ghadi ne theek 12 bajaye aur

[@Rahulsingh-yb7yd]

Amazing story sir

[@shankarsahay2551]

Many many thanks

[@ektajain6372]

Excellent sir, very well articulated inspite of so sensitive topic . Looking forward to many more

[@shankarsahay2551]

Many thanks

[@neenamalhotra8273]

Very good story told in a very good way. Very good command on Hindi. Shlok at the end is very meaningful. Keep writing good stories.

[@shankarsahay2551]

Thanks a lot

[@parulmathur3528]

Story is well written, words used are simple and easy.A very expressive write up of a short story with a beautiful message.

[@shankarsahay2551]

Thanks a lot

[@lylaimam7390]

Very well written and recited looking forward to more stories from you Shankar ji.

[@shankarsahay2551]

Thanks for your encouraging comment

[@neerajpandey2204]

You're Multi-talented Sir..🙏

[@shankarsahay2551]

Thanks Neeraj

[@satishmathur155]

Superb

[@shankarsahay2551]

Thnx a lot

[@AkhilSahay-zo9pg]

Superb! Rich in content, beautifully delivered!

[@shankarsahay2551]

Glad you enjoyed it!

[@shubhsaxena6456]

Awesome story, powerful narration as if some movie clips are going on!!!

[@shankarsahay2551]

Thnx Shubh

[@purnimasaxena9468]

Real Darshan of life love of children and parents care.Nice story keep writing ❤

[@anujak5930]

Quite touching! It's just not a story but very close to what almost all parents and their kids have experienced. Keep sharing more 👍

[@shankarsahay2551]

Thank you, I will

[@sumankanchan8705]

Well penned and well expressed. NJOYED listening.keep writing. All the best

[@shankarsahay2551]

Thanks a ton

[@jeevanprakash1295]

I liked the short story very much. It is a true depiction of practical life. Children usually ask such questions. Very well explained. It is really to my liking. Thanks.

[@shankarsahay2551]

Thnx a lot

[@rajatmishra5684]

Sir, with a strong command over Hindi, your way of storytelling is very attractive. Kids and elders, all age groups will enjoy it. 👌👍💐🙏🌈🌞

[@shankarsahay2551]

Thanks a lot Rajat ji

[@amoghaverma6598]

This story is imazing and hurt touching . I started to imazine all things that happed in this story because your way of expressing it ,was outstanding 😊

[@shankarsahay2551]

Wow, thank you

[@manujkanchan2738]

Excellent story and very powerful narration as well . Your words are creating pictorial imagination . It's wonderful 👍 keep it up

[@shankarsahay2551]

Thank you so much 😀

[@jaymitra9564]

Everyday moment of truth ( dal roti) simply told to savour as exciting Rajma-chawal. Engaging. Do take care of the accurate pronunciation of the Sanskrit Sloka: Satyam Bruyaat...

[@shankarsahay2551]

Thanks a lot