Galactic Council in Shock: Humanity’s Fleet Arrives to Destroy | Best HFY Story

[@marsbearmcw3050]

Wow, this story is amazing. Actually stretching it from ten minutes to twenty two minutes is genius.

[@oztiksmaI]

Nice plot but I’d like to see more. I’d also recommend cutting down on the repetition of the fact that humans came back strong and wouldn’t be dismissed. Rewording a point three times in a row lessens the impact, and this was done several times.

[@daniellafferety4025]

Given a type 1 to 3 society, timeto builds up military. While galactic authorities grew weak and stagnated. This is an old storyy retold over and over

[@ericr7367]

Does an actual thinking human being ACTUALLY proof this repeating record.

[@Georgedennis-o5z]

@@ericr7367 i think Not

[@shadowpoet4398]

"You awoke the galaxy's executioners!" Best caption ever.

[@ianmccardle330]

I am not sure why the constant reiteration of the same thing. It happens in all the stories. I not sure if it is a limitation of AI programs or a deliberate ploy to make the stories seem longer. It does drive one nuts. On the up side one of the first stories that does not present earth as the benevolent saviours. Humans are not a particularly noble species , at least at present. It seems more realistic that in the unlikely possibility of there being a multitude of beings thriving in the same time line as ourselves , that humans would at best be a pain in the arse and more likely to be a pretty unpleasant bunch

[@Ke6wli]

Perhaps the AI is trying to satisfy its prompt and it is getting ideas from previous similar stories it can access in order to maximize its parameters with matching the prompt?

[@ianmccardle330]

@@Ke6wli I know little about AI . I imagine this is some kind of basic ebook writer. I kind of like the idea of AI but I think this is more a writing program than actual AI. While I understand that it would take time to write these stories I really feel they should take time to edit. Given the volume I am wondering if they chuen out enough pulp stories they maybe make a little bit of money per view. It's the only way I can think anyone creating these would be happy with the low quality

[@daviderwin4705]

I think the writing challenges these are written for have word count goals as well as required elements.

[@TheBioramax]

While I do not dismiss AI, I have students who will repeat the same concept with variations instead of answering a question. The AI may be picking up on writing trends.

[@Isaic02]

​@@TheBioramax That is what the current state of "AI" does. It is not actual artificial intelligence, but a generative virtual intelligence. Meaning it takes a topic, scans thousands to millions of works, and generates something, hopefully in line with the topic, that mimics the structure and format of scanned works. It is amazing for sure, considering the technology and data required to create and train it, but it is at best a good tool that requires an intelligent mind to use it well. Using it without guidance and refinement gets you repetitive stories like this or, for the software engineers out there, basic code that is often useless or impractical in the context of a large codebase.

[@alanrobinson4318]

The A.I. inability to forward the storyline, without first reiterating, repeatedly, previous dialog, renders this tale redundant.

[@shadowpoet4398]

Redundancy is a uniquely human trait, so naturally we slack off enough our AI does too lol

[@kallekaliberolsson5649]

Its a good story but as I hear the story go on. I get iritated on the repetition, its a shame if u kill the momentom of the story at every Cornelis. Do better👍

[@eddieswinton3418]

Monotonous AI.

[@tleecollins9070]

A lot of words saying the same things. You make it sound like earth is pissed off and want revenge for being kicked out of the club.

[@walkingdude8779]

The future is Idiocracy not Star Trek.

[@Always4ward]

PROOF READ FFS!!!

[@morrisanderson818]

Oh boo,hoo got annoyed, because they got the boot for being naughty grow up, id say typical human's,true to form, can't even get along today,let alone tomorrow

[@O.K.Pride509]

So much repeating the same s!!t over and over in slightly different words... come on... could have been better... we get the human fleet is in an unpatrolled part of space... we got it the 1st 5 times...

[@dukereaper2284]

It's literally saying the same thing for almost the whole thing😢 talk about run on sentences lol

[@ChristyOFaghan]

these stories are written by AI and then uploaded on hundreds oi channels, farming likes and views with the same material over and over again i've noticed there are several of these stories that show humanity simply destroying everyone for no noble reason, but simply because earth got a bit insulted - which makes me wonder which real countries have that kind of outlook toward other nations

[@TheBioramax]

I have listened to several stories in which humanity rebels against an established government or evil empire. Some of these struck me as having an agenda. I can see what you are saying: a distinct worldview is coming across. On the flip side, all the stories with the noble humans saving the day come across as romantic, almost like the dream of someone with Pollyanna syndrome. While I hope our species can one day find this sense of utopian nobility, I am not sure we will ever be free of people who are greedy or power-hungry. A pessimistic view of humanity's future can be a refreshing take on the buffet of utopian humans so many stories portray. I thought of Star Trek and the Mirror Universe stories; one (or a few) choices lead to vastly different futures.

[@billrivenbark8983]

Gee, way to make us look like ass holes!

[@boomdogman]

Plotless, characterless, repetitive dreck.

[@Always4ward]

Yeah, I down voted and will continue to do so until the owner's of these channels actually pulls their thumb out of their posteriors and actually does some work

[@DavidRenaas-jt5kt]

I would guess it's difficult to recall the thumb is stuck if their head lives there as well

[@alanlesene8979]

Why don't they have a human read the story instead of a robotic AI that constantly repeats itself? Annoying! 😦🥱

[@DavidRenaas-jt5kt]

AI can write in the dark, and apparently does not proofread ita own material or eat much