FNAF: SB REWRITTEN - CH 18 (AO3 WRITTEN VERSION AVAILABLE!)

[@kiwiqueen138]

Yay, we got another sort of “break” chapter before things get crazy again in the finale. We just need to watch Moon and Gregory talk while also getting a better feel of how Moon’s mind works, as well as his father/daughter relationship with Vanessa. Sorry this one doesn’t have action, that wasn’t really my intention with this one :) *Also, because I know people are going to ask, here’s an explanation as to why Vanessa didn’t go after Moon the same way she went after the others:* Even though she knows him personally (and would know exactly what he’d be triggered by), there will be no way Vanessa could get away from his security mode. Even if she DID bully him, there’s still a 90% chance that she’ll get caught anyway, since his problems are centered around being paranoid of people trying to hurt his kids, so… anything Vanessa said to him about his issues *wouldn’t actually distract him from his task* , and probably just make him even more encouraged to take her down. Vanessa knows this, and has decided to not push her luck :) Link to written version: archiveofourown.org/works/45445291?view_full_work=true (Currently updated with this episode’s chapter) Link to next episode: kzbin.info/www/bejne/iJDUfJuXZpxrrLM Link to previous episode: kzbin.info/www/bejne/l6PGm6Jpo5iVpaM Link to full playlist: kzbin.info/aero/PLKMzqZUiHWUjzZj0jfJym1CTORp4rdEDD

[@mythicaldrawer7072]

Wait, Finale is already upon us?!? I thought this was gonna go on longer (Or maybe the rest of the chapters is the prologue). Either way didn't expect it to get close to the ending this soon!

[@ThienNguyen-in6gx]

Wait! Finale Finale or finale of this section? Or part of the finale.

[@matteov3195]

After the finale, can you make animated versions of each chapter.

[@kiwiqueen138]

@@matteov3195 Sorry but no, that would be an unnecessary amount of extra work to get the same product

[@matteov3195]

@@kiwiqueen138 ok, see you soon

[@JTBJacksdeadasschannel]

“Ten year old boy at large” is the best way to describe Security Breach. Edit: god damn Sun is a badass(haha cringe comment)

[@Demon-egg-roll]

The absolute lengths sun and moon would go to for a child is more then some parents I LOVE THEMMMMM❤❤❤❤

[@anentirecircus186]

Moon sighting!! Moon sighting!! My favorite, I love him!! I love how desperate Moon is to try and find ANY way to deny the fact that Vanessa is up to no good. He really can't handle the idea that his little girl is doing this, poor guy. It even seems like he KNOWS he's wrong, he just doesn't want to admit it. Because he still views Vanessa as a kid, HIS kid. Thats so sweet and so sad. Gregory biting back made me grin though. Hes scared, tired, and confused, but he's still not helpless. He's gonna find Freddy and James and absolutely no one will stop him. I hope he stays safe this time ha. The reports section got me tho, the mental image of Sun beating the absolute hell out of this man who endangered one of his kids has me weirdly :) Yes go king fuck em uuuup I love Sun and Moon both so very much and the way you write them both has me ecstatic. Im absolutely terrified of what will happen next and cant wait. (Btw sorry for long comment thats basically just repeating whats in the video, idk how else to structure a thought lol. I liked it tho it made me :D)

[@ginnogianni1980]

Moon is literally a modern fnaf theorist

[@Analog_Anarchist]

Angst on all sides (Moon you are not crazy, and please get Gregory to CPS), Sassy Gregory is back (also bravery! So proud of him), DJ is still on our side (he is adorable), and RESCUE MISSION YES!!!

[@johnicthecronic3197]

DAM DANYL!!! the part where sun was defending the kid was so COOL I could practically see it myself :0 your story is so dam gooood!!! I love everything about this :]

[@lavendertoastmoth]

FUCK EM UP SUNNY, FUCK EM UP!!! Lives this chapter, loved to see more about moon

[@swiftyoooo]

The fact that the animatronics can feel pain 😨

[@DeadlyD05]

The setup for the finale was awesome, but the main blast to center field was that last (redacted for spoilers). I saw that and was like, "Wait... WHAT?!?" This has been an absolutely awesome journey and I'm pumped for this entirely. Keep it up and focus on staying healthy. Take as much time as you need.

[@STARS_SHIMMERS]

THE SCREAM I SCREAMT WHEN I SAW THIS CAME OUT IS UNHOLY i love this series so much!! thank you for making this series, its my favorite to watch!!

[@mythicaldrawer7072]

SUN AND MOON A GOOD BOY! Still wondering why Jermey is an absolute Asshole to them.

[@felipeamezquita7827]

The fact you don't have more subscribers is unbelievable to me

[@ultimatedanganronpafan869]

Moon is so sweet...

[@cycloneabsol9405]

When you say the finale is coming soon, does that mean it'll be like the SU:F thing where you end it but then have like 20 chapters of epilogue? Cuz I remember you saying that this thing will have 44 chapters.

[@kiwiqueen138]

Yes, I’ll have a sort of ‘epilogue’ fourth act after the final fight. The purpose of the fourth act is to tie up all the loose ends, because it’s too messy to wrap up everyone’s character arcs in the middle of a battle lol

[@cycloneabsol9405]

@@kiwiqueen138 Alright, good! I just wanted to make sure the story wasn't over way sooner than I expected lol.

[@Whipspider]

This was epic! Well, nor for pain or well, pain. I empathize with anxiousness, and I want to see where this goes next! Finale? So, finale for the first half? Or is this it! (;

[@Alice_The_Person3707]

OH MY GOODNESS I COMPLETELY FORGOT THIS WAS POSTING TODAY I WAS AT A FAMILY FUN FEST IM SORRY :(

[@Wolfric_Rogers]

Very excited to see how this ends!

[@wildwinter1971]

ALRIGHT SUN!

[@lexxblep-groundzero1369]

Gosh dang it I don't even like a moon but I feel so bad for him He's like a protective older brother he wants everyone to be safe so much so that he's driving himself crazy Also the fact that he's having an identity crisis over the chip how many of his thoughts were truly his and how much was it the chip The paranoia it's so jarring and very terrifying

[@lexxblep-groundzero1369]

You know this is just indicative of the entirety of security breeds just 10-year-old boy at large that is absolutely beautiful 20:44

[@Tarpick]

I love your videos

[@Thebluemamott]

MUUUUSIC MAAAAA-

[@Snowie_blossom]

Cool video 🤯

[@dylanmeah938]

Great job

[@MosticalAnimates]

I like Steven universe

[@intothewoodsatdark]

Same bro

[@graynight3478]

Afrer this is done,can you do a SVTFOE rewritten? The last 2 seasons was so awful

[@kiwiqueen138]

Sorry but no, I’m not into that show and don’t wanna watch it either (because most of the things that people argued about were ‘ship’ related, and I’m not really interested in romance drama, so I decided not to touch that fandom lmao) But if you actually like that show, I encourage you to make a Rewrite of it yourself. It doesn’t have to specifically be an audiobook form like this, but if you want the story to change, then go ahead and do it! :D Someone who actually likes that show would be much better at rewriting it than I would lol

[@astrumcat64.mp4]

I MISS GREGORY

[@kiwiqueen138]

He’s in this episode, don’t worry 😅

[@astrumcat64.mp4]

​@@kiwiqueen138 YES I AM EATING GOOD TODAY THANK YOU KIWI 🎉🎉🎉

[@whisper_ishere518]

OMG ALREADY

[@Mr.encore]

Why did you say finale you said there where 40 chs so it doesn't make sense

[@kiwiqueen138]

We have the fourth act of the story after the final battle stuff. The purpose of the fourth act is to tie up loose ends and show the characters recovering from what happens on the finale, because it would be too messy to shove in a bunch of character development in the middle of a fight :)

[@Mr.encore]

Oh ok understandable

[@Lizzy_Stories09]

Mooon!!!!!