"For Always" award winning horror story by Sakinah Jonas-Mawji ― Chilling Tales for Dark Nights

[@spnchick4438]

This guy is freakin creepy. He's actually content and happy she's like a living doll and completely dependent upon him. He's not in love with her, but rather, he's in love with the idea of being in love with her. He just sees her as a possession. If he was truly in love with her, he'd want all of her, mind, body, and soul. If she's trapped inside her body, that would be a fate worse than death.

[@columbo908]

Preachin' to the choir mate.

[@SuperArea31]

The narrator absolutely nailed this story! Well done.

[@neofromplanethell]

I love this channel because we get to listen to great narrators and great stories, not just some crappy creepypasta stories like Jeff the Killer/cliche/pokemon crap.

[@Suguri]

Scariest thing about this story is how many comments sympathize with the narrator. Holy hell, people.

[@blackspider4universepeace.315]

THESE are chilling teals from the dark side of life thank you so much.👍👍👍👍☑

[@grahammckoy9102]

Freaking phenomenal. I rate this in my top three favorite stories from you guys. Give the narrator a raise. P.S. I know its a tough task, but could you compile all the case file stories into a video?

[@chillingtalesfordarknights]

Graham McKoy Thanks for the kind words, Graham. Regarding the "case file stories," could you direct us to a URL where they are all featured? We'll take a look.

[@grahammckoy9102]

Chilling Tales For Dark Nights I believe MrCreepyPasta has them in a playlist.

[@burntblonde2925]

Great story, very descriptive! James, your narration was perfect! Really enjoyed it!

[@Twulfbynight]

That's f'ed up in so many ways. I actually got freaking chills man. Yeesh!

[@thearticulateautistic]

One of the best creepypastas ever.

[@juliashenandoah3965]

Camping can be really beautyful - as long as an expensive caravan or camping trailer is used ;) That`s like driving an expensive Japanese luxury apartment into the middle of the wilderness and enjoy nature (but without any hardships, like exposure to rain cold or heat, no spiders and insects, uncomfortable sleeping on the ground in a tent, etc)

[@0Lottee0]

I..was not expecting that ending o__o

[@Mayeur000Donz]

This was really creepy and very nicely written, though his reasoning for not taking her to the hospital was kind of dumb... I mean, the facility never even knew they were there? Why would they go looking for them? ... or was that the intention? Is he just trying to make excuses, so he can keep her as she is?

[@Twulfbynight]

If I had to guess I'd say he was just making excuses. He's obviously a few rounds short of a full clip.

[@ferret495]

I think you are missing the point, he wanted to control her, this was perfect for him, why do you not get that ?

[@Mayeur000Donz]

@@ferret495 Prolly because it's been ten years and I don't remember what this story is, heh

[@NoMoreNever]

What a posh, spoiled brat that guy was. It makes me want to punch him for the whiny tone in his voice alone! But I got to hand it to the narrator for making this character come to life.

[@tseotet]

Thanks! I dunno about posh but I hope my day-to-day voice doesn't make people want to punch me!

[@sherllymentalism4756]

tseotet your the narrator? if so. I think your voice literally the best crazy voice I have ever heard its so normal its creepy!

[@tseotet]

Project:Void I had a lot of fun with this one. Perhaps I am really crazy!

[@sherllymentalism4756]

James Cleveland na, What are the chances, that we are Both crazy! lol

[@tseotet]

Project:Void That seems likely!

[@cemeterycherrykiller]

When I asked my girlfriend to listen to this, she told me to call her my "for always" .. Just sharing. My favorite story thou .. :)

[@TheMostHigh13]

The narration on this was good. A different style of writing here; makes this guy seem as crazy as Norman Bates. And I need that drug before I chose a wife.

[@Real1Gaming]

Amazing story, great narration. High quality stuff as always on this channel

[@willfultoday]

great story. very unexpected ending. which is refreshing. get tired of predictable stuff.

[@ObscureDomain]

I really love the channel, for once some real voice acting and not just amateurs.

[@benrumble383]

For real/for REALLLLLLZZZZZ.

[@jackmiller2404]

I can definitely see why he thought she was so wonderful. However I can’t imagine what the hell she ever saw in this creepy, whiny little bitch. He didn’t love anything about her that made her who she was. Made the story really good unsettling though! It was great. Well read as well!

[@erikponciano]

the audio is too low.

[@henrywebster9529]

Brilliant writing and narration.

[@Cordelia-again]

Excellent narration and an enjoyable story.

[@crystal.hangovergang]

Wow. Just...wow. that's all I got,lol!

[@moondancekid1]

GREAT narration.

[@Thomas_Winters]

what scared me most was the ad afterwards...

[@LoyMoneyBoy]

great story yes but the audio here on this ones is low for me, even with my computer settings maxed, youtube max, and speakers turnned up, it only sounds low medium, but even with that problem for me, it didnt stop me from enjoying the story

[@upomamoitro4874]

Awesome...I loved the story 😮

[@GMUK22]

great story. I really loved the whole 'something creepy in the woods' aspect to your story, I love tales where unsuspecting, usually young folk go into the woods and encounter something scary. I think you put a nice twist on the tale though with exactly *what* it was they discovered, and then what happened after. Brilliant characterisation as well, I felt you really described and built up the two characters which made them very real to me, and made their motives and behaviour believable and the story all the more chilling. The narrator does a great job too, perfect voice and tone for this story.

[@PumpkinBladez]

@Macabremalifica: That's a very interesting comment, and I would have replied directly to you, but the replies on your comment appear 'disabled'. I did consider some of the things you raise when I was writing it. If you listen to the narration or read the writing, the character believes in relationships lasting forever. This is covered at the beginning when he discusses his father. If he takes her to the hospital, and word gets out, the people from the facility could come looking for them. If he takes her to a private doctor and gets her 'cured', she has control of her own life again and can leave him. If he keeps her as she is, she can never leave him. In your head its the dungeon you mention - in mine it's a very emotionally and mentally disturbed man retaining his girlfriend, who he believes he is in love with, so he can take care of her 'for always.' He never wanted his girlfriend to leave him, and now she couldn't even if she wanted to. That's why he keeps her as she is.The clue was when he tells you the drug has really helped their relationship. His girlfriend lets him take care of her now and doesn't need her independence anymore. Thanks for your feedback. :)

[@ava.artemis]

What…?!?! 😂 Great narration 👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽 That story started out well but really took a turn!!

[@The.cluttered.cottage]

Sooooo goood thanks for this

[@jesterevilyn]

I love this story. I think it has the creepiest ending of any story I have listened to yet. What else does he do for her? -evilyn

[@jessecornett2597]

he dresses ur up every afternoon for tea an crumpets, darling...

[@PumpkinBladez]

Glad you liked it Evilyn. :) And thank you Jesse for the awesome narration of it. You brought it to life just as it was in my head when I wrote it. :)

[@jessecornett2597]

Sakinah Jonas-Mawji Yes ma'am... But I can only take credit for production. Mr James Cleveland was the narrator and you are correct, he knocked this on out of the park (to borrow and old baseball expression). You deserve the kudos for this gloriously lovely, dark tome, though. Thank you for providing us with such great material to work with.

[@PumpkinBladez]

Jesse Cornett Thank you. :) It was a lot of fun to write. Please thank Mr Cleveland for me, and to all of you involved.

[@tseotet]

Sakinah Jonas-Mawji I had a lot of fun narrating it :)

[@dantespimp]

Really loved this story a lot. I always get annoyed by those idiots who run into danger or the haunted house or in the secret hidden facility, even when their friends/lovers/family tell them not to. But there they go anyway, running straight toward danger like dumb-asses. They either get themselves killed or, worse, the people trying to help them. So yes, I enjoyed this story very much because of the slight turn of events. :)

[@lanadutcher6896]

Really good.

[@DrusillaDragonrose]

This is sweet in a demented sort of way.

[@gamingpride1332]

Can you guys do some more contest written story

[@chillingtalesfordarknights]

GamingPride We plan on it! Any favorites so far?

[@gamingpride1332]

I kinda liked milk teeth and terminal was pretty creepy. Love your channel btw and keep up your great work

[@sindarak386]

That was a really good story.

[@PumpkinBladez]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

[@NomadicWanderer11]

I admit I would probably be curious like the girl was. However, I probably would have stopped at the fence. As for the people on the bus, I would have liked to have known what was wrong with them or what they were doing there.

[@jacksondavidsargent]

Jeez. This guy would not stop complaining. If I were her I wouldn't have even taken him on the trip in the first place.

[@AGC517]

Good stuff....

[@Piledriver86]

The really sick part is that this is exactly what a lot of guys would want.

[@splo1nger909]

Awwwwww a nice love story

[@greenskull3384]

So this guy's supposed to be in love with her, yet he decides to leave her paralyzed for life in his basement and have his way with her whenever just cuz going to the hospital would raze to many questions? Bullshit!

[@laurahenriksen19]

Volume very low I can't hear properly unfortunately!

[@morriganravenmist9889]

I couldn't hear nothing, turned it up as high as it could and just got louder background noise, shame as reading some comments it sounds like a really good one too!!! Gutting.

[@jacoblucias5686]

im at 7:06 and somehow think this is a slenderman story based on the camping trip and him talking to an anonymous (at this point) figure thanking him for the camping trip

[@susieohanlon7715]

Could have definitely been LOUDER. Maybe next time????

[@MrChrispy1234]

awwwwwwwe the father

[@wishdreamwatcer7-24trialsa4]

AWSOME STORY, where can I get that Drug from ??? Lol

[@thomaslowe1744]

Sounds like she got a great husband.

[@5TailFox]

No knife? You ALWAYS take a good knife.

[@myzjellybelly]

Wow, this took an unexpected turn towards the mid-end. O_O

[@michaelnerio8279]

that was fuckn twisted !!

[@alejandrozapata6286]

Interesting variation on the creepy, possessive male creepypasta. Rather than going through the typical gory and deluded (well, the protagonist is still somewhat deluded) stalker tale with an unreliable narrator, this story proves itself horrifying by establishing a real relationship between its characters(although told from just one perspective), riddled with understandable differences and frustrations, that reveals itself nightmarish by the decisions the man takes at the end. Just think of how many real people (how many men) would go through that road if given the chance, and what does that say about the way that we view love.

[@Rafael_Fuchs]

i don't know if this was said before but it's a tad quiet, other than that it was an epic reading

[@sophietucker316]

Awe that's so sad my god at the end he also sounds like a psychopath but still my god that's sooooo sad still

[@catlovercami717]

thats not love, dude

[@TabiaJEdwards]

🔥

[@KDB349]

That was Wierd as hell I honestly don't know how to respond to the ending. Honestly if my friend was injected by some crazy syringe i would take to her to the hospital and not go super crazy bonkers like the guy did. Regardless if she liked me or not I would have wanted her to get better and oh back to her family.

[@XViRuSX2012]

That was some ending

[@evandavis2386]

y is this so quiet?

[@Fidgety_fugu]

Can someone point me to the video where a daycare worker (female voice) had a baby she didn't want to give to a man but was told to by the father over a video conference? ( sorry for lack of specifics!)

[@ntolman]

It's called "Daycare"

[@Fidgety_fugu]

Thank you so much.

[@ferret495]

Wow glad my ex husband never found that drug 🤯. .No Seriously

[@spiralbluesun]

"Broken Heart Syndrome"...as in the same "Broken Heart Syndrome" that "killed" Padme in Star Wars Ep. III?

[@Offshoreorganbuilder]

Sounds like the ideal relationship. (There's nothing worse than a 'feisty' woman!) Thanks.

[@oren1305]

Well, the only way you're really going to find someone, anyone, who is not at least a little assertive is pretty much lifeless. Besides, this chick didn't sound 'feisty' to me; she sounded emotionally abusive. Best to stay away from those types. Nice tie videos by the way. :)

[@Offshoreorganbuilder]

***** Agreed!

[@MadHestia]

Offshoreorganbuilder That woman isn't "feisty". She's stupid. She's not even a real character. Her only function is to make bad decisions to move the story forward.

[@oren1305]

MadHestia Yup.

[@ataurusinabookshop2063]

Damn framing devices in creepypastas always scare me more than the actual story...but couldn't Edmond or Edmund's father or grandfather just kill themselves and not include their children?

[@themumblingdumpling2838]

(spoilers) The symptoms sound kinda like African sleeping sickness to me... To be honest, I think the guy should have just driven her to the hospital. But that'd be boring I guess.

[@barbariumTV]

True love… I guess?

[@Jamxknife]

This was a good story but it wasn't really scary

[@JoeSmith-sl9bq]

Hard to hear him

[@rissarae3]

That girl was getting on my nerves anyways

[@relic141]

You whisper too loudly, I can still barely hear you...

[@jarnomeekes6756]

is she dead, or what happened to her?

[@AG-en5y]

I don’t get it so is his girlfriend paralyzed neck down or so Something ??????????????????????

[@katzkatzllc3608]

narrator sounds as if in another time zone or is without voice. this is second consecutive with all ok all day. what's up?

[@chillingtalesfordarknights]

It is an issue on your end, we're afraid. It has not been reported by others.

[@katzkatzllc3608]

Device is haunted...........too many spooky videos. No, wait, there can never be too many spooky videos!! Thanks.

[@katzkatzllc3608]

another time zone = far away.

[@carlabunn1134]

+Gina Powell and yet another spooky story in the making....😊

[@carlabunn1134]

+Katz & Katz, LLC 😊

[@HollowDestruction]

What was her age supposed to be? 7? Jesus.

[@horrorclicheidk4488]

Idk , it was two monotone , bland. Story was really good though.

[@perfectXXdrug]

This must be someone's fetish... :/

[@joachimgrnvoll302]

To much emo in this for me.

[@cgtoche]

WTFFFF... :)

[@twiztidarmy5759]

hes the girl n shes the guy lol

[@shafrizanasnor3335]

and thats it? rlly? not scary at all

[@JacobTheBuchanan]

wut

[@EmilyBrowneyes]

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