Fixing Bran Stark

[@ondrejchundela2506]

My ultimate goal is to gaslight myself enough so that I believe these events actually happened in the show.

[@StefunnyStrange]

Yes! This will be a difficult one but I thought the same thing. I’m gonna start the gaslighting process on my mind beginning today. I’ll let you know how it’s going a month or so from now. I really hope it works.

[@AfterlifeAnubis]

@@StefunnyStrange So true, I loved when bran warged into his direwolf and saved himself in season 1, absolutely canon and huge

[@mickieg1994]

Is that how green sight works 😂

[@alinalexandru2466]

@@AfterlifeAnubis Oh Bran saving himself from the past as his direwolf was awesome alright, but his fights with the night king stole the show. Both the one as a dragon and the last 1v1.

[@DaveyFish1]

They did bro, what do you mean?

[@openthemind1244]

D&D are the nerds who finally got to sit at the "cool kids" table and then started acting as if they were too cool for their original nerd friends.

[@openthemind1244]

And Season 8 was them trying to fit in with the cool kids (AKA "football players") by ditching all the fantasy and politics that made GoT amazing

[@Isabel-oy1mo]

​@@openthemind1244 that part actually made me laugh out loud. It's obvious they just didn't have the skill to write bran because......why would they assume one character being magical would ruin the show for people who play football? 😭 😭

[@kailet1997]

It is also si idiotic of them to not know their audience. Wth was that xD

[@clipwhatcherdude]

The fact you mix Skyrim and Witcher 3 music together in the background has not gone unnoticed. Its beautiful

[@jj947]

I heard Star Wars music at one point as well in a video. Fun discoveries

[@LisaAnn777]

I got confused for a second because I've been replaying Witcher 3 and watching some videos then I switched to this video and I kept hearing Witcher music lol 😂 thought I was going crazy.

[@Mibit911]

Jeremy soul has my whole childhood in music. Ice wind dale 1 and 2 Baldurs gate dark alliance Morrowind and oblivion Skyrim. The man is a master if music. The only other cinematic soundtrack I think is on par with Jeremy soul is the baldursgate 1 and 2 soundtracks and planescape torment

[@Mibit911]

Omg I also realize h did the pajamas sam and apyfox music. Those were my first games

[@miri_snape7925]

Bran always wanted to become a knight before he was disabled so it makes sense for him to become the best fighter by warging and defeat the Night King

[@Polo-wk7zl]

Fix what? Who has a better story than "Bran the Broken" 🤣🤣

[@danyf.1442]

#sarcasm lol

[@hhattonaom9729]

gary oldman: EVVEERRYYYOONNNEE!!!

[@chaosiscoming9184]

@@danyf.1442 well Duh -_-

[@chaosiscoming9184]

The twilight movies :)

[@chaosiscoming9184]

@@hhattonaom9729 even Ghost does lol

[@TheMikster95]

Bran using fallen warriors to fight the night king is brilliant writing. It lends itself to brans goal of knowledge - learning from those who he has outlived to defeat someone who doenst value death. Very well done- best video of yours to date (and all of them are excellent so that’s not an easy feat)

[@halbarad7932]

I just think that the logistics would also need to be accounted for in that scene. There would need to be something that will fight the group of white walkers that will 100% be alongside the Night King otherwise it's very convenient that he is alone to fight Bran. That could be done via Jon and other valyrian sword wielders. Apart from that, it's a great idea and is much better than the stupidity D&D pulled.

[@fifimlkw]

I got goosebumps at this specific idea and imagining how that fight would look, especially if visually the scenes would cut every once in a while and you have a different actor playing the part of the fighter.. like cutting from Jamie to sir Arthur to ned stark and jorah,, and maybe the last blow would show that it's brans' actor yielding the sword.. that would be epic

[@chipfat]

The changes to the Night King especially were phenomenal. I wish they’d explored his backstory and its obvious interlinks with Brans story and the three eyed raven. Great work sir 👏

[@gardenerofthegalaxy]

Wow. You really put a lot of thought into this, and it shows. This is the best way I've seen to fix his character.

[@lasanar]

Holy shit, this is the most beautiful story rewrite that I've ever seen. Going so far as to affect Targaryen dreams and establishing the Night King in such a fascinatingly deep and mysterious fashion is the perfect fix for the story. You did a gargantuan amount of work with this one and I can only hope that GRRM thinks about something similar for his Bran's character ark.

[@The_Tin_Knight]

Grrm thought of all of this, this guys just using book fan theories and George’s ideas to make himself sound smart lmao. Yeah the show sucked, but how to rewrite Bran? Step one, be GRRM. that’s it, it’s his character

[@RNDMPLYR-jo6wf]

@@The_Tin_Knight keep crying he wrote something better than u

[@The_Tin_Knight]

Well no actually he didnt write anything you fool, stealing the authors ideas to 'rewrite' a show character that is already being written by the man who created the character.. just someone with no creativity trying to piggyback off a great author for content. maybe he should write his own story if he is so good at writing characters? its easy to 'fix;' something in hindsight sure, but could he have done better in the first place than even the show writers Bran? I doubt it.@@RNDMPLYR-jo6wf

[@anthonyparillo7832]

@@RNDMPLYR-jo6wfhow is he crying he’s just stating that GRRM made bran and likely has a good storyline for him, you’re the one getting pissy for no reason

[@anthonyparillo7832]

@@RNDMPLYR-jo6wfalso genius you don’t have to create something to be able to critique it crazy that needs to be said

[@RNDMPLYR-jo6wf]

MORE OF THESE PLEASE ITS FANTASTIC

[@chaosiscoming9184]

I love when he rips on season 8 :) Worst final season for ever show ever. WB should of got in new writers. Could of got 10 seasons as EVERYONE (the actors, us fans, WB) wanted more seasons.

[@orcocan]

this

[@gaiterat6187]

Always thought the Mad King screaming "burn them all" was an obvious spot to bring Bran in in some capacity.

[@lordcooch130]

dude i don't know what you smoked but you should have written the show

[@swaggery]

D&D could have got help if they wanted plot lines, and scripting for interesting conversations. They clearly understood what audiences generally wanted and what worked for a television show. So they were still valuable to have around. It's literally they just didn't care about the show or their careers anymore. It's really odd as anybody else in a spot of being offered 6+ years of guaranteed job security in a very technically challenging position they loved for 3+ years would be thrilled to stay put.

[@theobourrelly215]

When he explained the night Kings reveal I literally slammed the table out of anger that this didn’t happen

[@benjaminngopwaamos6878]

@@swaggery This is exactly what I've been thinking. There's no way the same writers who improvised Tywin and Arya's scenes just became so bad suddenly. The obvious and logical truth is they stopped caring. They were handed a lot of money to produce up to 13 seasons if they wanted to and hire a capable team of brilliant writers (including GRRM) to help them make this the greatest TV show in history and cement their legacy. But no, they were banking on the promise of Disney to write their own Star Wars story. They took something that was so special to millions of people and turned it into complete dog sh*t. I'll be honest, watching Supercut's videos on this show feels cathartic for me. I'm basically pouring out all these emotions of anger and it feels like I'm punching anything in sight. Ultimately, I blame HBO for all this. They could've just fired them and brought in someone who actually cared.

[@Kacpa2]

Roberts rebellion wasnt only caused by Robert being emotional about Lyanna's "Kidnapping", but also other things The Mad King done like killing Bran"s grandfather.

[@iDeathMaximuMII]

And Uncle

[@MoGhadas]

This was an amazing video! The Night King being a former pupil and the final fight against the Night King being Bran using the knowledge he attains of all the great swordsmen of Westeros were just two ideas I loved the most. I can imagine in my head him watching the swordsmen in battle while it transitions into his fight with the Night King using the exact moves. Maybe a little cheesy as you say but nonetheless epic. Last but not least, F*** D&D!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[@inari3298]

Aaaaaaaaand Bran finally got to be a knight like he always wanted in the books

[@juanpablotorres1904]

Its also great payoff for when King Robert tells him that he'll be a soldier in S1E1

[@Skelber]

@@inari3298 "You'll be a soldier" - Bobby B

[@inari3298]

​​@@Skelber Exactly, he never wanted to be a Prince of winterfell, he wanted to be a knight like Arthur Dayne as it was impliyed in the books

[@santiagotrujillo6758]

10:34 The current 3 eyed raven is Brynden Rivers, a Targaryen bastard of Aegon the Unworthy

[@inari3298]

How do we know? Was it mentioned in the books?

[@syedshahrukhraza2923]

@@inari3298 Not directly mentioned but the text makes it virtually certain that it's him. There is a possibility that the 3ER is different from the figure Bran meets in the cave but the latter is definitely Bloodraven.

[@SupercutsDelight]

I think David and Dan deviated from it being Brynden Rivers. Given that in Season 6 Episode 3 the 3-Eyed Raven says this: "You think I wanted to sit here for 1000 years watching the world from a distance as the roots grew threw me?" So I was going off of that.

[@syedshahrukhraza2923]

@@SupercutsDelight Agreed. The show’s 3ER is a different character. Although I am almost certain that HBO will retcon it to be Bloodraven when they eventually adapt the Blackfyre rebellion. You should finish reading the books. The show versions of most major characters are vastly different from their book counterparts.

[@santiagotrujillo6758]

@@SupercutsDelight That could be a possibility, but what he means by "1000 years" is ambiguous. Given that it is established that the 3ER can see the future the past and the present at the same time. So the concept of time is different for him. But I think you're right, D&D didn't really think about the 3ER's identity, they just used him as a plot device

[@thehoboshow]

"Not to mention he is literally omniscient. So, writing a character with that kind of strength is very difficult. So David and Dan fumbling this character is honestly not surprising." Is there a character Dumb and Dumber did not fumble?

[@RicketyRocketyRoo]

hmm.. maybe samwell and brienne? maybe.

[@kadiraydin8641]

Ed Sheeran

[@HeatherHolt]

They most certainly ruined Jamie with one sentence and it’s unforgivable

[@qayssarjrd5399]

⁠​⁠​⁠@@RicketyRocketyRoo but you have to admit they dumbed down briennes goals and emotions to nothing more than wanting Jaimie’s d

[@hk-4886]

All characters that died in Seasons 1-4 😂

[@wiggal6230]

What a video… absolutely amazing! I almost startet crying when u talked about the possibility of the dynamic btw the direwolfs, Arya and bran at the red wedding, this would have been unbelievable emotional writing, great job with the video

[@Shank5ter]

I think the whole time travel thing had one wrinkle: The Three Eyed raven is Bloodworm, who had only been alive for about 140 years

[@noegiard494]

Isn't he "Bloodraven" (Brynden Rivers)? I'm pretty Bloodworm is Caraxes' nickname ☺️

[@sanjaykarthicks1226]

@@noegiard494 Caraxes's nickname is actually Bloodwyrm But you're right about Brynden Rivers

[@benjaminngopwaamos6878]

I thought the same thing. His (Brynden Rivers) allusion to being the three eyed raven for a thousand years was a sum of the time he could potentially spend in that role, not how much time had passed.

[@JMQA1]

Your Night King fight sounds awesome. To add to it, the Night King should resurrect past Starks from the crypt to fight with him. Bran recognizes them and builds up the power to warg into the Night King's Dragon. Jon watches as it leaves to help Jorah land the killing blow.

[@fifimlkw]

The scene of of bran warging and fighting the night gave me goosebumps... Heres what i think, I got goosebumps at this specific idea and imagining how that fight would look, especially if visually the scenes would cut every once in a while and you have a different actor playing the part of the fighter.. like cutting from Jamie to sir Arthur to sir baristan then to ned stark (having the actor xome back for this scebe would incredible),, and maybe the last blow would show that it's brans' actor yielding the sword.. that would be epic.. then when its all over the scene would end with it showing resurrected jorah was the one doing the fighting

[@sadfacethebum5249]

Great video. This story makes so much more sense not just for Bran, but for the entire show in general

[@Arkanyte]

Wow, this rewrite was so incredible. Like literally. You did this so well.

[@pckrichards7980]

This is genuinely perfect. I’m not sure I could put it better if I tried

[@evanphillips570]

The night king being one of the 3 eyed ravens old pupils is actually genius, if George does reveal a night king in the book I hope he goes down the route you came up with by here👏🏻

[@J3FF4SON]

Wow. That was awesome. Thank you, this replacement story now lives in my head instead of the show.

[@aberahmancheick2649]

Bro is beyond saving

[@Chrisvillasr]

Let’s kickstart your version from season 5 onward lol Those are amazing ideas and I got excited hearing them! Please keep doing this kind of videos, thanks man!

[@dawnoflineart]

I LOVE THIS. no i do, really. everything you said was great in my eyes, especially the "Bran saving himself by warging into the direwolf" and the twisted finale. truly amazing stuff, good job! also, i know you said other channels have made videos fixing the end of the show, but i will be subscribed to your channel (even when hacked lol) until you make a video like that too. dont get me wrong, i'll be subscribed after too, but i can die happy after the video

[@samanthamiller6353]

THIS IS IT!! I’ve been searching for this video after watching it months ago. This timeline truly truly stuck with me.

[@therosmo1491]

As we can see in this video: all it takes is a bit more time and a thought process to come up with a satisfying conclusion to a character arc and the whole of the story. If only D&D could have done such a thing. Here's hoping GRR will show us the true path for his story.

[@StefunnyStrange]

This rewrite gave me chills! Like holy s**t was this AMAZING. It kinda makes me angrier though… about what _could have_ been if seasons 5-8 had competent writers and those two doofuses weren’t running the show into the ground. I don’t even expect D&D to think of anything this great because they’re just NOT this smart or creative. Still, they could have AT LEAST brought a writer in to assist with wrapping everything up. But D&D were just too big-headed and too ego-driven, and they just HAD to be the ones to finish the story and be the ones responsible for subverting everyone’s expectations. 🙄 And it was a colossal FAIL. I’m glad their selfish decisions led to their reputations being ruined and losing the deals they neglected the show for like Star Wars. Many fans trusted them to do this show justice so I don’t care that fans are still harassing them about that god-awful ending. They deserve the hate they get. If you are reading a script to the cast and it is jarring to the majority of them and you see a room full of negative reactions, which we clearly saw behind the scenes during the table read…only an arrogant FOOL would choose to still move forward with this story. If your cast is laughing, looking uncomfortable and appearing dumbfounded while you’re reading the script, it may be time to scrap that scrip! But D&D were just too arrogant and thought they knew better than everyone else including George. The audacity!. I remember once they even suggested in a BTS clip that they enjoyed NOT listening to the cast and ignoring their concerns. For instance, they enjoyed killing off Selmy after the actor confronted them with his concerns of killing the character after he read the books. It was like a sick game to D&D. They enjoyed playing God. Anyway, this ending didn’t just fix Bran, it also wraps so many other plot points up as well. It also ELEVATED scenes from earlier seasons. This would’ve had fans going back again and again to rewatch episodes and try to spot the clues they missed. With each great idea you had I was like “F*CK!” and would throw something across my room in frustration. This fix made me excited and angry at the same time.

[@AmericanImperium1776]

This was fantastic and gave me a lot more respect for Bran as a character, I’m still not fully onboard with him becoming king, but I can see past that. My favorite part was when “Bran” was dueling the Night King and how he used all the best parts from the great swordsman of Westeros. It’s so satisfying because Bran always dreamed of being a knight. I hope George sees this video. Peace ✌🏻 P.S. I still think Bran would make a better Hand to someone like Jon or Young Griff, but he's probably going to be king.

[@Challis1989]

Bran being King is one of GRR Martins big reveals to the writers to be fair even the original idea is bran being king not to mention hes the main character in the whole story.

[@lisagaughan7154]

​@@Challis1989going off of how many chapters each character has, Ned and Catelyn are overarching protagonists, Jon, Tyrion, Arya, Daenerys, Sansa, Bran, Jaime and Davos are the closest to main characters, though I'd say overall main protagonist goes to Jon, Daenerys or Bran.

[@maulcs]

Usually these idea videos are trash but this is pure gold.

[@fragsties4118]

So happy you air new videos like this

[@jordancurzon2905]

This deserves more views. I wish that D&D had half the imagination you do herr. What a fantastic way to keep Bran interesting and wrap up the show in a more thematically appropriate way. I would watch your version of GOT any day.

[@leek5682]

Compared to Season 7 and 8 this guy deserves a freaking nobel peace prize for how much better his ideas are

[@artxroyalty]

This made so much sense and actually makes Brans story SO much more meaningful and interesting. Good stuff!

[@yashsaksena4995]

This was absolutely brilliant! Top tier stuff. From being a casual fan like us to writing something that's infinitely better than what the actual writers came up with. Hope you'll continue this series with other major characters like tyrio, jamie, dany, cersei, as all of them desperately require a rewrite.

[@captainrex6484]

I honestly really like this idea and definitely prefer it to what we got. It would explain a lot of things, specifically the Night King and what his motivations are. It also would make the later seasons more comprehensible and redeem the long night episode.

[@syedshahrukhraza2923]

Well done. This, whilst obviously a lot more simplified that the narrative promised in the books, is much more satisfying than the drivel we got with Bran post-S4. It provides a clear emotional arc with a beginning (Bran the pupil), middle (Bran the graduate), and end (Bran the ultimate puppet-master). You deserve props for having crafted something like this. Have you read the books?

[@HuntingHawk]

Bran worging into Jorah and using skills he's seen from the greatest swordsmen throughout history like Barristan Selmy, Arthur Dayne and Jamie reminds me a lot of The Bleeding Effect from the early Assassin's Creed games. Like how Desmond in a very short time learned how to free-run and fight by reliving the memories of Altair and Ezio and ended up retaining all of their instincts and muscle memory. I'm not sure if you drew that parallel on purpose but it's actually really cool lol

[@mariaxeldridge]

this is one of the best and most thoughtfully interwoven rewrites i’ve seen, and i’ve been trying to blast my brain with as many as possible in a vain attempt to forget the original shows ending lol. incredible job!!

[@scruffy994]

Man we need you to make a full series of videos were you fix Game of Thrones season 5 to 8, episode by episode, you're great at this

[@wrager95]

Dude I love all of your videos, but this one blows the others out of the water. This was an amazing theory and I want more. Bravo!!

[@chelseamaher5298]

This is for sure my favorite night king theory, I think it makes a lot of sense in the story. Great video!

[@vijayanand6650]

Loved the changes to the night king the most. This whole story is brilliant

[@Top_Lobster]

Dude.....this is actually brilliant! I am amazed that you came up with this. This would have made the show infinitely better. Give this man a job writing television!

[@MollyMarsella]

As someone who constantly is watching asoiaf videos... this is by far the best rewrite/theorisation of Bran's storyline I have ever come across.

[@biddierepellent]

i love how this channel when from memeing the episodes to real episode analysis

[@guilhermeleitao3680]

really great video!! it's nice to see a creator go beyond shit talking and actually have a go at the material. i really enjoyed it, thought it was very smart and i hope to see more of this from you

[@kadiraydin8641]

Great Job! I especially loved your evil pupil Story Line ❤️

[@fantasycreature123]

I don't know why nobody says this, but you have a very relaxing voice! It's pleasant to listen to. Also, love your content, especially the humourous ones. They make me laugh whenever I think of them.

[@qdahdrummer]

Whoever made this thumbnail major props 😂

[@HeatherHolt]

I died 😂

[@babygorilla4233]

As someone who likes god emperor of dune as the last good book in the series im sad we never saw more Bran. There very similar charcters and id love to see him influencing the world and diving deeper and deeper into the depths of his past lives. Spending time waiting for key events in the future a tree slowly growing around him until a new crisis begins to arise so it can be niped in the bud. They actually share a terrible purpose to save humanity from a species destroying polt. With Bran going against the night king as a metaphor for climate change. And in dune Leto see's an end to the future. A device that spreads to every imperial planet and snuffs it out. Which I think is a metaphor about the danger of having the fates of everyone in the hands of the self intrested few?

[@tildal.]

two minutes into watching i kept being distracted by something moving beneath the video i realized it was the thumbs up counter going up and at the time it only had 90 likes and i went "wtf this is already great why not more?" and realized that the video was less than 1 hour old

[@Leinkester]

👏 The story and context you gave makes the same ending so much better then I could have ever imagined.

[@samkar2212]

This sounds amazing

[@berddooghe2950]

This is so crazy it's everything the show should/could've been but even better. Kudos to you man, damn.

[@maddie-ub3ze]

This combined with uniquenameosaurus’s rewrite are absolutely stellar omg

[@inari3298]

this is, definitely your best video, hands down!

[@nothajzl]

Damn, i remember being so invested in his story. It was probably the most captivating for me. And then… IT WENT NOWHERE!!! I’m not angry……………..

[@fofi444]

your brain power is unmatched omfg!!!!! amazing storytelling

[@FatherhoodAndFitness]

No idea how this only has 2.1k likes out of literally hundreds of thousands of views. You nailed it! Well done! 👌

[@AlexKwiatek]

You got me at the point where Bran finally becomes a knight like he always wanted

[@davidbaroi8492]

At 22:15 bro started cooking 🤯🤯🤯🤯

[@hannahforster4523]

Omg this was awesome, please make a 4h long video where you eventually put all your changes from all the videos in to one big rewrite beginning from season 5! I would watch that in one sitting, being thrilled and excited about this amazing payoff while also crying bc it never actually happend

[@mr.hincapie6015]

Man, I got goosebumps when you brought up Bran witnessing the RW. If TWOW ever comes up, I'd be satisfied with GRRM pulling out something along these lines. Again, this shows you that the plot points of the later seasons weren't the issue in the ending of the series, but rather the poor execution of Dumb & Dumber.

[@jimm60701]

I think you touched on, but ultimately missed a very important opportunity with this. If the route you were going here was to have Bran warg a dead person, and show hints towards the Lord of light.. i think you should go all in. Dont have bran learn "influencing the past is bad" have him simply learn that the night king is a threat if he's traveling earlier than a certain point. Have him travel to the past to learn and experiment, understanding that past events are fixed things he can't change, but can be involved in. Have him learn how the night king resurrects people, and have him experiment with it himself.. on derric dondarian. In my mind this makes the battle of winterfell a two parter. Part 1 is essentially what we got, right up until the night king swings his sword down and its blocked by an unseen sword. Part 2 skips back to bran saying he needs to go somewhere, and is bran exploring past events. His careful observation of the night king learning how to resurrect the dead. Bran trying and failing a few times to find the right magic to do so, he learns the reason the former apprentice took on the mind of the first white walker was to hijack the magic of the children. Bran can't do that, so he looks elsewhere, to a modern magic, and he finds dragons. We learn that bran interferes with the funeral of Khal Drogo, he becomes the intent behind its magic that allows Dany, not to survive being burned in the flames, but to be revived from her death in the flames. He draws power from the dragons in the pyre and this in turn awakens them. From the point on, Bran is drawing his resurrection magic from the dragons. We see a flicker of red in his eyes. We then move forward in the story, see bran successfully resurrect Berric Dondarian, explaining how Thoros supposedly did so without intent. We see other examples of bran experimenting with the magic, learning that much like the night king, warging into someone you have resurrected becomes much easier, as though they're bound to you, and we see a quick montage of him spreading prophecy in the same way the night king did, through seers and dreams, prophecies about the Prince who was promised... before finally seeing him stood above Jons corpse. Watching Melisandre trying to work her broken magic and faith to resurrect him, Bran simply raises hand, and Jon gasps. With that gasp we are back in Winterfell, brans warging eyes now burning red as fire instead of milky pale, and we follow the blade to see Jon, with the same eyes. Jon, previously unable to best the night king now stands there, warged by Bran, and the fight ensues as it did in your version. Bran taking advantage of the knowledge of better fighters, allowing him to finally overcome the night king. Jon is released, but disturbed, he feels betrayed, violated. He can't look bran in the eyes, and struggles to even find the peace of mind to celebrate his great victory. I think doing it this way helps in a couple ways, but the biggest is that it gives a weight to the prophecies. The Princes who was promised was Jon, but.. for all the prophecy came true, Jon was merely a tool, a sword for the one who was guiding those prophecies. It would also set up Jons choice to leave better. He's not just exiled to far north, he also doesn't want to be around Bran. Bran, also, happy to have a sword in the North, should the threat not truly be gone.

[@samuelault4723]

I really like this

[@niceshoot777]

Even if they only took 1/3 of this FIXING into the show it would be 200% better. We might not get a good show end and no Winds of Winter but this is a good compensation. Well done!

[@falconknight4964]

This had some truly amazing ideas that I WISH they had used in the show instead. Many channels may have covered how they’d rewrite the battle of winterfell, etc, but this is another video that makes me curious on your full take, it’s purely imaginative

[@sanjaykarthicks1226]

I really enjoyed the video. I found myself feeling different emotions while watching the video. Great writing. I would love a "Fixing Tyrion" video.

[@Gamespectives]

My only argument of Bran killing night king, is the Azor hai prophecy about ending the long winter night. Isn't it supposed to be Jon or Dany? The show talks about Azorhai at least couple times.

[@mohdishan3003]

One flaw i would say, giving the pupil ( night king ) all the evil side and no grey side at all. Morally grey characters are a trademark for GRRM and he wouldnt miss doing it to the main antagonist of asoiaf

[@kirk001]

I absolutely love it. Is there a reason, you stopped at making Ser Jorah's eyes red? It seems like it was a short detour to make Bran the true power behind the R'hllor, Lord of Light, which would make the dark pupil, the Great Other.

[@martino5742]

YOOOOOOOO this is absolute GAS⛽️ good shit man

[@CarloPrivat]

Omfg, i love the story idea you had. I wished HBO had hired you 8 years or so ago

[@razakhan23465]

One criticism. The Long Night needs to be long. Multiple battles. Multiple losses. Driving the living further South. Increasing the Army of the Dead. And the Night King's death shouldn't mean the death of all the White Walkers, just a majority of the wights. The rest of the White Walkers should still control their small divisions of the Army, and each must be taken out. There's a fanfic called "Ned Stark Lives" which does the best job I've seen of making the Long Night actually a long drawn out and desperate affair, while still maintaining military strategy and political intrigue (though those 2 are not on the level of GRRM)

[@Force_kin]

I love all of this except the worg into jorah, i think a more appropriate choice would have been beric dondarrion. It fits the red god theme, the death and resurrection theme, the swordsman theme etc. the only issue being beric would need a valyrian steel sword, but that could be setup earlier as well.

[@kieranaulak8654]

Unbelievably creative story telling but one thing I would change would be for Bran to warg into Jamie. Would be poetic for him to be the one to save Bran after pushing him out the window and would allow Jamie to be the unbelievable sword fighter that he was before he's right hand was chopped off.

[@leonlim007]

This makes so much more sense than whatever we saw...

[@Beatitat]

I’m going to psyop myself into believing this is how it ended. Thanks

[@emarino9805]

Incredible video!!!

[@Penguinz4LOLZ]

Wow! What an insanely well written story!

[@kareemelrefaay5300]

Anyone killing the night king other than jon snow would be idiotic as one wrong or unfulfilled prophecy is subverting expectation and could be a great surprise but ignoring 5 or 6 prophecies each one confirmed the other and all of them pointing to jon is just bad writing and that's why jon parents reveal is a big deal because it's like the last piece of the puzzle which removes any confusion about azhor ahai and showing that jon's moral and actions were always aligned with his destiny and his tragic life prepared and positioned him perfectly to fulfil his goal and destiny Lastly I think brann becoming an emotionless potato was a bit weird as he should be weird and depressed but brann stark dying in the cave didn't explain his demeanour especially when we saw the previous 3 eyed raven who held the burden for way longer than brann and no one could be drastically transformed in an instant no matter the circumstances

[@AnansiTheLibra]

Christ almighty this was miles better than what we got. I’m only halfway through and I’ll sign a petition for you to rewrite seasons 5-8.

[@e.vasileva5891]

Awesome. Bran was always my least fave POV, should I say even disliked POV, but this is amazing. You made his arc so cool and satisfying.

[@Yugigreg]

This is amazing

[@noegiard494]

11:59 isn't it common knowledge in Westeros that Daenys the Dreamer foresee the Doom, prompting Aenar to move the Targaryens to Dragonstone?

[@aakhun1498]

Bran influencing the past made me think of the Knight of the Laughing Tree and how Bran wanted to be a knight even just for a day. I also think Ser Jorah dying and then revived is possible since it also happened to Benjen Stark but they used dragon glass to prevent him from fully becoming a wight. Bran being the king will also allow him to nurture future three eyed ravens with ease.

[@caseyhart4999]

My only problem with the idea of Bran being the knight of the laughing tree is that I was always under the impression and there’s significant evidence to back this up that is that Lyanna is the knight of the laughing tree which is really cool imo.

[@SupportGamin2024]

Bran being king was dumb

[@calebpenny-kosser2029]

David and Dan are insane. They already had everyone hooked to the show due to the amazing dialogue and complex story telling of George. They didn’t need to keep fantasy elements to a minimum they needed to listen to George and not just think they can do everything better.

[@Orangelasagne]

Absolute masterpiece I’ve spread on TikTok to try blow this video up

[@AshimChawla]

10:45 the 3 eyed raven is not around 1000 years. his name is brynden rivers who was born around 100-150 years ago

[@sabrinaleedance]

Nah but Bran warging into the direwolfs in the past is an amazing idea how did 1 youtuber come up w 10x better writing than a whole ass professional team

[@JMQA1]

I disagree, an omniscient character is easy to write. D & D can write the story in anyway possible with any outcome they choose first, then add Bran in to guide the story down that path. The problem is, they abruptly had him announce his goal with no context.

[@KindSloth]

My god you just fixed 4 seasons. I demand a redo of seasons 5-8 with you directing!!

[@mariemaresch5463]

Instead of him warging into an undead Jorah, how about he wargs into an undead Jaime? Jaime could die somewhere before that (maybe while protecting brienne). I think it would be very poetic for Jaime to be the one to "save" Bran, when he was the one who pushed him off the tower.

[@darrenevanherison3441]

great idea. it would be really touching not only for the audience but also the characters, imagine how arya,sansa and the rest of the characters would react and at the same time jaime sacrificing himself brienne is really great cause brienne was one of the main reasons why his sense of honor (however if jaime gonna die protecting brienne then their love confession in episode 4 probably will done earlier, cause jaime and brienne will be more protective we each other and jaime's death tragic for brienne AND jaime/bran being the one to kill the night king makes him earned the titel Kingslayer HOWEVER instead of humliting title he will be remembered as the man who killed the night king (even tho it's bran warging into him it's still fells great thinking about it) and jaime's first kinglsaying saved an entire city, but this time his second kingslaying saved the entirity of Westeros.some book fans even believe jaime is the prince that is promise azor ahai. even thought this is a touching end for jaime's characther (or jaime's body should i say) i think we should keep him alive couse king's landing subplot. REMEMBER THE WILDFIRE THAT THE MAD KING WANTED TO USED TO BURN THE ENTIRE CIT OF KING'S LANDING IS STILL THERE AND IN THE BOOKS, THERE IS PROHECY WHERE CERSEI IS KILLED BY HER YOUNGER BROTHER. at first glance this "younger' brother might be tyrion, but many book fans believe it's jaime cuz he came out of the womb after cerseri and this could meen in the books cerseri become the "mad queen" (i could still be daenaery thougth) so jaime might have to save the king's landing a second time killing his twin. jaime had loved cercsei and shit on honor since book 1 but in book 3 and in the show after he lost his arm, jaime lost a part of himself and he must face his past trouma and become a more honorable man.

[@Tek3333]

Bran’s season 5 arc was truly like none other

[@bloodlust3602]

I think if we would keep the narrative of Arya killing the night king, we could make the evil three-eyed raven a past disciple of jaqen h'gar who went rogue, like arya. There could be a dialogue with Arya and jaquen in which he speaks of a student from long ago who became obsessed with the many-faced god, and tried to become this persona of death, ergo, he become the three-eyed raven to gain knowledge and becomes the night king to be the closest thing to death. And arya, with the training and bran with the knowledge, can both work hand in hand to defeat the night king

[@SupportGamin2024]

Arya killing the night king will always be stupid

[@Teratoma..]

This rewrite is pretty good, but I really wish people would stop quoting Bran when he says "Robert's rebellion was built on a lie." It wasn't. Lyanna's alleged abduction was far from the only thing that motivated a rebellion from half of the kingdoms. I swear people just forget that Aerys burned people in the throne room for fun, including a high lord and his heir, because Bran declared the rebellion as "built on a lie."

[@deec75]

I would love to watch your revised and very believable adaptation play out on the screen.