How To Write The Perfect Descriptive Writing Essay In Just FIVE Steps! (GCSE English Exams Revision)

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Her:“Small shift” Me: “the leaf had shifted an inch to the left” Literature teachers: “this portray how he had changed his personality and behavior mostly due to the fact that someone close to him died. The fact that he mentioned ‘inch’ tells us he is from America and that his friend or someone else close to him died in a school shooting which cause him to shift his personality just as the leaf shifted and inch. Also, he mentions how it shifted to the ‘left’ symbolizing that the change in his behavior and personality may have been in the wrong direction since if it was a shift to the right, it would be in the right direction” 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

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Additionally, the usage of the past form of the copula 'is' ('had') shows how the character was so ensconced in the comfortable oblivion of his thoughts that he only noticed the leaf's movements after a considerable length of time. The case can be presented that the leaf was not the beginning of his shift in thinking, but the end- as his personality finally settled into this role of this estranged older adult, the leaf shifted from the shadow of the tree to out onto the grass.

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MA creative writing student here. This was very helpful, thank you.

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Really got me ready my exams that I'm going to do this morning thank you

[@zoephillips7190]

really comprehensive overview thanks

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[@talkhonest2]

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Thank you.

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[@udouhiara5643]

As I speak two languages and learning the techniques of English is kinda hard 😢, I'm not sure if amthe only one that thinks that

[@geeti450]

Bro i speak 5 still got A never let ur weakness take over u

[@calmingnature-whitenoise6945]

youre the only one

[@vxon9613]

​@@calmingnature-whitenoise6945 wow, bro doesn't care about no one's feelings

[@b1an6a]

i speak 3 and learning one at the moment, and i’m pretty sure the reason is hard its bc you didnt get used to the exam structure as i struggle with that too

[@Enchxnted_fnm]

@@b1an6atry doing past papers and marking ur own paper, or if ur lucky, try to get your teacher to mark it for you.

[@stephenallington6478]

Is there a model answer available for this structure? I have seen accompanying videos for story writing but not description writing. Thanks

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[@shannelchikumbu3385]

Very helpful, practising for November exams 😰

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[@Sky_King24392]

What does chunky paragraphs mean?? And which exam board is the GCSE you’re going through?

[@Riri-nj1ky]

Hi. Your vids are really helping me.. i have a question in mind. Can you add humans like characters in your description. I have a exam tmmr . And im not sure

[@Ebonyrose1401]

what would you say for feelings, like in general for the setting or just one person, does it matter if u zoom in or out?

[@ramrahsmim9020]

Did this help anyone significantly after the test? Just wondering if anyone went from grade 6 to 8 via this vid

[@godislove3330]

Bless you, thank you

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[@Hyperrasf]

ilysm miss ty for ur explanation but I dont rlly get the 3rd and fourth part

[@udouhiara5643]

Thank you soo much for this hack or example cuz English is just giving me problems, so thank you for making things easier for me 😅 🥰

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[@Kevin-zf9om]

can you describe it as if you were there ? For example " I can feel the humid air"

[@mk-hc3pj]

does this also work for iGCSE CIE 0500 english language?

[@unjagged29]

yes but no image given.

[@mk-hc3pj]

@@unjagged29 thx but ive already did the exam and received my result. my result AN A!!!

[@unjagged29]

@@mk-hc3pj Please tell the tips; I do not write adequately and have a limited vocabulary. Plus in narrative and descriptive what you recommend? And what makes your grade above B or a C?

[@marleny750]

I m always confused with the word essay and descriptive altogether. I Though an essay implies always a thesis, something you need to proved, so i don´t know if a descriptive essay implies that. Can you explain it to me please. or it would be very helpful if you did some videos giving us some examples of it. Can a descriptive essay have 3 short paragraphs? . im confused with expository text and descriptive essays .

[@nanospace2389]

my paper 1 is transactional writing and paper 2 is descriptive writing which i use edexcel but the edexcel papers are the opposite way around here

[@mollie643]

Such a good video tysm

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[@user8482.]

When it asking questions such as, write a story about a new beginning, how would this apply? should you still just use description? xx

[@Sportcat01]

On step 2, is it basically you are using the 5 senses so what you can see, hear, smell, taste, feel etc?

[@calmingnature-whitenoise6945]

no

[@Crashmat438]

Pretty much

[@orioncrane9912]

thus really helped me tysm really helped me for my english exam

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[@scarlet-toe]

Is the last part necessary? Is it possible to end the writing with the protagonist 's feelings and emotions?

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Yes you can do that too!

[@NickWarnner-hk1pw]

How do you talk about a picnic trip on an island, describing the sights, sounds and smells

[@Salma-z7i1n]

Smell the fresh sea air. Describe the ocean, the sky, the sand, the animals in the beach you can children laughing ,birds chirping ,the waves.

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IM SO GOOD

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[@blazingdylan8239]

what question is this used for

[@samialsadig8610]

Can I just write two descriptive writing of jubilant place and a dark place and then memories them for my real exam.

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You can but make sure that you memorise more general descriptive paragraphs that can be applied to most setting questions.

[@Enchxnted_fnm]

How do you talk about the weather and stuff like that if the question says to describe the most interesting piece of art you have ever seen?

[@talkhonest2]

Writing Essay next video Women's Power Environment Technology Please little concept , diagram , content next video humbly. ❣️🙏

[@marufhossain6697]

I have a question. Can you use 1st person to write a description?

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Yes but it's slightly more challenging. If you're writing from first person perspective from descriptive writing, make sure you're describing everything you see as if it's a freeze frame / nothing massive is moving. As if you were describing a picture.

[@Kevin-zf9om]

@@FirstRateTutors can you describe it as if you were there ? For example " I can feel the humid air"

[@calmingnature-whitenoise6945]

​@@Kevin-zf9om she just said yes brudda can you not read ??? you might be struggling for tomorrow lad 😂

[@Kevin-zf9om]

@@calmingnature-whitenoise6945 that is not what I asked though it's only a couple of sentences try to read everything next time bud 👍

[@Kevin-zf9om]

@@calmingnature-whitenoise6945 Or else you will miss important quotes in the exam I love giving helpful information to those in need

[@isabellesmith8674]

what u mean by the feelings of the object like how would i write that

[@Stamnoj]

Put yourself in the shoes of that object. How does it feel? For example if you were given an image of a decaying tree, you could write about how it feels its time coming, its branches wearing down etc. Personification goes a long way in this part.

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Is anyone else not thinking how big that board is

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Sorry the screen is a bit unclear 🙏

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2:57

[@godislove3330]

I am unable to read all on the whiteboard,

[@j0shchijide]

to long

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stop yapping🙏🙏

[@chxcolateleah]

dawg if u wanna fail jus leave