How to Write a STRONG Thesis Statement | Scribbr 🎓

[@tmann986]

I'm so relived to see other students freaking out. We're in this together lol. I have my paper due in four hours. I got the introduction all but done expect the thesis statement at the end. Thank you! This is going to help me.

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[@ajo9016]

Funny how after 4 years of high school English I’m still freaking out over how to write a thesis statement :/

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School really is teaching me well :/

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You got this!!! Perhaps make it a goal of yours to write a thesis statement efficiently + succesfully :)))

[@skyspacelunar]

I have been in college three years and I am still learning.

[@SurflFilms]

now that i think about it, it's crazy that four entire years of english hasn't taught me how to write a thesis statement. This should be taught in the first week.

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I've at least lost 5 years of my life due to school stress. Thank you for making it a little bit easier.

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Happy to help!

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My my! I can relate to that statement. Hold on teachers we're doing the best we can lol :)

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currently watching this for my online classes lol

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My essay is due today and I am writing it today 🥴 thank you for this Video!

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mine is due tomorrow 😭

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It will show. God bless, Professor Bailey

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Last minute essay writing anyone... just me

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You can do it! Good luck writing 🍀

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same my essay is due tmr and I just started 😅

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same, I have an essay due in 2 hours, good thing my teacher Accepts late work or I'd be dead meat

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"Due tomorrow? Do tomorrow." Who else?

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More like due in a couple of hours. I'm in Spain without the "S".

[@kalenaarguello4549]

I am doing my finals right now and forgot how to write a fricken thesis statement

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in an hour

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Slap yourself out of it! Make it happen!

[@3st0r6]

due in 20 mins

[@BAMashups]

I'm a freshman in college and watching this really helped to formulate a proper thesis. TYSM!

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You're so welcome!

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Same.

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This video helped me get a 92% on my women's studies paper. Enough said :)

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[@highestpeeqs9532]

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[@JadaisMe06]

i’m pretty late but tysm ! i’m getting ready for school and i have to write an essay.

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Good luck with your essay! You can do this 🧡

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same

[@karincaballero5470]

Me as well

[@highestpeeqs9532]

Jesus loves yall and died for us! Jesus calls for all of us to repent!!!!! !

[@imjusthere6633]

4 years of high school and still searching up how to write a Thesis Statement. 1st day of English 101 and I already have a 2 page essay due tonight. Thank you lol

[@xero4158]

Thanks! I'm in 11th grade, have always been a A+ LA student, and have never had a problem with thesis statements until now, my teacher is nitpicking every last word like I'm an English major or something.

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Glad it helped!

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I come back here every time I have to write an essay, and I get an A every time! Thank you sm

[@matthewgutierrez2976]

Thank you for helping me get through my first graduate level research paper! Even after all these years of being in a school environment I find myself needing a strong reminder!

[@asmasmr1715]

Thank you! I have a essay due and I forgot how to write a thesis statement.

[@Scribbr-us]

Now you know how! 😁 Good luck writing

[@bugliker]

Who else is here cause they've been putting off an essay for 3 days thats due on Wednesday and your teacher has left two comments telling you to start your essay and through shade at you on the meet by saying "some people haven't even started yet" and you just started doing it and forgot how to write a thesis so you came here.

[@joelb7422]

me rn

[@FinnTheFinniky]

me, its actually due wednesday

[@teachersbusy]

I'm working on my thesis and I am struggling with my writing. So I decided to go back from the ground work and review what is missing there. I love your video. Thank you. I'm gonna watch everything. Fingers crossed. Good luck to your thesis to whomever is watching this. You've got this!!!!!!

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I hate college, I hate my life .

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How's life pal?

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If you hate your life then go to hospital it tells how much people struggling for keeping their lives then you will why is life precious even though its your's or mine or anybody else. You will get it just for once so just cherish it. Actually i was also very disappointed but when i heard about these i let go all past things and now im happy❤❤😂

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Real

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Same, bestie.

[@Maryam-gk6kx]

This video taught me much more than my academic writing course did, thank you very much!

[@janten6554]

Hello, Steph, I wish you could also include "how to write a Theoretical Paper". I haven't seen videos in this area and I've always wanted to write one. I've been watching your videos over and over again. They are really very helpful. Thank you so much!!!❤❤❤

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Honestly she has saved my life. I love this CHANNEL!!!!!!!

[@dianavalens2647]

As a graduate student this helped a lot, now back to refining my essay ✨

[@bishopecart]

well I'm back in school after 28 yrs lol I'm 55yrs old and I'm Retired and I've gotten bored lol so I enrolled in Morehouse College and my 1st thesis is due in 5days it's been a longtime since my Doctoral Thesis so I'm a bit anxious. but this video brought it all back to me. Good luck everyone Happy Writing

[@theunintelligentlydesigned4931]

I usually have no problem coming up with a thesis but a recent paper on teaching people how to avoid ableism had me stumped. Your video helped me specifically when you talked about different kinds of thesis statements. I'm not trying to create an argumentative thesis. Nearly everyone agrees that ableism is bad. I don't have anything to prove. But an expository thesis is perfect for me since the real problem is that most people don't understand what ableism is and fail to recognize it when they see it. So thanks to you, I came up with, "Ableism is a lot more severe than most people realize because the disabled people are often denied a voice."

[@5canwalk]

The clearest video on this conundrum I've come across on YT!!

[@lnzskk]

Thanks Scribbr for the awesome guide. Now I managed to make a good thesis statement (maybe) for my research. I just wanna share what I made and see what others would think. "Employment inequality significantly limits the social and economic opportunities/benefits, such as access to healthcare, education, government services, and spending quality time on other matters an average household or individual should otherwise have."

[@slipballz]

Really big thanks, this helped! I was assigned to write specific ideas for my argumentative essay that i'll be writing this Wednesday. I was a little stuck on the thesis part, so big thanks again :D

[@Kaylash222]

Doing this for my online classes!! You literally teach better than my teacher

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Wow, thank you for the kind words! Glad the video was helpful!

[@xavionsmth]

Thank you I have a weird habit of finishing the whole paper without writing a thesis because I didn't know how to write it and you helped me learn how to write one.

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Thank you so much. This helped with my writing assignment a lot! Your a lifesaver.

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Thank you for your kind comment! Glad the video helped!

[@stefany7943]

I’m in English composition and the teacher gave us 45 minutes to write a essay, I forgot everything I was tought in high school, glad I can find refreshers like this 😭😭

[@felicitys3621]

Do you have any videos on how to write a non-argumentative essay? Thanks for this one!

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I'm relieved that i saw this video, i really can't keep up with my ASSESSMENTS but i need to if I don't want to get demoted. Thank you!!!

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My teacher assigned a essay, watching this. Hope it will help

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This video was very well explanatory general on how how write a strong thesis statement,thank you.

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This is helping me a lot im using this for writing essays for my Finals It's very helpful!! This is for my Online classes

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I got very anxious and lost writing an essay. Hope to master my writing after watching your videos. Thank you for your kind videos.

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Such a great and short explanation of thesis! Thanks so much! Keep up the good work. You're helping many students, including me.

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Literally broke down doing my thesis- thank you

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Wow this is super helpful 🤩

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I'm an English teacher and I just subscribed! This is an awesome series!

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Thank you so much for this video. I just started college classes this year, I have two essays coming up and I felt absolutely lost. This video really helped me find a direction to go into!

[@_777_Yalii]

rn im working on a huge project and i had to write a thisis statement and i had no clue how to write one and this video jus saved part of my grade so thank u.

[@Meat_Bal]

I know u made this a year ago but thank you so much for the help.

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You're very welcome!

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Watching this an hour before my exams thanks. So useful

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Me being so much more engaged and interested because of her nice outfit and fun edits and amazing VIDEO

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Your lessons are very catchy. I really admire

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I've watched this video about 30 times now. HELP!

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Me watching it for my online class like: 👁👄👁

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[@TheLightofOrion]

Thank you so much! I needed this this week for my midterm and it helped so much so thanks ! Keep doing what you do

[@Ibezell]

Ive watched this video 5 times already

[@rjaybruhh]

*_I forgot how to write a Thesis my senior year. Now I'm a freshman in college and my English teacher wants me to write a bunch of them for some reason :C I tried to do one on my own and now I am here. LOL_* UPDATE: *I'm back again and my professor want's me to redo my entire essay because I did it on another topic. smh*

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saw this video to write an essay which i have due tomorrow......... it could even be published in the book of essays.....tysm for giving a nice startup to my essay..................................... lots of love......sk

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0:11 No? I'm not sure....

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Thank you, your instructions where spot on and well presented. 🖖

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1:53 she got smarter after reading the thesis statement 🤓

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This crossed my mind too >_

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The eye glasses lol

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You make it sound so simple!

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Great video. Thank you

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Glad you liked it!

[@mr.reindeersfriend730]

Due date of my term paper is today. I'm still in my introduction.

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Using it for my online clases lol

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I have an exam tomorrow morning and I haven't been able to properly study till now and yt videos like this are hard carrying me rn

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Here I am. My paper was due 2 days go.... chileee....... anyways. 🏃‍♀️

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my English teacher sent me this ...

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Thank you, well done, and please continue to help students forward they can develop their goals

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You are very pretty thanks for the information

[@Scribbr-us]

Glad it helped Marco :)

[@ruby4669]

I’m a sophomore in high school and I’m in a research class and for some reason the neglected to explain how to make a thesis statement and I’m currently trying to finish a presentation that’s 1/4 of my grade due tomorrow and requires a thesis statement so thank you

[@highestpeeqs9532]

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[@zoemavaega1411]

lol, anyone else has a 10-page essay due tomorrow?

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I hope you finished it in time! I was going to say good luck, but it's a bit late for that!

[@highestpeeqs9532]

Jesus loves yall and died for us! Jesus calls for all of us to repent!!!!! !

[@playboiruss]

Thank you, got several essays due today!

[@hunni3booboo]

Any other topic, but political.

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3rd commet?

[@Comewithmeifuwant2live]

I think the reason for choosing something political is because it's debatable and a political position can always be argued the other way.

[@thetiredworm2100]

William Exactly

[@Yourlovelyghost]

This was really helpful! I have two essays done tomorrow, and I haven't started either. Thanks!

[@lamarthomas5603]

So I should write the thesis before doing the research?

[@Goodpsych.e]

Thank you very much for this video. It was very clear, great examples and easy to understand. I am very big on refreshers, so this was extremely helpful.

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It's been a year since I've taught essay writing. I've done that before and I've written many papers but I need to refresh my memory before going in for the new class 😂

[@armedmen3198]

Thanks so much I rly needed this

[@revent4410]

i need more great thesis statements or topic sentences examples like the ones in your video for me to practice

[@staykid1433]

Thank u soooooooo much! this really taught me how to make a thesis statement.

[@adrianalopeztorres7268]

Hi, thanks for the explanation, if my main topic is women and climate change, how does it affect economically, and I chose the south of Bogota, is the focus very small?

[@JoshLovesDolphins]

Thank you for this vid, I was always a top student, but Middle school is hard...

[@gameawesome430]

Thank you, I had a hard time to the make a thesis.

[@sibtainhaider3712]

Does the same technique apply while writing a thesis statement for a narrative essay

[@sophieneudorf6455]

I have a question. Am I supposed to have done all of my research before I write my thesis? Because I find it hard to have a strong argument before I do most of my research. Anyway, this video was super helpful! thanks!

[@guizendelcanto7822]

How do you come up with such a nice research question before the thesis?

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Thank you very much, it helped me with my homework. 🙏❤

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This helped so much! Thank you. And i love your accent

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This series is legitimately helpful, thank you

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Hello, I suck at research but your videos makes me suck a little less thank you

[@blackrose-kq3qf]

I don't know what to do, I was given the research question, "Is it necessary to push against boundaries and go through trial and error to come of age" . It's vague, due at 9pm and the teacher said we can't research more than previously known things. What di I do? It's 7:30 pm

[@pijungtu2317]

I would love to write a strong thesis about you. ❤️ Thanks for this guide. I

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What a great help

[@andreadavis5270]

I have a serious question Sarah. I am trying to create an outline for a Comparative essay. My topic is attending online community college VS. attending on-campus community college. Could you either help me create a good thesis for this topic or at least explain it to me in the comments?

[@andreadavis5270]

Does this sound good to you? (Topic Sentence) Attending community college online and attending community college in-person sound like you could have the same experiences, but in reality, they can bring you many different experiences and many different pros and cons than each other. There are many different reasons why the experience of online VS. on campus are certainly different from each other. Just 3 of the many reasons include less stress about finding parking, you can eat whenever you want at home, and instead of struggling to get up in the morning and get dressed decent enough for class, you can just roll out of bed at a much more appealing time, and do your homework in your sweatpants.

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Can you help me how to write statement of problem (thesis) please. The impact of current practice and challenges of school supervision

[@Kokojamrig]

This Video helped me out a lot !!!!! Pls make some more!!!! Tysm!!!!

[@sandradean1107]

Hi thank you for this video. My question is this, do I need to site my thesis when writing my essay introduction?

[@galorefriendsgmail5065]

Hi Sandra. No you don't have to cite your thesis statement

[@galorefriendsgmail5065]

In fact refrain from citing the introduction and conclusion paragraphs

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This helped me alot and thank you so much and no words coming out of me. REALLY REALLY THANKYOU!!!!

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Thank you!!!! I finaly know how to write strong thesis