Fanboy Rewrites "Justice League"

At long last... It's finally here. Ironically just in time for the next DCEU movie would you look at that.
This video took me wayyyy too fukkin long to make, so I really appreciate everyone waiting it out for this and I hope it was worth it. Be sure to like and subscribe, and let me know in the comments what else you want me to rewrite!
Check out my other Fanboy Rewrites here: • Fanboy Rewrites "Spide...
Music used:
- Justice League OST
- Gary Clark Jr. - "Come Together" Instrumental
• Video
- "An Ideal Of Hope" Mark Fowler
• Hans Zimmer - An Ideal...
- "Justice League TAS Theme (Extended)" Lolita Ritmanis
• JUSTICE LEAGUE OST - M...
- "Everybody Knows (Instrumental Arrangement)" Timothy Schmidt
• Sigrid - Everybody Kno...
- The Flash OST "Best Friends Since Childhood"
- "Icky Thump (Instrumental)" The White Stripes
- "Justice League Unlimited Theme on Guitar" Nstens1117
• Justice League Unlimit...
- "Batman v Superman Suite - Violin Cover (six violins) - TheDuello" Nikolai Managazze
• Batman v Superman Suit...
- "Man of Steel Theme: "An Ideal of Hope" - Remix of Zimmer's & Williams' Themes" IronPixelChef
• Man of Steel Theme: "A...
- "Fish Out of Water" Black Canary
This video is a review/critique protected under fair use. All clips used are intended for visual aid during the review and belong to their respective companies.
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[@troyoboyo17]

Hey everybody, thanks for watching! Sorry I screwed up the uploading of this, I'm just an idiot that's all lol. I really appreciate everybody waiting so long for this, I know I'm wayyy passed when I initially said this would be out but I'm hoping the wait will be worth it. Anyway, let me know in the comments what you would have changed about Justice League, and also what I should rewrite next!

[@doctorjungla599]

I would have changed the writter.

[@troyoboyo17]

Holy shit you're so kind thank you so much! As for Ragnarok or Infinity War, there's not much I can think of in terms of changes that would warrant a whole video imo just yet, but I do have some ideas in terms of improving them, so maybe before Avengers 4 I'll do like a speed rewrite of some MCU movies with just smaller fixes

[@TheSpeedMason]

@@troyoboyo17 18:12 - Everybody's been in the costume for the whole time, they never reffer to each others by their real names. 3:28 - Wonder Woman looks to Flash and uses her last breath to say "Run Wally, run." wat.

[@troyoboyo17]

@TheSpeedMason Shit that was a mistake on my part. But you could argue that since she helped Bruce put together the league that he told her about his identity, but she chose to continue calling him flash out if courtesy until the stakes got too high

[@TheSpeedMason]

@@troyoboyo17 Ah okay, thanks for the explanation.

[@zay1788]

Evacuate the city... Engage all defenses... AND GET THIS MAN A JOB AT WARNER BROS!

[@captainbeck493]

Engage all defenses*

[@awa6426]

Hell yeh

[@Cy.g]

plz yes omg this guy is amazing

[@pranamkannad8368]

Completely agree

[@MrE_]

As long as Snyder isn't there, it should be better

[@aidanatkins2736]

It blows my mind how these so called “screen writers” can’t make stuff like this. Dude this is spot on, maybe if they did something like this we wouldn’t have such a messy Dceu. Well done

[@OmniBakeneko]

Maybe not bud we'd have a fusion between the Flash zeries and the dceu which will make 0 sense.

[@jeynesy11]

Well he doesn't have to deal with WB's bs

[@kylepietrusiewicz2749]

To be fair, he has no budget conservation's or executive oversight

[@tomsiebert155]

It’s warner brothers fault do some research

[@jayku1624]

Broli Black no it isn’t a fusion

[@Nustart999]

I love the idea Arthur curry is hungover over floating in the ocean

[@orbitalpunch4711]

Me too 😂😂😂

[@RedYoshi-ct1wx]

@@orbitalpunch4711 Amen to that. In fact, I love the idea of Aquaman being this Raving drunk.

[@orbitalpunch4711]

@@RedYoshi-ct1wx Lol yea

[@dalejandromp4963]

Wally got a C- in the project where he interviews frickin Superman. That is impressive.

[@SaiyanQuad92]

Dude. Warner Bros should hire you. This is great. Just great. I got the feels during that cyborg/superman scene.

[@rajeevranjan5785]

That makes two of us

[@rumibaruah6352]

Three of us...could have make sups more likeable and humanlike by this scene for the haters at least... absolutely beautiful idea it is

[@sketzer]

I teared up, I can't lie

[@2ndKidd]

SaiyanQuad92 Honestly!! That shit was it

[@he-man36]

9+ of us agree

[@Wixhael]

Yup, I'm going to pretend this is what we actually got from now on.

[@mostlyimpulsive3462]

Man justice league was great, wasn't it?! So glad they managed to pull through and give us a great set up for years to come! No critical flop here, no siree!

[@diffranticlen8996]

Same.

[@mikepratt7437]

"...but first, I'm gonna need a phonebooth." That one line would have made the actual movie 1000 times better.

[@vieiraverso8695]

This is a good joke

[@hoaxwashere4697]

Deadass.

[@ster950]

"Darkseid is" that gave me chills, no joke. You should work for the DCEU

[@whimiskii3270]

Doesn't matter if your late. This is some "quality" ass content. Also I kind of got tired of rewatching your Spiderman and DCEU again and again

[@Auron1Roxas2]

That's cause you're a fucking moron.

[@locvo2050]

@@Auron1Roxas2 fuck you seriously fuck you you don't need to call people on the internet morons for no reason

[@locvo2050]

@ProperDuction ' '/ i doubt it

[@BruceWayne-gj9ok]

@@Auron1Roxas2 Seen you on the internet before you need to grow up and get a life and stop being a troll moron

[@Carlos15Romero21]

@@Auron1Roxas2 Alright, an idiot over here I see.

[@namecannotbeblank6858]

You see for superman to be Clark again he needs to think about his rod

[@troyoboyo17]

Jesus Christ

[@lanseiosefanderson]

HAHAHA Comin down his rod RobotChicken Reference there!!!!

[@notthebeastinus2786]

When I heard wally west, I was like 'y u be replacing my boy barry' then i heard your reasoning and understood. I like the story you set up in this video. You basically set up barry flash's intor in a solo flash/later JL movie(if this was the real JL movie, id be hyped to see him come out of the speedforce or whereevre). I thought that was really cool. Also, I like all your post credit scenes, i like the green lantern one the most. With the green lantern one, you could do a movie based on the green lantern corps starring hal jordan(training her), killowog, the fish guy, maybe jon stewart, and sinestro. I think that'd be neat. It'd be based on the idea of a villain who killed the previous owner of the ring. You could build the sinestro corps in a later movie.

[@onnimannimaki8846]

But isn't there one GL per sector

[@notthebeastinus2786]

@@onnimannimaki8846 Yea, but they could always do a villain that requires more than one gl. I didn't read the gl comics so I don't know how they did it

[@onnimannimaki8846]

@@notthebeastinus2786 my point was that there should be only one GL from earrh at the time

[@joeker5208]

Barry sucks

[@trevturp6891]

@@joeker5208 Barry Allen doesn't suck.

[@Jay-Da-Giant]

That’s actually a great idea of how Justice League would’ve been. I love how you made the story look more better. Plus, Shameik Moore would’ve been a great Wally West.

[@Jay-Da-Giant]

Plus, Superman should come back alive with a mustache.👨🏻💙❤️💛

[@Jay-Da-Giant]

Also during Wally’s flashback sequence, Barry Allen should’ve been played by Lucas Till or Ryan Gosling and Iris West should’ve been played by Amber Stevens West or Gugu Mbatha-Raw.

[@javierfebronio8907]

And he would be added on the list of actors that were in both Marvel and DC movies along with Zoe Saldana, Ryan Reynolds and Michael Keaton (because Into the Spiderverse)

[@BenjiM514]

“I have a lot of questions, but first, I need a phone booth” that gave me chills

[@mikemyers3489]

Dude, I'm a comic nut. Everything about this was insane and I loved it so much. First thing that made me die, Wally West as the Flash, ummmm, hell yeah?! Having Wally as the flash ties it to what most people were used to at one point and then was broken, Wally West was the flash and had been forever, he had the cartoon and years of comics. Second, ERADICATOR!!!! Holy hell, yes. A name drop like that would kill everyone who knows what it is. The character building in this is so good and the backstory of the characters is wonderful. This idea makes Superman, you know, Superman. I swear I cried at least three times, the name drop of Wally, "I'm gonna need a phone booth", and the Jessica Cruz ring end-credit scene. It's so good. Here's hoping Henry Cavill will live to be in the Man of Steel sequel .

[@internetgoat4831]

Mike Myers I can't say He IS the flash. He most likely is the well known and the fastest Flash but that shouldn't take away the credit that Barry is the Main character as Flash

[@sleepless5240]

@@internetgoat4831 well I mean your right but Barry is not the main flash Jay Garrick is, as he is the first version of the flash in the DC universe.

[@internetgoat4831]

Cybernet3 By Main I mean the Iconic and pretty much who made the name of the Flash as well known as it is

[@sleepless5240]

@@internetgoat4831 ok I understand now thank you😅😁

[@goji253]

@@sleepless5240 Technically, while not being the first, Barry is practically the one who created the speed force, the one who has the mantle of Flash most often and is probably the most iconic one. The popularity of Wally West can largely be attributed to the cartoons. Barry IS the main Flash. Who was first is not really that important. Jay Garrick was first but he is certainly not the "main" Flash.

[@Alex-oc1fu]

New characters introduced: Nightwing Green Lantern Jessica Cruz (Lantern) Darkseid Black Canary I'd love to see these in the DCEU

[@antonj.l1872]

Agree but i would introduce kyle raynor as a green lantern and young justice the 1998-2003 version than titans you know the grown up version

[@clay7152]

I also agree but I wanna see not just Nightwing, but all the Robins, especially Jason and Tim, who are rarely in anything.

[@antonj.l1872]

Clay i argee but i want to introduce tim drake as robin and have flashbacks for dick and Jason

[@clay7152]

Anton J.L I’d be fine with flashbacks, honestly, as long as they acknowledge the existence of Jason, Tim, and Dick, because in most movies, they don’t like to, which isn’t the greatest.

[@jibrael5705]

@@clay7152 Could be that in a canon Batman movie Bruce gets Tim to be a Robin. Jason has been dead for 5 years and Dick is already Nightwing.

[@super6naruto5]

I creamed HARD when the old school justice league theme started playing.

[@liyanakhan6883]

*screamed

[@joeparedes6974]

At 12:56 they don't actually give wally the tracer, instead wally doesn't take it from batman and just says I'm already tracer and runs at the demons

[@troyoboyo17]

God damnit

[@VladsyourDad]

how do you delete someone else

[@joeparedes6974]

@@troyoboyo17 what you pretty much set it up with using the tracer character from overwatch also I can't believe an actual youtubdr replayed to my not so popular comment

[@joeparedes6974]

@@VladsyourDad you can't but good thinking

[@skye3606]

Fractal Vlad i believe it’s called murder.

[@AR-zc4ln]

GOD DAMN THAT WOULD BE A HECKIN AWSOME MOVIE Edit: eyyy I got a heart

[@hazzameadowsh2042]

Now I’m even more disappointed with justice league after hearing how good it coulda been 😩😭

[@thereplication2567]

"Humans... they were not the cowering wretches we were promised. They stand. They are unruly, and there for can not be ruled... To challenge them, is to court... DEATH."

[@colleenross8752]

Fine, I'll do it myself

[@samwitherington8202]

"The humans. They are stronger then we thought The Kryptonian wasn't their last hope There are others. Atlanteans. God's. Speedsters. A Dark Knight. Our armies are not enough. Earth is defended. No one is strong enough to defeat them." "Darkseid Is."

[@Jose-tu2yo]

As someone who actually didn't mind Justice League, this ''script'' is so amazing that it makes me like it so much less, and wish that this is what we got. Please make videos like this for upcoming DC movies so maybe people working on those movies can take something away from these videos.

[@thedon7082]

three things happened today: 1. my friend said that justice league was better than infinity war. 2. my friend was hit by a car. 3. I lost my drivers license.

[@thomasbard5303]

🤣

[@antileongamezyt2331]

Theman Joe Thank You

[@sommer4570]

It could be, fuck Whedon

[@myprofilepicisbetter2573]

Man sucks your friend got hit by a car :/ also getting your drivers license I hope tmrw is a better day

[@TheRealTaolf]

Tell your friend karma is a bitch (Kidding hope he feels better)

[@keegancolby136]

An amazing idea for the storyline. Loved every moment of it. Standouts had be Wally FREAKING West, Eradicator, "Darkseid is" and Aquaman being a hardass drunk.

[@AdamNYLONSTROKE]

21:37 that legit nearly made me cry. A Perfect superman moment. I wish this could have been the actual movie

[@pancakethedog9926]

When are they going to hire you to do their movies

[@Vertutame]

it's basically what marvel is doing now, they hire a fan to write a new universe.

[@mpk_666]

Vertutame , is it true ? Wow.

[@DeclanCorey]

"Run, Wally. Run." *BAD. ASS.*

[@destroyersfist695]

Nicolas Nick no it’s what they always say in the Flash TV show: Run, Barry, Run

[@WolfieFrutos]

TheMajinVegetable yes but also it’s in the comics

[@shelfenthusiast]

One change I would've made So do you remember that scene in BvS when Flash from the future went back to warn Batman about Superman? Well what if instead of traveling to the middle of the Justice League film, he goes to that moment to warn Bruce

[@ejiro241]

@Jonah Lancaster Zack synders version of JL was meant to explain that part of the movie and that was the intention to warn bruce about superman going rogue after being influenced by darkseid. Something like that.

[@master11213]

2 minutes into the rewrite and I already want to give you my money😂😂😂

[@thehighground9175]

I honestly think the most important piece in any story, are the characters. If you can love and feel a connection with the characters in a movie, show, or book, then you naturally want to spend more time with them as they go throughout their tale. That’s why I love your vision of a Justice League movie more than the actual movie itself. You explained how you wanted the characters, and you made them balance and contrast one with another. You had Batman- suspicious, dark, and brooding. You had his bright side Superman- kind, charismatic, and a leader. You gave the Flash more development in your 30 minute fantasy, than was given to the character througout their whole movie. I really dug what you did, and I wish producers, directors, etc. would do the same. Thanks if you read this whole thing.

[@sketzer]

"Holy shit you're Bruce Wayne!" I laughed too hard.

[@spookyboybenny5034]

Your animations are more entertaining than the entire suicide sqaud movie.

[@guilhermefreire8352]

your version of the DCEU's movies is so fucking awesome, as a comic fan is so fantastic to "see" how we couldve had a fantastic justice league movie and know that IT CAN BE DONE, now we just have to ask for it

[@wesmeadows3134]

It’s unfortunate there’s so many movies/tv shows that fall short for a lot of us, but on the bright side it gives us all an easier way to test our creativity.

[@azterahstudios]

If I were a director I'd hire you to make this film! Take my money! This makes more sense and I agree that the individual stories of each hero should be introduced before the large group movie. Did Cyborg not make the boom tube disrupt the hive to entrap Steppenwolf since he got transported back to Apocalypse?

[@troyoboyo17]

Thank you! And my thought is that it would be something he has to consistently be keeping active, and once he starts putting Yuga Khan into the motherbox he stops creating the field.

[@azterahstudios]

@@troyoboyo17 Ah that makes more sense! I saw your Aquaman quick preview and I really enjoyed that movie so I look forward to your final thoughts on it!

[@wiredant6497]

I would like to hear your “New Frontier” adaptation

[@reallytheguy]

I just remembered hese weren’t the actual movies and now I’m sad

[@zesalamel22]

First off, WOW, just WOW. This was legit amazing. And yes, this version of the movie I would have definitely appreciated seeing. And wow does it ever atone for my issues with Superman's characterization in Man of Steel. Still, unless I missed it, but how would Diana have known what would happen when Wally started running? Unless the time travelling was an accident...

[@troyoboyo17]

First of all, thank you! I really appreciate you saying that! And yeah the time travel was a total accident, it would be sort of like in the first season of the Flash where Barry accidently travels back in time a day because of the tsunami

[@williamokane4629]

"A rooftop streets away" *picture of Pierce* If you have to ask, you're streets behind.

[@douglasdaniel4504]

"Keep the para-demons swarms at Bay". LOL.... Great video and concepts, your opening rocks hard. In the right hands this would have been light years ahead of what we got.

[@grate1231]

5:22 Excellent reference sir, you are streets ahead of the rest

[@CenoriaWoah]

*Superman should’ve been interviewed by Freddy Freeman*

[@seththedragonslayers4167]

This fanfalm made me cry the MUSIC the emotional. You need to go to Hollywood

[@backup-qg6nb]

I really wish this was the Justice League movie that happend so I could watch clips of it on KZbin for several minutes.Good job!

[@leoviceconti5940]

This was great. Let's hire Warner Bros. and make a f******* movie out of this

[@AnyMe223]

23:00 The "Save one" line fits Batman way better than Superman. Bruce knows how it feels not to have to tools to be a hero, Clark doesn't. Any pep-talk of this calibre he could give sounds condescending and pedantic; it's a god telling you "Yeah, I know you are limited, puny mortal." If you're keeping the line, leave it to the Bats as in the original movie

[@jkcrumley]

It's also smart because batman realized once flash saved one person he would then have the confidence to save the rest.

[@lausonin6295]

Justin Crumley Meh, Batman is kind of obsessed with saving as many people as he can, which is kind of his flaw. I think that line would fit if we’ve already established that flaw of Batman (Which doesn’t fit the DCEU since he kills, but wtever) and have his character grow(?)

[@namaj3122]

Bro your insane. I loved every part of it. I was in the feels from just your script alone. And some how you made characters like flash, aquaman, cyborg feel like they already had solo movies. You made their characters perfectly in a team up movie. Everything was insane bro.

[@humancollins5626]

I'm just gonna pretend this was the movie that was released instead of the actual movie lol

[@anatolistoimenov1229]

I can't remember the movie at all. It was so boring.

[@kingbeyekh9611]

I'm speechless. All I can say is that your rewrites are insanely good and I hope you one day get to write your own films and have them produced for the world to enjoy.

[@greensuper1467]

I would personally go with a slightly older Barry allen because i think wally west should be kid flash in the teen titans or something

[@gslink3775]

Imo a new post credits would be really good for BvS: *in the office of a tall building* Lex jr: I’m sorry, they were too strong to handle... *with a shaky voice* Unknown silhouette: Fine. I guess I’ll have to try myself. You’ve disappointed me, *son* *Some bald dude slowly turns in his chair and menacingly looks at the camera*

[@antonj.l1872]

This could be intersing

[@rohanraj3561]

its cool, but lex jr killed his father

[@AdrianJohnson111]

Mind Blown. This is just beautiful. I really have no words. You must be really really proud

[@unfotograma]

THIS WAS FREAKING GREAT THANKYOU

[@shilze1]

Getting every single detail of this into a movie would be pretty great and sounds like something worth watching. The "Holy shit, you're..." is also probably the most surprisingly great thing about this.

[@HridithSudev]

The "Darkseid is" line still gives me chills. Also, a super-technical fanboy question, that you probably didn't fully work out while writing this, I was wondering how the Time Travel in this movie works. When Wally returns is his consciousness returning into younger Wally? Or is older Wally returning in person? If so, what about younger Wally? If you hadn't already thought of that, a fix I might suggest is for older Wally to talk to his own younger self instead of Batman. And then, younger Wally can go over and talk to Batman and the league. I'm thinking older Wally reaches out to younger Wally like how we saw the Flash scene in BatmanvSuperman, like through the Speedforce. So there isn't any actual time travel more of a space-time zoom-call if that makes sense. This way you can avoid any time-travel plotholes.

[@Rodolfo_0123]

This is actually pretty damn good. It saddens me we didn't get any of this. I'm not a fan of the whole Genesis chamber idea because it opens up a sort of can of worms, but I always played with he idea of Superman either coming back to life on his own (as in, his body simply needed healing and went into a krypto-coma-like state), or through some other means we got this delusional, mindless, brain-damaged Superman, but I just didn't know how to tie that into the already hated character they'd been building up since Man of Steel. More destruction from him? He wasn't gonna become the most loved superhero at that rate. But you did a good job, The Flash coming back and starting over was a clean way to do it.

[@billymccrary2246]

Love your rewrite videos and you got your inspiration from Nando V Movies, i also love his rewrite videos as well.

[@DeclanCorey]

same!

[@ccorsen1]

@@DeclanCorey I like this one better. Way more entertaining. Only the ending seemed a bit cheesy but other wise amazing

[@nova-jo1649]

Nando v movies is my fave rewrite!!!!

[@Jay__D-qc9gq]

My version of the darkseid PC scene, Darkseid: You were defeated by earthlings. Steppenwolf: They had a kryptonian, but I'll try again. Darkseid: No... I'll do it myself Steppenwolf: No! No! No! *Screen cuts to black and Steppenwolf is beheaded.

[@carti-8299]

or screen shows an over the shoulder view from darkseids perspective and then red omega beams do the zig zag shit and the screen turns black just as it is about to hit Steppenwolf

[@TheExecutioner21]

that was going to happen actually. Not in that way, buy darkseid would kill step and take a boomtube to earth

[@WigantX]

Darkseid: No...I'll do it myself *Puts on the Infinity Gauntlet*

[@ixreivax9348]

@@WigantX thank you I thought I was the only one who saw it

[@mizunami379]

Darkseid: No... I'll do it myself Thanos: You stole my line. This does not put a smile on my face.

[@thebestmedias]

Wow. You managed to improve everything about Justice League. Really well done. Good job!

[@adithyaresik7273]

this is so good, i've watched it several times while imaging what the movie would be looked like

[@aaljabri2030]

If this was EXACTLY how the movie turned out I would like it more than avengers: infinity war and probably avengers: Endgame . Which is like impossible for me. Except for your mid credit scene it would be even better if instead of black canary; (which they probably can’t use because the arrow verse is already using her) maybe it would be Hal Jordan (green lantern)

[@GumpsTwT]

Who do you think they would cast as green lantern?

[@aaljabri2030]

😐 idk lol. Just as long as it's not Ryan remolds again 😜

[@hasanwaqar7585]

@@aaljabri2030 Actually, Ryan as Hal wasnt that bad,it was the plot which made the movie a flop...

[@aaljabri2030]

HASAN Waqar actually ur kind of right; I just think he fits more as Deadpool

[@hasanwaqar7585]

@@aaljabri2030 Agreed...Ryan nailed Deadpool

[@marcello3463]

Dude you killed it, all we need is green lantern

[@michaellucejr.6374]

I love the idea of Wally West being apart of the Justice League! If I was doing a Flash movie about his Flash here's a few things that it would include: everyone in Central City is known by The Flash, have Linda Park and Tina McGee as Wally's inner circle, and a few legacy villains. Also, Barry Allen is alive but is no longer an active hero.

[@InfinityTorch]

I teared up at 3 instances throughout your voiceover. This is the DC remake we need.

[@ultimateblaze23]

Step 1: Don't hire Weadon, get someone to respect Snyder's vision Step 2: Make it 2 and a half hours Result: Another amazing film like MoS and BvS

[@themoonsanus7213]

ultimateblaze23 bvS And MOS are amazing films to you I thought we all agreed to never mention those movies

[@mabi9453]

This sounded amazing! I lost words ...

[@bobjuniorman5352]

How have I not seen this until now? Of all the fan rewrites of this movie that are out there, I honestly think this may be the best. For real, amazing job with this. I’m definitely subscribing

[@jonathantran20]

lol "like megatron" that got me ded AHAHHA OMG THE "thank you" in robot

[@sebastianw.7254]

This video is fucking amazing, but there's a small plot hole. Up until Wally takes off his mask, everyone has been in costume, correct? So, how did Diana know to say "run, Wally run," at the beginning of the film if Wally never revealed himself to anyone?

[@themakerbench]

Sebastian W. Goooooooood point! Maybe instead of Alfred talking to Batman when he's on the rooftop it's Alfred AND Wonder Woman so they already knew his name and where he worked

[@MrBigj62978]

I want to say the reveal is not really about each other finding out who the other is but just using that as a social bond to make them more relatable to each other...the bonus is more so for Wally sake who is a fan boy who gets to learn who Batman is.

[@tyrmorris8155]

GREAT JOB! I'd pay $20 to see it!

[@janzyronnaures5990]

Acrtually its not a plot hole i mean in act 1 vic and wally were attacked by a parademon and was struggling, up until batman showed up to help them out with a fuckig grappling hook. And then they talk, bruce says "come with me we need you" vic says "fuck this shit i'm out" and then vic meets diana. So that means bruce and diana were there for vic and wally, i mean bruce ust talked about recriuting them right? so that mean they already knew who they were. case closed...

[@VunderGuy]

Another plot hole: how do you explain the sudden MASSIVE spike in Superman's power level such that he's actually able to break through a shield that was taking hits from a guy stronger and more durable than him, Doomsday, in BvS. That thing is at least comparable to Captain America's shield and having NO explanation about how supes is just suddenly able to break through it would be like Thor suddenly getting a massive power spike with no explanation and breaking through Cap's shield with his face. XD

[@pedroroldao1916]

This video made me smile like hell. It's perfect

[@MusicByDarcy]

Bro this is amazing. I really wish the story went this way. You really had me at the whole Cyborg and Superman interaction. So deep I was getting emotional thinking about it and then you finished with such a good set of jokes!

[@wesleypatterson2989]

I fucking LOVE how excited you got at key points. So many video essayists nowadays feel so dethatched, but damn, hearing how excited you were made me tear up a little.

[@risky_busine55]

"Nothing wrong with Ezra miller" "gal Godot is a fucking treasure" whoa this video didn't age well (fr good video, I just thought it was kinda funny)

[@troyoboyo17]

Ugh tell me about it lol. If only KZbin's built in editor actual worked I could cut that shit out. Thanks for watching though!

[@user-uq6vn6yw9o]

uHM this entire thing is great... mid credits birds of prey HELL YES... ALL OF THIS

[@bjacksjr8424]

I can’t believe I haven’t seen this sooner this is really good. Especially Wally’s part. Good job

[@ramavandheka2910]

dude this is amazing work. i love this video and the scene with superman and wally and especially with cyborg got me in the feels.

[@thanos2258]

Warner Bros: write that down write that down

[@oscarclarke2653]

The editing had me on the floor the whole way through.

[@InfluenceFilms]

This video gave me goosebumps/the feels at so many points. This is the JL movie we as fans waited for. Even with a crappy villain, you made him not nearly as crappy. Wow. And the emotional arcs of each character really gave this movie what it was missing most...HEART. Even if we got a Snyder cut - I have a feeling it would leave us with that same, cold feeling as his previous films did. Way to go once again! Super super super great video! You did this movie Justice (yes..pun intended)!!

[@tonybcamara]

I really love your description of what went on with after the meeting. What you wrote about regarding Superman/Clark going over all the victims of his battle with Zod is such a Superman thing. I mean I know that Zach Snyder had an idea of seeing Superman slowly turning from sad and unconfident to the hopeful and inspiring symbol that we know and love. I wanted to see that transition and in that scene you are describing not only does he apologize to Vic but he realizes he needs to do this for him to move on. His interaction with Wally is spot on with a more confident Superman who is friendly and approachable and make people feel in a way special. Superman inspires Wally to be the hero Superman feels he can be.

[@wsamaras2003]

In the original movie, when Batman stops the robber on the rooftop, and they talk about how Superman is gone, is a perfect scene. It shows that the crime community also grieves Superman. The only thing that I would change is that Batman has run into this robber before, like they’ve “met” several times, so they can have a little back and forth moment. So Batman is like, “you really don’t give up do you”? And the robber is like, “are we gonna talk or are we gonna fight, because I’d love to have a lengthy conversation”. So they start fighting, Batman is obviously winning but he lets the robber get the upper hand just a little longer. So this entire time Batman is also having a conversation with Alfred in his earpiece, because he’s trying to get Alfred to identify the robber, for reasons. So Alfred is like the robber is named Guy Gardner. And Batman is like, “alright put him in the file” so now guy is making jokes like, “are you letting me beat you”? And Batman just goes, “you talk to much” and knocks him out with one punch (like in the justice league comics)

[@mikewilhelm2977]

Sooo... green Lantern set up. I would change one thing save that conformation till the End\Mid credit scene. Alfredo: Sir, do you remember that Criminal that you fought prior to formation of your playgroup? Bruce: The Justice League. And I just fought two Alien Warlord. Of course I remember, Alfred: Yes... BATMAN: BECAUSE I'M BATMAN Alfred: Ugh. Anyway a confirmation, with multiple sources, deems him a Guy Gardner. Suspenseful music making one feel like he's gotten a revelation or sense of Awe. Bruce: And this is important why? That last line to anger Fans of GG and irony as they would have the card a second later saying "Gardner will return"

[@Aiso754]

William samaras I think it would be better if it’s Catwoman.

[@DoMMy627]

Squidward The Scrub, Nando v Movies for the win

[@saucecircle1081]

Stupid fucking idea

[@razorcaptain0504]

Why would Batman need to ID this guy if they've already fought several times before? I mean surely he would've already done that on the first robbery they meet.

[@billhaley1868]

Just discovered your channel and I love your rewrites. Great ideas and you had me crackin' up. Keep up the good work!

[@troyoboyo17]

Thanks so much!

[@davisgreen2099]

Utterly awesome! Wow. I had the same idea about Darkside! The script rewrite is brilliant!!!

[@Dr.Ninguem579]

Still your best video. I've lost count of how many time I rewatched it.

[@nathanhills336]

So what did you think of the Snyder Cut? Your rewrite is surprisingly similar to the film.

[@Spiderstan2000]

He probably likes it.

[@jadenbryant9283]

The troyoboyo cut

[@ArthurRandolphVermillion]

the use of music in this video got me. Idk why I got emotional when the JLU kicked in. Fantastic work.

[@AshwinKumar-li4cr]

I should say, This is the best iteration of a cinematic Justice League that stays really close to the source material but still has some originality to it. This is so good (That includes even your narration)that I legitimately shed a tear at 11:09 and 21:46 which can actually happen and make perfect sense with respect to their characters. Finally I was really happy with the work you put on Batman's characterization (unlike other directors who assume him either to be an extremely moody guy alone ) and the inclusion of fantastic character arcs for everyone. Every post credit scene made sense [but the first one could be saved up for some other movie ,just not for a JL one]. I do hope you can land a seriously good film(if that's what you wish to do) in the near future. Also , continue your excellent work{ Secretly waiting for a batman rewrite to hear your opinions after the release}

[@rashuv4324]

I love your version, I feel that stepin wolf kinda lacks screen time which makes the villain seem weak, especially when he's defeated by Superman. But your script is WAAAAAAAAY better then the actual movie. Your characters seem more believable and true (if batman got his own movie to really understand this universes batman).

[@MechaZen]

Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn! Why didn’t WB think of this!? As a comic nut this all make sense! I have goosebumps throughout the vid man! This def deserve my like and subs

[@mushrifahmed8107]

MY MAN!!! * Aquaman voice* ! Take a bow sir! This was soo well done! I loved how you gave so many moments which humanized all the characters. That's one of the biggest things that is missing from the current DC movies. None of the superheroes seem like real people. And imagining the Superman-Cyborg moment and the last fight where they all fight together, and the dialogue, and the montage after it... all of those gave me the chills! And I loved the idea of all the credit scenes! And you really know your stuff, if you're starting with Jessica Cruz and not any of the other Lanterns. Now this legit makes me feel pissed off because this is a re-realization of how WB squandered such a great opportunity

[@bensongodfrey3455]

meeeeeeen! you really are something else i cant believe how good your story is that good

[@AsgersWeb]

I hate these types of videoes because I just end up being like "Damn look how good it could have been" ahah lol. No but seriously great job man

[@variantmoon2319]

POV: you're watching after the release of the amazing Snyder Cut

[@stinkynoodles8312]

snyder cut is good for what it is, a salvation of the monstrosity that we got back then, but this story is so much better when you think about the grand scheme of things.

[@kirklandfamily1]

I literally clapped after watching this, it’s so good. Very creative!👌🥳

[@octoberson]

Damn! I like your take on this story quite a lot. Wally being the up and coming hero works well. But I’ll admit you actually got me misty eyed when you had the scene between Cyborg and Superman. Well done!

[@troyoboyo17]

Thanks so much!

[@itsmeitsjakep2410]

I absolutely bloody love this! Damn. I needed this not that Justice fake sh*t .. PERFECT JUST PERFECT. FINALLY FLASH TIME TRAVELING! YES. NICE ONE.

[@tylerames718]

Bro the nightwing post credit scene got me so hype!

[@bassplayer52297]

Dude I got chills watching this. Warner Brothers needs to slow down and listen to people like you because i would watch this film over and over again with pure joy.

[@kylorenn2000]

I think it’d be a good idea for you to do a series where you finish off this little ‘DC saga’ as personally I’ve had much more enjoyment watching someone who cares about the characters rather than a corporation discuss and offer their take on a movie. I believe it’d be awesome if you one a series of sorts on this and if it goes well, doing it on other movies as well. Just a suggestion from a fan. Good work as always and thank you fo making my day 👍🏻