IELTS Academic Writing Part 1

[@clev3173]

Thanks for posting this video, your explanation is clear and superb! I hope I could find more of this kind of videos from your channel.

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How's it? The bar chart illustrates the frequency of people in USA who ate fast food in restaurants between 2003 to 2013. Overall, the frequency of Americans at which they had eaten fast food in restaurants was not very fast and, usually, ranged from once a week or once or twice a month. In 2003, 5 percent of Americans ate fast food everyday, and 20 percent ate several times a week. However, 32 percent and 30 percent ate once a week, and once or twice a month, respectively. The percentage dropped to 12 for those who ate just few times an year, and the Americans who never ate fast food from restaurants are nearly negligible. In 2006 and 2013, the frequency had been almost similar, except for the Americans who ate once or twice a month, which had shown percentages of 25 and 35 for the two years, respectively. Comprehensively, for the Americans who ate everyday are nearly 2 percent, and the ones who ate several times a week or once a week are close to 30 percent, for each category. The Americans who never ate fast food in restaurants are nearly negligible.

[@lathaselvanatarajan4361]

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[@seerjughimire5322]

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[@ikeodeniyi]

Many thanks for this video

[@englishpractiseclub4583]

You are welcome

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Thank you for your help.

[@englishpractiseclub4583]

You're welcome!

[@muthukumaransubramani7254]

Great work my friend, I have a small doubt in body paragraph 1 regards coffee whenever someone writes ranges, I think it's better to write it in ascending order instead of defending order, kindly correct if I am wrong.

[@englishpractiseclub4583]

Yes, I agree

[@yamunagaire3650]

can we write all in past tense if the time is not mentioned in graph or piecharts??

[@englishpractiseclub4583]

Do You mean preferred, preferred, wanted? You could change to The residents prefer, The people want .... the least

[@louisespencer6189]

It that too much words for task 1. I Remember its request like around 150 words ….btw very good video…👍

[@englishpractiseclub4583]

Hi Louise, sorry for the late reply. The task states a minimum of 150 words, therefore, it would depend on the individuals ability to produce the required word count, but less than 200 words would be optimal. Thanks, for your comments.