I Made A Horror Game Visual Novel About an AI Gone Wrong

[@sallysugar5191]

the scariest thing about this video is how good her hair looks

[@MeniMenoHello]

omg!!! haha thankyou lololol

[@thebirbgaming]

I just played the game. That was pretty good. The jumpscares weren't scary, but I think that's okay. I've heard that in order for a jumpscare to be effective it has to either be completely unexpected or built up with a sense of dread. In your game I could tell it was coming but there was no build up of dread, so felt more like a narrative reveal than a jumpscare. I think the writing was pretty engaging and I did not expect the ending at all. I had fun playing it. I also really like that you had a picture of your other game on the wall. Very cute. The only thing I'd say I didn't like in the game was that if I used the mouse to choose the dialogue options, the top option still stayed highlighted, so for the first half of the game I thought the top option was supposed to be like the preferred option or something until I realized I could scroll with the keyboard. It didn't really impact my experience, though. Everything else was really cool.

[@MeniMenoHello]

thankyou thankyou thankyou so much for the feedback!!! that is so good to know, and thankyou for the kind words :):):)

[@AIAdev]

Asher being scared by his own eyes is peak lol.

[@wiitchweaver]

Played your game, great mechanic demo and a fun twist at the very end. However, it was not scary in the slightest which is fine for me, but if you want feedback on that here it is: I think you missed a major opportunity when you skipped out on music. Horror often relies heavily on sound and I think it could've given your game a boost in the creep factor if you had used it.

[@emdotrod]

Whoa finally you got an ad!

[@unachicacualquiera9275]

Self-labeled writer here! Just played the game, loved it! I liked the story and the plot twist was awesome! I didn't see it coming, and im happy that nobody here spoiled it :) Do i have any feedback? Maybe the story went too fast for that plot twist, i think if the game was a bit longer and the story went slightly slower, the impact of the last revelation would be greater. Also, maybe you could add more spice to the dialogues when she has her breakdowns, so they feel more emotional and impact more on the player. Regardless of that, I think it was great! If you keep learning, i´m sure your storywriting will be the best

[@gatorsoup]

damn that was pretty cool! I really like your videos they are so fun.

[@Jeremyslife25]

Having the same app sponsored TWICE in a video was NOT on my bingo card

[@Skeffles]

Fantastic work! I loved how your fiancé was scared of his own eyes 😂

[@soygoober]

SCREAMS UR VID GOT DROWNED OUT FROM ALL MY NOTIFS SO JUST SAW IT AMAZING GAME AND VID!!!!

[@kitsunemusicisfire]

Girl you're so fucking cool 😭

[@the-birbo]

congrats on the sponsor!

[@mmoonboyy]

Super interesting video! Thanks for sharing!

[@Bekah_Penguin]

Fun vid!

[@bataragamesstudio]

omg you like faith unholy trinity too? me too best indie horror game ever

[@apoxfox]

Consider me spooked 👻

[@Sharks_Lover1000]

Crazy plot twist kinda sad

[@twisted_pretzles]

i really love this game!!!!

[@caitieyurrr]

the earliest of early bro

[@MeniMenoHello]

epiccc >:)

[@MissingCasette]

Do u draw everything in ur games omg

[@rahmanlinux9602]

3rd is mine

[@boxheadgaming3744]

This is going to sound really lazy I believe that it could be creepier if you used AI generated images for scary parts of the game Because your game is about an AI AI is really good at generating uncanny and scary imagery Obviously don't replace all of the art with AI generated slop I did something like that in a game where you were in this simulation that's observing you and I would put AI images of natural landscapes but it was shaped into an eye

[@YurimGhim]

👍

[@darkhorse3182]

first

[@Angela3-s3e]

How did you write 7 days ago?💀

[@darkhorse3182]

@@Angela3-s3e Maybe Im meant to be her match Cz Im just so attentive, haha. The video was uploaded as unlisted in her playlist, then she hid it, and today she re-uploaded it.