FNAF: SB REWRITTEN - CH 11 (AO3 WRITTEN VERSION AVAILABLE!)

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KiwiQueen 13

Жыл бұрын

Link to written version: archiveofourown.org/works/454...

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@kiwiqueen138 Жыл бұрын

FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT …Also, whoops, sorry about 37:43 I was kind of on a time crunch while putting this episode together, so that mistake just slipped through. Too late now tho :( Link to next episode: kzbin.info/www/bejne/d3q8eZetmdp_nJI Link to previous episode: kzbin.info/www/bejne/moTMpaqdrLuFhck Link to full playlist: kzbin.info/aero/PLKMzqZUiHWUjzZj0jfJym1CTORp4rdEDD LINK TO WRITTEN VERSION: archiveofourown.org/works/45445291?view_full_work=true

@BlueTails2828boom Жыл бұрын

Thanks

@icyferaligatr9908 Жыл бұрын

OH GOD THIS PART WAS AMAZING!!!! The ending fight was straight up amazing and everybody finally getting their chips removed is awesome to see. Hopefully with everybody's help, they'll be able to handle Vannessa. I only wish that Monty had more to do with the fight, trying to reason with Moon and the others with Freddy. But I hope they'll all get more screen time with dialogue. This is an interesting direction though, having them basically turn from enemies to...well mot enemies. And now Vannessa and a seemingly missing Music man are the only obvious threats at large. BUT ONWARD TO ACT THREE WOOOOOOOOO!!!! -Icy

@Mr.encore Жыл бұрын

Ok I hope at the end of the rewrite Jeremy gets fired for good for what he's done and not realize that Vanessa is the one that had the possion chips on the glamrock amniotics and yey I hope he gets fired

@lithaline1726 Жыл бұрын

Me when Moon shouted

@jinny-zander 11 ай бұрын

Bro I teared up at this episode-

@Alice_The_Person3707 Жыл бұрын

For some reason for a split second I thought that the clicking of the hooks here: 37:58 was moon loading a gun XD

@cyanide_crow7970 Жыл бұрын

I've been sitting here for four hours trying to put together words to describe how cool I thought this chapter was

@johnc._9822 Жыл бұрын

Did not expect moon doing Tentacle "Surgery" on Toxy and Chica to be the way to save them but here we are.

@pinkolizabeth 11 ай бұрын

15:44 crackery stared in Hoover as her working arm reached in -Captions

@mythicaldrawer7072 Жыл бұрын

The unchiping process was fast....and there is still 33 chapters left......Somethings gonna go wrong.

@rat38 Жыл бұрын

definitely gonna go wrong lmao

@TVBug_ Жыл бұрын

I zoned out for one minute then hearing: "FREDDY!!!!" Scared the fuck out of me Also this tickles my brain in the best fucking way

@GallexyCat Жыл бұрын

Heck yeah, I've been waiting for this! This chapter was so awesome and captivating, I'm so glad the chips have been removed! It was also nice to see Moon realize his mistake and immediately go to help. I hope Roxy and Chica are somewhat similar, but I'm sure there will be some resentment for what Gregory did. Either way, I can't wait to see how everything plays out!

@enderniffler628 Жыл бұрын

WOOOOO! Amazing chapter Kiwi! Can’t wait for the next ep!

@cycloneabsol9405 Жыл бұрын

DAM IT I'M OUT OF TOWN WITHOUT FREE TIME UNTIL SUNDAY I'm sure it's an awesome chapter tho!

@CassetteTapestry Жыл бұрын

IM BINGING THE PLAYLIST BUT OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS REWRITE!!! 50 CHAPTERS OF IT(I think? You said in chapt.6 you had 44 chapters planned) SO COOL! I have a few questions! How does Gregory know Vanessa? I mean he's never been here before but it seems like he's known her for at least a little while? Is it cause he stowed away a few hours in the day and she kept trying to find him? I thought this was awesome too! The descriptions and the awesome fan(???)art AUGGHHH!!!!! I LOVE ITTTTT!!! YOU ARE SO TALENTED I REMEMBER WAITING FOR THE SU REWRITES AND THIS JSUT PROVES TO ME YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER AND ARTIST DHFJDNFNND I MEAN IT WAS ALREADY PROVED WITH SU BUT YEAH I JUST HSKFKDJD!!!!!!♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

@kiwiqueen138 Жыл бұрын

Thanks! And you’re right about Gregory already having a run-in with Vanessa, before the first chapter he tried to get in a few times and witnessed a lot of Vanessa doing really suspicious stuff or saying things that didn’t really match up :)

@CassetteTapestry Жыл бұрын

@@kiwiqueen138 Ohhhhhhh! Thanks so much for the clarification! :]]]