how to describe a walk around a park - ielts academic writing task 1 map

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The maps used in this video is from Cambridge IELTS 14 Academic Test 4 Writing Task 1.
The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
▬ Contents of this video ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
0:00 details paragraph 1
03:25 details paragraph 2
07:01 details paragraph 3
08:52 overview paragraph
10:42 introductory paragraph
11:19 key takeaways
13:41 entire essay

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By the way, did you get a map without a compass?

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​@@sabihasultana3922 Hi, you don't have to group features like I did. For example, you could group the left and right sides of the park into one paragraph if you want.☺

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@@raisamumtaz3438 Those are amazing scores, congratulations! So, how did you deal with the random data in the task 1 table?

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@@LilieIELTS Couldn't figure out a good way to organise by country, so I grouped them by category.

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can we write introduction as: The maps illustrate the development made in Grange Park from 1920 till today.

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with respect to your great and well explained videos,i believe the term '' natural features'' is not appropriately used here,the features which are replaced in this video are mostly man made, but when we say natural, it is some thing formed by phyical,chemical,geological changes,you can tell me if i am wrong. thank you.

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[@minhct2511]

Hi Lillie. Can I ask you something?. What are 'housed' and 'features' mean in the statement you used (The park’s left side, which previously housed a stage for musicians, now features an amphitheater). Anyway thank you very much for your useful tips, it's really help me a lot.

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi Minh, to house means to provide space for something. To feature means to include someone or something as an important part.

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Can you please tell me the meaning of "behind" on the map , what does it mean when X is behind Y?? ,does IT mean we should turn left or right from where we are to see it ??

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[@kristenkristen82]

Hi Lillie, I think there's a misunderstanding here. the terms "lower," "upper," "top," and "bottom" can be used in various contexts, including flat surfaces. While these terms can be associated with slopes or inclines, they are not limited to such scenarios. what do you think?

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hi! what should we do if the name of the park is changed ?

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Pls upload more samples❤

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Kindly make vedio on writiñg task 1 of map of test 1 book 13

[@LilieIELTS]

For now, you can read a sample essay on that map on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/the-plans-below-show-the-layout-of-a-university-sports-centre-now/

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will do that in the future.

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Upload tips for reading

[@LilieIELTS]

Will do that in the future!😊

[@sthakkartaniya]

Thank you so much for the video mam👌👍👍👍 I have one doubt in of the sentences at 5:23 minutes. To the right of the Eldon Street entrance, a water feature has been added....( there is no s with apostrophe after street like Eldon Street's entrance and I am not able to understand y) Please guide me. Thank you, Regards,

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi, I think this is because the entrance doesn't belong to Eldon Street but belongs to the park.

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@@LilieIELTS Thank you so much mam👍👌🙌🙌. I was logged out of this account and missed your notification. Thank you so much once again mam👌🙌👍.

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Scored 7.0 in total thanks .

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Amazing! Whats' your score on the writing test?

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@@LilieIELTS 6.5 writing 8.0 listening 7.0 reading 6.5 speaking

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Hi, I follow you on website where task 1 and 2 but I have one question is that every teacher told in India we must write three body paragraphs especially in adventage outweighs the disadvantage essay Body paragraph disadvantage and other 2 paragraphs adventage whatever side you choose but you only write 2 paragraphs.

[@LilieIELTS]

Hi, there is more than one correct way to answer an IELTS question. However, I've never tested that 3-body-paragraph method in an actual exam so I'm not sure if it works. But I can guarantee you that my methods work because I've tested them in actual exams.

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Thank you I got 6.0 in writing. However, I think that is OK for me right now. I am not good at writing at all. I only studied from your videos. My part 2 writing question is something like news are more important than the past and news media are more influential than before. Why is this the case? Is it positive or negative development. I can't remember the exact question but it goes something like this.

[@winproduction7585]

For my part 1 question it was something like making a 3 types of tea such as Oolong tea and the other 2 teas I can't remember. it was linear process. But with 3 different paths something like that.

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Thank you so much for sharing your experience here. Wish you a bright future ahead!😊

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Hii…i did not write has been in the exam…just used is…it means my all task is wrong