Constructive criticism, You talk very slow you will loose people by them getting bored listen to this vid in 1.25x-1.5x it sounds better. You drag words to give yourself time to think which is better than “Um’s” but slows your speech even further. You are not on a script which is fine but until you learn it you might want to record your vids twice, once to flow of mind second then use that to script your release recording. Adding more annotations to the screen to highlight what you are talking about would make your vid more professional.(like adding an arrow to show flagging, circle the light in the guys back) the gun highlight was good but movement near constant movement is the best. You are an attractive guy so use it, bring the camera up higher so you are slightly looking up, add some lights a little higher than the camera to brighten and sharpen your face. Try to work some jokes in if you can. Dark content makes little jokes pop more. Best of luck my guy! I hope you succeed in your KZbin career. Make as much content as possible it only take one viral video to jump start you.
@Officercake2 ай бұрын
I appreciate the feedback❤️
@Officercake2 ай бұрын
All of it is very valid👍
@MelloMan962 ай бұрын
@@Officercake I look forward to your next video. Keep it going.
@Officercake2 ай бұрын
@@MelloMan96 goes live tomorrow at 10am CST🤟
@rock91652 ай бұрын
Awesome video man. You skip the BS and don’t come across as one of the “80% entertainer 20% former LEO” guys who keep their videos surface level. Excited to see where you go with this.
@Officercake2 ай бұрын
Thank you man.🙏 I’m always working to make my content better and more engaging, but I never plan on making it 80% entertainment. I care only about make sure as many cops see information that can save their lives.
@TeamRedfishAssassin2 ай бұрын
Cops wanting to be delta force so bad.
@Officercake2 ай бұрын
Not at all
@Volks7562 ай бұрын
Loser take.
@JohnBrown-l5s2 ай бұрын
First video i have ran across of yours but glad i did well done sir you have a new sub!
@Officercake2 ай бұрын
Welcome to the channel! 🤟
@JohnBrown-l5s2 ай бұрын
@@Officercake thanks!!
@nate28382 ай бұрын
Watch at 1.25 speed, much better. That being said, good break down.
@Officercake2 ай бұрын
Thank you brother. I’m still getting my camera presence down but I promise you I’m aware of it and trying with every video to make it better during the filming and editing process.
@nate28382 ай бұрын
@@Officercake We all start somewhere, and your off to a good start. With that said, when you think your done, watch it and feel th4 pace, then possibly speed it up just a little for it to feel normal. Anyway, keep up the good work.
@Officercake2 ай бұрын
@@nate2838 Thank you for the input man. Trust me, its being taken into account. I'm trying to get better with every video🤟🤟
@Platoon_Guide2 ай бұрын
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@Officercake2 ай бұрын
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@chriszygmont55582 ай бұрын
What is your background? Your experience?
@Officercake2 ай бұрын
Active LEO
@tylerossowski95252 ай бұрын
@@Officercakelooooool
@simba007842 ай бұрын
Most high drunk people don’t do that when we see an attractive female. We just go to bed and cry ourselves to sleep.