No like actually...

[@Sansibit]

brooo

[@beepbeeptrashmouth]

As a wattpad writer this is completely true my stories belong in the trash scratch that they are the entire dumpster

[@Moth_is_a_soullessbeing]

Why do I want to see Faline read the rest of the Creepypasta fanfiction- 💀

[@osamudazaiAHHH]

same-

[@MagdalenaRamos-hq1ln]

Fr me

[@not-so-obvious_autism777]

No bc same 😭😭✋🏽 But I’m genuinely scared to try looking it up for myself 💀💀💀

[@rgbarrios0331]

💀

[@ena143chan]

stop because why is it actually interesting😭

[@kazuhasnakuweed]

SO I WASN'T THE ONLY ONE TO HAVE BEEF WITH JUSTIN BIEBER FOR NO REASON AT ALL AT 12 💀

[@Bianca-iz5wk]

No you weren't 💀

[@adorzai]

i used to print photos of justin bieber and smack him saying “oh oh oh” referring to the song baby..

[@masonjar1405]

me and my friends when we were 9 would scream during recess imagining that justin bieber was stalking us 💀

[@adorzai]

@@masonjar1405 stop, that sounds like smth jd do

[@forgotten_lumis5595]

Why is this such a common experience- I'm so confused-

[@atnernt5196]

>Gets Bachelor’s Degree in Pyschology >Gets job as a barista. >Gets job as a fashion designer at the same time >Doesn’t get a job as a psychologist >Turns 17 >Refuses to Elaborate Faline, Truly a master of story telling.

[@OHOHOHOOHOHOOOHOOHOHO]

991 likes and 0 comments let me fix that

[@ghostie3456]

wow. poetic. gorgeous. masterpiece. art. fine art.

[@Re4l_cha0s]

@@OHOHOHOOHOHOOOHOOHOHO I love people like you 😭

[@fungustoe]

"i major in psychology" gets every single job except psychologist

[@BassGal92]

@@fungustoe My sister-in-law got her degree in psychology. She doesn't work in the field because she didn't know that you need at least a Master's degree in psychology in order to work in a field like that. You need a Doctorate to even be called a psychologist.

[@teriberi]

cannot believe faline invented literature when he was 12

[@katiethewise]

actually he invented it in the womb

[@Jellyfish111]

@@S0m3B0z0OnTheInternet actually he invented it the moment he was fertilized

[@bubble._.gum2]

Broo faline is "he" not "she"😳😳😳😳 I'm shocked 😳 I didn't knew thatt

[@thyvee3870]

@@bubble._.gum2 fal uses any pronouns but prefers he/him

[@bubble._.gum2]

@@thyvee3870 ooo okkk thank you for letting me know ❣️🤗

[@harnaazbaweja2411]

BOTH THE CHARACTER DESCRIPTIONS OF SHAGUA AND CHRIS BEING AUTISM TRAITS LISTED OUT *UNINTENTIONALLY* (TO THE DOT) IS THE FUNNIEST THING IVE EVER EXPERIENCED I CANT-

[@not-so-obvious_autism777]

As someone who’s autistic I agree (I only just now noticed Chris’ goofy gabber behavior when you pointed it out) 😂😂

[@SqualorOpera]

What’s weird is that this is actually one of the higher quality creepypasta fanfictions I’ve seen

[@SqualorOpera]

13yo me was hanging on by a thread okay don’t judge me

[@Lazy_.Lavender]

Wowsers!

[@not-so-obvious_autism777]

Oh god… And that’s probably only cuz Faline was acting it out…

[@SqualorOpera]

Nah I mean the fact that at least some of the lines are pretty funny if you squint. I've seen way worse.

[@PowerSpirit50]

For real

[@cherival.1207]

I swear Lina is the only sane person that has working braincells out of all these characters

[@SCARAA592]

Think u meant lina but,yes

[@cherival.1207]

@@SCARAA592 yea I just realised and holy Jesus,how the hell did I get that many likes-

[@SCARAA592]

@@cherival.1207 idk

[@hemalchudasama1230]

@@SCARAA592 yuuuuuuusssssssssus

[@noahmontesluna]

Fr

[@koiifsh]

once again, faline has proved that he's capable of anything- from cooking, to cutting hair, to writing. what can't he do?

[@miagatwa2457]

I thought that they’re a girl, did anything change ?

[@mvvfa_4953]

he? wasn't it a she?

[@koiifsh]

idk fal has said they like he/him pronouns

[@miagatwa2457]

@@koiifsh oh! Thanks for explaining

[@honeyhoney6920]

If I remember correctly they use all pronouns but prefer he/him

[@snakestuffer]

'I'm your local barista' Faline: yeah like 5 minutes later 'I'm a barista' Faline: *FLABBERGASTED*

[@slimyduck2140]

12 years old Faline is a genius comedy writer tbh

[@stasiatheo]

Facts

[@itzjulia1919]

Lol fr

[@lilacbeidou]

REAL

[@raizero1330]

The writing Faline San brings to us through her great usage of pathos,logos, rhetorical choice, diction so on so forth is a testament to her expertise as an avid writer. It truly does show us the difference between the talent of a A+ college student and us meagerly mortals. I love her so much her writing inspires me so much. It is a true inspiration to our generation, she will save us from all garbage writing. The greatest writer of all Faline San

[@raizero1330]

I really do love your videos though, Faline san, it really does make me happy to know that you hearted my video. I appreciate it alot that it you hearted it, thank you so much. :D

[@moonxliqht]

don't forget the ethos citing other authors such as the bible to his credibility

[@ricaboo9304]

The likes are almost to 666 please

[@xueyiyumiko]

I just learned those words today, what a great timing

[@Justarandomwierdo]

Tf

[@Priya44888]

Faline writing an lgbtq fan fiction when 12, WHAT A KING

[@Boywhyyousognarpgnarp]

Fr tho

[@mayuuuu777]

King?

[@daniellish]

@@mayuuuu777 he prefers he/him but is fine with other pronouns

[@turqussy]

@@daniellish falines a man 👁️.👁️

[@richbtch3241]

@@turqussy no he's a girl

[@Salem-135]

"The bushes have evolved." is by far my fav line of this whole thing lmfao 😭

[@Simpfication]

Im using that

[@whatinthesilly]

@@Simpfication THE BUSHES HAVE EVOLVED MY PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ASNWERED

[@somerandomguy-3102]

the acting on that line is somehow spot on despite it being separate from the voiceover and faline having a mask

[@mistywindow16]

The absolute balls that Faline has to read his own fanfic for us

[@linterela]

FALINE IS A GUY!?!??!

[@catson2518]

@@aprilmarieabbygailesalazar854 i don't think that's how you say that. but yes he does go by he/him pronouns.

[@ElliotSunshine]

To everyone here, he goes by any but likes he the most :)

[@Mooniastar_13]

@@linterelanot necessarily but he does use he/him/she?/her?/they/them pronouns they prefer he/him and I think they/them

[@linterela]

@@Mooniastar_13 does faline use she/he/they?

[@I_always_have_been_Daniel49]

“I dyed my hair beige olive to match my complection, so now I look really BALD” I lost it with this. Best line ever 🤣

[@shikaisme1505]

AHAHA

[@hannatuknol8909]

Same 😂😂

[@a.mira.]

1000 like is me

[@Hexagonal_record]

Timestamp?

[@meerakhalidthanialibinghal2318]

Watch this: 14:49

[@oDerps]

Faline went through all the cringy phases 💀

[@floraeuphoria]

I would like to not be reminded of those times thx

[@orero_oreo]

oh no i'm afraid of my (past) self

[@nohintshere]

the only one i didn't have was a creepypasta phase

[@patatipatata4990]

I couldn't stop cracking up, this fanfiction is comedy gold (even if 50% unintentionally), how does a 12 year old have a better understanding of humor on his "not-like-other-girls" phase than some actual comedians out there

[@_stasia_]

Not me trying so hard not to laugh at faline’s talented acting and writing/poetry skills 💀 Edit : they’re poifect

[@chuubaccatheworld9075]

Let’s have a moment of silence for Faline, who has exposed his dark past and possibly scarred himself for our entertainment

[@naturalspringwater128]

This is a girl.

[@politecat7782]

@@naturalspringwater128 He uses all pronouns but perfers He/Him

[@creamkyn]

Honestly, I have even worse ones than Fal's fic.. 😭

[@Kaeyathrei-Kayak-]

@@naturalspringwater128 Science and society left the chat

[@laylalili9415]

​@@creamkyn Same 😭 I have one called from Hunter to vampire and I swear it's so embarrassing 😭😭

[@wyosele]

I came here for cringe, got some genuine comedy. This is some quality writing for a 12 year old.

[@AdonaiPVP]

No it ain't I'm twelve and if I was writing that I would kill myself ☠️

[@aarasko]

Hear hear!

[@CookiePlaysOfficial]

Very true, when I was a 12 year old, my writing was shit- 😭

[@Anonymouuuse]

@@CookiePlaysOfficial SAME

[@MerizyanGurungVlogs]

@@CookiePlaysOfficialas a 14 year old, when I was 12 and 7, I had the best handwriting 😭

[@PastelHime]

15:03 LMAO??? 😭 I DIDN'T EXPECT THAT???

[@Frog_toaster]

The acting was incredible and really enhanced the experience, Faline is a master at his craft truly

[@crafty_viv2498]

I’m confused, what are falines pronouns?

[@yokune]

@@crafty_viv2498 any but prefers he/him

[@CairoCreations]

Okay but why is some of her writing actually really witty and charming. If I found them I would read the hell outta these.

[@k-pop_adractive3401]

he goes by he/him ^^^

[@iranamisatsuki]

@@k-pop_adractive3401 don’t they go by he/they/she?

[@loveetrella]

@@k-pop_adractive3401 they go by any prns not just he/him :)

[@Savey1]

Me brain trying to process what pronouns to use reading the reply’s 🤨🤷‍♀️🧌

[@cece1117]

@@ThatOneDoomerNeco no.

[@kemiruisbacklol]

They way faline instantly loved lina the second she reads about her 😭🙏

[@l0vell33]

Not even five minutes into the video and I'm already laughing so hard, Faline is too good of a content creator-

[@certifiedbruhmoment85]

Genuinely the funniest Faline video. Second only to the harassing online haters one.

[@Clau3734]

We all tried to write a wattpad story when we were in middle school thinking it would become world famous didn't we? *cries in 4 languages*

[@iamreally_bored]

Yea😭😭😭😭😭

[@aquaplush7531]

I once got over 1k views on a fanfic, so I like to say that I made it to that famous level…. *sobbing*

[@半中国人兄弟]

Non, I tried creating a novel star wars type, idiot me couldn't even finish the intro.

[@socialistrepublicofvietnam1500]

Thankfully, I actually didn't I did make fanfiction, I just didn't think I would become world-famous

[@Ava_CookiDough]

I write wrestling fan fics (bc that’s like the only fandom I actually know lol) and I would say I’m sort of popular in that category lol

[@sharalinn2639]

4:08 I'M CRYING THE WAY HE JUMPED _I genuinely don't know whether this is a crackfic or not, young Faline was hilarious ngl 💀_

[@teddybearsinthebox9318]

ZIM ZALA BIM ZIM ZIM ZALA BIM ZIM ZIM ZOLA BIM ZIM ZEEEEEEEEEEEIEIEIIIIIIIIM

[@cqiome]

@@teddybearsinthebox9318 same girl, same.

[@wakeyqq4229]

@@teddybearsinthebox9318 agreed

[@gumyfmf3]

@@teddybearsinthebox9318 true yes

[@pxrklvr6957]

@@teddybearsinthebox9318 yep as u do

[@kristi_11]

Faline deserves a grammy award for the significant acting skills. it should be written down in history books.

[@davidcoles9734]

She’s a girl right?

[@dangernoodledee111]

I came in expecting a bit of cringe, only to find my exact sense of humor. I’d honestly like to read more about the adventures of Lina and Shagwa, as narrated by Shagwa because her neurodivergent swagger is everything to me. There are “not like other girls”, and then there are “ACTUALLY not like other girls” (in an autistic way where you’re not even trying to be quirky, and you just end up seeming unhinged), and Shagwa is the latter. I love her.

[@upliftothers4599]

Y e s

[@PUREFISH11]

Thank you for this comment 😭😭😭

[@f33lin_g00d]

exactly bro, I'm surprised i enjoyed this as much as I did

[@peacefullbreeze]

Sameee

[@letizialorusso1950]

THIS!!! Like now I'm genuinely interested and want to know more 😂😂

[@menhera758]

Petition to make faline read the rest of these stories

[@sour_milk4990]

if he doesn’t i will 😭

[@yuniii281]

Signed

[@hithere2115]

Signed

[@no-lk9gb]

Signed

[@sl3ppy_st4r59]

Signed!

[@coledibiase5971]

When I was 13, I wrote a story, a whole novel actually, about a crew of asteroid miners who end up getting getting mixed up in a conspiracy to because some of the crew were selling some of the materials they were mining to "Africa." I remember being disappointed in the book because I went of track and it was supposed to be about aliens but I somewhere along the way go lost. But now at 20 I found the book, read it, and liked it so much I'm writing it again with proper spelling, punctuation and a story that makes sense and I plan to actually publish it to wattpad. Turns out most of my preteen and early teenage ideas for books weren't actually too bad, I just wasn't smart enough to write them.

[@sophiasuper4887]

That sounds awesome! Good luck! 👍🏻

[@victorhurwitz5559]

Go for it man.

[@not-so-obvious_autism777]

YO BRO I NEED TO READ THIS

[@klaou9154]

You are making me happy😭I'm 16 and I'm writing a story that I have developed in my mind and I was scared that it'd turn out cringy because of my young age...This gave me some reassurance

[@not-so-obvious_autism777]

DROP THE NAME PLEASE

[@tripzone9119]

PLEEEEEEEASSE CO TINUE READING THE CREEPYPASTA ONE. NEVER IN MY LIFE HAVE I EVER THOUGHT I WOULD ACTUALLY LIKE ONE OF THESE

[@Nahhhhh_1002]

I loved the Chris and Jason story. Why did I want it to be like a movie help. Just imagine Faline doing a movie about these two 😂 it’s just too wholesome and weird so nice.

[@skinkshamer]

Fanfiction exists for a reason, chief. You know the drill.

[@moonlight_dulcet]

i'm actually so interested in Chris and Jason now,, i need to know what happens. do they fall in love? do they hate each other? is it both? now i'm tempted to write my own fanfic about those two edit: well it's been revealed that Faline's favourite relationship dynamic is antisocial barista x egotistical jock i guess

[@yeshica]

Bro if u actually did make that ff lmk imma read it lol

[@adorzai]

don’t be shy when u make the story share it

[@rikz056]

BRO SAME

[@kawiiangel-e4w]

im your 500TH like😍

[@PastelHime]

I HAVE TO ADMIT THAT THEY'RE KINDA INTERESTING ACTUALLY 😭

[@oatmeallemons9676]

12 year old you was actually a very talented writer for their age, a few of the jokes actually made me laugh with that first story. Wish I was that good at writing at that age

[@sophia_gamerxd7737]

O m o r i p l u s h 💅

[@t4ylor_hfjONE]

💀!!

[@goroakechiacedefective]

Same + OMOR

[@Jellyyourlocalasian]

OYASUMI

[@sophia_gamerxd7737]

@@Jellyyourlocalasian OYASUMI, CLOSE YOUR EYES AND YOU'LL LEAVE THIS DREAM

[@_hihi_0.0]

PLEASE FALINE, make more fanfic videos, I’m so intrigued! I love the little Fal series sm

[@Gemina_]

How does Faline build up the nerve to look at the things she did when she was younger? (Very impressed and concerned at the same time

[@jo4183]

The fact that 12 year old Faline named his character “idiot” in Chinese makes me 100% happier. Also,your new pronoun to me is waffle. Edit:Okay but I am not transphobic. I know Faline prefers He/him pronouns and I perfectly respect him for it! If I offended anyone,sorry. I just saw the pinned comment and wanted to make a quick joke. Again,i’m sorry.

[@marsh1159]

Waffle/Waffle

[@jo4183]

@@marsh1159 Yes.

[@sirthisisawendys811]

@@marsh1159 Waffle/Pancake

[@leika_0]

Mine for Faline would be walmartbag/walmartbag

[@Rissba]

@「•Kae! 일리 ツ 」 pancake/pancake self with very very extremely real abs

[@sadwasdead5065]

the first story is unironically good. like, i genuinely laughed. you were good writer. edit: ok the second one is simply hilarious

[@personified3500]

“We have food, water and shelter” “You mean half a burrito, sweat and an umbrella”😂 The way you speak and write is something I admire, also your sense of humor❤

[@UnKnown-tv1fx]

Really your recreation of the fanfics are gold. I blame you for this abdominal pain that I got from trying to hold back my laughter so as not to wake up my sister.

[@zoainaiip]

So do you spoil your little sister with piggybacks rides or….

[@oliveoil4368]

u giving jason's vibes fr

[@The_BlOb]

Good at cosplaying, acting AND writing? This man is insane!

[@Riedeltje]

Don't forget about art, he is a multitalented icon

[@khushalibheemarsetty6021]

....'he' is a girl.

[@The_BlOb]

@@khushalibheemarsetty6021 pfft okay

[@Lemonade-j8g]

@@The_BlObwhat did they say?

[@The_BlOb]

@@Lemonade-j8g No clue, it's been over a year now 😭

[@WhoTookSpecimen]

10:14 faline was so talented as a kid, he wrote sephiroth into his fanfiction

[@Simply..Lychee.]

Wait- Faline is HE?!

[@Jo-dk9my]

Oh no, they just don’t really care what pronouns you use for them :D

[@acatwithsunglasses2168]

@@Simply..Lychee. yea.... isn't she a girl...??

[@hamptermanterhunter9903]

@@acatwithsunglasses2168 both

[@eudaimonixx9909]

@@acatwithsunglasses2168 girl/boy can usewhatever pronouns they're most comfortable with

[@katalystkatapatheticalyssa5987]

Creepypasta fanfic is far less cringey than a lot of other fandoms out there. You came out alright.

[@osamudazaiAHHH]

the bsd ones in the corner crying

[@Crystals1297]

​@@osamudazaiAHHHHelp-

[@osamudazaiAHHH]

@@Crystals1297 OMG-

[@osamudazaiAHHH]

@@Crystals1297 another BSD fan oh I didn't expect that LMAOH

[@Crystals1297]

@@osamudazaiAHHH Bsd fans are rarely found out in the wild lol-

[@alyx-221b]

Honestly, Faline is a flawless actor + a literacy genius. This may seem like a joke, but this absolutely made my day, so I think you definitely deserve a bid round of applause, and a pay raise

[@ilik3fluffycats]

i can’t believe faline created this fine piece of literature at only 12 years old, i hope this piece of art will be read in future literature classes.

[@yachimylove]

the amount of will to verbally express your 12 year old fanfic is honestly insane. I SPELT AMOUNT WRONG JESUS NO KILL ME IN JERUSALEM IM DONE

[@concentrateddarkmatter7991]

JESUS NO KILL ME IN JERUSALEM im using this

[@yusinu6642]

@@concentrateddarkmatter7991 I know right it’s so good

[@dakkkksh]

MITSKI

[@yachimylove]

mitsiki teaches you strange things in life. god forbid this is the reason why hell is waiting for me.

[@ghostytrickster8458]

I BETTER ACE THAT INTERVIEWWWW

[@not-so-obvious_autism777]

4:45 LMAO WHY DID THIS HAVE ME DYING THE FIRST FEW TIMES I REWINDED IT 😭😭😭 IT’S JUST THE “SWEATING” MOTION FOR ME LMAO😭😭😭😭

[@hafsahshadow2933]

Genuinely love how all of us former fanfic writers have said their character loses control but never specified what that meant

[@P.Jdemonlol]

The fact that Faline has better acting skills than I can do reading a whole entire ass text in front of a camera.

[@quantumlawyer]

Petition for Faline to continue writing more fanfictions and stories Bro is on Shakespeare level

[@shimizohra4689]

"OMGGG KEEP YOUR NACHOS CALM LADYYY 🗣️🔥"

[@coriander1521]

Going through old writing is a whole new level of experience and I’m glad Faline has the absolute power to go through it lol

[@luniivii]

"THE BUSHES HAS EVOLVED. MY PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ANSWERED." somehow this is funnier than anything ive ever heard im literally dying 😭😭

[@Myla_gxcha]

Ikr💀💀

[@melodyzhuang9501]

SAME

[@viishahb]

i would become friends w/ the 12 year old faline when i was a child. i used to write fanfics based on katy perry songs. dedicatedly. i remember writing a little vignette where 3 besties who all were very sexy and beautiful, lived in california. they often went to beaches with their 'shared' dog, Nasen. (idfk what the name means). however, one of the girls, Linda, fell ill to a disease which could only be cured by an unknown elixir. linda suffered the curse that every guy she dated cheated on her, in the worst ways. i wrote 6 chapters more, where they did adventures and finally found out that the mystery elixir was the another bestie, Sasha's... breast...produce... uh so anyway the 3rd bestie, Nalie, gets really happy and brings one of those red paper cups to the beach, and Linda, well, does that. and is cured, realising that she wants to date Sasha. they all look at the sunset happily. the end. [INSPIRED BY CALIFORNIA GIRLS- KATY PERRY.]

[@mmaantj]

what did i just read

[@letmetakeajormungandrattha8591]

I'm losing my mind I want to read this firsthand

[@viishahb]

@@letmetakeajormungandrattha8591 it happily garnered 1k reads before my mom found out abt my account and i had to delete it

[@sanviiii888_]

W h a t

[@ParanormalParty1]

I physically NEED to see a continuation of the creepypasta story or I will explode.

[@aaz-ng7kq]

how are your writing skills so good at 12,if i wrote this at 12 i wouldn’t be a failure for my parents

[@aaz-ng7kq]

@EXE motive it's okay dw with practice and with a lot of reading if u want u can become better at it too

[@idontknowwhatimdoinghere]

Reading books, articles, magazines, just general literature (that is well written OFC) can help.

[@solo-juli4339]

Actually, its posible. I also have good writing skills, mostly because i spend my free time writing and improving. Writing is as hard as learning any other skill, belive me.

[@mimuhuye1789]

Faline's acting was so good it made my thighs clap so hard It flew and star's the new euphoria season from the motivation of listening to this masterpiece.

[@Xyzrandomidk]

bro whatt 😭

[@angelsmyriad]

excuse me, what the actual fuc-😃

[@mayfightu]

WHAT.

[@RyverBlu]

🤣💀

[@thethmooteresa]

😭😭😭😂😂

[@NotalinaIguess]

Thank you Faline for this high quality video. The acting is off the charts 📈

[@somerandomguy-3102]

13:53 ive never seen someone use "hoo haa" to represent that lol

[@Ombre6092]

The intro already indicated that this video is gonna be amazing 😌 Three minutes in and I’m already mesmerized by the acting 🤩 This is the best thing I’ve ever seen in my whole life. The acting is just too good. Oh and, the abs were just so *chefs kiss*

[@nvayric5121]

Bro how

[@kforkookie909]

Lets take a moments to appreciate the CARTWHEEL 12:47

[@Catlover-b5s]

Absolutely

[@thanushreekundhanshree9966]

I like the way 12 yr old faline wrote this creative story and 18 year old faline narrating it lol I enjoyed a lot faline is ruling the world right now

[@shoenlow1129]

Are we just going to ignore the fact that Faline can do a cartwheel flawlessly?

[@wolfieXsquad]

It’s so silly😭

[@itsnlee]

Honestly the production value of this adaptation is stellar. There’s costume, set design, character development, humour, immersive world building, solid dialogue and excellent editing that makes it enjoyable for the viewer. The pacing furthermore, is not jarring in the slightest. The acting portrays the characters so vividly and it’s clear Faline has a lot of screen presence that makes the whole storytelling very atmospheric to the viewer.

[@Cheriobowl]

As a twelve year old who writes fanfic this is too relatable

[@Cheriobowl]

Except I write smu-

[@grandmafloppa396]

Girl what 💀

[@idonthaveanynameideasyetlmao]

@@Cheriobowl i’m all ears finish the sentence sweetie

[@vsa_mio]

@@Cheriobowl finish the sentence 👀

[@gaymyboycole]

@@idonthaveanynameideasyetlmao i'm sure they mean smug characters 😊😊

[@bertmobile]

we need a sequel. i must hear all of shagua/stitches's story. i must know how this ends.

[@yunaonsecret]

the acting is top-notch omfgSHDJDKCJDNJSL

[@durgayini]

7:00 i like how she trembles like she's possessed

[@amuuwu]

I love how Faline acts the scenes moving like a character from Episode, it really adds to the whole thing

[@anandikabanduni8419]

I love that she put so much effort into acting her stories out

[@digi-demon]

Can we talk about how how faline wrote all the chapters of the creepypasta one within minutes of each other?? Like that’s dedication

[@reyphobic]

maybe he was just reviewing it after writing idk

[@victorhurwitz5559]

Who knows?

[@dumpster-ratt]

The acting was the best thing I've seen in my life You go Shagua 💀

[@iqbalbahar3583]

For all we know Jason could have done the hoo haa with 90 different inanimate objects

[@just-beeing-rinny1192]

LEAVE 😭😭💀

[@hirumaiya]

@@just-beeing-rinny1192 PLEASE STAY☠️☠️☠️☠️

[@lybasily]

​@@hirumaiya auby

[@ellas.2744]

I used to be on wattpad and I have to say this is legitimately better than most of the fics they have there. First off all, your grammar is already ahead of 90% of the fics 😂Doesn't matter what your plot is, as long as you got the grammar down your fic is considered supreme.

[@Strikeyvall]

agreed- no one uses grammar on wattpad, everyone just writes like 6 year olds

[@wrg_101]

​@@Strikeyvallthe eyesore fanfics where it's all small letters and no punctuation at all

[@willow0.0]

I love the way he said “Stiches” 5:09

[@21stcenturyplaguedoctor]

A lot of this feels like it could genuinely be written as parody. It’s amazing!

[@chocolateaddictedartist5924]

This is the most beautiful fanfiction I've ever read. This needs to be taught in universities, it brought me to tears. Wonderful job, Faline San.

[@k0cOm0cO]

10:55 "They can't know that I'm Ed sHiRaNn" Love your videos btw! ❤🧡💛💚💙💜

[@Mag3.1415]

Sheeran*

[@Alexthegoober]

@@Mag3.1415that’s part of the joke

[@The_local_gay_raccoon]

“I shat my pants and wet the bed” -Faline 2023

[@honeybearrr]

Can we have a part 2? This is so hilarious and I can relate so much, it's like seeing a 12 year old me reading all this fanfics and enjoying every moment of it lmaoo

[@gigi-w7n]

Chris’s monologue sounds like a dating profile 💀

[@dragonblade4125]

lmaooo now I can’t unhear it xD

[@suripii5026]

Thank you Faline! You made my day again 😭 My stomach is hurting from laughing 💀✋ The acting is literally 10/10.

[@xcharlie_xox2966]

No but why are these entertaining as hell 😭 I hope you read more of them.

[@Spoopyus]

I feel like you can still see some of faline's current humor even from when they were 12. It's great

[@wanderingwildlife6639]

I’m so invested in these stories specifically with how he acts them out. I hope he makes this a series because young faline was a mad lad and clearly a fantastically gifted author ahead of his time

[@M1k4n_Tsum1k1]

When he said "I NEVER let my natural hair color show" The first thing that came out of my mouth was "um.. I think he's gonna let his natural hair color show guys." NO BC EVERY TIME IT'S CALLED OUT LIKE THAT THE OPPOSITE ALWAYS HAPPENS

[@jellybear8799]

12 year old Faline invented "I'm not like other girls" something we all appreciate

[@Live_Laugh_Love_Jecka]

Lina is a whole mood here while Shagua is basically having a seizure the entire time *I live for that kind of story*

[@Nella_nova]

s a m e

[@noname8354]

I honestly relate to Lina and she's such a fun character

[@littleorangegoldfish-u3t]

i live for this kind of comment

[@Star_fish877]

I absolutely need a continuation of the creepypasta one, it’s a very emotional and moving story and your acting was Oscar worthy it brought tears to my eyes 🥲

[@elizayarwood]

“at least not physically” …..”HÆH?!”

[@sanashi27]

I'm amazed at what this video has. I thought you're just gonna do a dramatic reading (with some added commentary) but you acted them out, too! In "costume"! That's dedication right there. The stories were fun to listen to and reminded me of my own writing around the same age.

[@zap998]

15:50 your 12 yo self was playing with fire ngl

[@yikes3397]

3:17 I’m going to actually die this was so funny for no fucking reason 💀

[@ashdarizzler]

😂

[@parttime.loverr]

please make the next one 'finishing the fanfictions i started when i was 12' 😭

[@rgbarrios0331]

pls 🥺

[@Messwiththehonkyougetthebonk]

Y E S ! ! !

[@kanekiskakuja2432]

the fact that the internet sends every beginner to wattpad somehow proves that they always conspired the periodic depression they were gonna put one through