FNAF: SB REWRITTEN - CH 10 (AO3 WRITTEN VERSION AVAILABLE!)

[@kiwiqueen138]

Yay, our first real conversation with Vannie :) PS: Sorry for the early upload, if that messed up your schedule. There’s construction going on, and they’re going to shut the power down again today, so I wanted to be early instead of late :) Link to next episode: kzbin.info/www/bejne/aoazeIZ-rbl7h8U Link to previous episode: kzbin.info/www/bejne/l4GTm6GhfL6Ioac Link to full playlist: kzbin.info/aero/PLKMzqZUiHWUjzZj0jfJym1CTORp4rdEDD LINK TO WRITTEN VERSION: archiveofourown.org/works/45445291?view_full_work=true

[@icyferaligatr9908]

Oh boy this one was packed full. The conversation was tense yet oddly sad as Freddy had to talk to an invisible Vanny. And oh god her manipulative tendencies really shone through here. The flip from tired and stressed to angry and manipulative was definately noticable, maybe that wasn't really her? Not sure. And Go Freddy for being brave! Its sad that now hes stuck with her, but hopefully Monty can protect Gregory. Can't wait for the next part in a week! Icy-

[@Saltastical]

Made my snow day even better, love how you made Monty less of a "butt" in your take of this story.

[@TheSansationalSans]

This is getting good! Vanny was clearly manipulating Freddy and I am glad that he realized that, but she did use part of the truth. I wonder how Freddy is going to feel when he realized that Gregory actually did damage Chica and Roxy as badly as she said he did, just for very different motives. I also am excited to see how that fight goes, because as we learned last episode, Freddy wasn't at the door when Gregory comes back out. In his place were Chica, Roxy and Moon. I am also curious as to how Freddy will react to seeing Monty when they finally meet up again.

[@sindraile5128]

Ah yes, emotional manipulation. A concoction of truth and deceit. Delicious.

[@squiddyflip3039]

Vanessa's manipulation was so well written- WOAH!

[@lomaishaumichelle7848]

God Vanny is so intimidating in this I hate her but at the same time I’m intrigued by her character AAAAAAAA I LOVE IT I had to just stop watching this for a while just to get myself to calm down from her attempts at gaslighting Fredrick“FiveNights”Fazbear sakkakk

[@cyanide_crow7970]

Let's go I'm actually awake for this time to see what horrifying things happen

[@Rais-Codex]

Oh, Vanny getting purple paint on her is so ironic... if your retelling still has her posseed by Glitchtrap.

[@lexxblep-groundzero1369]

Oh my god my heart is aching Vanessa why would you hurt my boy I feel so bad I don't know why but I feel like Vanessa is misunderstood I haven't finished the series yet but oh my god

[@Monroecookie24]

*Vanessa tries using gaslighting on freddy* *Is kinda effective* (Ok, besides the Joke, i'm REALLY IN YOUR VANESSA! Although she si clearly in the wrong here, her voice makes me feel that theres more happening that she lets on, and maybe, that she deep down still cares for the animatronics. Though is still linda toxic about it right now. A love her some much.) (And sorry if theres errors, English is not My first language)

[@mythicaldrawer7072]

Jeeze. Victor really had some bad kids. Okay, for starters. What happened to Vanessa from being kind and loving to the animatronics to cold and distant? Was it because of her father's death? (Taking a guess) Is she secretly a sociopath/psychopath? What did she mean by other times? How many kids went missing?! DANG IT KIWI! YOU MAD GENIUS!! Okay, so gathering up the info we know, Vanessa is doing the test(?) on kids for something (Possibly remnant.), but what for? is it to make herself immortal or to bring a loved one back? Either way, it's not gonna end well since we saw both experiences for being a ghost possessing an animatronic and a ghost possessing a corpse, since it could be agony to go through.

[@JoshuaA1307]

I think she is planning on making these kids “missing people” as a test to see how her beloved brother would be confronted by the press, making it basically a plan of revenge where she will take the full ownership of the franchise while humiliating her brother down to the pits of hell 😂😂😂😂😂

[@RudyTheCannibal]

Yeah, Vanessa is likely a sociopath and Jeremy is a narcissist.

[@bloopstheduck]

How come kiwiqueen 13 has 77k subscribers yet this video only has 108 likes.and 766 people who watched this didn't like the video

[@overworldgames7508]

i hope freddy dont get his memorys erase i hope he ran away.

[@enderniffler628]

Woo woo! New chapter let’s gooo!

[@wildwinter1971]

NOOOOOOO THE CLIFF HANGERS

[@BaneOfMyExistence1929]

In math class rn :D Ps: YIPPEE

[@Edit_crzy]

OMG YESS

[@cycloneabsol9405]

Hey, lore fans! I made a document for the lore! docs.google.com/document/d/13cv5vH3MLErtsKX_7d_D6WB4ZJBWIHDYqvvpW-eNXkg/edit?usp=sharing

[@agoodfriendtoyou6985]

I have the answer to the last lingering question, Aka what happened to Foxy. Roxanne was “Foxy”, she’s trans. If you look for my comment on the prologue, kiwi stated such in a reply.

[@mythicaldrawer7072]

heck ya!

[@cycloneabsol9405]

@@agoodfriendtoyou6985 Oh, awesome! Thanks! (And btw I do have comments turned on for the doc, just not editing)