GKS PERSONAL STATEMENT | GKS-G 2024 | Tips and Tricks to write a perfect statement.

Hi everyone,
I wanted to share the personal statement I wrote that got me selected, hoping it inspires you or gives you some guidance for writing yours. I am GKS 2024 Graduate Scholar. My university is Dongseo university, Busan.
Here are a few tips :
1. Start with a Simple Outline
Before writing your personal statement, note down a rough outline of what you want to include. It helps keep your thoughts organized and ensures you don’t miss anything important. Create a small memo.
2. Mention Your Certificates
If you submitted certificates or achievements, try to talk about a few of them in your essay. You don’t need to cover everything-just highlight the ones that really matter and explain why they’re important in your life.
3. Be Honest About Your Challenges
Don’t be afraid to write about mistakes or tough situations you’ve faced. What’s more important is how you overcome with them and what you learned from those experiences.
4. Focus on What You’ve Gained
Instead of just saying, “I took this course” or “I participated in that competition,” talk about what you learned and how it helped you grow. That’s what makes your story stand out.
5. Research the University
Write a bit about why you chose the university you’re applying to. Why is it the best fit for you? Why South Korea? Show that you’ve put thought into it.
6. Share Your Love for Korean Culture
Mention why you’re interested in Korean culture. It doesn’t have to be overly detailed, but connect it to your personal or academic goals so it feels genuine. Avoid writing about kpop/kdrama as it gives a negative impact.
7. It Doesn’t Have to Be Perfect
Seriously, don’t stress about making it perfect. It’s okay if there are small grammar or spelling mistakes. What really matters is that your essay is authentic and shows who you are.
That’s all from me! I hope this helps you feel a little more confident in writing your personal statement. Good luck-you’ve got this!

[@Anniesworld7anv]

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[@parmarkrishna]

Nice

[@perksofbeingpubby]

Very informative and upto the mark! Thanks❤

[@diishakr]

@@perksofbeingpubby🥰glad you find it informative!

[@joelwandera1466]

So informative.

[@diishakr]

@@joelwandera1466 welcome🥰☺️

[@aali379]

Hey Disha, I just wanted to sincerely thank you for your video! I had been working on a draft for a while, but it lacked direction. Your insights truly helped me refine my vision and structure my storyline. If you wouldn’t mind, I would really appreciate it if you could take a look at my SOP whenever you have the time. Thank you so much-I truly appreciate your help! 😊✨

[@diishakr]

Thank you so much for your kind words. I will surely upload study plan video soon😇

[@_pranotii__]

Which track?

[@diishakr]

@@_pranotii__ University track

[@_pranotii__]

@diishakr and university What about ielts??? Have you given the exam?

[@diishakr]

​@@_pranotii__Yes I have given ielts

[@tulipandbuddies]

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[@blessings-o8n]

what is your major di and university?

[@diishakr]

I have mentioned all about my major and university in personal statement!

[@Mamonpramanik-xs9lb]

I am currently interning muskurahat but reviews on google about not receiving certificate is it true if I raise a amount of exact 1k will I receive the certificate?

[@diishakr]

I worked there as a teacher and fundraiser, so I got certificate.