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@Xavbonkybarnes2 жыл бұрын
these are pretty sad deaths, ima take notes. Thank u!
@Glide94412 жыл бұрын
Same
@paise_editz2 ай бұрын
Literally doing this to one of my characters in my books...😭
@cyberluvss172 жыл бұрын
i’ve read almost all of these deaths in the book i’m reading and it’s super unpredictable
@Hannah-dt3jl6 ай бұрын
Okay story idea- There’s like a mafia couple that has been together for a really long time. They love each other a lot and kill people as their job. (This is the scene I want) M- male F - Female F- who are we killing today who do I get to stab first ?? M pulls out paper M gets closer to F with paper (but she doesn’t suspect anything because they are lovers) M- you mean who I’m killing first M shows paper and pulls out long knife …………..………………………………….…...……… And what else should I add? Would you read??
@theunfunnyjokester10 ай бұрын
Better Call Saul Plan and Execution flashbacks:
@Visageof6Ай бұрын
Another good way to keep a character death sad while feeling fulfilling is either to indicate in some way that, I’d they had the choice of any life to live or anything they could change, they would choose that one anyway. Or by giving them enough time to fulfill a final goal or do something before they die, while the death still being inevitable. You have to be careful not to make character deaths too drawn out if you do it in one of those ways, but if you’re worried that the death won’t feel fulfilling or like it came to a satisfying ending, these are decent ways to do it. But all of the ones in the video are really good
@Agressivemonkeman2 жыл бұрын
I have a character planned to die in my comics and his name is "Jacob the fox" and he dies from being crushed by a bookshelf
@plebdoge7509Ай бұрын
I planned to kill two of mine, but after some intense thought I only killed one, but she dies in front of her brother. Character development go brr
@AstralShadow8869612 күн бұрын
I’m making a manga, and I’m trying to find a way to have characters die left and right like Gege Akutami, but I’m also trying to find a way to make each death sad.
@Mattdasecondog2 ай бұрын
Well one of my characters sacrificed himself pulling himself and the villain into a black hole to save humanity
@RaincloudUA_Warriors_Cats8 ай бұрын
Me: WRITE THAT DOWN! WRITE THAT DOWN!
@barlevfamily581210 ай бұрын
Thanks so much for this! I'm planning to start writing a novel sometime soon, and I wanted the death of a friend to simulate the main character's powers, and I was wondering how to make the effect of the death more powerful (Btw I'm not evil I am very sad at that idea, but it would add more reality to the situation and provide an opening to a lot of character development)
@hallowhuntyt30279 ай бұрын
how far have you progressed
@Just1PilotAT Жыл бұрын
Isn’t this exactly what they did with Arthur Morgan and John marstom
@doyouhavecaps9 ай бұрын
No, Arthur finished his arc and so did John, we knew Arthur's time was clicking when he got diagnosed with TB and when you stepped out of that stable you knew what was going to happen to John, also both Arthur and john finished their goals. Arthur helped John and his family escape. John saved his family at the end of his arc too. This guy is giving terrible advice to kill off characters, is lazy and just for shock value.
@PokiandiАй бұрын
My character died at 12, unable to escape the show she was forced to act in, no one knew she died in real life, as they just thought she died in the show, then her best friend wakes up from consciousness and the viewers get to decide if he dies or not, him begging to die. The viewers let him die in the end and then it all went silent, the credits rolled as it zoomed out, a shot of both of them beside eachother, blood dripping down their shoulders. Is that good?
@AnneGrey-zu1cyАй бұрын
gen loss much?
@PokiandiАй бұрын
@@AnneGrey-zu1cy yepsiiii
@Kakavashasswetdrippingcock2 ай бұрын
HOW I FEEL AS A WRITER: MUABAHAHHGHAHAHVA
@jellyfox7360 Жыл бұрын
Thank you for the tips
@tgnk6153 ай бұрын
They did this with Carnelian in wings of fire! He was just about to have his character arc, and a sudden death that leaves an impact on the cast, more specifically Peril and Moon for up until Peril’s own book!
@Hernandez_128 ай бұрын
There is a character named Dimitri he is a soviet sergeant who gets shot and dies but there is a soldier name Alexei all of his friends died in war by a brutal, way and he’s depressed
@CaIIMeAiden2 жыл бұрын
Yo dude this is ur first video and it barely gets attention vs your newer videos❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥❤️🔥
@Your_Random_And_Crazy_FriendАй бұрын
What, I'm not crying, you are 🤧🤧
@pipxamobiАй бұрын
AMC is calling..
@Allulaatikko3 ай бұрын
Akame Ga Kill, Tatsumi fits all 4
@undawhorl2 ай бұрын
taking notes ;D
@Pyrop1tz3 ай бұрын
Commander Erwin
@MipaskusКүн бұрын
thank u
@dnaroseandthewolves Жыл бұрын
My character is going to die of a heart attack/cardiact arrest and his name is Fluffy, it's a psychological horror story. Link it below!
@barlevfamily581210 ай бұрын
OK WHAT IS THE NAME OF THIS BOOK I NEED TO READ IT NOWWWWWWW!!!!!!
@dnaroseandthewolves10 ай бұрын
@@barlevfamily5812IM SORRY I HAVEN'T BREN ABLE YO WRITE IT BUT I PROMMY I DIDN'T ABANDON THIS JDE AJDJFD
@anastasiastormstream9 ай бұрын
What i did in my book there was a war going on the character who died was shot with a poison arrow the effect has left his blnd best friend broken she was the commander in the war when she heard her best friend who was next to her hit the ground she left her husband take over for control while she took her revenge
@williamurg58709 ай бұрын
My start: its dark i got to sleep i woke up i wanted ro eat breakfast BOOM a man comes in and kills me now i never ate my sandwich my mother made me she is mad at me because i never ate that sandwich my brother was happy because he got a free sandwich
@snowsnow11628 ай бұрын
😢saddest death ever.
@zadtoon27997 ай бұрын
Peak fiction Legit made me cry all night
@williamurg58707 ай бұрын
@@zadtoon2799 😭😭😭😭😭yes i know right i even cried it was just such a sad death 😭😭😭😭😭