FNAF: SB REWRITTEN - CH 19 (AO3 WRITTEN VERSION AVAILABLE!)

Link to written version: archiveofourow...

[@kiwiqueen138]

Here’s a fresh steaming pot of angst for yall, hope I did well lol Link to written version: archiveofourown.org/works/45445291?view_full_work=true (Currently updated with today’s chapter!) Link to next episode: kzbin.info/www/bejne/oIHXoYN4pt2gnZY Link to previous episode: kzbin.info/www/bejne/rHjHXoCAjpx5n5o Link to full playlist: kzbin.info/aero/PLKMzqZUiHWUjzZj0jfJym1CTORp4rdEDD

[@cyanide_crow7970]

My FBI agent watching me open a doc titled "fictional characters I would fight in a parking lot" and adding 'Jeremy Miller Security Breach Rewrite' to the bottom

[@swiftyoooo]

Take me with you i wanna beat him into a curb

[@Tarpick]

Same

[@cyberspectral]

What about Vanessa ?

[@mythicaldrawer7072]

I really want to say this quote to Freddy and the gang about Bonnie's death because they seem to need it. "Don’t cry because it’s over. Smile because it happened" Is Jermey this much of a dick that he won't read emails from his own sister or is there something else going on? Also....I think Vanny is loosing it in the messages a bit.

[@wildwinter1971]

Kiwi pouring her heart and soul in the report

[@taniatokustar7737]

Funfact: this story wouldnt have happend is everyone here talked to a terapist

[@sindraile5128]

Yeah. But Jeremy would probably never allow them to see one. Given his... rules.

[@mjtubeme]

😅 I feel like most problems in stories can be fixed with little therapy. But then we wouldn't have a story 😅

[@malinok4889]

I JUST WANNA HUG THEM ALL THEY'VE BEEN THROUGH SO MUCH I CAN'T

[@cycloneabsol9405]

Vanny: I'm not torturing kids for no reason Me: You're torturing kids with a reason? Vanny: I have a reason Me: wait WHAT?!?!

[@Dimonds456]

FINALLY CAUGHT BACK UP WOOOOOOO HOLY SHIT YOUR VOICE ACTING, THE SOUND EFFECTS, THE MUSIC CHOICES, THE ARTWORK, THE STORY, THE DRAMA, THE SUSPENSE, I JUST- HOLY SHIT???? I've been here since SUF Rewrite first kicked off, and I fucking loved that series. I knew the SB Rewrite would be just as good, but holy shit man! This is incredible! Can't wait to see how it all shakes out! 👏👏👏👏

[@sindraile5128]

*Listens to the post emails of all chapters* Well, I cant really blame Vanessa for snapping. Seems like she's been/being emotionally abused by her "dear brother" billionaire from the looks and sounds of it.

[@andreavelazquez2025]

Got damm, jeremy really is making everything worse, isnt him?. This episode was AWESOME. though i do have some questions: 1) do the staff bots are ... Really really alive? Like they arent like the glamrocks but it seems that they have some conscience, like. They can feel like the glamrocks? Or are more like animals in some sense? 2) You probably cant answer this because spoliers but vanessa was the one with the idea to replace bonnie with monty? Because the message kinda imply that? 3) jeremy will appear somewhere down the line? Beacuse im reaaaaly curious about what he thinks of well... Al this xd (if you cant answer ths etheir is ok) Again, AMAZING JOB, i cant wait for the next episode.

[@kiwiqueen138]

1: The staff bots aren’t really alive, especially not in the way that the glamrocks are. They do have basic self preservation, but there’s definitely a difference between them and the glamrocks (based on how the glamrocks were made) 2: I can’t elaborate because of spoiler reasons, but you’re close :) 3: You’ll have to wait and see :)

[@Alphetawoofious]

... i truly cant express my immortal gratitude to this channel

[@DeadlyD05]

All I can say is "Hot damn!" That was awesome! Definitely looking forward to the next entry.

[@Undydamon]

Damn, a new SB Rewritten part AND a new Sao abridged episode on the same day??? It must be my birthday

[@stilllookingforlamps5904]

Finally caught back up and I am SO excited to see what happens next! This has been so wonderful to listen to in the background of working on cosplays, thank you so much for making it!

[@squiddyflip3039]

Oh my I had only seen the written version so I didn't hear the last part after the last email. KIWI! That was some 500 star acting!

[@Thunderdransword]

This video shows more emotion then any big budget Disney live action remake I swear the fans make better content then the companies themselves

[@swiftyoooo]

i find it funny how you keep reiterating afton is dead LMFAO

[@Alice_The_Person3707]

Hey I have a question. What color were Roxy’s eyes before she stole the staff bots eyes?

[@kiwiqueen138]

Her eyes were still green, she matched the staff bot’s eye color in hopes that no one would notice

[@Alice_The_Person3707]

@@kiwiqueen138 oh, that makes sense now lol. Wait, how long did she have the eyes?

[@swiftyoooo]

theyre finding the animatronic behind vanny soon, arent they oooh im excited

[@calebartboy7620]

Wow that was a lot, can’t wait for the next part

[@dedboy8113]

I have a hunch that jerremy is manipulating vanny

[@Alice_The_Person3707]

Oh I was just watching your Vanessa reference sheet lol

[@cycloneabsol9405]

Hey, quick question: should we know what Afton's "discoveries" are, or is that a spoiler? I'm not super clear on how much of the modern lore comes from before Fnaf 6, and you've said that it won't be Remnant, so I'm not really sure.

[@kiwiqueen138]

(Sorry I took a while for me to reply, I completely forgot to come back later and answer lol) Afton’s ‘discovery’ was kind of the basic idea that ghosts exist in their world, and can be anchored to an object based on how they died - Deaths that are agonizing or give motivation for revenge (like the missing children’s incident) means that the ghost can manifest itself and effect the physical things around them. I called all that ‘discoveries’, mostly because in their world the concept of ghosts seemed as fictional as they are in our universe, so it was a big deal that Afton had real, physical proof that all those old supernatural concepts were actually true, and could be controlled

[@cycloneabsol9405]

​@@kiwiqueen138 Ahhh, OK, thanks. I was a little confused since Afton and Henry figured out a damn lot of stuff. (And it's fine, I get that you have stuff going on, and in most school districts it's finals season lol)

[@cycloneabsol9405]

Damn. I have nothing else to say, just... Damn.

[@felipeamezquita7827]

Hell yea finally

[@lexxblep-groundzero1369]

Oh my God everyone is so miserable I'm so sad the angst angst angst. Everyone here feels so bad for what they've done Bonnie Freddie oh my god everyone is under so much pressure. Everyone here is so sad. I feel so sad and I honestly feel bad for Vanessa having to listen to all this.... This is so upsetting I feel so upset right now Vanessa how dare you KIWI HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME CRY This is literally the best series I've ever watched in my entire life this is the best thing I've ever watched.

[@lexxblep-groundzero1369]

Now that is interesting I just watched this episode and I was able to gather what happened In the ending part lore bit you know. Vanessa was forced to watch after the animatronics checking their emotional states and kind of just watching them being alive And like I think I understood why she was slowly being driven insane watching a dysfunctional family from a far feels gritting seeing as they're not able to communicate it's hard to understand why they won't communicate sometimes but a dysfunctional family that dysfunction prevents communication from happening But of course Vanessa doesn't truly understand that at the moment communication with a dysfunctional family isn't easy and she believes it is But now that I've watched the next episode there's so much context around it and why she's in this position The fact that Jeremy was punishing Vanessa for sticking up for the animatronics and believe me they deserve to be treated like people Instead of taking her advice Jeremy decided to put her on a task that he knew would drive her crazy. He knew that Vanessa would lose sympathy for the animatronics if she just had to listen to them arguing bickering being dysfunctional Jeremy's a piece of shit like dear God I hate him I have no sympathy for him I want him to die

[@qusaimazen-hi8xs]

why did this make me wana hug you

[@gnarlyagent594]

Incredable

[@mrdolphin262]

What happened to the SU content?

[@Tarpick]

Jeremy is a terrible brother

[@mjtubeme]

Wow that made me physically uncomfortable. Great job!!! 😁

[@Glitch_Shift]

Let me out 😳

[@BaconAbe]

This version of Vannessa is very let me repeat VERY punchable, and I mean wound up haymake to the face into a bookshelf kind of punchable.

[@nguyenlethenhan3593]

Helle peridot:)

[@vehico-kvn12]

Are you going to make any more transformers videoe