LOL the alien general's name is always Zorgrax in every story
@toraxmalu5 ай бұрын
jepp - and another pattern: a Dr. Pattel and the wording "with determination" and "with resolve" doesn't have to miss… Normally I know the wording "resolve" only context of getting a resolve / getting a solution for trouble or problems… perhaps the hint "hey machine, use the damn thesaurus" may help in diversifying the wording. 😄
@malahammer5 ай бұрын
What about Zorgon or Zorex?
@grantgunz5 ай бұрын
4000 quatloo's the humans cannot be contained!
@oldnwise5 ай бұрын
After an extended study by scientists of the MIT in coordination with members of CERN, it was discovered that Zorgax is inmortal and can appear anywhere in the universe. 😤
@ellorasg45255 ай бұрын
Or they just suck at naming their kids
@roberthuron91605 ай бұрын
[Continued],give other youngsters,the inspiration,when times get tough,to do what is needed irregardless! Thank you,may the blessings be with you! Thank you 😇 😊!
@thorinschmidt47645 ай бұрын
sooooo... Jack Michael and Sarah are shoulder to shoulder standing with their makeshift weapons... Then in the next sentence Michael and Sarah are working at a console, and Jack walks in from outside..... I'm not a writer, but even I can recognize shit writing when I hear it...
@jim53245 ай бұрын
It is a rare event that a child (by our social norms) raises to the star of a story. Excellent work, talent and narration. (88)
@stephengonzalez25305 ай бұрын
WTG Jack! 😎👍
@richardbale32785 ай бұрын
Why didn't they call for help BEFORE the jammer went online?
@dkbros15925 ай бұрын
Helldiver's u needed here major orders save civilians and planets
@roberthuron91605 ай бұрын
88- When my dad died when I was 15,and like Jack, I literally grew up,overnight! It isn't the age,or body size,that determines what a hero,or heroine is capable of,its the innate spirit that governs! There have been,in reality,many young children,who have done unimaginable feats,and some have had due recognition,but many labored on,in the shadows! This story,I hope will giv
@TowGunner5 ай бұрын
AI’s sure love DETERMINATION
@alfonzalynn93875 ай бұрын
That's what i was thinking how many Zorgraxes does the aliens have or do they come back alive after they're killed
@oldnwise5 ай бұрын
Hey, no matter how many times you kill Zorgax, he'll pop up shortly after, somewhere else in the universe to continue being a nuisance. He makes cockroaches ashamed.
@kenattwood80605 ай бұрын
I enjoyed your story... I'll include 88 which I asume is a mistake in pronunciation made by the computer generated voice.
@user-tr3py5nz2j5 ай бұрын
How did the child know the language of the alien attackers, or did the aliens speak an Earth language known to the scientists? And since the attackers came in three days, how did the Earth reinforcements get to New Arcadia so quickly once the alien jammer was deactivated? Thinking about it, how did the Earthers make such powerful make-shift weapons so quickly that they held off a prepared alien attack force? Were the aliens so poorly trained and equipped that improvised weapons used by non-combat humans able to slow down the alien assault until human reinforcements could arrive? Seems like those untrained scientists were better prepared with improvised weapons than the aliens! This story does not hold up well to common-sense scrutiny.
@patlab5555 ай бұрын
So the eighty eight is to see if we listen up to the end of the video?
@johnkochen72645 ай бұрын
Hulls gleaming with weapons? Not bristling?
@johnrobinson64494 ай бұрын
Chrome plated weapons?
@MurkuryMagick5 ай бұрын
interesting
@theicyphoenix_77455 ай бұрын
my mom back when i were 13 in 2014 :no you can't enter a Forest it is too dangerous there might be wild board that could ram into you Jack's mom in this story:alright promisise to be carefull,we will allowyou to cout extremely dangerous and armed to the teeth alien army base and we have absolute confidence in this decision like bruh
@jeus28845 ай бұрын
Why the 88
@sandyb72664 ай бұрын
why are these stories so disjointed at points ,when this happens i simply turnoff.
@DataStorm15 ай бұрын
another AI rewrite
@iffracem5 ай бұрын
More poorly initiated AI dross it seems. So many plot holes and ridiculous plot armour it makes Star Trek and Star Wars look positively believable.
@barenekid96955 ай бұрын
Geee Sus WHO are these Moron Authors anyways ?? Seems they only know & use 3 "Bad Guy' names.
@davidhenderson34005 ай бұрын
Discount so stupid I had to stop halfway through. I wish people would quit using AI program to generate these stories.