IELTS Writing Task-2 |Discuss Both Views | ielts-9 | TEST B

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No , there are many others

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To be brutally honest, this so-called teacher herself has failed to spot her own errors, let alone the errors frequently made by many candidates. She implies that the synonyms she has used can boost the score of the criterion, "lexical resource". In reality, phrases such as "minor life", "according to my opinion", and "teenage is the happiest" do not sound natural at all. Also, the phrase, "and so on" and the verb, "get" sound too informal for an academic piece of writing. More worryingly, she claims that the opinion should be written as a separate paragraph apart from the conclusion, which is absurd! That's why I don't recommend many of the KZbin channels run by so-called IELTS experts, who are, in fact, neither fluent nor suitably qualified to teach English to adults. For your information, there are much better videos shared by ex-examiners and native English speakers like Simon and Melbourne respectively. When you read their essays, you will see the difference between this model essay and much more accurate essays, which have been written by true professionals. Finally, I wasn't sharing my opinion as a learner. I have shared my input based on the experience I have gained as a TEFL certified (Cambridge level 5 certification) tutor. I hope this helps! 😉

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question why did you mention " advantage" in the introduction ?, the question was just about to discuss both views and give your opinion..

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Personally I feel that this is the best essay part 2 I've ever watched. I've learned a lot. And tomorrow is exam. However, through this video, I'm fully confident in writing essay in part 2.

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But ma'am could we also discribes the disadvantages of adulthood life in spite of advantages. In the first paragraph we can demostrate the advantages of teenages lives and in the 2nd disadvantages, moreover in conclusion discuss both views????

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Thanks for supporting and encouraging comment..I will be more happy if you write more essays on your own . from this video you can get ideas how to write IELTS writing task2 discuss both views and give your opinion

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Mam can we write some people think that ...........while others are opposed to this and believe that........

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Explained very well, however, conclusion should be on one sided, am I right?

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Thanks In conclusion, first you tell the point names which you have explained in body para 1 & 2 And then you inform your opinion about which side u favour and why ?

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Is it discussion essay??