Fanboy Rewrites "The Amazing Spider-Man" (2012)

[@kevintran7886]

Someone: Hows the Amazing Spider-Man script re-write? Me: *takes bite out of pie* So good...

[@jackfitzpatrick4059]

Thanks, James Franco

[@ahkafkhan4512]

I wanted to like your comment but I did not want to ruin your perfect 60 likes

[@drywatermelon]

Winks

[@jamesgreenaway9177]

The perfect comment doesn’t exi-

[@805warriortentwelve9]

Nice

[@GT3NB]

I’m SO overjoyed that someone else liked that Peter isn’t a do-gooder dweeb that immediately and unrealistically learns his lesson in responsibility. He’s a teenager. Teenagers are selfish and make mistakes before learning from them. Andrew was absolutely exceptional. His characterisation develops beautifully. The bridge scene is just perfect Spider-Man depiction and the perfect time to THEN learn responsibility. Not straight away, but after he does something for the sake of someone else out of lack of choice to do so, morally.

[@ZinxTheSlayer]

Exactly

[@megelizabeth9492]

The thing that’s funny about this, is that Early Lee/Ditko Pete was a sullen, loner teen. He did a lot of stuff for the wrong reasons, and had quite the temper. The fun thing about early ASM, is that you can see him grow up and change.

[@owensanfordstuff]

Exactly! Agree with all he points. The shots were Peter is sat in his bedroom, the only light is coming from outside and he's is just looking down at his mask, the symbol of spiderman: He's just realising he can do so much more then using his powers for a personal reason like revenge - he can utilize his gifts and image to do and become something greater. I love this film so much. The grounded takes works well, for th first half of the film anyway, because the moment of realisation, is when the film becomes s superhero movie, all about taking down the "villain"

[@l.pricetag.5207]

*xokireiキレイ* That’s literally exactly what Tobey’s Spider-Man was doing as well, using his powers to make money and impress MJ. And it’s the same with a lot of other heroes but the thing is that they all have some tragedy the they’re responsible for or some other personal reason for using their powers to help people. Batman doesn’t actually have powers but he still suffered the tragedy of having his parents killed in front of him, Peter indirectly caused the death of his own uncle and most other heroes are also trying to keep some promise to their loved ones or something along those lines. The fact that you’d just use your powers for self gain is just because you have no motivation not to because you don’t have anything to feel guilty about.

[@redhoodieguy9977]

I definitely agree but the main criticism i have of how they did this was that they played it off as heroic and a big grand moment when he was becoming spiderman for revenge purposes rather than when he learned what it meant to be responsible He shouldnt make the new suit and have the big heroic musical queue right as hes becoming spiderman for the sole purpose of killing uncle bens killer, that stuff should happen right after the bridge scene when he finally tries to be a hero

[@awardedaqua580]

One of my favorite scenes in the movie is when Peter goes to school after Ben’s death and Flash tries to say his condolences and Peter loses it. Then I love how Gwen gives him a hug. Idk why but I love that scene. I also love when peter is fighting the police force and he turns his face very angrily.

[@troyoboyo17]

Yessss I love that scene. Flash is one of my favorite characters and when he has actual depth he's always a super interesting character, and that scene was the best Flash scene we've had in a Spider-Man movie

[@awardedaqua580]

troyoboyo17 i agree! It was just so real.

[@owensanfordstuff]

I love it too because it's realistic. Bullys usually have something crap happening in their life outside of school, and Flash discovers that Peter is have a hard time too, well tugger than usial. And of course the hormonal teenager who finally had the power to overcome his bully, is gonna lash out. I love it.

[@lucaskauan5991]

you forgot the crane scene

[@etabiansosin]

@@troyoboyo17 Vee Infuso made a video defending The Amazing Spider-Man and I would love to see you to debate about the film if you guys are interested.

[@anubusx]

The Lizard: Martha, Why did you say that name? Peter: She's your wife.

[@raddfoxx8179]

omg I love this lol

[@bigsmoke6030]

I really hate when people say hes not a nerd. Yet if hes like Tobey he gets called out for being unoriginal.

[@wolfgang6442]

People don't know wtf they want so it's best to not listen

[@an0rmalp3rson70]

Reminds me of how people were hatin' on the Cherry bomb album by Tyler The Creator, but then started saying he should go back to making music like cherry bomb after Flower Boy

[@Maplemama12]

Andrew Garfield's Peter Parker Is A Sexy Attractive Nerdy Science Wiz Who's At The Age of 29 In High School But Who Cares AG Really Good Especially Tom Holland To! But If You're Looking For A Stereotypical Unattractive Nerd 🤓 Then You Are Probably Better Off With Tobey Maguire "Peter Parker" A.K.A "Spider-Man" From Raimi Films Also I Liked The Yellow Sunglasses Eyes On Spidey's Mask! 😊😂❤😎👍👍👍

[@icywya123]

THIS IS EXACTLY WHY I’M SUBSCRIBED TO UR CHANNEL

[@6aboyplays396]

true

[@Ok-ji4bh]

Icy Nite same

[@RyanGosling6]

Icy Nite me too!

[@loganswan6745]

Same

[@themadtitan7603]

Same here

[@DaywalkerNL94]

There actually were scenes with Connor's family but they ended up on the cutting room floor. One of those scenes was with his son and it was about him being very awkward with his one arm, needing help from his boy, being unable to to hug him "properly", all that stuff.

[@urielgonzalez900]

That actually sounds pretty cool

[@jasonnguyen1072]

I’m pretty sure Troyo’s aware of that, as you can see the deleted scene you were talking about at around 6:30.

[@GMP1isReal]

@@jasonnguyen1072 Yeah, too bad he didn't actually say he was aware and make it sound like Webb didn't even try to include Connor's family.

[@whoKnowsWho27]

That'd be so good so much depth so much character dev. I bet kids/ heartless people would say 'THEY DIDNT ASK FOR IT/ THEY DONT CARE TO KNOW' just as they say about Peters parents

[@TheJazzGuy75]

Finally!! Someone understands how they wrote Peter to be a loner in 2012. It’s so annoying, especially how everyone says he’s too good looking. I know I haven’t finished the video but I just had to praise you for it

[@TheJazzGuy75]

All in all I love your rewrite and I wish this series could’ve been what Marc Webb wanted

[@TheJazzGuy75]

@*xokireiキレイ* I personally feel TASM is more evocative of a modern take on the original 616. Peter was always a selfish jerk, it was just that Ultimate Peter is much more of just an all-around asshole who would constantly throw fits because things sucked. Andrew is very selfish and somewhat reserved in this first movie, which in my opinion fits well with the original tone of 616 before he left highschool.

[@TheJazzGuy75]

@*xokireiキレイ* Couldn't have said it better myself, amazing take!

[@jonathanhill3668]

I don’t think he understands why or how they wrote him being a loner. Me being one is why I love Andrew spidey. He’s the represents me. Skating everything. Tom is unrealistic in a lotta ways as a modern teen. Andrew is modern

[@Spectrum_2002]

Unpopular opinion. I like the amazing series . I know it had issues but I really did like them

[@heronation6162]

It better than hc and ffh

[@kingkotsab1572]

Hero Nation ur trolling 😂

[@talhamalik4910]

@@heronation6162 I understand not liking the MCU Spider-Man, everyone has their own opinions, but those 2 are at least competent films unlike the amazing Spider-Man 2

[@brandonmichael5891]

Talha Malik Id say theyre better made, with proper pacing and consistent characters, but as far as interesting concepts and interpretations of peter parker? Not so sure

[@galaxystudios5642]

Andrew Garfield is my favourite live action Spider-Man and tasm1 is my favourite out of the the live actions.

[@Dom_Rhoads]

Can't wait!! But please make a spider-man 3 rewrite?

[@chrispy3369]

Why bother. It's perfect

[@zander7788]

Chris B Bacon99 wah

[@trashbrock2320]

@@chrispy3369 lol i love that film to death, unironically, but there are still some issues which could've easily been fixed.

[@jqckiscool]

Chris B Bacon99 exactly

[@mikedasik462]

Well well look who it is the fakeo yeh boi it be me rembea mhe

[@MrSmile078]

I really like the effects on spidey in TASM movies, the poses are more dinamic and the cgi is not that visible, no like the MCU Spidey that not get me wrong is fun but damn the suit is 100% cgi most of the time and it sure look like it

[@lianbenedek9791]

Except for the lizard cuz that's terrible

[@MrSmile078]

@@lianbenedek9791 well the Cgi wasnt the problem the design was the issue, that poor curt connors looked like the goombas in the Super Mario Movie

[@lianbenedek9791]

@@MrSmile078 oh my god how didnt I realise he looked like the goombas WHAT

[@dddanielharryzam]

Goombas reprises his role as the lizard in The Amazing Spider-Man

[@lianbenedek9791]

@@dddanielharryzam haha

[@halfbakednitwit8575]

Great video! The idea of Conners going out of the way for family and friends while occasionally braking moral lines could make the Lizard the perfect Spider-Man villain. The Lizard is such an underrated Spider-Man villain, and with your reasons I’m starting to love him even more.

[@TheTenaciousDog]

DUDE.. Richard Parker joke was the best. Something i noticed back then too

[@SuperBatSpider]

One thing I must object to is you stating The Lizard has no plan, but destroying things his human self cared about to stay The Lizard forever… is a plan. Not certain it’s a good plan, but it’s a plan, technically.

[@TotallySearch]

Premieres are the worst thing to happen to KZbin.

[@troyoboyo17]

KZbin won't put it in people's sub boxes or notify them if I don't premiere it so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

[@TotallySearch]

@@troyoboyo17 Why does it have to be 15 hours though? ( ͡° _ʖ ͡°)

[@corby9236]

Is ur profile pic a drawing of the dog from johnny test in banjo kazooie style

[@gingercat5996]

You've done it again, you've delivered another great rewrite. Dude, your really good at this

[@fwluhhty]

So I have a theory abt this part (11:07). I think that Connors was trying to be the hero and test it on himself first. That way if the results come back rlly bad, it would’ve only been HIM with the issues and not the patients at that children’s hospital or whatever.

[@TheChrisHype]

I like to imagine that Billy had that “Spectacular Spider-Man” face every second of screen time for the entire movie.

[@nickdijkema]

15:39 You have some dark... dark humor. I felt dirty laughing so hard at that joke

[@ShadyShelf]

Dude. That death hurts to watch.

[@blanduser256]

Tbh I was laughing too

[@wolfgang6442]

Yo frrs tho😂

[@osmanyousif7849]

The editing though....

[@blueturret5596]

Who’s here after hearing the news that Spider-Man is officially back in the mcu?

[@vincentwitt1810]

should’ve been norman not otto. Otto was never into genetics he was into robotics

[@chemicalauthor]

Yeah it would have made tasm 2 make sense more too

[@ItzWizard25]

especially with Norman obessing over spidey knowing that it was his spider and i would like with Norman knowing spideys identity but waiting for a good moment makes an anxious vibe for the viewers when theyre both on screen

[@danielhart7435]

Radiation

[@setteplays]

I'm always amazed by your ability to connect the scenes with emotional threads that really make them stand out. But I understand that sometimes even the official writers tried something as good, but as you said, big heads blocking their way in order to build something more generic that they think has more mass appeal. My favorite part of your rewrite was to turn the Lizard in some werewolf movie monster trope, it's so much more interesting than OH NO BLUE LASER TO THE SKY I mean BLUE GAS EXPLOSION ON THE SKY

[@elderesw]

Dang! You rewrote this really well, you didn’t just diss everything that happend but you didn’t change too little. And you brang up scene you love already. Amazing video!

[@AdubNation]

That was great, really like how you focused on the character development of Peter and Dr. Connors. Can't wait to see TASM 2 if you're planning on doing that.

[@mikedasik462]

If he can fix that THING

[@ysfilms22]

ش

[@JalenBlack-wp2tp]

I know it's late but yes, he did indeed fix it.​@@mikedasik462

[@siggesigge8576]

The Raimi Trilogy and the first Amazing Spiderman movie was my childhood movies

[@thepizzalord624]

Please do a prewrite Of Spider-Man 4 But with rules -keep Vulture as the main villain -keep the opening montage -keep Black Cat’s role as a villain turned hero by the end

[@ZinxTheSlayer]

Ummm

[@ZinxTheSlayer]

Sam raimi said he was gonna turn her into vultress and not black cat

[@ZinxTheSlayer]

But okay...

[@jaredjohnson8071]

Nostalgic critic did it really well tbh

[@kaimemes]

I think the TASM series is overhated TASM 1 is actually alright TASM 2(while yes,being all over the place and dumb) is fun

[@PlugBoy]

adding ock as a character while keeping him sympathetic is a really good decision that other people probably would never come up with

[@someguynamedelijah]

Nice! Looking forward to part 2. I'd also cast someone younger than Andrew, probably Logan Lerman, Dylan O'Brien or Aaron Taylor-Johnson.

[@d-brothers3112]

I think what Amazing Spider-Man 2 should have done to make the Peter/Harry relationship different from the Raimi films is make that movie about them becoming friends rather than already being friends and then have him become Green Goblin later

[@ScrubbzAnimate]

Holy shit, this is actually brilliant! This is arguably better than any of the spider-man movies we've gotten (yes, even the Raimi movies). Great job, man!

[@melancholyentertainment]

Y'know, Peter in the 60s was pretty selfish and even kinda unlikable at first. He constantly belittled his not-as-smart classmates in his mind, and he tried to join the Fantastic Four because he wants money and thinks they pay. He was a hero, but he was still a moody, loner teenager. So this version of Peter wasn't so far off after all.

[@OverlordZenith]

"He's the son of the Tiger from Life of Pi" fucking sent me.

[@ThatOneDoesntCount]

15:41 Wrong. The best Stan Lee cameo is from Spider-Man 3. That line makes me tear up every time I hear it. I'm right and you're wrong so ha

[@Icup200169]

Hits especially hard nowadays

[@lorraineragin5001]

Oh stfu

[@ThatOneDoesntCount]

@@lorraineragin5001 what’d I do? I was tryna be sarcastic about it. My bad if it didn’t translate. I do think SM3 has the best Stan cameo, but of course other people can disagree. Sorry if I didn’t get the joke across, my bad

[@Ryan-tt7uv]

Perfection! I love how you still kept parts of the movie and elements of it that make it interesting.

[@Seemlypseudonym]

Two things: Pete doesn’t make the suit until after the bridge scene, because that’s when his character has earned the mantle, and Jack is the one who first calls him Spider-Man (the makeshift suit would be more spider-themed in this REwrite)

[@Seemlypseudonym]

The cranes were dumb in the first movie, but it would be even more contrived if in a city of about 10 million, the one crane driver who owes Spidey a favour just so happens to be there - a movie has to earn that kind of magic and I don’t think this one does

[@zucchinibyday]

Not only did this make me excited for future spider man movies to hopefully do something like this, but it also turned my view of the first film around. Outstanding work troyo

[@emoanimeboy2173]

Tbh, I think Sony should continue off the Amazing Movies (like they were going to do) and say Venom is in that universe, instead of rebooting him a 4th time because we don't need a reboot, Sony proved that they have got better at making Spidey movies (Into the Spider-verse), so I believe they can fix the Amazing series, but hey that's just my Opinion

[@commanderspyder5432]

I'd love that, but sadly it's unlikely.

[@emoanimeboy2173]

@@commanderspyder5432 not really

[@upasnabharija8804]

Same here

[@masonharris9166]

A beaten up old spider-man years after the death of Gwen(and possibly in a very dysfunctional relationship with Felicia Hardy(aka black cat)) fighting a similar aged Eddie Brock who is in the middle of trying to restore his own relationship. SM would be overly aggressive and hostile towards Venom until Peter starts to see himself in Eddie and realizes that maybe the symbiote isn't the enemy similar to the original lethal protector story. That is the movie I have wanted for years.

[@radrno7]

Sony animation ain’t the same as Sony live action. Actually usually both suck hard, Spiderverse being a VERY lucky shot. I guarantee whatever Spider-Man movies come out in the next few years are bound to suck under Sony (Not that Disney has proven to do any better). Also, Andrew got bad blood with the studio after they fired him before even cancelling the franchise, doubt he’ll accept to go back through all the bullshit Sony put him up to.

[@superior2096]

Spider-Man! Spider-Man! Does whatever a spider can! His new reboot was real fly! To bad because of Sony and Disney it had to die! Oh well we still got Spider-Verse! And we can enjoy a what if were Spidey won't be at his worse!

[@mikedasik462]

At this pont if im cofteint that their going to fuck up one way or another becuse to be a spider man cnmaitc vese would be a really REALLY BAD IDEA

[@tobyw9113]

Nah if was trash

[@KevinLuper99]

@@mikedasik462 how

[@mikedasik462]

@@KevinLuper99 i mean come on a nightwatch movie if you don't kown who he is i would't blame you

[@ZinxTheSlayer]

@@tobyw9113 theres a thing called opinions douchebag

[@LibertyBridgeProductions]

I actually think the movie would be great with your tiny changes. They aren’t even big changes it’s just the fact that there’s no skateboards and the third act is so much better without the rest of the lizards. Plus Kurt’s family is an awesome inclusion as well.

[@picklechin1970]

A lot of people really hate the skateboarding but as a skater I love it. Although I am biased and that is part of why I like this aspect of the movie, It really does make sense for peter to skate, and I hate when people use it to say he’s “Too Cool”, just hear me out. Skating is stereotyped as being “cool” but skaters get shit on and people usually hate them or at least don’t like them, and a lot of skaters usually start off skating as an escape and I could totally see peter doing the same. Back to the stereotypes, since skating is seen as cool it also makes sense for peter to start skating to try to fit in.

[@OkayFillet]

0:01 That's exactly what Godzilla Mendoza said and now look at him

[@FlashTwoTimes]

God this rewrite is so good. Love your videos man

[@wildwolf3536]

You should write an amazing Spider-Man 3 movie

[@AmitCinematicUniverse]

totally

[@brownranchman4084]

No

[@captainbeastwinger4940]

@@brownranchman4084 im gonna put some DiRT in you're eye

[@sounakmitra3947]

@@brownranchman4084 yes🤣

[@brownranchman4084]

captain beastwinger why?

[@grahamhackett6677]

When he said no one would get the life of pi joke: I GOT IT I got that reference.

[@raddfoxx8179]

Cap: And I got your got that reference :D

[@michaelcarlton1484]

Personally I loved Amazing Spider-Man 1. It seemed to follow the modern comics the best in my opinion. No cheese lol

[@DredgeTom]

Realistically, people that skateboard been seen as cool. They’re mostly loners or rejected. Also a lot of people who like skateboarding also like photography. So I mean, it’s a good fit for the modern take on the character. I understand the backlash but it does make sense in the real world.

[@Therealdakeeondavis]

He changed the thumbnail usually when KZbinrs do that it usually means something is coming up.

[@timmierea9694]

Probably tasm2 rewrite!

[@brainstormpictures8343]

I FINALLY got the joke. Richard Parker is the name of the tiger. Clever.

[@RadinV1]

This rewrite was.. AMAZING.

[@CoolGuy-te1pt]

I like the idea of the lizard being treated like a monster, instead of a generic villain.

[@DarthSpiderMaul]

I actually love The Amazing Spider-Man movies. They're really underrated in my opinion.

[@patrick_sandlin252]

You just made my favorite Spider-Man film even better! Can’t wait to see what you do for Amazing Spider-Man 2!

[@mrbruh1701]

TBH, The Amazing Spider-Man (2012) is my favourite CBM and my favourite cinematic take on the character.

[@galaxystudios5642]

spidey.danger dude tasm1 is literally a cinematic Spider-Man brought to life, by far the most underrated Spider-Man movie. I love it so much

[@mrbruh1701]

@@galaxystudios5642 and now I love you

[@commanderspyder5432]

I completely agree. This movie is so underrated.

[@captainbeastwinger4940]

It's thé best ultimate Spider-Man yeah because more edgy Peter is like ultimate Younger but. Stil old aunt may uncle ben and it's definitly a better ultimate adaptaipn beter then thé Disney xd ultimate Spider-Man show 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😃🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂😂😂

[@braydenfuller3511]

Yay I'm not the only one

[@seamushopkins3752]

in these movies Peter Parker orders Web pellets from Oscorp to use in his Web Shooters, but I guess that means anyone can just orders a bunch of them. I wonder what happens when they go out of stalk.

[@charlietownsend2826]

The only small change I’d make is that Peter doesn’t get the suit until the bridge scene. He’s making it but it’s only finished by the time he has dinner with the Stacy’s so he packs it in his bag or something and puts it on for the first time on the bridge. Just to give that extra visual cue of "okay, now he’s really Spider-Man" Anyway, great video ! Loved it.

[@stevenbrennan5358]

the bridge scene was the first time peter actually said that he was spiderman. he previously didnt call himself that until he became a hero by saving jack.

[@chrispyfriedchicken9648]

I like your inclusion of doc ock before he would even start to become the villain. It reminds me of the spectacular spiderman where pretty much all of the villains were characters from the first few episodes before their origin story even happened

[@archiethomas3911]

i liked the film too and I agree with basically everything except his revenge, it should have been framed as more he stops bad guys but doesn't help those in need until we get to the dinner scene and the bridge scene, he realises he can't help people until he actually helps them, but all in all a great rewrite to film that I already liked

[@brenomarquesazevedo7855]

I can't stop thinking about the fact that the Lizard is basically a metaphor for domestic violence and this movie focus a lot on Peter's parents. They could have been bold and make Richard Parker an abusive father, witch make Peter become a bit of prick later on his life

[@DarkCloudIceX]

Feeling abandoned by your parents in youth may mess up with your social skills, mainly because some kids might comment on it all the time and you seeing them with their parents may trigger some envy in there. My girlfriend just started changing this with therapy and even so, only after reaching adulthood. And even now with almost 24, she's still not very "socially functional".

[@suto5704]

These older videos are always fun to come back to. Also talk about whatever you want to. I subscribed for the style and to hear your thoughts not just for the superhero related stuff.

[@jamie_c727]

I'm 14 and Amazing spiderman(plus spectacular spiderman) is just complete nostalgia for me.

[@RadinV1]

7:17 Oh I get it.. Inside my head:what the fuck is he talking about?

[@elijah00123]

Please amazing spider man 2 rewrite! like if u agree

[@brownranchman4084]

He said he would

[@RadinV1]

1.fuck that thats terrifying 2.fuck that thats terrifying 3.ita kinda a weird setup And 4. FUCK THAT THATS TERRIFYING

[@booadaboopye5084]

Bro u barley changed this shows how this was close to being so good

[@AmitCinematicUniverse]

in some ways it was good

[@booadaboopye5084]

Amit Barabi exacttly

[@jacerodriguez2065]

I love how they design The Lizard, because when I first saw the Movie, He looked so F**king Terrifying, and I honestly love it, although, I wish that they gave him his lab coat and clothes, but whatever.

[@itsjustaspider]

Can't wait for the tasm 2 rewrite!! One thing that i really want to see is that one kid with glasses be replaced with Miles, i feel like that kid didn't add that much to the story and i think that replacing him with Miles would make more sense and be comic accurate. I would like to see a scene completely different from what we got in the tasm 2 final scene. Maybe Miles going to save someone caught in the rhino battle and getting in danger by doing the right thing. And it's at that moment where Peter arrives and saves Miles and the others from whatever attack rhino did. And Peter would take a look at Miles and say "good to see you again, Miles ! Let me tell you that you'll be a good spiderman" and then swings away to battle the rhino.

[@arthurfortes5416]

I think in that scene where the kid with the glasses being bullied because of the wing turbine should be miles doing a spiderman cosplay but since the city hates spiderman for not being able to save that person or something, miles ends up being bullied for cosplaying but spider-man goes there and saves him, an idea I saw in Lewis films

[@loleo123]

The more I look at the suit of this spider man, the more I love it... Like the texture, the spider that goes all the way down to his legs, the eyes looking like a more Modern version of Spiderman (Modern as in, most newer spiderman games have smaller eyes)

[@heronation6162]

This is so much better than homecoming and also i hope we can still get a standalone spidey universe

[@commanderspyder5432]

Now that Spidey's out of the MCU, we probably will see a stand-alone universe finally lol

[@deadaccount8054]

Hahahahahahahahaha. Nice.

[@a.j5980]

YESSS!!! I've been waiting for someone to do a video like this, I can't wait bro 👍

[@TheUltimateDiamond]

When you rewrite the Amazing Spider-Man 2, are you gonna make a sequel to this rewrite, or a simple rewrite of that movie without connection to this?

[@chuckorgan74]

Really good but you didn’t realize that the crane operator was Jacks dad? That’s why he told the crew to move their booms. It wasn’t a random person

[@DarkCloudIceX]

The point was of Jack's father being the only person to help, instead of all the operators. Just like the rest of the scene, he kept the core of it but simplified it

[@YoseZero]

I think having him turn everyone into lizards is great cause its a good thing from his view when hE became a lizard he realized how much better it was than being human it shows that hes tryna help people in his own wierd way

[@warmfingy9244]

My favorite seen in this movie is when Peter walks into Oscorp and sees the hologram picture of Norman and it made me so excited when I first saw it because in my mind it was foreshadowing a villain for another movie. Then they ruined it in ASM2

[@Xpzilla]

Nando V Movies level of rewriting here, well done.

[@idrinkpepsi]

Peter Parker: Save... Martha.. Curt: Why did you say that name!

[@Veecy]

I just watched this movie like a week ago and I have no idea what skateboarding montage you're talking about. This really says a lot about our society.

[@backup-qg6nb]

Marc Webb could've made these movies a great duology so I'm glad you re-wrote it!

[@arvi132]

9:39 I disagree with this and think this should’ve been changed because I find it dumb why Ben jumped after the gun when the guy wasn’t doing anything with the gun. It literally just dropped as he was stumbling. Sure if he was pointing it at peter and before peter could easily have dodged it Ben could’ve protected him then got shot. Would’ve had a greater impact imo.

[@TheAniSi]

But it does fit more with bens character. He isn’t the kind of person to let that go and potentially get someone else killed. I think it’s great he made the opposite choice to Peter. But due to not having powers he paid the price.

[@arvi132]

Joseph Joestar but peter didn’t know he had a gun. Idk it’s hard for me to feel bad for bens death in this movie because I just feel that situation was so abrupt and didn’t make sense to me. In the raimi movie you feel sad for uncle Ben when he dies because of how kind and innocent he was. He didn’t get himself killed it just happened (apparently by accident since Spider-Man 3 showed that Sandman did it by accident). My thing is this uncle Ben trying to stop a guy from picking up a gun he dropped is dumb. It may fit his character but it just doesn’t make sense since he dropped it by accident he wasn’t hurting anyone. Like what would’ve Ben done if he got the gun from him? Just my opinion thi

[@drywatermelon]

Don't tell me that the swinging scenes in the amazing series wasn't amazing

[@diet_water5455]

5:23 a wise man once said “That’s not low, that’s clever.”

[@raviolibusiness]

This could honestly be the best spider-man movie ever made

[@THEREALSUPES]

Fire video brotha!🔥🙌👏

[@jonnyfernandez12]

How was Peter suppose to pickup Aunt May? He doesn't have a car😂

[@alltimelowbro227]

Fun Fact Everyone in the comic uncle Ben never told Peter with great power comes great responsibility it was a realization Peter learn after uncle Ben death it was a changed in media adaption of spider man so based on this fact it seems like the amazing spider man movie actually the first live action movie that did it right but people seem to hate those movie but ramii Triogly got it wrong but people love what kinda world do I live in

[@lightyearpig12]

If you're tired of making Spider-Man videos, why not rewrite one of the X-Men movies instead?

[@robanator9083]

If I wrote TASM2, I would make Harry Electro, I know it would be nothing like the comic but I figure it could be a way to sort out the villian problem

[@AmitCinematicUniverse]

I wrote this comment 15 hours before the video's premiere. I loved this movie way more than that trilogy that came before it: 1. the suit was better. 2. Gwen Stacy. 3. before the death of Ben Peter reminded me of my highschool self (in a twisted way). 4. the lizard made complete sense to me. 5. the bridge scene and how it changed Peter's point of view of what it means to be Spider-Man. 6. (probably should have wrote this before 5) Peter bullied his bully made sense because over 70% of highschool students would have done it if they got powers, *and* it is what lead to the death of Ben. 7. like it or not, the Octopus plot of the Spider-Man Ps4 is based on this movie. 8. the way Gwen's father put a mirror in front of Peter on what Spider-Man really stood for before the previously mentioned bridge scene and how it was a perfect build up to that scene. ok, I think I am done, my next comment will be written after watching the video. I like to think that if the second movie was different it could setup the plot of the PS4 game. just imagine if PS4 Spider-Man was actually The Amazing Spider-Man 8 years after the first movie, that would be amazing.

[@goratuti1098]

Amit Barabi bruh

[@AmitCinematicUniverse]

@@goratuti1098 I know, not a popular opinion.

[@salvadorvergarajr8492]

I like some of your changes but there are some places where I disagree like the suit and the lenses of it, personally I loved them, I guess it was just because of personal biases but I see a lot of that in your videos and even admitting it plenty of times so I'm fine with admitting my own. Another thing I disagree with is the crane scene, you're right calling the scene outright stupid doesn't add anything to the conversation, I loved it and my change for it would be leaving in the like thirty seconds where you see the Kid's father Peter saved telling the crane operators to move their cranes in the way for Spider-Man. A third thing I'd change is put the Avengers tower in the background, idk if you know this but sony asked if the original avengers tower could be in the background and it was actually approved but the movie was finished before it could be added in or something so it never made it in the final product. That Avengers tower alone would explain why there were so many cranes, it was because of the battle with the chitari in the first Avengers movie! Honestly I like most of your changes, these are just the few I didn't. Oh and the skate board montage was okay, it was his training scene and I never had a problem with it plus I feel like your over exaggerating a little about it. Buuut the changes with Connors' son was cool! Plus I love jurassic park and I'm even beginning the book so when you mentioned the raptor scene I was on board. Oh also the lizard thing with the stakes, personally I liked the way the movie originally did it as it made sense because Connors wanted to help the world and all but making this a personal stakes monster movie would be a nice ramp for the movie to start at where Pter hasn't faced world ending threats yet and opens that possibility for future films.

[@bobbyb.6208]

I actually like the Amazing Spiderman 1 suit

[@chrispy3369]

@Rexes Avenger Could you maybe explain why you hate that suit.

[@chrispy3369]

@Rexes Avenger I guess that's your opinion. For instance I love the light colour scheme and big eyes. But in my eyes making spider-man dark and edgy looking is just pretty dumb. Also why is the suit so detailed. I know it sounds weird but why does every little piece have a different and complicated pattern. And don't get me started on the stupid yellow eyes.

[@chrispy3369]

@Rexes Avenger Agree to disagree?

[@chrispy3369]

@Rexes Avenger Wow you're mature.

[@nintendohandheld9556]

One of the things that made the bridge scene in the first Raimi Spidey work well is that he was in the process of saving a bunch of kids and their supervisor as well as the girl in her PJs from the guy who simply threw bombs everywhere.

[@comicsabomonation]

I appreciated that Life of Pi joke.

[@d.c.kennedy3158]

I think when he saves Jack from the car and sees him and his dad reunite, he should make sure everyone else on the bridge is okay, giving us more genuinely kind moments in this scene

[@LibertyBridgeProductions]

The score for these films don’t get enough credit, rlly wish it was used for better films.

[@DXCary10]

one small thing the reason connors tested himself is because he would rather test on himself than other people that could be harmed it isn't brought across well in the movie like some other things but thats the reason y Great video tho, glad im not the only person with a guilty pleasure for this movie (actually i also do with tasm2 dont kill me)

[@jacobcenter7374]

I'm gonna be honest, this was already my favorite Spidey movie. Rami fans, please don't kill me

[@Mirrorcomics24]

You see I’m not a rami fan I’m a spider man fan who likes the rami films so you don’t have to worry about me being toxic

[@jacobcenter7374]

@@Mirrorcomics24 many thanks. There are Rami fans that aren't toxic, and that's great, but so many are

[@JesusFlores-rw8ry]

Imo this movie is up there with Rami, or very close. This was one of my favorite Spider-Man movies.

[@ultimateghostfreak2343]

I'm currently rewriting this movie. I kept getting writers block but this has inspired me. I won’t copy it but i'm taking a few pages out of your book because this is so helpful. Thank you Troy!

[@AmitCinematicUniverse]

where can I find it?

[@ultimateghostfreak2343]

@@AmitCinematicUniverse i won't put it up anywhere. It's just gonna be a document on my Google Docs file.

[@AmitCinematicUniverse]

@@ultimateghostfreak2343 oh, ok

[@hamoodhamood5948]

14:18 WHY DID YOU SAY THAT NAME ! 17:56 WHY DID YOU SAY THAT NAME........................AGAIN

[@mifrahsalman]

uHm there was actually a lot of deleted scenes, that humanised Kurtis Connors. That didn't show him as a villian, but as a person with conflicts. Frickin producers.

[@jasonnguyen1072]

I think he's aware of that dude. He snuck in a deleted scene that shows Billy in 6:29.