He Married the Alien's Ugly Daughter but when They Left the Ceremony They Were Speechless! Sci-Fi

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@levonpoe 29 күн бұрын

This was very good and well told. The voice narration gave me a sense of the feelings that must exist between 2 people when initially embarking on a relationship. Again, I liked this

@wadelaurence6566 Ай бұрын

I can relate to this story. My wife. She is a morena Fhilipna. And when we met in 1989. I really wasn't sure about what I was getting myself into. She was 18 and I was 19. She was born in Bicol province Philippines. And that was the beginning of my journey to SE Asia. The Philippines is now my second home. We have an apartment in Sucat. But at first she was something totally foreign to me. But became the one woman I felt totally connected with. Even though we came from totally different cultures and backgrounds. Different worlds. We have become inseparable. We have three children. They are 30 28 and 17. And go back to the Philippines every other year. But the Philippines has become my home. A place as a young man. Never knew existed.

@richardrombouts1883 7 күн бұрын

You are suggesting your wife is as ugly as the alien above?

@wadelaurence6566 7 күн бұрын

@richardrombouts1883 no. But she is from a different world. Probably something you would never understand.

@sahlitaasvathitanonta7864 Ай бұрын

There should be part 2. It is a good story.

@Tenright77 Ай бұрын

It's all good until The Devil comes around in his Motor Boat...

@azul29156 Ай бұрын

Your comment strikes me funny but I have no idea what you're talking about;-) please elaborate

@Tenright77 Ай бұрын

@@azul29156 Marriage, with some variance, is an up to your neck, total involvement endeavor... It's all good until the waves of excrement start washing over your face... If you're single, Don't get married...

@ShadowWings Ай бұрын

😂

@Madjuls Ай бұрын

This story needs part 2.

@shamim-dhulumakhapotherbake Ай бұрын

No part 2. Part 1 was bad enough.

@jjj1951 Ай бұрын

So he couldn't show her some affection. Not even a kiss?

@jennifersegura3606 Ай бұрын

They should make this one into a movie

@davidhall8874 Ай бұрын

Beauty is skin deep, but ugly goes all the way to the bone!

@cookyehavis8501 Ай бұрын

Not really...

@garytnew7504 Ай бұрын

I hope there is. Part 2 at least to this story you have seemed to leave us dangling in mid air to wait to know what happens next

@shamim-dhulumakhapotherbake Ай бұрын

There is nothing you can learn about in part 2 that's new. You have a Gary Stu + a Mary Sue that can conquer the universe and reality with their love which transcends existence. In the end, they reach god-like powers and recreate the universe and find it does not work and the whole thing implodes from inconsistencies and plot holes. The end.

@roberthenderson2580 Ай бұрын

But will they be able to mate? And what happens when she gets hungry and eats his face.

@lifelongconservative3338 Ай бұрын

All these words and I'm left in a ship travelling to ..... who knows where. They're going on their Honeymoon? I don't know what the Orator thought but it was quite important. I loved the Characters but you drug them along without them knowing where they were going, where were they going to live, is intimacy compatible? You spent so much time around the marriage then blew it leaving the story without Resolution. If there is a Part 2 I would be happy at the prospect.

@shamim-dhulumakhapotherbake Ай бұрын

Hated the characters. They were 2 dimensional. Did you pay attention? And the narrative wasn't omnicient. It wasn't first person, second person or even third person consistently. It was all over the place. Creative writing exercise gone wrong for a class that should have been dropped. Even George R R Martin did better than this. Ok - that was bad. Even Mercedes Lackey did better than this.

@shamim-dhulumakhapotherbake Ай бұрын

Borrowed from Star Trek + Snow White: reverse the polarity + love conquers all => Ultimate Stupidity. Physics does not work this way. Especially gravity.

@azul29156 Ай бұрын

IMO this story was written by a female mind. A reality where emotions control everything. Yes I fully agree with you that it seems completely nonsensical. But hey I'm not the one writing sci-fi stories I'm the silly fool listening. If I don't like them I guess I can write my own

@charleskuss8538 Ай бұрын

An interesting story that needs a much better AI narrator

@feral4813 Ай бұрын

Exactly, the AI narrator sucked.

@jennifersegura3606 Ай бұрын

It's a good question what but I like it's a good story

@lynneclark5313 Ай бұрын

You NEED to go over the written story. I'm only in 3.5 min but there have been many different spellings of the Aliens - it gets very confining for those of us who also read the story as it goes. Crystal and structures?? Not crystalline structures? "the weight of their stairs"? "The empower gestured toward an hour"? Ethan guessed"? I'm calling it quits at 5:42. I'm tired of all the errors, regardless of the quality of the story.

@davidcadman4468 Ай бұрын

Love does not depend on the physical attributes. Knowing this, I would have a better chance of marrying this alien woman.

@mattypotts77 Ай бұрын

true love depends on connected parties having the equivalent of a "brain"--an obviously physical attribute.

@wadelaurence6566 29 күн бұрын

@@davidcadman4468 To me this story has some truth to it. My wife. She is a morena Fhilipna. Born in Bicol province Philippines. We met in 1989. She was 18 and I was 19. From totally different worlds. But we have become as one. We have three children. They are 30 28 and 17. And have an apartment in Sucat. And plan on buying property in Quidolog Bicol province and building our retirement house there. The Philippines has become my second home. And if I could. I would never change a thing.

@markmacbeth428 Ай бұрын

loved the story enjoyed the narrative

@johnchrisangel8186 Ай бұрын

😅humped softly 🎉

@johnthomas-uy4tw Ай бұрын

Again a serpentine species with mammaries?

@tonyv8925 Ай бұрын

Mammals take on many different forms. Just look at how many mammilian species there are just on Earth. Zanara can still be mammilian, just a different form, kind of like a Platypus is mammilian, yet lays eggs and has a beak. The Universe is surely strange, eh?

@marcuschauvin7039 Ай бұрын

Pangalin and armadillos have scales

@partymanau Ай бұрын

Here in Oz we have mamals that lay eggs, who knowscwhst is in outer space?

@barrygann3761 Ай бұрын

Strange story but it's a good one thank you

@SadMad-vf8og Ай бұрын

So a space gun wedding 😂 and my man still didn't his coffee sucks 😂

@michaelmcleish1842 7 күн бұрын

Interesting that the story was read by AI... That was not programmed with SF words. Then the subtitles are from a different AI translating the spoken AI back into text. This double-translation is a failure. It would be much better if the subtitles were, instead, the actual text with punctuation.

@roserea3156 Ай бұрын

You and me both. To bad we can't be analyzed and paired with the right person first time around.

@jagernavet4468 Ай бұрын

My question is ...... "Where the hell are they going?"! Did I miss that part of the story? What is their destination? A honeymoon planet? A colony world? Disneyland?

@Jani-wr1dn Ай бұрын

Àmericans... that's basically the royal way of ruling.. YOU give us one and We we give one.. royal wedding =2 countries think all is good..

@kdkerr2 Ай бұрын

The narrator never mentioned whether or not Ethan or the Princess had sex or were even capable of doing it!

@adiamondforever7890 Ай бұрын

True, and why leave. Where are they going to, and why? If she is a princess, he could be the consort. There are so many possibilities for the plot, and there are enough avenues for their growth, easily room for a middle, and then Ethan supporting the new queen in the end, being the diplomat/spouse/parent/and engineer. Have fun

@helennoakes3675 Ай бұрын

Okay, this is fun. Boring. mid- level engineering jobs can lead to fulfilling galactic treaties. Happens every day.

@simnath Ай бұрын

It's "2 suns" not "2 sons". You do this in all your stories.

@simnath Ай бұрын

Stare (looking) not stairs (steps up or down)

@simnath Ай бұрын

Resonant not resin This is really frustrating and off-putting. Get a proof reader! I'm going to stop reading your stories

@larryr.6115 Ай бұрын

An incomplete story.

@shamim-dhulumakhapotherbake Ай бұрын

Word salad. Mixed metaphor. Please get a thesaurus and read more. "blanket of unfamiliarity" (just an example) is not idiomatic. Repetitive phrases throughout as if they were unique descriptions. Most of your story is fluff and there is almost zero world-building. No personality to your characters. This is so sad as a submission. This story hurt my brain to listen to because it was so disjointed.

@Nevada_Dan Ай бұрын

Bad, BAD choice of narration voice and style; almost to the point of distraction. It ruined the story for me.

@markschneider8815 Ай бұрын

Going by the illustrations used in these stories, IMHO ALL the alien women are ugly. 😮 Don't know what they are like as people and don't really care. As the saying goes: "Beauty is skin-deep, ugly goes all the way to the bone." I do have to question the idea in most of these stories that all these species are interfertile with humans/Terrans. Biology strongly suggests that isn't possible. We have enough problems with intraspecies fertility. I am a Terran human, yet if I had a child with another Terran human female there is a 25% likelihood that any children we had would manifest a genetic defect, and a 50% liklihood the child would have a recessive genetic defect that could show up in the following generations. It is a double recessive, so both mother and father would have to pass it on. In my case, it's a100% guarantee I would pass on the defective gene. I didn't like that, hence I never had children. Now consider the possibility that there would be a strong likelihood that there would be a genetic mismatch of some kind between H. Sapiens and an alien female or male. Willing to take the chance?

@ski1701 Ай бұрын

Is this a book?

@azul29156 Ай бұрын

IMO this story was written by a female mind. A story where emotions and feelings are everything and determine your reality. What is wrong with me for listening to this kind of stuff....

@kellywilkins8043 Ай бұрын

A good story line, but too much time spent on their feelings! More humor mixed with action would have been nice! Thanks though! I still enjoyed it!

@ronsindric4241 Ай бұрын

SEQUELS- Some humbly offered suggestions: PART 2- Gravitational Anomoly has taken them off course and vectors them to a confrontation with thousands and thousands and thousands of couples that seem to be exactly like themselves. They sense Alternates from other SPACE-TIME-ENERGY Alternates. Some of these alternates have them in deep sharing, some have them cool almost hostile to each other, some have them actually fighting drawing blood from each other, some show one very sad physical being standing next to a ghostly apparition of the other, some have both of them ghostly Dead with thousands of other possibilities. They realize the necessity of their need to interact with these other Slternate Couples. They realize they need tofocus on their own Bond and proceed to interact with the other Simularca / Alternates of themselves to smooth out any wrinkles in the Alternative Transdimensional "Realities". By doing so, they can move forward to THEIR OWN FUTURE. PART 3- they become a Family with the birth of two sets of identical twins. They must parent their children carefully. The last PART 3 episode sees them becoming GRANDPARENTS ! PART 4- They find that Einstein-Rosen-Podolsky Spooky Trransdimensional Entanglements allow for all Alternative Simularca to Interact, Share, Learn, Grow, Transmogrify into something impossible to quantify / understand. PART 5- Sees them springing into a PREQUEL ALTERNATIVE to set the groundwork for PARTS 2, 3, and 4. And it all recycles. There is no BIG BANG, but something akin to an occiliatory inversion coming out the other side almost like taking a well used pair of my socks abd turning them inside out !

@KennethStrothers Ай бұрын

AI 🤖

@jimcox7232 Ай бұрын

Get a real person to read this or fix the cheap AI and put some inflection into it.

@Steve-l1m3g Ай бұрын

Narrator needs to go

@shamim-dhulumakhapotherbake Ай бұрын

The purpose of marriage is procreation. This story is just a "hey - we can rule the world." It's Star Trek the motion picture + alien + human = some vast creature that can control it's physical environment. Ugh. The Star Trek movie was watchable. This would not be.

@adiamondforever7890 Ай бұрын

When I saw Star Trek The Movie, I thought it was a TV show worth of plot, stretched beyond its life to a movie. Have fun

@shamim-dhulumakhapotherbake Ай бұрын

@@adiamondforever7890 Agreed. Like I said. "Watchable." Not "amazing." :) Amazing would be "The Wrath of Kahn." Or "The Search for Spock." (Who would have thought Kirstie Allie would show up in Star Trek? Or that Jessica Szohr would end up on The Orville)?

@shamim-dhulumakhapotherbake Ай бұрын

Ugh - repetitive text. AI reader terrible.

@morefun5455 Ай бұрын

The narrator’s voice n style. Doesn’t bring me into story , can’t get into it at all

@HFYFictions Ай бұрын

What about some of the more recent stories?

@terryconnors7329 Ай бұрын

What in the universe is this. They immediatrly are sent into space all alone to the stars. For what reason. What are they going to do to stengthrn the bounds between earty and her home planet? This is all a bunch of waisted time. Why are all of tgese stories consist of peinces or queens that are blue , green , or whatever ans they are all alone and caat out or running away. I love sci fiction but not when everything is alike or copies each other. Mostly is all AI crap.